[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Luther]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user make earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly pierces the opponent heart and if not avoided other organs thus leading to decapitation and making the victim dead in few minutes. Can only be counter altered by a lIgh ning jutsu of a higher rank.
Note:Can Be used twice in battle
Note:The user must wait 3 turns to use again

~Declined~ Our system work with damage point, you can't say you'll kill your opponent with a technique (even if we understand that it can). Take out anything related to killing your opponent. Also, take out the part where it can ONLY be countered by high lightning, you don't know that for sure.

(Raiton: Dendou Omoi Chisou )Lightning Style: Eletric Heart feast
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: This user draws a massive amount of lightning chakra in his palm similar to that of chidori which takes the shape of a large like chakra mass but allows different rotator movements and is aimed for the opponents chest which when hit paralyzes the opponent from breathing and pumping blood and living the opponent dead in minutes. This jutsu can only be counter-altered by a wind jutsu of such rank or higher.

~Declined~ Same as above, and where are the restrictions?

((Kurisutaru no sutairu: Mirā funsai))Crystal style: Mirror Shatter

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description; Guren holds and focuses on her chakra and then in one stroke place her focused chakra palm on the ground bring up a huge hue enclosed wall made of crystalline with several mirrors to confuse his opponent and keep him from escaping she then send thousands of needle sharp crystalline into the wall tearing the opponent limb from limb the then she send a huge amount of heat blast through her palms to crush the wall and bring it falling down crushing the opponent to death. Its wall can not be penetrated by any A rank jutsu or lower, it can also be you used as a great defensive shield to protect against s rank jutsu or lower the guren does this simply by trapping herself in the wall which can defend against extreme temperature rain or humidity.
Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
Note: Can Be used once a battle

~Declined~ Same as above, also, re-read yourself because the description is a mess. Make it so it can defend from A-rank max, after which it will shatter (since this technique isn't only meant to be a defensive one). Lastly, if you're going to send a heat blast, I'm guessing you need to gather your fire chakra and hence this technique need to counts as 2 technique if you haven't mastered Yin Yang.

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(Doton: Yasumichuu Funkei)Earth style: enclosed Decapitation
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This Jutsu can only be done on ground or where there is earth,the user makes several earth hand seals and focuses his chakra on hands and slamming palm to the ground bringing about 4 large enclosed rock pillars with Multiple sharp edges which quickly when comes in contact with the target causes severe injuries

In this jutsu as instructed by izuna i removed that parts of it being an auto kill and also removed stuff like can only be countered by a lightning jutsu of a higher rank i have done all of the conditions listed by izuna and have mad minor changes to my grammar

~Declined~ It's all good now, but where are the restrictions @__@?

(Raiton: Dendou Omoi Chisou )Lightning Style: Eletric Heart feast
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: This user draws a massive amount of lightning chakra in his palm similar to that of chidori which takes the shape of a large like chakra mass but allows different rotatory movements and is aimed for the opponents chest which when hit paralyzes the opponent Immediately rendering him helpless and near death.

Note:Must Have started training in lightning to use this jutsu
Note:Can only be used three times in a battle or fight
Note:The user must wait to rounds or turns before using the jutsu again
Note:Can only be taught be thunderbolt.


In this jutsu i changed some part using the guide lines you earlier stated on damage points and then i removed the killing part and added more restrictions.

~Declined~ After re-reading the description, this technique just look like a mix between a chidori and a rasengan, which are banned for being done dozens of times.

((Kurisutaru no sutairu: Mirā funsai))Crystal style: Mirror Shatter

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description; Guren holds and focuses on her chakra and then in one stroke place her focused chakra palm on the ground bring up a huge hue enclosed wall made of crystalline with several mirrors to confuse his opponent and keep him from escaping she then send thousands of needle sharp crystalline into the wall tearing the opponent limb from limb the then she send a huge amount of heat blast through her palms to crush the wall and bring it falling down crushing the opponent to death. Its wall can not be penetrated by any B or A rank jutsu, it can also be you used as a great defensive shield to protect against Attacks though it walls will be shattered if it comes in contact with any s rank techniques.Guren does this simply by trapping herself in the wall which can defend against extreme temperature rain or humidity.

Note: Can only be taught by thunderbolt
Note: Can Once once a battle
Note:Must have a Guren Bio To use
Note:It counts as two Moves since the user sends heat wave through the crystal which times is needed to do ,

I made minor changes such as Added more restrictions and make it count as two turns or moves since a considerable amount of time is used to send the heat wave through the crystal thus the time is needed to gather enough fire chakra,i also made it to be able to defend at a rank max after which if it comes or encounter s rank jutsu it breaks

~Declined~ It seems to me as though you didn't do any real work on this one. Check the bold parts. You still mention death, it's still strong defensively (defending form an S-rank why being an offensive technique is exactly what I warned you about in your previous submission), and the description is still a mess. Honestly, what's happening in this technique? Are you surrounding yourself in crystal walls or are you trapping your opponent?

 

[battleandthebad]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(fan doki) fan wrath
Type: Mode
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A [+10 to wind techs]
Description: fan wrath is a fighting style which uses as the name suggest a fan it combines the fan as a weapon and as a catalyst for fuuton jutsu while in this mode you can only use fuuton jutsu and fan doki jutsu [which will be fan related moves and fuuton] the upside to this is most fuuton atacks will no long require handseals and you gain a ten point boost to wind techs fan wrath is primarly mid range fighting style that generally has the user useing the fan as a blunt weapon to push the opponent into mid range if they are short so they can deal devestating fuuton jutsu this fighting style requires the user to adept in weapon use as well as fuuton jutsu
-can only be traind be battleandthebad and heavens blade
-last 4 turns
-can be entered once in a match
-can be left at any time
-cant use fuuton jutsu the next turn after you leave this mode and on the second turn after deactivation futon jutsu do 10 less damage
-cant use any other elements besides fuuton while in this mode

Approved


(Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user summons clouds from the leoliguar home village these clouds change the environment allowing the leoliguar summons to use a special techneque that normally they can only use in there village each tech is different depending on the personallity of the leoliguar
-clouds stay on the field until destroyed
-can only be used once per match
-must have signed leoliguar contract

[before you decline this jutsu please keep this in mind when naruto went to the toads village he asked why he couldnt just keep some of the oil on him so he could go into SM anytime and grampa toad said that outside there environment it would evaporate so the basis of my jutsu is solid in my opion also when i say enviroment i dont mean the field will change more like a the air will change slightly not enough for people to notice except maybe the inuzuka clan cause they have super smell]

Declined, do not resubmit
NOTE: I was given permission to resubmit these on battleandthebads behalf

(predator mo-do) predator mode
Type: Mode
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: this mode can only be entered while (Kuchiyose: kumo) summoning: clouds is in play the user absorbs the atomshere from the leoliguars home and enters this mode this atlers the users the senses giving them hightened vision, smell, hearing, and a speed boost this also allows the user to use all leoliguar kata moves
-last 4 turns
-can only be entered once
-must have signed leoliguar contract and been given permission by heavens blade
-once you leave this mode you are exhausted and can only use 2 jutsu per turn for the next two turns

Declined, do not resubmit

(fan doki: biggu yurasu) fan wrath: big swing
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: user builds fuuton chakra into there closed fan then hits his opponent with the fan as your fan comes in contact with your opponent you release the wind chakra causing a gust of wind which blows them back to mid range even if the attack is blocked/dodged the gust of wind will still knock them into mid range
-only does damage if opponent is hit by the fan
-can only be while in fan doki mode
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Approved~

(fan doki: jougo) fan wrath: funnel
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
chakra: 20
Damage: -
Description: by swinging your fan you create a funnel of wind underneath your opponent lifting them up into the air which knocks them off ballance
-only lifts them a couple of feet of the ground
-must be in fan doki mode
-can only be taught by battleandthebad

~Declined~ Does the wind take place directly under the opponent, or is it the wind that was pushed by the fan that made it's way to you opponent and lifted him up?

