A poem: The Samurai
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Rand al'Thor
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lol xd yeah I know what you mean.nice.At first it made me think of AfroSamurai, but then it became more naruto-esque.
This was written a long time agonow u write poems too..
*feels so insignificant*
However I'm almost finished with the poem for Cassi's challenge will probably post it later once I'm happy with it.
:hug: insignificant how?
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I dnt have any talent whereas u have every talent..what next art,..??..lol xd yeah I know what you mean.
This was written a long time ago
However I'm almost finished with the poem for Cassi's challenge will probably post it later once I'm happy with it.
:hug: insignificant how?
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lol awesome! It's ok sometimes poetry is confusing like WTH :hug: ty for reading it!
:ghehe: just writing lolI dnt have any talent whereas u have every talent..what next art,..??..
I am terrible at art, my stick figures suck >.>
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However I'm almost finished with the poem for Cassi's challenge will probably post it later once I'm happy with it.
Oh *sits up* Ok. xd
Looking forward to it
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^_^ Yes I think it's at a good state, but I'll post it later today, don't want to do too many poems in a certain period of time. Also it's free verse
and packed with emotions! are you serious!? Really? *makes stick figures work out* Yells at sticker figures, "Come on you slackers you heard Cassi! Now get your sorry butts into shape and be presentable! You have to make a name for yourselves!"
Nice. Liked the rhyming xD
The last line was cute.
I'm not a poet, but I felt the flow was off a bit in some lines (like when you read it out-loud); but then again, you did say you had some requirements while making this.
I hate it when you have limits like that >_>'
The last line was cute.
I'm not a poet, but I felt the flow was off a bit in some lines (like when you read it out-loud); but then again, you did say you had some requirements while making this.
I hate it when you have limits like that >_>'
lol ty xdIts good o-o It's funny and it makes sense
yes my teacher put limitations on us! :T_T:
Like you I hate those chains of restraints!
ty ^_^
Its so heart touching....the solitude mentioned in the poem...
The samurai seems to be a lone wolf though he seems to have a soft side
My kinda guy though
I loved the ending...It gave the final touch to ur poem
Loved it! <3
The samurai seems to be a lone wolf though he seems to have a soft side
My kinda guy though
I loved the ending...It gave the final touch to ur poem
Loved it! <3