Xanthe gets me wet

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
You turned into water? Wrong jutsu.

You need to change the shape of the water so that it expands into a spiraling wall of water.

its supposed turn it into water

*i once again flow a large amount of chakra to my hand and have it turn to suiton. once its suiton, i have it fold onto itself and twist up like before. however, unlike las time, i have it shrink a bit, condensing into a more stable and blunt form so it goes straight out when fired. i then turn it into water that blasts towards the clone. due to the pressure, it hits the clone with a lot of force, destroying it*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
its supposed turn it into water

*i once again flow a large amount of chakra to my hand and have it turn to suiton. once its suiton, i have it fold onto itself and twist up like before. however, unlike las time, i have it shrink a bit, condensing into a more stable and blunt form so it goes straight out when fired. i then turn it into water that blasts towards the clone. due to the pressure, it hits the clone with a lot of force, destroying it*

Are you copying and pasting the last time you did the jutsu and then just changing a few lines? Don't do that.

You need to form the water into a spiraling wall of water.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
Are you copying and pasting the last time you did the jutsu and then just changing a few lines? Don't do that.

You need to form the water into a spiraling wall of water.

oh i cant do that? sorry...

*i channel chakra to my hand have it turn into suiton. i then have the suiton condense and fold into itself, creating a lot of pressure. i then have the suiton spiral up so the pressure builds. i then have the suiton thin out so it blasts out in a straight line. i then turn it into water. as it turns into water, it bursts out in the form of a large, spiralling wall of water that hits and destroys your clone*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
oh i cant do that? sorry...

*i channel chakra to my hand have it turn into suiton. i then have the suiton condense and fold into itself, creating a lot of pressure. i then have the suiton spiral up so the pressure builds. i then have the suiton thin out so it blasts out in a straight line. i then turn it into water. as it turns into water, it bursts out in the form of a large, spiralling wall of water that hits and destroys your clone*

Good Job.

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Hare โ†’ Rat โ†’ Boar โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Horse โ†’ Bird โ†’ Rat โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Dog โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Ox โ†’ Ram โ†’ Snake โ†’ Boar โ†’ Ram โ†’ Rat โ†’ Yang Water โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Bird โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Horse โ†’ Ram โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Rat โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Hare โ†’ Boar โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Ram โ†’ Rat โ†’ Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Bird โ†’ Yang Water โ†’ Rat โ†’ Boar โ†’ Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
Note: Requires a water source to use.

A huge rushing water projectile in the shape of a dragon that can level anything in its path.

This jutsu allows you to create a water source that is immediately formed into a water dragon. The water source is on the ground. The water dragon moves quickly and it is a very powerful physical attacker. Due to the dragon being made form water, this jutsu is hard to stop with physical attacks since the water can easily reform as it isn't stuck in a molded position.

* Creates a clone at long-range of you.*

I want you to perform these handseals.

Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Hare โ†’ Rat โ†’ Boar โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Horse โ†’ Bird โ†’ Rat โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Dog โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Ox โ†’ Ram โ†’ Snake โ†’ Boar โ†’ Ram โ†’ Rat โ†’ Yang Water โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Bird โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Horse โ†’ Ram โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Snake โ†’ Rat โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Hare โ†’ Boar โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Ram โ†’ Rat โ†’ Ox โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Bird โ†’ Yang Water โ†’ Rat โ†’ Boar โ†’ Bird



As you do the handseals, you are focusing your chakra into a spot on the ground near you or in an actual water source. As you finish the handseals, you will then form the water created, or pre-existing, into a large water dragon. The water dragon will emerge from the water and be under your control. The dragon can be easily manipulated by you. I want you to use this jutsu on my clone.

You must be registered for see images
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
ive been dreading this jutsu

*after seeing the seals, i try them myself. of course, i mess up right away. after about ten minutes, i perform the seals to perfection. i then flow a large amount of suiton into the water source. as i do, i perform the seals. the two in conjunction with me manipulating the chakra's shape and size turns the water into a gigantic dragon. i then have the dragon ram into your clone full force*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
ive been dreading this jutsu

*after seeing the seals, i try them myself. of course, i mess up right away. after about ten minutes, i perform the seals to perfection. i then flow a large amount of suiton into the water source. as i do, i perform the seals. the two in conjunction with me manipulating the chakra's shape and size turns the water into a gigantic dragon. i then have the dragon ram into your clone full force*

Good.