 

[Jubi-Sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

[Katana of sono Fuun] Sword of the elements
Type: weapon
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This sword was crafted in the mountains of kumo 100's of years ago which was infused with the power to infuse Lightning into the sword with out any damage to the blade.

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Abilities: This sword can infuse the power of the weilders Lightning affinity and can fire blades of Lightning chakra at the opponent.
Note: This sword can only be weilded by ten tails jinchuriki unless you have permission and if it is taken by an opponent who doesn't have permission the sword will shock them until they let go.
Note: This sword is the size of saskue's katana.

~Declined~ No sword shooting blasts will be accepted. Too many were made already.

Element blade
Type: Offence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user focuses his lightning chakra into The blade of the elements and swings the blade, Releasing a blade of the element at the opponent.
Note: This attack is similar to Razor leaf from pokemon but it is bigger and there is only one.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

Summoning Animal: Giant Otters
Scroll Owner: Ten tails jinchuriki
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: [Have to put next week if accepted cause I am at my Cj limit for the week]
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

Description: The giant otter are the biggest type of otter who can reach up to 7ft in length and are stronger then most otters. the biggest and strongest of the giant otters is their boss Kyojin kawauso which means Giant otter who is 15ft long and is 20ft tall. these otters reside in the sea in The rain village.

Those who sign this contract must get this tattoo on the left side of their neck:

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~Approved~

 

[Alphaqindyas]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ashisogi Jizō)Leg-Cutting Jizō:
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40(+20 when absobing)
Damage: 80
Description: This sword has a three pronged blade made out of gold. Its hilt is made out of stainless steel wrapped in purple bandages with the exception of six gold spikes stiking out on the sides(three on each side). There is the face of a baby at the bottom of the blade. Whats special about this blade is that it can absorb jutsu of the five basic elements. After absorbing the jutsu, the user can perform the same jutsu with a swing of the sword. The user can also send normal chakra into the sword and mist/smoke will come out of the babies eyes and mouth to blind the enemy.
~NOTE: Can only absorb up to A-rank
~NOTE: Can only absorb two times per match
~NOTE: Can only use enemies jutsu two times per match
~NOTE: Can only use smoke/mist three times per match
~NOTE: Can only be used by Alphaqindyas

~Declined~ You do not have the proper rank to submit this custom.

 

[LolaxXx]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tsuchi Kobushi- Earth Fists)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost:40(do weapons cost chakra?)
Damage:60
Description: Thanks to the latest in Ninja technology. These gauntlets allow the user to channel and amplify their earth based chakras. They are also made out of an earthy hard material molded out of chakra thus making them extremly hard, allowing them to easily break through solid rock. Very light, and extremely durable.
*powers up earth based jutsu

~Declined~ Similar gauntlets were already made (believe it or not lol), however the ability was slightly different. The problem being that you custom's ability is based of another member's custom. So; similar technique already exist.

(Shindou Sentou- Tremor Punch)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: By using their Earth fists. The user punches into the ground and sends their enhanced earth chakras into the ground, which activate the weapons specialty to cause powerful vibrations which create strong tremors into whatever the focus of the target is rather it be the ground itself, or a living thing. If at the ground, it causes the ground around the user to shake quickly and violently causing anyone nearby to lose their balance and fall. If a person is directly hit by this attack, the vibrations are sent into the body causing their insides to violently shake. damaging their internals and messing up their equilibrium.
*Only works at direct impact.
*Can only be used three times before the gloves break.

~Declined~ Earth Fist was declined.

(One with Earth- Ichi Motte Tsuchi)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementry
Range:close/long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: By focusing their entire being in the earth below them, the user quickly sends their chakra into the ground in a wide area. With that, the user can sense everything within range on or underneath the ground.
*The user closes their eyes, which can leave them vunerable to aerial attacks.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[fuutonmaster]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind release: sharp fist (Fuuton: surudoi ken)
Rank: A
Type: offensive/defensive
Range: short/long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user concentrates wind chakra around their hand (like chidori) until a circle of compressed wind chakra surrounds their hand. The user spins the chakra around their hand as fast as they can. They can use it to fight in close combat, or use it to slice most incoming attacks in two.
~lasts 3 turns
~can be used 3 times
I will applaud you on getting the template and restrictions done pretty good for a newcomer but read the rules Declined submit when your of a more apporpriate rank

 

[Yagura Yondaime]

Fuuton: Fuuton genkotsu : Wind Fist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: 50 (+5 if combined with water)
Description: The User will perform the needed handseals and then the user focuses and forces the wind chakra to channal all to his hands/finger. Then the user has to release it all and manipulate it making it shaped circle.

(Combine with water for extra damage)

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Suiton - suitonchuusou : Water Spikes
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: 47
Description: The user creates spikes of water that come up from the ground to stab the enemy.This jutsu can be made in a short or mid distace but the jutsu its self is made of a 6 foot radius of spikes.

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Weapon - Nodachi : The Slayer
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 70
Description: The Slayer was a ancient time sword which was used during the GREAT SHONOBI WAR but the user couldn't control its power because of the genjutsu power this sword as the great spiritual power that make's it control mind's using the custom Illusions it can be combined with canon genjutsu but the genjutsu last's for 10 sec's

~used per 5 times
~Summoning the sword counts as a move~
||All Declined|| Please re-read the rules and properly submit these according to the proper rank, damage, and chakra costs. Also, None of those will be approved regardless of the issues with chakra, damage, and rank...

