[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Lucifer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Yoton: Karyuu No Houkou) - Lava Release: Swirling Volcanic Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After Performing the serpant, dragon & tiger handseal the user takes in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Than the user will inhale some air and concentrate his/her chakra into the lungs and exhale a swirling roar made out of lava which he/she directs at the opponent this is made out of Volcanic ashes and lava. If, this jutsu hits it will caus you to die in a split second due to the heat of the lava and the flying hot ashes in the air. This jutsu can melt earth in a split second.
(This jutsu is similar to fireball jutsu)

.Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
.Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Earth & Fire.
.Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
.Note: After this jutsu is used the user can not use fire techniques for two turns.
.Note: Can only be used by Ichigo.

~Declined~ Poor description and either change or take out the bold part. What is this jutsu? A roar, a lava shot or volcanic ash? If it's not clear to me it certainly won't be to your opponents.

Resubmiting~

(Yoton: Karyuu No Houkou) - Lava Release: Swirling Lava Roar
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After Performing the serpant, dragon & tiger handseal the user takes in a deep breath as they bring about the ideals of most fire exhaling jutsu into play. Than the user will inhale some air and concentrate his/her chakra into the lungs and exhale a swirling roar made out of lava which he/she directs at the opponent. If, this jutsu hits it will cause you to die in a split second due to the heat of the lava and the flying hot ashes in the air. This jutsu can melt earth in a split second.(This jutsu is similar to fireball jutsu)

.Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
.Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Earth & Fire.
.Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
.Note: After this jutsu is used the user can not use fire techniques for two turns.
.Note: Can only be used by Ichigo.

~Declined~ Look at the bold part. Even if Lava can kill on contact, we never approve techniques that specifically says it's lethal if successful (we're simply trying to apply the damage point rule even though it isn't being used). Also, even if it is hot, melting rock in a split second is OP. Such temperature would cause the air around the lava to rise to such temperature that you'd kill yourself just shooting it (your throat may be coated with chakra to protect you, but the rest of your body can't be protected from heated air). If you need an example, look back when Sasuke was training by the lake when he was a kid, trying to learn the fireball no jutsu. He would come home at night with burns on his cheeks and lips, hence it is possible to get burned by our own technique.

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(Yoton: Kyousei Bakuhatsu) - Lava Release: Great Eruption
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After Performing the serpant, dragon & dog handseal the user places both hands on the ground and channels a portion of his/her chakra into the ground and creates real deep cracks in the ground whih causes the lava to rise up and erupt with a very high force it explodes (so, if the user is caught up in the lava explosion the user will than most likly die due to the lava) creating a lava eruption and many dropplets around it the lava rises up to 35 meters. (Like in the real world)

.Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
.Note: Can only be used if the user has mastered Earth & Fire.
.Note: The user must be at sage lvl.
.Note: After this jutsu is used the user can not use fire techniques for two turns.
.Note: Can only be used by Ichigo Kurosaki.

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Feel free to change any of the rules, description etc.

~Declined~ Same as above for the "dying" part, and please clarify; do you create a fissure on the surface too or simply underground so that the lava would create a pressure differential between underground and above ground (creating the explosion)? Elaborate in your re-submission.

 

[Rokusho..]

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(Ashinami no Raikou Kami) - Step of the Lightning God
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary / Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: ( +20 if used with a close-range jutsu )
Description: The user focuses raiton chakra into his legs to stimulate the muscles in the legs . It speeds the user up by a lot but only for a brief moment , allowing him to maneuver and evade better as well as to be put into use on the offensive . This jutsu can be cancelled by the user on whim .

- No suiton jutsus while this is active
- Lasts for 2 turns
- Can only be used 3 times
- Can only be taught by Rokusho

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

 

[Hammy120290]

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Elder Connor (Shōkan: Erudākonā)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: n/a
Description: Connor is thee oldest Orangutan and is an expert in Lightning Jutsu and can use all up to A rank. He cannot perform any Taijutsu as he is too old but is the same size as Gamabunta but much slower. Another advantage of having Connor on the field is he acts as a catalyst for Raiton chakra and powers up any Lightning jutsu if the user is within short range by +15 damage. He also increases the speed for all Lightning jutsu as the Raiton chakra is gathered faster the user requires less HS's if the user has a Lightning affinity all B rank or below jutsu require only 1 HS and above 5 maximum. If there is no affinity then all jutsu below B rank will only require a max of 3 HS's and above a max of 7. Like all Orangutan he can harden his hairs as a defense but due to repeatedly doing this and his age his hairs are constantly spiked and act as a constant defense.
Restrictions

• Can only be summoned once per battle
• Will stay on the field for 3 turns
• Can only be summoned if the Orangutan contract has been signed.