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Suiryuuben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge. Those whips can then be directed towards one or multiple targets, impaling them on impact.

This jutsu allows you to form a large water orb of water and you can then release whips of water that will move out of the orb of water and strike targets. The whips seem to be sharp enough to impale a target upon impact.

Tiger



*Creates a clone that goes to long-range of you.*

I want you to use this jutsu form a water orb and then use the water orb to then form water whips originating from the orb of water. You will perform the handseal and then as you do, you will simultaneously form a water orb out of a water source and have it suspended in mid-air. The water orb will then release whips from its exertior. Impale my clone with this jutsu.

You must be registered for see images
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
*i flow my chakra into the water and i perform the seal. as i perform the seal, i manipulate the a large bubble of water to float out of the source, suspending it in mid-air. i have the water condense into a solid orb. i then have most of the internal water condense and contract into missile-like projections. upon releasing the contraction, the water spears fire out and hit the clone, impaling him multiple times before destroying him*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i flow my chakra into the water and i perform the seal. as i perform the seal, i manipulate the a large bubble of water to float out of the source, suspending it in mid-air. i have the water condense into a solid orb. i then have most of the internal water condense and contract into missile-like projections. upon releasing the contraction, the water spears fire out and hit the clone, impaling him multiple times before destroying him*

A bubble doesn't contain liquid in it. You don't condense the orb into a solid orb, you form it into an orb of water. You don't have to condense and contract the water, you have to just use shape manipulation on the orb to release multiple whips from the orb.

Try again.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
A bubble doesn't contain liquid in it. You don't condense the orb into a solid orb, you form it into an orb of water. You don't have to condense and contract the water, you have to just use shape manipulation on the orb to release multiple whips from the orb.

Try again.

*i channel a large amount of chakra into the water source. i then have the chakra infuse with the water and turn to suiton, granting me control of the water. i raise it so it levitates in the air. then, i focus it into the form of a large orb of water. once i do, i have the water flow outwards in the form of multiple tendril-like spears that impale your clone until he is destroyed*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i channel a large amount of chakra into the water source. i then have the chakra infuse with the water and turn to suiton, granting me control of the water. i raise it so it levitates in the air. then, i focus it into the form of a large orb of water. once i do, i have the water flow outwards in the form of multiple tendril-like spears that impale your clone until he is destroyed*

When you pull the orb out of the water with your chakra, it should already be in the form of the orb. The whips come out but it doesn't take up the entire orb of water, just a fraction of it.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
*i flow my chakra into the water source. i then have the chakra turn into suiton and infuse with the water. i then have the chakra move into the form of an orb, causing the water i infused to do the same. i then have the water raise up in the form of an orb and hang it mid-air. i then have some of the water shoot out in the form of large spears that stab your clone till it is destroyed*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i flow my chakra into the water source. i then have the chakra turn into suiton and infuse with the water. i then have the chakra move into the form of an orb, causing the water i infused to do the same. i then have the water raise up in the form of an orb and hang it mid-air. i then have some of the water shoot out in the form of large spears that stab your clone till it is destroyed*

Excellent. But I wouldn't describe the whips as spears because the whips have some shape manipulation over them and calling them implies that they are stuck in that position after being released.

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

This jutsu is a stronger version of the jutsu that we learned a bit earlier.




Try it out, make sure that the description used describes that it is larger, faster, and stronger then the previous jutsu.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
Excellent. But I wouldn't describe the whips as spears because the whips have some shape manipulation over them and calling them implies that they are stuck in that position after being released.

Next Jutsu:



This jutsu is a stronger version of the jutsu that we learned a bit earlier.





Try it out, make sure that the description used describes that it is larger, faster, and stronger then the previous jutsu.

*i flow my chakra to my throat and turn it into suiton. i then have the suiton take the form of a sphere, but this time, i increase the chakra and its force, allowing the jutsu to be stronger and bigger. then, i turn it into water and as i release it, i have a second wave of suiton propel it, giving it more speed and velocity. as it rushes towards the clone, it smacks into it with tremendous force, leaving all around where the clone once stood drenched and soaked*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i flow my chakra to my throat and turn it into suiton. i then have the suiton take the form of a sphere, but this time, i increase the chakra and its force, allowing the jutsu to be stronger and bigger. then, i turn it into water and as i release it, i have a second wave of suiton propel it, giving it more speed and velocity. as it rushes towards the clone, it smacks into it with tremendous force, leaving all around where the clone once stood drenched and soaked*

Good. Now try the version where it originates from the water now.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
Good. Now try the version where it originates from the water now.