 

[Yashin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting


(Jinsei Ankyo Debabouchou) - Life Draining Knife
Rank: S
Range:N/A
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 25 point of chakra absorption(per hit)
Description: This sword is said to be the Kubikiribōchō's big brother.It was forged by the exact same smith as the Kubikiribōchōs showing high resemblance to it, but instead of steel grey the sword is jet black with the outline being grey.It has no hole at the top for decapitation as the sword had been forged for a different purpose.The blacksmith had spent 7 days and 7 nights creating just the blade of this sword out of a highly toxic metal called Beryllium.The swords ability was its highly toxic metal which when came into contact to skin or flesh,would drain the very chakra and stamina of the opponent, this causing multiple hits to render them sick and to become paralyzed.The sword was deemed to dangerous and sealed away by the Blacksmith who died months later because of poisoning he had received,until Daiki managed to get his hands on it.To escape the dangers of the Beryllium blade, Daiki spent years upon years ingesting a special liquid made by a shaman on the outskirts of Kirigakure called HMD(Heavy Metal Detox). The liquid removed the effects of Toxic metals on the body such as Lead,Uranium and Beryllium.Years of ingesting this gave Daiki a permanent immunity from the beryllium posion

Life Draining
The swords unique ability is to drain the opponents very chakra and stamina out of them.If opponent is even just touched by the Beryllium blade of the sword it will immediately Drain 25 chakra out of their body.Continued hits will cause the user to become pale and ill looking making them react and move slower.After successfully touching the opponent 4 times(100 chakra absorption) the sword will glow a maroon color and will have to 'vent' the chakra out.This renders the sword unable to absorb chakra for two turns.The Beryllium blade can only absorb Chakra and not any attacks.
Note ~ Can only be used by Daiki
Note ~ Use by anyone else will cause illness
Note ~ Venting takes21 turn rendering the sword useless
Note ~ Sword is almost indestructible

Swords Look

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Declined, make the chakra absorbing ability count as a move per turn like other chakra absorbing techniques

(Fuzen Beryllium Kamen ) - Beastly Beryllium Cloak
Rank: S
Range:N/A
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/a
Description:After successfully touching the opponent 4 times(100 chakra absorption) with the Life Draining Knife,The sword will glow a Maroon colour making its absorption ability's useless for 2 turns.In a time of desperate need the user can take advantage of this state,when the swords chakra capacities are full the user will absorb the red glow, enshrouding their body in a dark red cloak similar to a Tailed beasts.While in this mode the users veins become extremely erect and bulge outwards,and the users skin become pale giving them a sickly look.Their teeth become pointed and their eyes become animal like having slits for an iris.The user has entered Beastly Beryllium Cloak Mode,while in this mode he takes advantage of the chakra stored in the sword giving him a +100 boost to chakra.With this boost comes a increase in Power and Speed but it comes with a disadvantage.With the high exposure to Beryllium Daiki risks his very sanity,When he releases this mode he will have slower reflexes and his body suffers great pain from the toxic cloak meaning when he comes out of this mode he will move slower than usual and feel incredibly Ill.While this also effects the enemy as close contact with the user(2 meters away) will also give the enemy highly toxic poisoning making him feel ill and his body will slowly feel ill from high exposure.After 4 turns the Cloak will dissolve off the user and return to the sword and the glow will dissapear,for the rest of the match the user cannot use the Swords Chakra draining ability.

Note ~ Can only be used by Daiki
Note ~ Lasts 4 Turns
Note ~ Life Draining Swords ability becomes useless for remainder of the Match
Note ~ User will feel Ill and move/react slower for 2 turns after use.
Note ~ Can only be used once per Match
Note ~ 100 chakra boost

What Cloak looks similar to

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Declined do not resubmit


Submitting a new Taijustu Style

Dim Mak - Death Touch
Dim Mak, also know as Death Touch, is the ancient martial art of striking vital points of an opponent’s body. These strikes are engineered to cause “knock-out”, or delayed reaction in the opponent.
These vital points are the same as used for healing in acupuncture and other Asian healing arts.Pressure points exist in the arms, legs, back and head, and they are also considered when protecting major striking targets along the centre line,By using this technique the user hits pressure points in the enemys body's to cause Muscle spasms which cause pain .Dim Mak was the building blocks that the Hyuugas built their gentle fist,although Dim Mak focus's much more on attack style rather than the defensive gentle fist.By using the pressure points it can weaken the opponents making them feel tired causing their moves to be performed more sloppy and slower, this also effects their reactions and speed.
Users of the martial art can also attack muscles which is a vital part of Dim Mak,Attacking these muscles can cause immediate reactions or spasms which bring incredible pain to the oppenent,It can also tear muscle.All of these effects can be made using specially placed attacks with the hands or feet,it requires quick actions and years of practice

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Pressure pointss in a humans body which Dim Mak users take advantage off

Requirments
.Must be at Least S-Class Ninja to learn.
.Must show basic knowledge of Taijutsu.
.Must have a full training session of Dim Mak from a registered teacher.
.Can only be taught by Daiki until further Notice.

you dont need to submit the style for approval just techniques

Resubmitting my sword as it was not specified in the first time i made it,i respect Zens opinion but i feel the 2 turns needed for venting after enough chakra is absorbed if more than reasonable.

Making it a move would defeat the purpose of the sword and ultimatley make it a bit useless

(Jinsei Ankyo Debabouchou) - Life Draining Knife
Rank: S
Range:N/A
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 25 point of chakra absorption(per hit)
Description: This sword is said to be the Kubikiribōchō's big brother.It was forged by the exact same smith as the Kubikiribōchōs showing high resemblance to it, but instead of steel grey the sword is jet black with the outline being grey.It has no hole at the top for decapitation as the sword had been forged for a different purpose.The blacksmith had spent 7 days and 7 nights creating just the blade of this sword out of a highly toxic metal called Beryllium.The swords ability was its highly toxic metal which when came into contact to skin or flesh,would drain the very chakra and stamina of the opponent, this causing multiple hits to render them sick and to become paralyzed.The sword was deemed to dangerous and sealed away by the Blacksmith who died months later because of poisoning he had received,until Daiki managed to get his hands on it.To escape the dangers of the Beryllium blade, Daiki spent years upon years ingesting a special liquid made by a shaman on the outskirts of Kirigakure called HMD(Heavy Metal Detox). The liquid removed the effects of Toxic metals on the body such as Lead,Uranium and Beryllium.Years of ingesting this gave Daiki a permanent immunity from the beryllium posion

Life Draining
The swords unique ability is to drain the opponents very chakra and stamina out of them.If opponent is even just touched by the Beryllium blade of the sword it will immediately Drain 25 chakra out of their body.Continued hits will cause the user to become pale and ill looking making them react and move slower.After successfully touching the opponent 4 times(100 chakra absorption) the sword will glow a maroon color and will have to 'vent' the chakra out.This renders the sword unable to absorb chakra for two turns.The Beryllium blade can only absorb Chakra and not any attacks.
Note ~ Can only be used by Daiki
Note ~ Use by anyone else will cause illness
Note ~ Venting takes 2 turn rendering the sword useless
Note ~ Sword is almost indestructible
Declined, do not resubmit, you may respect my oppinion but if i request something you either follow it or not continue with the custom simple as that

(Dim Mak - Hishou Ude Itami) - Deaths Touch - Soaring Arm Pain
Rank: B
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user pulls back his arm and sticks two fingers out into a striking position, he then strikes fast at the enemy's muscle in the arm his Biceps and Triceps. He hit it in such a way focusing on internal damage that he tears the muscle in the enemy's arm causing soaring arm pain. If the attack is successful the enemy is unable to use that arm for a turn. Continues use on the arm will cause major pain.
Note
~Lasts for 1 turn
~Must be taught Dim Mak to use
Approved

I have permission of Riku.. to make the Iguana summoning contract​

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Summoning Animal: Iguana
Scroll Owner: Daiki
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Takeru
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
I'll post them if they get approved.