~Declined~ Take away the part about the affinity and all, simply make it so all lightning jutsus required 1-2 less hand seals when in short range from the summon. Also, please don't use abbreviations such as HS. Lastly, make it +5 to all lightning in short range from the summon.

 

[Heavens Blade]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: crocodile (kurokodairu)
Scroll Owner:Heavens Blade
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

~Declined~ Contract already exist.

(shottogan) shotgun
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user will create many mini balls of chakra in the palm of there hand then release them at extremely high velocity the shot will have a "V" spray pattern meaning the farther away you are the wider the spead of the balls making it harder to dodge
-can only be used 2 times per match
-Those balls can be blocked by A-rank elemental jutsu
-no ninjutsu for the next 2 turns
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Approved~ added the bold part and made it 2 times per match. Be aware that raw chakra is almost always weaker then elemental chakra (for obvious reasons).

(Doton: sakasa setsudanki) earth release: reverse guillotine
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: after preforming three handseals earth will form around your opponents legs (it swirls around there legs in a simular way as gaaras sand coffin tech) keeping him in place while a large guillotine comes up from the ground slicing them. this can also be done with a single handseal without the ground locking them in place
-can only use twice per match
-cant use another earth jutsu for this turn or your next 2 turns
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Declined~ Please elaborate on the guillotine. Where does it emerge from? Is it at an angle from behind/in front of the opponent or is it directly under the opponent?

(Hyouton: yobigoe bouei)ice release: Hail Protection
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: after a single handseal the user creates a vortex around themselves which gathers all the nearby hail to protect the user as the vortex continues to gather more pieces of hail the hail begins to combine creating larger pieces of hail that can protect from larger attacks after 3 turns the hail is the size of a basketball (29cm) and is then shot out in every direction destroying everything it hits
-must be hailing
-only used by ice bios
-hail can be shot early and if done the attack will take the rank of what it can defend against
-if hail isnt launched by third turn the vortex stops
-first turn it can handle up to B rank jutsu (strengths and weaknesses apply)
-second turn it can handle up to A rank jutsu (strengths and weaknesses apply)
-third turn can handle S rank jutsu (strengths and weaknesses apply)
-user choses when during their turn to launch the hail
-can only be used twice
-user cant use any ice jutsu while this is in affect or for the the following turn
-can only be taught by heavens blade

~Declined~ "destroying everything in it's part"? It's hail, we're not talking about Lava here. I know it'll cause physical damage to the opponent, but I just don't see hail cutting down trees and destroying hills and rock formation. Also, the bold part doesn't make sense. Restrict the number of turn the vortex can be kept active.

(hebereke no parkour) drunken parkour
Type: Supplementry/Mode
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: this form of taijutsu is a offchute of drunken fist, drunken parkour combines the unpredictable movements of drunken fist with the environmental usage of parkour and alot of doton jutsu to manipulate the environment to the users advantage the biggest difference between drunken fist and drunken parkour is the use of chakra (both doton and normal) the user uses normal chakra to help with there agility and speed and uses doton chakra to help with strength and defence
-while in this mode must take a drink of alchole every 4 turns this doesnt count as a move (could mess up time frame so its a negitive) unless you use another form to get in a drunken stat I.E genjutsu
-can only use drunken parkour justu and B ranked doton jutsu that doesnt require handseals
-as long as your drunk you can stay in this mode
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined do not resubmit~

(Hyouton: yobigoe bouei)ice release: Hail Protection
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: after a single handseal the user creates a vortex around themselves which gathers all the nearby hail to protect the user as the vortex continues to gather more pieces of hail the hail begins to combine creating larger pieces of hail that can protect from larger attacks after two turns the hail is the size of a basketball (29cm) and is then shot out in every direction
-must be hailing
-only used by ice bios
-hail can be shot early and if done the attack will have the damage of a A rank jutsu
-if hail isnt launched by second turn the vortex stops
-first turn it can defend against up to A rank jutsu (strengths and weaknesses apply)
-second turn can handle S rank jutsu (strengths and weaknesses apply)
-user choses when during their turn to launch the hail
-can only be used twice
-user cant use any ice jutsu while this is in affect or for the the following turn
-can only be taught by heavens blade
NOTE: think i fixed everything got rid of the destroying everything in its path part decreased the time for the vortex and i think i cleared up what i meant with the bolded part please feel free to edit if there is more

