Omnom blows me away

[Jubi-Sama]

*Sits while listening to that song*

 

[Nocturnus]

Ah Breaking Benjamin that's the stuff :3 (one of my favorite bands)
Oh and good luck with your training

 

[Omnom]

*Sits while listening to that song*

*A small tornado begins to form in front of you, and whips of fast. As it reaches ten foot tall, it suddenly disperses, leaving Kimimaro in the middle giving you a cold stare.*

"You there. What do you wish to learn from me?"

 

[Jubi-Sama]

*A small tornado begins to form in front of you, and whips of fast. As it reaches ten foot tall, it suddenly disperses, leaving Kimimaro in the middle giving you a cold stare.*

"You there. What do you wish to learn from me?"

"I would like to learn the wind element Sir :scorps:"

 

[Omnom]

"I would like to learn the wind element Sir :scorps:"

"Tell me everything you know about wind. What is it in real life, what is it in the Narutoverse, strengths, weaknesses, combinations, everything!"

 

[Jubi-Sama]

"Tell me everything you know about wind. What is it in real life, what is it in the Narutoverse, strengths, weaknesses, combinations, everything!"

Wind is a strong yet Peaceful element that can be used for both offence and defense. Wind is made up of the bulk movement of air. Wind is used to power homes and helps make Hot air balloons float. Wind is a rare element with only few users like:

Danzo
Naruto
Sora
Asuma

Even though it is a rare element it is very strong and is capable of breaking through stone.

Wind is included in 3 Kekkai genkai and one Kekkai Tota

Scorch
Ice
Swift

Dust

Wind is strong against Lightning and Earth and weak against Fire since Wind insulates lightning and tears through earth. And it Powers fire which is why it is weak to it. Hope this is good O_O​

 

[Omnom]

Wind is a strong yet Peaceful element that can be used for both offence and defense. Wind is made up of the bulk movement of air. Wind is used to power homes and helps make Hot air balloons float. Wind is a rare element with only few users like:

Danzo
Naruto
Sora
Asuma

Even though it is a rare element it is very strong and is capable of breaking through stone.

Wind is included in 3 Kekkai genkai and one Kekkai Tota

Scorch
Ice
Swift

Dust

Wind is strong against Lightning and Earth and weak against Fire since Wind insulates lightning and tears through earth. And it Powers fire which is why it is weak to it. Hope this is good O_O​

Rather great job, but note the strike outs I showed. Those points are incorrect.

*Kimimaro does a quick hand seal, and a pillar of Earth erupts up to one hundred feet tall, and five feet wide.*

"Climb to the top. Once you get there, sit down. Begin meditating. After you have calmed yourself, focus on the wind around you. Notice how it moves, and how it can be both soft and hard. Take in the feel of it blowing across your skin, and blowing through your hair. Take your time, we are in no rush."

 

[Jubi-Sama]

Rather great job, but note the strike outs I showed. Those points are incorrect.

*Kimimaro does a quick hand seal, and a pillar of Earth erupts up to one hundred feet tall, and five feet wide.*

"Climb to the top. Once you get there, sit down. Begin meditating. After you have calmed yourself, focus on the wind around you. Notice how it moves, and how it can be both soft and hard. Take in the feel of it blowing across your skin, and blowing through your hair. Take your time, we are in no rush."

Sorry I got confused with lightning for a sec xd

*I climb up to the top of the pillar and sit for 5 minutes where I focus on the wind and how it moves and how it feels calm and peaceful and how it can blow me off the pillar at any movement*

 

[Omnom]

Sorry I got confused with lightning for a sec xd

*I climb up to the top of the pillar and sit for 5 minutes where I focus on the wind and how it moves and how it feels calm and peaceful and how it can blow me off the pillar at any movement*

"Keep meditating. Describe everything about the wind and how it feels! Use detail!"

 

[Jubi-Sama]

"Keep meditating. Describe everything about the wind and how it feels! Use detail!"

The wind feels cool and calm and makes me feel at peace and one with nature and makes me want a...... Jacket O_O But I know that this wind can easily Knock me down and kill me if it is strong enough. This wind also reminds me of the deserts of Suna

 

[Omnom]

The wind feels cool and calm and makes me feel at peace and one with nature and makes me want a...... Jacket O_O But I know that this wind can easily Knock me down and kill me if it is strong enough. This wind also reminds me of the deserts of Suna

You can do better than that! More detail!

 

[Jubi-Sama]

You can do better than that! More detail!

*I focus even harder on the wind and feel its sharp and cool power which calms me and makes me happy. This wind makes me feel one with nature and makes me feel alive, The cool breeze feels nice on my skin and the sharp breeze makes me remember and feel the winds power. I know the wind can easily Knock me down and kill me right on the spot but I know I can easily tame this power and use it to my advantage*

 

[Omnom]

*I focus even harder on the wind and feel its sharp and cool power which calms me and makes me happy. This wind makes me feel one with nature and makes me feel alive, The cool breeze feels nice on my skin and the sharp breeze makes me remember and feel the winds power. I know the wind can easily Knock me down and kill me right on the spot but I know I can easily tame this power and use it to my advantage*

*As you are mediating, deep in the recesses of yourself, the pillar sudden drops out from under you, cut by a Chidori I formed cutting through the base of the pillar. You are suddenly free falling a hundred of feet down to the ground.*

"Don't panic. Use that feeling to gather the wind around yourself, allowing yourself to land."

 

[Jubi-Sama]

*As you are mediating, deep in the recesses of yourself, the pillar sudden drops out from under you, cut by a Chidori I formed cutting through the base of the pillar. You are suddenly free falling a hundred of feet down to the ground.*

"Don't panic. Use that feeling to gather the wind around yourself, allowing yourself to land."

*As I am falling I remember the feeling of the wind and how I can tame it and control it and I focus the wind around me to slow my decent till I am merley floating to the ground and I land but I am tired after doing this*

"How was that?'

 

[Omnom]

*As I am falling I remember the feeling of the wind and how I can tame it and control it and I focus the wind around me to slow my decent till I am merley floating to the ground and I land but I am tired after doing this*

"How was that?'

Still a little sub-par. Try this next technique, and if you still aren't there with the detail, I'll post an example.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

Gather your fuuton chakra to your throat, and breathe it out of your mouth, causing you to change direction mid-air.

 

[Jubi-Sama]

Still a little sub-par. Try this next technique, and if you still aren't there with the detail, I'll post an example.

Spoiler

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

Gather your fuuton chakra to your throat, and breathe it out of your mouth, causing you to change direction mid-air.

*As I here you instructions I start gathering all my fuuton chakra into my mouth and form it into a stream and I breathe out and let myself get blown up into the air. I then preform it again and change direction and go to the left as I land far from where I was before*

[sorry about detail. Just not really good at description ]

 

[Omnom]

*As I here you instructions I start gathering all my fuuton chakra into my mouth and form it into a stream and I breathe out and let myself get blown up into the air. I then preform it again and change direction and go to the left as I land far from where I was before*

[sorry about detail. Just not really good at description ]

Here is an acceptable response from another student:

As I remain in my meditaion state I feel a strange feeling in the rapid speed around me as it becomes more eratic, without panicing I keep focusing on my meditation and the wind around me trying to get the same feeling of being one with the wind that I had before. I try to synch my concentration with the rushing wind around me and feel its harsh touch on my skin. As I focus I feel the wind around me to become more and more calm, until it feels like the sensation I had before. I then open my eyes to see that I am on the ground in my sitting position. There is a lot of rock parts scattered around me.

Try again, and work on the small details.