Description:

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Iguana is a herbivorous genus of lizard native to tropical areas of Central and South America and the Caribbean.Iguana possess a dewlap, a row of spines running down their back to their tail, and a third "eye" on their head. This eye is known as the parietal eye, visible as a pale scale on the top of the head. Behind their neck are small scales which resemble spikes, known as tuberculate scales.
Iguanas have excellent vision and can see shapes, shadows, colors and movement at long distances. Iguanas use their eyes to navigate through crowded forests, as well as for finding food. They use visual signals to communicate with other members of the same species,

Signers of the contract must get the Iguana tattoo

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~Contract Approved~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Takeru ) - Summoning Technique:Takeru 'Scaled Tank'

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage: N/A
Description:Takeru is the boss Iguana summon,He is the largest of the Iguanas and is around half the size of Gamabunta although is very long due to his huge tail.He isnt the Fastest of Iguana's although has a huge layer of scales making attacks A-rank and below useless against him.This has earned him the nickname of the "Scaled Tank". His elemental affinities are Earth and water,which allows him to release a powerful S-ranked blast twice per battle which counts towards the user's three moves. This can't be used on consecutive turns.Takeru can also use his tounge to whack over enemys and his huge tail to smash through A-rank Rock.Summoners can easily ride Takeru and escape attack from jutsus by hiding in special protection pods in his cheeks,Takeru has incredible area awareness due to his "Third Eye" allowing even slight change in the Environment to be Detected
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Can only remain on the battlefield for four turns.
-S-ranked Blast can only be used twice per battle and not on consecutive turns.

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Boss Iguana Declined. Too over powered. Godzilla couldnt take this guy down O_O

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Summoning Animal: Axolotl
Scroll Owner: Daiki
Other Users who have signed contract:N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A
I'll post them if they get approved.

Description:

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Australians and New Zealanders frequently refer to the Axolotl as the Mexican Walking Fish, though the Axolotl is not a fish but an amphibian, a salamander, part of the order Caudata/Urodela. Because it's a salamander, it's part of one of the three branches of class Amphibia, which also includes the frogs and toads and most Eels.The Axolotl is a fascinating creature for a number of reasons, including its grotesque appearance, its ability to regenerate, and primarily the fact that it exhibits the phenomenon known as neoteny.Normal wound healing also does not allow for most animals to re-grow a lost limb. However the axolotl is fully capable of complete limb re-growth.

Signers of the contract must get the Axolotl tattoo symbolizing infinity

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||Leaving for Kaito||
Approved

 

[Wesobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

I would like to make a reference to the mod that checks these customs: I know it mind look as if it's impossible to have a lot of chakra compressed and then expand (1st and 3rd jutsu), but I just wanted to say that I followed the same logic as with Fuuton: Rasenshuriken when Naruto used it against Kakuzu. It was compact as well, and expanded on impact. Hope this clears it up a little.




(Katon/Raiton: Hitoshirenu Hinote no Raikou) Fire/Lightning Release: Hidden Flames of Lightning)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-25 to user)
Description: The user starts by creating 5 lightning bullets, one at the tip of each finger. The user compresses them, so that they have a high amount of energy in a small place. Once they are made, they stay at the tip of the fingers. The user then channels fire chakra around them, coating the bullets in fire. He also compresses the fire so that the energy is tightly packed. Once this is done, the user shoots of the bullets at the enemy. Due to the combination of the fire and the lightning, and both being highly compressed, the bullets travel at an enormously rapid speed (only a 3 Tomoe sharingan or Byakugan can follow this speed, though it would be hard to react accordingly if they are distracted by something else). Once they reach the opponent, the user does a hand seal that lets the packed lightning loose, causing a massive explosion of lightning, covered with the fire around it.
Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
Note: Can only be used once, but can not be used in the first turn.
Note: Can't use lightning/fire in the same round.
Note: Can not use lightning or fire for the next round, and can only use up to A-rank jutsus in the next round.
Note: Can only use 1 jutsu in the same round as this one.
Note: Burn wounds appear on the users hands (if not wearing any protective gear), so hand seals made after this jutsu would be slower than usual.

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(Saishuu Teisei) Last Whisper
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Last whisper is a bow made of special Chakra Wood, and is strengthened by Chakra-Titanium. It has several gems put onto it as decoration. This Bow is can not be destroyed by any means, and if someone else than the use touches it or tries to steal it, it weighs over 10 000kg. There is also an arrow holster that remains on the users back at all time, packed with a high amount of arrows. These arrows are special Chakra arrows, which allows the user to insert any kind of chakra in them. Last, this attack has two special attack, that can be used twice. The user focuses a big amount of chakra into the arrow he will shoot, and will then shoot off the arrow with the said "pure chakra", increasing it's speed enormously (two times the normal speed). the second special ability to this bow, is that the bow can absorb 2 attack up to S rank. The first attack will be absorbed in the upper gems, and the second attack in the lower gems. The user can choose to launch the chakra from both absorbed attacks at once, or separately.
Note: Can only be wielded by Wesobi
Note: Can only use the first special attack twice.
Note: The special arrow (increased speed) counts as one of three moves.
Note: the absorbing of an attack counts as one of the three moves and sending it back does too.
Note: The absorbed attack can not be sent back in the same turn.
Note: The bow can absorb up to 4 attacks (but only 2 can be hold in the gem at the same time). After that, the gems will be crushed due to the extensive chakra that has gone through them.

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I gave my previous custom weapon to Akisha, so I have none atm.

(Sogeki Geijutsu: Shouten no Kabe) - Sniper Arts: Curse of the Wall
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user takes out one of his chakra arrows, and starts to focus chakra in it (one of the five elemental chakras). The user then launches the arrow, and when it reaches the area he wants it to reach, does a hand seal, setting off the chakra inside, causing a certain effect.

Water: After doing the hand seal, a huge tsunami rushes on towards the opponent.
Fire: After doing the hand seal, a huge tornado of fire erupts from it, and continues to rush at the enemy.
Lightning: After doing the hand seal, the lightning is released around the arrow, creating a huge thunderbolt that rushes at the opponent.
Earth: The user does the hand seal, and the arrow drops to the ground instantly. The chakra then seeps in the ground, sending the chakra through the ground under the opponent, making spikes appear.
Wind: After doing the hand seal, the arrow explodes, creating a rumbling wall of wind that rages at the opponent (size of earth rampart).

Note: Can only be used by Wesobi and Mathias
Note: Can be used 4 times.
Note: Can not use an element (f.e. Suiton Arrow) and use the same element in the same (thus another Suiton Based move)move again.
Note: Can not use any Sniper Arts in the same move, or one move after this one.
||All Declined|| The first has been done before, and the second and third jutsus are either overpowered or need more restrictions.