*i flow chakra into the water and turn it into suiton so it fuses better. i then apply even more chakra so the attack can be bigger and stronger. i then have the water come out in the form of a giant bullet. i then launch the bullet, which is propelled even faster by a second burst of water chakra. it hits your clone, destroying it and soaking the area*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i flow chakra into the water and turn it into suiton so it fuses better. i then apply even more chakra so the attack can be bigger and stronger. i then have the water come out in the form of a giant bullet. i then launch the bullet, which is propelled even faster by a second burst of water chakra. it hits your clone, destroying it and soaking the area*

Remember, it doesn't come out as a bullet but as a spiraling jet of water formed from a whirlpool in the water.

Try again.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
Remember, it doesn't come out as a bullet but as a spiraling jet of water formed from a whirlpool in the water.

Try again.

*i channel a large amount of suiton into the water. i use a larger amount than last time so the jutsu is bigger and stronger. i then have the suiton fuse with the water. i then have the chakra spiral and rise up a bit. i have the water spin in the form of a large whirlpool. then, using a burst of chakra to propel the water even faster than before, i use it to slam into your clone, scopp him up into the air and destroy him*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*i channel a large amount of suiton into the water. i use a larger amount than last time so the jutsu is bigger and stronger. i then have the suiton fuse with the water. i then have the chakra spiral and rise up a bit. i have the water spin in the form of a large whirlpool. then, using a burst of chakra to propel the water even faster than before, i use it to slam into your clone, scopp him up into the air and destroy him*

Alright. Good.

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Suirou No Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Prison
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user first performs Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Horse โ†’ Hare โ†’ Ram โ†’ Horse โ†’ Hare and by tspreading their hands out forward they can use this jutsu to trap a victim inside a virtually inescapable sphere of water. The only downside to this technique is that the user must keep at least one arm inside the sphere at all times in order for the victim to remain imprisoned. This jutsu can't be performed without a sufficiently large body of water to supply the water for it. The target is unable to move while within it. Because of the density of the water it can be used, to a limited extent, for defensive purposes if performed on oneself. Water clones can be used in preparation for the jutsu, which block an opponent's attack and trap the attacker in the prison using the clone's own water.

This jutsu is an advanced form of the Water Prison. It requires much more water and it creates a much denser version of the water prison. It is so much denser that it can be used to form a water prison around you to form a protective shell of water. This jutsu is exceptional for defensive purposes.

Snake โ†’ Ram โ†’ Horse โ†’ Hare โ†’ Ram โ†’ Horse โ†’ Hare



*Creates a clone that moves onto the middle of the water bowl.*

You will form the handseals necessary and then you will infuse your chakra into the water below the clone and then as you come close, you will stick your hand out and cause the water to shoot upwards from the water source and onto the target. The water should become compressed onto the clone and become incredibly dense. You will then hold the clone in the water prison till he drowns and poofs away.
 

Punk Hazard

Sage of Six Posts ๐Ÿ”ฎ
Immortal
Joined
Apr 21, 2011
Messages
59,557
Reaction score
4,729
*as you show me the seals, i perform them until i get it. i then flow my chakra into the bowl and infuse it with the water. i then stretch my hand out and have the water explode around the clone using my chakra. then as the water surrounds the clone and my wrist, i flow a continuous wave of chakra into the prison that fills it with water. i then have the chakra further enstrengthen the prison, drowning your clone*
 

Kurisutina

Kage in the Making ๐Ÿ‘‘
Legendary
Joined
May 9, 2011
Messages
11,011
Reaction score
637
*as you show me the seals, i perform them until i get it. i then flow my chakra into the bowl and infuse it with the water. i then stretch my hand out and have the water explode around the clone using my chakra. then as the water surrounds the clone and my wrist, i flow a continuous wave of chakra into the prison that fills it with water. i then have the chakra further enstrengthen the prison, drowning your clone*

Good.

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Mizu Kamikiri) - Water Release: Rising Water Slicer
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal the user creates a fast jet of water running through the ground that is powerful enough to slice through solid rock.

This is an advanced version of Water Style: Water Slicer. This jutsu requires that you make the jutsu much larger, sharper, and faster then its weaker version.
 
Top