naruto future

[sky4life]

my first fanstory so be nice



the new hokage

its been 8 months since the 4th ninja war.
????:,i cant believe you are a hokage,you finaly made your dream come true'
????:,yes finaly(looks in the air)have you seen kakashi?'
????:,no i didnt see him for a long long time'
????:,finaly finaly i still cant believe it'
????:naruto you got to believe it'
naruto:you are right'
kakashi walks to naruto.
kakashi:hhmmm... i never knew that you would become hokage'
????:he is made to become hokage'
naruto:sasuke thank you for everything'
sasuke:no thank you'
then naruto saw that the village was under attack.
naruto:sasuke you take the west side of the village kakashi you south,i take the center,team 7 move out!
sasuke and kakashi:yes hokage-sama'
sasuke transforms into full susanoo and starts cutting ninja's in halve.
kakashi uses double lighting blade to cut 2 ninja's and then uses a lightning hound.
naruto enters sage mode:huge rasenshuriken barrage.
then a huge blast destroy's almost whole konoha.
naruto,kakashi and sasuke:its you!!




next time:destruction??

 

[sky4life]

i know its little

 

[Alphaqindyas]

ehhh... its alright... >_>

 

[sky4life]

ehhh... its alright... >_>

i know its bad but i just wanted to try

 

[Alphaqindyas]

i know its bad but i just wanted to try

Put more detail into it. Make it easier to read. Just keep working at it. ^_^

 

[sky4life]

Put more detail into it. Make it easier to read. Just keep working at it. ^_^

ty next time ill do that

 

[-S-]

hmm... this is very confusing....

keep the style like this, look here's mine:

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(this was my first fan fic, but i just knew from common sense to make it look very neat and add to the reading experience)

 

[Alphaqindyas]

ty next time ill do that

Np ^_^

 

[Ron Stoppable]

Kind of hard to read, but I like it. And having Sasuke back in the village.... I'm feeling kind of Iffy about that. And Naruto destroying almost whole Konoha is kind of funny. I know, I know , fan made and I do really like it. I especially like the ending part, "It's YOU!". And also, Sasuke turning into Full Susanoo and cutting ninjas in halves is kind of ... Uh , I'm just not feeling that. But I do like it a lot! Good job & keep it up .

 

[Uchiha Prophet]

hmmm i kinda liked it ^^ if u put some more deail i think it would be good

 

[sky4life]

ty