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Submissions for the week 11/07/2011 - 11/13/2011.

(Kamei Gigei: Dai san no Inori: Sōgenmu) Command Art: Third Prayer: Twin Phantasms
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The Third in the “Prayer” series of Command Arts, Sōgenmu is a type of Psuedo-bunshin developed specifically for Kenjutsu. The user will coat their body in a layer of chakra, creating a rainbow colored doppelganger. This doppelganger mimics every attack the user makes, down to even the launching of shockwaves and the amount of force behind an attack. At first, the doppelganger fluctuates only slightly around the user, making it appear as if the user is surrounded by some sort of haze. As time progresses, and the phantasm becomes more unstable, the user can “slide” and “rotate” the doppelganger away from them; though it will still mimic the user’s moves exactly, it will remain a set distance from the user. This changing in orientation allows the user to use the doppelganger to maximum effect.
*Cannot be used unless the first “Prayer” has been activated.
*The doppelganger remains for five turns.
*Can only be used once per turn.
*Under the same stipulations as all other clones in the Battle Arena Rules.

~Pending~ I'm pretty sure your last restriction covers all of what I'm about to say, but I'll say it anyway: What's the amount of time you can use this technique? Are all the jutsu he uses counted in your 3 jutsus per turn? Also, what's the point of this technique if you could simply get a clone to do it? Lastly, give me an example and further explanation on how your Doppelganger can remain a set distance from the user.

(Kamei Gigei: Dai san no Inori: Sōgenmu) Command Art: Third Prayer: Twin Phantasms
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The Third in the “Prayer” series of Command Arts, Sōgenmu is a type of Psuedo-bunshin developed specifically for Kenjutsu. The user will coat their body in a layer of chakra, creating a rainbow colored doppelganger. This doppelganger mimics every attack the user makes, down to even the launching of shockwaves and the amount of force behind an attack. At first, the doppelganger fluctuates only slightly around the user, making it appear as if the user is surrounded by some sort of haze. As time progresses, and the phantasm becomes more unstable, the user can “slide” and “rotate” the doppelganger away from them; though it will still mimic the user’s moves exactly, it will remain a set distance from the user. This changing in orientation allows the user to use the doppelganger to maximum effect.
*Cannot be used unless the first “Prayer” has been activated.
*The doppelganger remains for five turns.
*Can only be used once per turn.
*Can only be used three times.
*Every jutsu that the clone uses counts as an additional move per-turn with the exception of the Command Art Mirage Blade (Kamei Gigei: Kougenjin).
*The distance the clone can move is as follows: T1: Short; T2: Between Mid-Short; T3: Mid; T4: Between Mid-Long; T5: Long.



Explanations you wanted/reasons for the above: First is the note about every jutsu the clone using counting against my turn limit: I omitted Kougenjin from this rule for the fact that it would break the rule instantly. Kougenjin fires three shockwaves (costing me one jutsu to activate the technique), but since each shock-wave would count as a move-per-turn, in simply using the technique, four jutsu would be used in that turn, and this is assuming I did nothing else in that turn. The point of this technique is that I can't just get a clone to do it. To me, this seems much more tactical than the regular clone jutsu (being that it's tied to whatever moves I make), and it's another tool for me in my quest to be able to fight Ninjutsu completely with Kenjutsu; since I can move the clone around, it allows me to keep another fighter in position to pressure the enemy, whether it be with slashes or a double-angle shock-wave assault.

As for the movement aspect, it's like this: say the doppelganger has been active for three turns, and can now move away from me up-to mid-range. If I'm in the middle of a circle who's radius is medium-range, the doppelganger can be "r" or less than "r" away from me; meaning, he can be anywhere inside the circle. I can change the direction he's facing, or how great the distance between he and myself, but it can't exceed "r". A simpler example would be that he's attached to me by a leash that I can control how long or short it is; as time goes on, the leash has the ability to go longer.

Oh, and clones of any kind can be used only up to three times a match, per Battle Arena rules, thus that change.

~Approved~ Thanks for the explanation, you covered it all. Well done.

 

[Urda]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Sankaku Shikakejirai) Summoning: Triangle Trap
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: The User will slam a single palm on the ground, creating a triangle with three circles at each end point with the kanji word “Trap” written in the middle. After the User has trapped the opponent into the Seal, the three circles will activate and summon a barrage of kunai knives and shuriken towards the opponent.
~When trap, the opponent can not escape~
~Ninja are only able to perform handseals~
~Only Ninja with Space/Time Ninjutsu or other methods of defense can counter~
~Can be used two times in battle~
~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~



(Kuchiyose: Kimon Ankokugai) Summoning: Gate of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: The User will draw blood and then slamming their palms to the ground summoning a large gate to protect them or their comrade(s).
~Dodge offensive Jutsu A-Rank and below~
~Can only be used 1 time in battle~
~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~

Illusion Technique: False Movement Technique
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User will perform the needed handseals and causing the opponent to attack the misleading apperance of the user

~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
Thank you.

(Kuchiyose: Sankaku Shikakejirai) Summoning: Triangle Trap

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: After drawing blood, the User will slam a single palm on the ground, creating a triangle with three circles at each end point with the kanji word “Trap” written in the middle. After the User has trapped the opponent into the Seal, the three circles will activate and summon a barrage of kunai knives, explosive notes and shuriken towards the opponent.
~Can be used two times in battle~
~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~

~Declined~ I like this technique, a lot, but we need to make it somewhat more acceptable First of all, how far are the seals from the target? Do you need to mark the ground with your blood or any seal beforehand? I'd need you to add restrictions for this technique.

(Kuchiyose: Kimon Ankokugai) Summoning: Gate of the Underworld

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Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: The User will draw blood and then slamming their palms to the ground summoning a large gate to protect them or their comrade(s).
~Can only be used 1 time in battle~
~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~

~Declined~ Too similar to the Rashomon gate summoned by Oro.

(Chakra no Shokkuweibu): Chakra Shockwave
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short, Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The User use a sword or kunia knive to fire a large, strong concussive and destructive chakra blast wave toward his/her opponent. The User gathers their chakra, while sending the flow of their chakra into thier sword. The blade fires usually in the arc of the weapon swung.
~Only used by Kichiro Fujimoto and whom I teach~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[~Rihan~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doujustu : nenshou ) - Eye Technique - Burning Hell
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank: S
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user activates there sharigan, and looks directly into there oppent eye's and once the user makes direct eye contact with the oppents. The oppent is sent into a releam where it's a moon with half of it being covered by the user sharigan, and once it takes over all of the moon. The floor turns turn into Scorshing hot Fire and burns the oppents serveral in his brain, and then as he's being burned, the user manupliates the oppents perception of time so they think it's going by real slow and makes the oppents burn slowly and feel every bit of it. And once the Genjustu ends the oppent is left unconssuses from the mental damage of thinking he's being burned to death.
- Must have Three Tomoe Sharigan
- Can only be used 1 per battle
- Last 2 Turns
- User Cant use any Doujustu for 4 turns

~Declined do not resubmit~ No variation of Tsukuyomi will be accepted. No amateration variation will be accepted. No Susanoo variation will be accepted. Let this be a warning.