~Approved~

(Doton: sakasa setsudanki) earth release: reverse guillotine
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: after preforming three handseals earth will form around your opponents legs (it swirls around there legs in a simular way as gaaras sand coffin tech) keeping him in place while a large guillotine comes up from the ground slicing them in this form the guillotine will come up between the legs cutting from straight up the middle . this can also be done with a single handseal without the ground locking them in place the blade can only come straight up out of the ground the vertical cannot be at a angle.
-can only use twice per match
-cant use another earth jutsu for this turn or your next 2 turns
-can only be taught by heavens blade
NOTE: hope i fixed this in a way you can understand

~Approved~ Took out the part where you create an angle.

Summoning Animal: Leoliguar
Scroll Owner:Heavens Blade
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

NOTE:When the fertile offspring of a male lion and female jaguar, mates with a leopard, the resulting offspring is referred to as a "leoliguar" this is a real animal im not making it up

NOTE: i checked both summoning threads and i couldnt find anyone with this contract and unless it was in one of the shippuden movies i dont remember a cannon of this summoning so im praying i can get this one after the heart breaking decline of my crocodile summoning

~Approved~

(Kōton: Kōsame renda) steel release: steel shark barrage
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user does two handseals then places there hand on the ground and makes five sharks out of steel which travel underground two will come to distract the opponent while a third comes from under the opponent and drag them under the earth where the 5 sharks rip him apart same speed as water shark bomb
-this jutsu can only be used three time per match
-shark travels 2 times faster if steel field is in play
-can only be used by steel bios
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined~ Either this is a CE or your bios in your link aren't updated. I don't see any steel release in your bios. If it's a CE, you posted in the wrong thread.

(chakra mo-do) chakra mode
Rank: S
Type: Supplementry
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 40(+10 per turn)
Damage Points: /
Description: by pumping out a extreme amount of chakra the user creates a chakra armor that can brake S rank genjutsu (can only brake a S rank when entering this mode) and while in this mode they are immune to B ranked and lower genjutsu due to the amount of chakra they are constantly pumping out. while in this mode the user can instantly use normal ninjutsu without having to build up chakra (still need to do handsigns if needed) thus making your moves quicker also the jutsu forms quicker thus if you and your opponent did rasengan at the same time yours would be done faster and would land first. the user can instantly transform the chakra there pumping out into any element they specialize in (which must be stated in there bio) which means they can do there moves faster. the user cant change there chakra to any other element type that is not stated as a specialty in there bio. while in this mode with normal chakra the user can block kunai (with and without elements added to them) and up to C ranked procectile attacks and B ranked when in a element (strengths and weaknesses apply) the reseason for this it because as the attack are comeing at you they have to first break through the chakra surrounding you and these low level attacks cant withstand the chakra
-the user can leave this mode early
-must be at least S-Class to use this
-last four turns
-can only use elements you specialize in
-must wait two turns between uses
-can be entered twice per match
-can only be taught by Heavens Blade

~Declined do not resubmit~ While being extremely OP, this is a copy of Naruto's chakra mode.

 

[Sinthorus]

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(Kaen Rai Inferuno) - Blazing lightning Inferno
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus their lighting and fire chakra into their sword which will the quickly rotate around the sword. It with then errupt out of the end of the blade in the shape of a large dragon head and spin around the user like a vortex of fire and lightning. This will look like a dragon coiled around the user made ofr fire and lighting which the user can use to defend or they can launch the fire/lightning dragon head at a chosen location by swinging their sword.

Note: Can be used with any sword
Note: useable 3 times

~Declined~ To use two chakra at the same time you need to have received yin yang training, which I doubt you had. If you did receive such training, VM me and I'll recheck it.

(Kaen Rai Getsuga Tenshō) - Blazing lightning Piercer of Heaven
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will focus their fire and lightning chakra into their blade, surrounding it with both elements keeping it focussed until they swing their sword releasing the fire/lightning forward in the shape of a wolfs head that is 3 times the size of the user. Once this is released, the user can control the direction in which the wolf head travels by swinging their sword to control it.

Note: Can be used with any sword
Note: Useable 3 times

~Declined~ Same as above.

