*Kimimaro rises out of the water slowly and gives you a cold stare.**Hiruzen sits on the water, while smoking his pipe
Good job overall!Alright sensei,
First of, Water (H2O) in real life is a substance that contains oxygen and hydrogen. Water is a basic element in real life, nessecary for humans, animals, plants to survive. Water is essential for every living creature/thing.
Secondly Suiton is one of the five basic elements, it allows the user to manipulate existing water, or create their own water, by turning their chakra into water. It is a very versatile element among all the others. Water can change shape and state, it can become more solid and destructive. Usually Suiton cause massive internal damage to a human.
Great Job!
Water is strong against Fire, because it naturally extinguishes the flames, yet the Suiton is weak against Earth.
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Water also has a special relationship with Lightning release, since it is a contucter, so the user can send lightning through the water increasing the damage. Also water can be used with wind release, increasing the concussive and destructive power.
Note that too high rank lightning will just destroy water, as it is too concentrated.
Water is very versatile and can be used in both offensive and defensive use, since it can easily make any shape or mass, creating a massive wave of destruction or a huge wall of water.
Only in very specific cases, don't rely on that.
I assume by range you mean how long the range of the jutsu, well Suiton is Short-Long range.
Tobirama Senju, Kisame & Zabuza were all Suiton users.
Well the reason i wish to learn Suiton is my primary goal to become a Sensei, and well i need to learn all the basic elements....
"Use more description. Note the small things about water, and work up from there. If you need, I can provide an example."*I walk onto the water and start meditating*
As i meditate i try to clear my mind and calm my body. After a while i begin to take in the water around me, trying to feel how soft the water feels on me, yet notices how hard the water can be with the right help. I also notice the flow of the water, yet it is incredible solid.
After a while i keep doing this i take in the water as part of myself, becoming "One" with the water.
Ah. Much better.Alright :scorps: Ill do my best
As i meditate i try to clear my mind and calm my body. After a while i begin to take in the water around me, trying to feel the water, it begins to sound as a small waterfall inside me, where i listen to the water and feels how soft it is, yet it strikes hard on the bottom. At the same time i picture a massive amount of water inside my brain, where i imagine the powers of the water, feeling the flow of water (chakra) flowing through every part of my body, and i see/feel how solid the water is.
After a while i keep doing this i take in the water as part of myself, becoming "One" with the water.
A little sub-par for my trainings. Try to focus on the little pieces of detail. Try with this jutsu, and if you don't get it, I'll give you an example:I'M ABOUT TO PANIC!!! Though i get myself together like a boss :scorps:
I then begin to remember the feeling, molding the chakra sending it through ym body, becoming one with the water, feeling the power and it's flow around my body.
I try several times to open the water, after infusing some chakra around me and try to force the water to open so that i can get out...
(hows that)
(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.
More detail. I'll give you an example:(Alright ill try to focus a little more on detail)
Alright ill try sensei,
I stand on the water, focusing my water chakra into my hands, then as i put my hand on the water, very slowly, i release the water chakra slowly into the water. Trying to create small waves on the water, making the waves more concentrated and smaller as time passes.
(More detail? If not please give an example)
That's an example of this technique:*I begin by gathering my internal chakra and moulding it into powerful yet calm Water Nature Chakra. I then channel it through my body and release it into the air. As I do so I begin to feel the air around me with my chakra, searching for water molecules, and as I find them I begin to compress them around me to start. I channel more and more chakra into the air and search a wider range and then begin finding many more water molecules. I then compress all this chakra into a thick mist around me which blocks my own view of you and you cannot see me either.*
Give it a go.(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidding in Mist Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This displacement technique creates a thick mist to spring forth by lifting up some water from either a pre-existing source or expelled from their mouth, then goes in and out of sight at will from within the pearly-white realm. The mist's thickness is controlled by the amount of chakra kneaded into it. It can't fool the Byakugan, but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan and Rinnegan-user will see the mist coloured by their opponent's chakra, which will effectively hide the user from the dōjutsu.
Note: Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source.
Absolutely wonderful. Just keep that up.Alright ill give it a try....
I begin by molding my suiton chakra inside me, trying to create a powerful and calm water nature chakra. I begin channeling the chakra through my entire body, feeling the amount of energy from the suiton energy, i release it into the air around me. As i release it into the air, i gather the so called water in the air. I then begin to compress the water, while i release more and more chakra into the air into a wider range and gathering more water and compress it. I then begin to concentrate on manipulating the water and compress it into a thick mist concealing me, making you unable to see me and vice versa*
How was that sensei???
Not much to this one, but give it your best.(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
Note: Doesn't require a water source.
We'll see how you do on a real one.I begin to mold water chakra, while i try to utilize it into my hands and create a sword, by fist forming the chakra in my hands with the water nature as it begins to form, i imagine a shape of a small katana in my mind which i use to form the shape of my water chakra into a blade.
How's that...
Gather your suiton chakra in that pond over there. Then, add shape manipulation to for a shark that jumps up, and attacks the opponent.(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.
Still sub-par, but getting better.Alright Sensei...
*I walk over and stand on the pond, as I begin to gather my suiton chakra and release it slowly into the pond and as I do, I begin to try to shape the water with my chakra into the shape of a furious looking shark which i then manipulate to jump out of the water crashing on the ground*
Hows that...
Preform the three hand seals, and condense water molecules to your hand, then add shape manipulation to form it in to a whip to use on the opponent.(Suiton: Suiben) - Water Release: Water whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After the user performs a series of 3 hand seals Rat → Dog → Ox, the user creates a whip of water that can be used to strike the opponent with a lashing action or wrap around the target to bind them. This technique can also have lightning techniques channeled through when they have bound their victim with the water whip.