(Taijustu : ryouiki ) - Taijustu Style - Fist Of The Nine Dragon
Type:Attack
Rank: S
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user gather a large amount of any element chakra into there domiant hand, and once they've gathered enough they run towards the oppents. And punches the oppent 8 times in any spot, and on the 9 hit the user hit the oppents in the air and as the user hits the oppents. The user release the chosen elemental chakra and shape manupliate it into 9 dragons that keeps attacking the oppents as he's flying and as he's falling the dragons disseapears.
- Can only be used 1 per battle
- No lighting justu for 4 turns
- Leaves user tired.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

(Genjustu : seikou ) - Genjustu Style - False Perception
Type: Denfese
Rank: S
RangeShort
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user makes direct eye contact with the enemy, and it put them under a genjustu where there brain pereption of if the enemy hits you or didnt is off. So if the enemy thinks he hits you when in reality he's missed you, giving you time to counter attack when he misses.
- Can be used 2 times
- Effects last for 4 turns
- Must have three tomoe

~Declined~ Messy description and the whole concept will lead to many, many debates. I'll give you a chance to re-submit but if it's not different in it's fundamentals, it'll most likely be declined again.

 

[Shade Dracova]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Erementarumōdo) Elemental Mode
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A-F
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather a large amount of chakra in their body. The user will then spread it into 5 points around them that would control a specific element. The chakra is split into portions that are released into the user's mouth, the ground below, a near water source, the air around them, and into thunderclouds above. This jutsu is sought after by the best elemental users. This move grants you the ability simultaeously control the elements around you. Each element has a function. This move requires a large amount of chakra meaning that depending on your rank you can control x amount of the 5 elements. Once the chakra is settled around you can release large amounts of chakra around your body to summon that element around you. This works as an aura meaning the elements are around you at all times.

Fire-The user will breathe out a giant amount of fire from their mouth which condenses and make a ring around their body. The fire can be used to send condensed A rank fire blast towards you enemy up to mid range at any given moment and retract giving you a unlimited supply of fire unless you opponent uses a jutsu to counter the fire. When used this counts as a A rank fire technique.

Earth-The user breaks small earth pellets from the ground which come together and rotate around him like a ring. These pellets can be indivisually launched at the opponent at high speeds to impact the body head on or can be manipulated into hundreds of spikes that are launched at the oponent rapidly. The spikes can be remotely controlled to hit the opponent but the pellets are just by aim.

Wind-The user concentrates the air around them to make a wind orb. This grants them flight throughout the usuage of the jutsu. It also acts as a shield to protect you from B rank and lower techniques. The wind orb can also protect you from A rank lightning.

Lightning-The user calls upon lightning from the sky which wraps around their body under the wind orb. This acts as a defribillator to give them an adrenaline rush to continuously stay in this mode without fainting to soon. This also sharpens their senses alot how the Raikages Lightning Armor does.

Water-The user will call upon a large mass of water a condense it into a single spinning ring that rotates around him. This can be used to call forth a large mass of water to release towards the opponent or drench out different moves.


Note:Can only be used once
Note:Only lasts for three turns
Note:The rank depends on how many elements you use simultaneously:
5 elements=Forbidden
4 elements=S-Class Ninja
3 elements=Jounin
Note:When this move is deactivated the user will be dizzy, have blurred vision, and cough blood.
Note:You must have mastered the element to use it in the mode.
Note:Can only be used by Shade Dracova
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~Declined do not resubmit~ Even in the old days, when this kind of justu may have had a remote chance of being accepted, we didn't even try to got for ALL the elements, we simply tried and make a mode that enhanced our abilities in one element. This technique is OP and falls under the category of "element bender", which is forbidden. It's OP. Need I say more?

(| Iryūjontekunikku | zan'nen itsuwari no kioku)|Illusion Technique|Regretful False Memories
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will perform a single handseal, raises his palms towards then opponent, and speaks the line "Do you remember how much blood there was?". The user will release chakra into the the opponents body implanting their mind with flase memories of their entire family be massacred in front of his eyes by the user while the opponent was chained to a wall so that he could watch. You hear the yells of the opponent as he witnesses this massacre over and over again. In his midn this is going on forever but in reality the opponent screams in agony for a moment then he falls to his knees as he gives up on fightning the chains.



Note: Can only be used twice
Note: This move counts as two due to the major chakra control used to form the false memories
Note: Can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova

~Declined~ Let's make this clear, you can force your opponent to see things, hear things, smell things...etc, but you can't force them to feel a certain way. Genjutsu affects the senses, nothing more. Also, your technique sounds a lot like Shishui's unique ability to make people think they're taking a decision while it's the user who's controlling them (check the bold part).

 

[-Ace-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Kuchyose: Kaze ) Summoning: Wind

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will do the necessary hand seals once done the user will quickly slam their hands to the ground once the user hands touch the ground Kaze will be summon. Kaze was born on the desert he had no parents he was by himself and so he had to hunt other animals by himself which was extremely crazy for such a young Raven. Once Kaze was old enough he practice Wind element and he seem to master it up to s-rank. Kaze can not do wind jutsus that required hand seals of course the user does it for Kaze also, the user need to be on top of Kaze for the jutsu to work. Kaze is a normal Raven that now lives with other Ravens in the dark ravens world. Kaze feathers are extremely different than other which makes Kaze unique his feathers color is white only and his peak is black, Kaze peak is as hard as steel and is like a sword is really sharp and is able to cut through a lot. Kaze size is the half size of the well known Gama from the toad contract.

• Kaze is only able to be summon once
• Kaze last four turns in battle
• Kaze is able to carry two people on his back
• Must sign the Raven contract to use

Approved

( Kuchyose: Mookie ) Summoning: Mookie

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will do the necessary hand seals or touch his/her tattoo once done a Raven known as 'Mookie' will appear before the opponent and user eyes. Mookie is a evil Raven which had a sad life. Mookie is able to user water since he was the only one who was taught by the great water master of ravens known as the 'Sage of Water'. Mookie is only able to do his own personal technique that he made because the Sage of Water told him that he can't really control his water chakra well and so his only able to do one technique. The technique that Mookie is able to do is call 'Reborn'. Reborn is one of the strongest technique on all Ravens technique; Mookie first has to focus a large amount of water chakra on his legs once done he will rise his peak as soon as the peak has been up he will make it clap with the underneath peak once done a large amount of water will rise from Mookie legs that water is able to be controlable but not only that when the water touches the Mookie peak the peak will rise and get larger every time 'Reborn' touches Mookie peak.

