[Approved] Alphonse Elric (Minor update)

Alphonse Elric

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Basic Information
Name: Alphonse Elric
Nickname: Al
Gender:
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Male
Age: 15
Clan: None

Looks: Around average height. Short blonde hair.


Personality: Alphonse is a sweet boy who loves (mostly feline) strays, and is kind and gentle to everyone.

Village Info.
Village of Birth:
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Yugakure
Village of Alliance:

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Specialty: None
Elements:
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C rank up to (Doton: Doryu Taiga) - Earth Style: Great Mud River

Your ninjutsu:
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ritorurakūn- (Summoning technique: Little Raccoon )
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: He is half the size of ponta which is how he got his name little raccoon. Like all of his kind he is quite intelligent and crafty. It has greater sense of smell then normal being able to sense the enemy up to mid range. The raccoon's paw has a great sense on touch mostly in it's claws. The little raccoon's claws are very powerful and can injury someone easily. Due him being awake mostly during the day he can see further then most of his other raccoon family. One person can ride him however it can't be for to long. His ears are quite perceptive like most raccoons. He can hear various movements quiet easily being able to hear 50–85 kHz and worms moving in the ground or other quiet noises if he concentrates.

*Must be taught by Alphonse Elric
*Using a C+ Rank fire jutsu will blind the raccoon's eyes for a bit.
*Can only be summoned three times during battle.
*Has enhanced vision unlike other raccoons allowing it to see up to mid range.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above

Background Info.
History:
BIRTH
Alphonse Elric was born in a small village. He was the son of Van Hohenheim and Trish Elric. Al had a older brother named Edward Elric. He was born an average size baby when it came to weight and height. When he came home his brother Edward would often be jealous of not getting as much attention and would cause problems.
AGE 1 - 4
Alphonse was growing up happily with his mother and brother. Edward would often look out for him when his mother and father were not around. One night Alphonse awoke with his brother. He heard a noise and it was his father and mother talking. Al and Ed went to see what happened and they saw their father. Van looked at them then left through the door without saying a word.
AGE 5 - 10
Ever since their father left Trisha has been growing sadder. Edward started looking out for Alphonse even more. They would often fight in a hand to hand fight spar but Edward would always lose. At a young age of 8 Alphonse mother died. This caused a great devastation to the boys. Soon later they decided to become ninjas like their father. They practiced throwing kunai and shuriken daily to get better but that was doing little help. One day a renowned ninja came to town so they asked if they could become her students. She declined shortly after. The boys did not give up and decided to annoy her until she said something. She said to steal a certain sword from a rich family then bring it back to her. The boys thought about it for a bit then agreed to do it. Over the next few days they made plans to get the sword. Then they finally moved to the first part of the plan which was waiting until night. They went to the house at night and made it to the sword easily. When they grabbed it they quickly left but without knowing it a little boy saw them steal it and told some guards. The boys gave the sword to the lady and she said to meet her one weeks time for training. But before the week ended they got caught for stealing the sword and were going to get interrogated then sent to jail. Edward being the oldest told his brother to shut up and he took the blame. Alphonse felt sadden by this and decided to do it for his brother. They took Edward away and put on surveillance to make sure it was true.
AGE 11 - 14
The ninja showed up a year later and said she is sorry for Al's lose. She agrees to train him now and explains she did not come earlier because the chance of getting caught. Alphonse agrees then he goes with her to train. After three long years he finished his training. The teacher's said his final test would be fighting her. He did thinking he could win but lost horribly to her. She said one thing and that was become stronger and save your brother. So Alphonse set his goal on saving his brother and would become stronger just for that. He waited until his wounds healed and then left to become stronger.
Life so far on NB
So far Alphonse has had a nice life on NB. He found a sempai named the mighty ~Mig J.J. Quicksilver~ training him in the most awesome element ever, Doton. Alphonse also founded a awesome sword while journey named the sword of gargoyles. It helps his low rank earth style jutsu which will help him in the future. Alphonse hopes for more in the future and more training. =DD

Other
Alphonse has a nice sword now. :
Sutōngāgoiru no ken (Stone Gargoyle Sword)
Type: Custome Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Points: 30 (+10 if channeling chakra into it)
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
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It's a 2ft long sword made out a special metal which can absorb doton chakra into it making it take a bit of a rock appearance. It has a gargoyle face for a hilt giving it's the name gargoyle. This sword is unique in a sense because instead of making high level jutsu more powerful then the rest it allows the lower rank jutsu to become more powerful as gargoyles have always been a kind of a tricksters. The sword has no true owner so anyone can wield it in battle which makes it a easy target to be taken.

*+5 damage to d, c and b rank doton jutsu
* -5 damage to all lightning jutsu.

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