Myobokuzan Chronicles: A New Journey

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Hey the new chapter of the fanfic is out!

Sorry if it took too long guys but I've been swimming in work lately! I finally found some peace to continue my writing.

Here are the previous chapters:

Chapter 1:

Chapter 2:

Let's see... Where were we? Ah yes!



Chapter 3​


Myobokuzan Chronicles: A New Journey​



Naruto: What do you mean Pa?!

Fukasaku: What I mean is... You'll have to leave, Naruto. That sword is far beyond any training that I could possibly give you. I'm sorry kid...

Naruto: *shocked* L-Leave?! I've already left Konoha weeks ago, now you want me to leave this place!? To where?! No way!

Fukasaku: Look kid! Do you know what that katana is? Do you have any idea what that forehead protector the Elder gave you means? We are entrusting you with all of our powers kid, so grow up! I can't tell you why, but you will have an important role to play in the future... Someday you'll understand...

Naruto: *punches table* No one explains anything to me! I'm tired of this crap! *holds sword up* You guys keep giving me these things, these reponsibilities and don't explain me anything!

Fukasaku: *looks down* I understand... You see kid, you have to leave, because no one here can train you. That weapon is something we cannot deal with.

Naruto: What must I do then?

Fukasaku: You'll have to seek a certain toad... no one has seen him in ages, neither anyone of his family. His name is Kaeruzan. He' ll know how to train you.

Naruto: How can I find him?

Fukasaku: Only me, Ma, and the Great Toad Sage know. He lives alone, a few miles east outside of this Mountain, in a small wooden caban. Or at least he did... Anyway, I'll give you a map later.

Naruto: *confused* Why can he train me and you can't? I mean, what is he?

Fukasaku: That kid, is something else. To explain that to you, I'll have to go back many years ago, before that katana was forged, even before shinobi existed.

Naruto: I want to know it all...

Fukasaku got his pipe from inside his pocket and put it in his mouth. He took a match, light it, and smoked it while he looked up, as though he was trying to remember something that had happened a long time ago.

Fukasaku: *calm* That sword you have there, belonged to the greatest toad to ever exist. Myobokuzan. The toad that gave his name to this sacred mountain where we stand.

Naruto: *surprised, quietly* Myobokuzan...



Who is this mysterious Kaeruzan? What's the legend behind the sword of Myobokuzan?

To be continued...

Next Chapter, Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Legend Behind The Sword.

Please leave your comments and thanks! I need to know what you guys think of my work! thanks.
 

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good job dude its awesome but i told u i dont give thankses to same things and not often :p lol but its still one of the best fanfics i have ever read
no problem man i don't do this for the rep...

Are you serious about it being one of the best you've ever read? If that's true it's better than any thankses or rep.

cheers:D
 
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Who is this mysterious Kaeruzan? What's the legend behind the sword of Myobokuzan?

To be continued...

Next Chapter, Myobokuzan Chronicles: The Legend Behind The Sword.

Please leave your comments and thanks! I need to know what you guys think of my work! thanks.
Chapter was cool, very well written, but I wanna kill you! The only thing I don't want you to look like Kishi is in not letting us know something new, and you just did it, LOL. You've learnt to buy time until coming up with a cool idea :p:p:p:p
 
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