• Can only be summon once
• Once summon it last 4 turns
• The water technique last till the Raven wants
• Must sign the Raven contract to be use

Declined, if ya want this approved change his ability

( Kuchyose: No-ki ) Summoning: No-ki

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: The user will either do the basic way to summon a animal or touch wipe their blood and with the blood touch the tattoo, once the user has done either of one of them No-ki will appear in the user left shoulder, No-ki is really small in fact is one of the smallest Ravens even smaller than Fukasaku, No-ki is a male Raven. No-ki specialize in speed and so over the pass three years this male raven has been practicing for an amazing technique and so he has completed the technique successfully. No-ki special technique is known as 'Colors', to be use No-ki first has to get on the user elbow once done No-ki will fly around the user hand at high speed after a few seconds the user hand will have a look-like wind around his hand, but is not a wind technique is No-Ki and so if the opponent touches the user hand No-Ki will be able to cut the opponent with his peak and if necessary even stab the opponent which counts towards one the users moves and equals B rank.

• Once summon it can't be summon again and it last 5 turns
• No-Ki cannot carry anybody on his back since his really small

Approved

( Kuchyose: Frosty ) Summoning: Frosty

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will do the necessary hand seals and slam his hand or spread blood on his/her tattoo either way works, once the user is done a black with yellow stripe raven will be summon and of course this raven is known as 'Frosty'. Frosty has two yellow stripe around his neck giving him a unique awesome look. Frosty has large nails and a really large peak, Frosty nails are extremely sharp they are like swords and if you get cut by it, it would make a deep would not only that if you get stab by it, it could mean death. Frosty is mainly known for his special technique, this technique was named after Frosty has finish his training which took him exactly two years to finish, the technique name is 'Akuna'. This technique is a lightning base technique and is a S-rank too, is as fast as Nagashi and it spreads all around like Nagashi but because Frosty has train a lot to master this technique his able to use shape manipulation on the lightning changing the Akuna shape it could be three shapes, the first shape is like Nagashi which spreads around but it could be control, the second shape is a shape himself which is a Raven and the third shape is a sword shape which could be use by the user, this technique is so intense that all of them could kill the opponent if they get hit by it. Frosty has great senses and Frosty is half size as Gamabunta.

• Frosty can only be summon once per battle and once summon it last four turns
• Frosty technique known as 'Akuna' counts as a move
• The shape manipulation can be done twice and once done again it counts as a move

~Declined~ Take out the bold parts. Explain better what happens when you shape the lightning like a raven of a sword, how long does the lightning stays active on the field? Can you freely direct it at your opponent and can you alter it's trajectory? Lastly, how big is your summon?

( Kuchyose: Panti- ) Summoning: Panties

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will either do the necessary hand seals or wipe blood on his/her tattoo once done a small Raven will be summon known as 'Panties'. Panties is known to be the second smallest Raven on the Raven contract even smaller than the smallest Toad. Panties don't have any special techniques but she carries over a hundred tag bombs with her and if the user wants he/she could donate Panties life and making a great explosion to kill his/her opponent and with this explosion the opponent will surely die.

• Once Panties life has been donated she dies and so this jutsu has to be drop
• Can only be summon twice per battle and once summon she last four turns the second time summon she last two turns

~Declined~ Your summon has to be visible to the naked eye, mention that. Take out the bold parts. Never refer to death, since our system is based on damage points, there a no techniques that should cause death (even though we know it's not the case). Your restriction put in bold is simply impossible for me to keep track of, find something else. How can she be summoned twice if she used her kamikaze attack?

( Genjutsu: Tadai Karaosu Gen ) Illusion: Heavy Raven Illusion

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will send chakra to any kind of Raven which is within the contract, once done the Raven will flap his/her wings while standing or flying while the wing is being flap the opponent will be trap on a heavy illusion. This illusion is extremely dangerous, once the opponent has been trap on the illusion the opponent will see a endless battle, the opponent will see all kind of battles on the past such as war and stuff alike not only that the opponent will also see that he has been stab on the heart and his also being hurt with all kind of pain, the thing that make's this genjutsu so tricky and a s-rank is that the opponent cannot fully control his chakra while being trap on it and the opponent will either think is a Ninjutsu or a Genjutsu and to be able to break the genjutsu the user need great concentration.

• The Raven have to keep flapping his wings so the opponent don't control his chakra fully
• Only once per battle
• Only can be use by a Raven and while the genjutsu is being active the user has to keep giving chakra to the Raven
• The genjutsu last three turn

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~Declined do not resubmit~ This technique is a mess.

 

[Gingka Uzumaki]

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Pegasus Blade

Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

Rank: S

Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon through it)

Damage Points: 60 (80 with Katon)

Description: Pegasus Blade: A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade with Quickness and Strength unseen before. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

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~All Declined~ I will not accept any jutsu that use font, size change, aligned/centered text or spoilers for anything else then pictures. Re-submit in a more readable way.
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Pegasus Blade

Type: Attack Weapon (Sword)

Rank: S

Chakra Cost: N/A (40 when flowing Katon through it)

Damage Points: 60 (80 with Katon)

Description: Pegasus Blade: A Blade made of Steel. This blade has been passed down from users of the legendary Pegasus beyblade. This blade is mainly made of Steel, but this Steel is imbued with Fire Chakra, so you can combine Katon with this blade with Quickness and Strength unseen before. The hilt is made of Pegasus feathers and more Steel covered with the feathers.

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~Pending~ How will the bold part affect your techniques and your abilities?

 

[Kurisutina]

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Dropping this CW for this:

(Xiphos; Kiritsu no Ha) - Xiphos; The Blade of Discipline
Rank: S
Type: Weapon - Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Xiphos; The Blade of Discipline is a tanto that has the ability to release chakra from the hilt that will improve the user's earth jutsu. The blade allows the user to do earth jutsu in two less handseals (Can't go below 1 handseal). Due to the small size of the blade, the blade can be used even while performing handseals. The blade of the tanto allows the user to release their chakra through it to perform jutsu that require a blade to use.
Restrictions:
~Reduction for handseals only works on 3 jutsu.

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Declined how can a blade be used whilst performing the hand seals ? this isnt possible remove that

(Xiphos; Kiritsu no Ha) - Xiphos; The Blade of Discipline
Rank: S
Type: Weapon - Offensive / Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Xiphos; The Blade of Discipline is a tanto that has the ability to release chakra from the hilt that will improve the user's earth jutsu. The blade allows the user to do earth jutsu in two less handseals (Can't go below 1 handseal). The blade of the tanto allows the user to release their chakra through it to perform jutsu that require a blade to use.
Restrictions:
~Reduction for handseals only works on 3 jutsu.

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~Declined~ I'm done accepting the same swords over and over again. If you feel like arguing, look over the thread and witness for yourself how many swords do the exact same thing as this one.

 

[WastedMonkey]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fūton: Teikiatsu no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Cyclone of the Zephyr
Type: Defensive
Rank: C/B/A/S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15/20/30/40
Damage Points: 30/40/60/80
Description: The user first does the Bird seal and release some amounts of Fuuton chakra into the air around him/her. The chakra will form into small cyclones that automatically patrols around the user in a random manner and damage enemies that comes in contact. The user, on command, can send a cyclone to deflect incoming projectiles such as kunai, shuriken, etc. A cyclone will dissappear every turn after the jutsu is used or when it comes in contact with an object.

Chuunin - 2 cyclones max
S Jounin - 4 cyclones max
Jounin - 6 cyclones max
S-Class - 8 cyclones max

Note: Only usable once
Note: No A-rank and above wind jutsu until there is still a cyclone on the battlefield
Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

~Declined~ 8 cyclones? Are you kidding me? I expect something much less OP in your re-submission, or else it will be declined for good. Also, submit individual technique for all the ranks you want for this technique. I will not accept techniques that can be used on 4 different ranks.

Fūton: Teikiatsu no sono Soyokaze - Wind Release: Cyclone of the Zephyr
Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first does the Bird hand seal and release some amounts of Fuuton chakra into the air around him/her. The chakra will form into small cyclones that automatically patrols around the user in a random manner and damage enemies that comes in contact. The user, on command, can send a cyclone to deflect incoming projectiles such as kunai, shuriken, etc. A cyclone will dissappear every turn after the jutsu is used or when it comes in contact with an object.

Note: Creates 4 cyclones max
Note: Only usable once
Note: No A-rank and above wind jutsu until there is still a cyclone on the battlefield
Note: Can only be use/taught by WastedMonkey

~Declined~ Look at the picture bellow, this is a cyclone. Even if you make it 1 it will be declined (2 reasons: it's OP and there is a similar technique).

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[Mattobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kibō no kirā Killer of Hope
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+5 to Sling Arts)
Description: Kibō no kirā is a simple looking slingshot. It was forged out of the strongest metal so that it won't break and the string is made out of a strong material wich is strong enough so that the string won't snap and can shoot upto long-range. The weapon is specially treatened so that only Mattobi's chakra will be able to go into the slingshot, wich allows him to use it. If someone else would use it, it would only be able to shoot upto short-range and the shot would be completely harmless. The projectiles that the owner uses are small pellets of metal, those are always enwrapped with explosive tags.

Note: Only Mattobi may use the slingshot.

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~Approved~

(Suiton: Mizu pōtaru) Water Release: Water Portal
Type: Defensive | Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a single handseal while standing on water and creates a water vortex that rises out of the water around himself. As the vortex is around the user, it suddenly goes back into the water and takes the user with him. After a second or two, the vortex rises again, together with the user, out of the water on a location where the user wants to.

Note: Needs to be performed after a single handseal on a water surface.
Note: Can only be used with Mattobi's permission.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~Declined~ Any form of transportation through elements will be declined. The only reason I didn't decline this one for good is because I'm leaving you a change to alter the description to mention that you'd actually be travelling underwater and re-surfacing somewhere else (however such a technique is similar to a cannon so it'd be no use).

(Suiton: Mizu supaikupiramiddo) Water Release: Water Spike Pyramid
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends his suiton chakra into the moisture in the air around his opponent and performs the two needed handseals. After he has performed the handseals, the moisture around the opponent condenses and forms a triangular cage around him. As the cage is formed, spikes come out of the walls of water and stab the opponent while being caged.

Note: Can only be used with Mattobi's permission.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

 

[Lucifer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Sabertooth Tigers
Scroll Owner: Strawberry
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

~Declined do not resubmit~ No mystical or extinct species will be accepted.

 

[Akisha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Fuinjutsu: Kaminari Den) = Sealing Techniques: Thunder Palace
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: All
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user summons multiple orbs with a special tag on them, filled with enormous amounts of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. If anyone decides to pass by the orbs, the seal will activate and the one who passed will be immediately zapped by lightning and will be unable to move for 1 turn (pretty much like zapped with chidori nagashi) If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, the attacker is instantly electrocuted and unable to move for 1 turn.
Note: The orbs can not be placed in short range radius from the opponent (meaning the user can't summone them next to the opponent, hence electrocuting him on the spot)
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: The orbs last for 4 turns.
Note: The orbs can be placed around a whole village.

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~Declined~ I don't know why I didn't noticed first; take out or change the bold part, nothing is instantaneous

(Fuinjutsu: Kaminari Den) = Sealing Techniques: Thunder Palace
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: All
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user summons multiple orbs with a special tag on them, filled with enormous amounts of Lightning chakra and suspends them high up in the air in a circular formation around the target. If anyone decides to pass by the orbs, the seal will activate and the one who passed will be immediately zapped by lightning and will be unable to move for 1 turn (pretty much like zapped with chidori nagashi) If the orbs are destroyed by an outside force, lightning bolts will be shot from the orbs and will zap him extremely fast (in a matter of second or so) and he/she will have trouble moving for 1 turn while being disoriented and dizzy.
Note: The orbs can not be placed in short range radius from the opponent (meaning the user can't summone them next to the opponent, hence electrocuting him on the spot)
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: The orbs last for 4 turns.
Note: The orbs can be placed around a whole village.

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~Approved~ Check the bold part I altered.

(Hyouton: Tsumetai Fuutoni) Ice Release: Icy Wind
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short/Middle/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This is one of the most advanced Ice techniques, the ability to turn wind into ice. The user will begin by concentrating his water and wind chakra but will add an extreme amount of wind chakra making it more like a wind but when mixed with the cold water chakra it makes it freeze. So with the use of one hand seal, the user will create a massive gust of icy wind in front of them that heads toward the opponent rapidly, turning all in its path to ice.
Note: Only twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Akisha
Note: No S rank or above Ice, Water or Wind for the following turn.

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~Declined~ No. I will never accept something as flawed as this. For the air to freeze you'd need to reach several hundreds of degrees below zero, and the air would only turn liquid, not even solid.

Ancient Ice Style: 100 Mirrors Labyrinth = Furui Hyouton: 100 Hyōshō no Meikyuu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 for each turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will unroll a scroll with the Ice kanji on it and by slamming his hand on it, he will summon forth 100 mirrors that form a huge labyrinth. The maze is so huge that the enemies can search the way out for hours. The mirrors are 10m tall and even the floor is made of mirrors preventing the enemy to escape from underground. The user can merge with the mirrors and travel at high speeds that only sharingan of 3t can track. The user can use the mirrors to attack from them or use them as a distraction to escape, since his reflection would be all over the place.
Note: The user can channel chakra to repair any damage made on the mirrors but it counts as a single move.
Note: Can only be taught by Akisha
Note: Only once per battle.
Note: Due to the large chakra requiring for this jutsu at the 3rd turn the user’s movements and reactions are quite slow and can be tracked by any normal ninja.
Note: The mirrors last for 4 turns and can only be repaired through chakra twice per battle
Note: While merged, the user can not use any techniques, meaning if he wants to use ninjutsu whatsoever he will have to re-emerge.
Note: No S rank Water Wind or Ice for 3 turns after the mirrors are gone.
Note: No Ice for 1 turn after the mirrors are gone.

~Declined~ I will not approve any variation of Haku's already OP technique. Also, this one is extremely OP lol.