 

[Darijan]

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(Howaido Hoshi)Regulus
Type: Offence/Defence/Suplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40 (+ 5 chakra per turn to keep it active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Regulus is a type of mostly short-ranged attacks created by the first lions from Šiškovci. Due to this fighting style, the user will get increased Taijutsu skills(+ 10 to Taijutsu), boost his speed and even more (+15 to Regulus attacks) to all Regulus attacks. The user also gets a special ring, forged by the first of the white lions kind. This rings gives you a much better link with the lions, and a much better understanding of their ways of living. the user gets the boosts of power from the ring,but that is not all. It also increases the users fire based attacks, as the white lions have always been fond of the flame as a weapon (+5 to katon attacks)

Restrictions for using Regulus:
-Lasts 6 turns max, and after the it wears of the usercannot use Forbiden ranked jutsus, regulus or fire jutsus for the rest of the battle.
-Must have signed the white lion contract
-Must have a Howaido Raion Ring
-Must be Kage rank

~Declined~ I'm ok for the taijutsu boost, but the rest is a no-go. A ring that gives you power? This isn't LotR. Re-word your abilities with a valid reason for them. Don't stack too many abilities.

Kumoyuki Kichi= Clima Tact
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The clima tact is a weapon constructed of 3 parts, by putting the 3 parts together in multiple ways the user can create varoius jutsus.
The Clima Tact is a weapon which allows the user to use varoius jutsus for both attack and defence, it is used by sending chakra trough the 3 parts of the clima tact, the clima tact can also be filled with one type of chakra to use a ability of teh clima tact and so it boosts one element +15 for 2 turns(counts as one of the 3 jutsus per move) and it gets another effect depending on the element infused:
Fire: If the Clima tact is infused with fire chakra it can ''collect'' one fire jutsu of A rank and bellow and send it back to the opponent with the +15 boost
Water: If the Clima tact is infused with water chakra the user can start spinnig the Clima tact and release that way a A rank water jutsu which makes several sharp water drops.
Lightning: If the Clima tact is infused with lightning chakra it can be used to send a B ranked lightning towards the opponent from the sky
Wind: If the clima tact is infused with wind chakra it allows the user to create varoius invisible baloons made of wind so that the user can walk on them
Earth: The user will hammer the clima tact infront of him to create a thick wall made of stones which aquals a A ranked earth jutsu
Notes:
-Only usable by Darijan
-Clima tact jutsus can be used up to 6 times per battle
-The elemental boost and effects is usable 2 times per battle
-After using the boosts/effects the user cant use forbidden ranked jutsus for the rest of the battle and he cant use S rank jutsus in the same turn in which the boost/effetc was used

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~Declined~ Very OP. Normally I'd add a comments on what to change, but since there's a lot to change, I'll just let you edit it yourself (change what you think is over the top) and I'll comment when you re-submit something more acceptable.

Kumoyuki Kichi= Clima Tact
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The clima tact is a weapon constructed of 3 parts(poles): Heat Pole, Cool pole and Electric pole, by putting the 3 parts together in multiple ways the user can create varoius jutsus.
The jutsus can be used for both offence and defence, if the user puts them in the wrong way the jutsus will fail and he would probably hurt himself. The user can aso fill the Clima Tact with one chakra nature so that that eement gets a +10 boost for the next 2 turns(counts as one of the 3 jutsus per turn)
Notes:
-Boost is usable 3 times per battle
-User cant use forbidden ranked jutsus in the turn he used clima tact
-Clima tact jutsus can be used 6 times per battle
-No genjutsu or summoning in the same turn clima tact was used

~Declined~ If you don't bold the changed part in a re-submission, or explained what you deleted, the it'll be auto-declined.

Fuuton/Raiton: Kumoyuki Kichi: Teikiatsu=Wind/Lightning Release: Clima Tact: Cyclone
Rank: A
Type: Offence/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will put the Heat and Cool Pole in an X formation and the Electricity pole infront of them. When he then sends wind chakra trough the parts the electricity pole will start spining at huge speed releasing a big Lightning/wind cyclone towards the opponent.
Notes:
-Usable 2 times per battle
-No other Wind or lightning in the same move this jutsu was sued
-In the same move this jutsu was used the user cant use the clima tact again


feel free to edit it so it can get approved ^^

~Declined~ Weapon wasn't approved.

 

[Dragonfly X]

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(Kami Uwakawa Jutsu) - Paper Skin Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 0
Description: User creates paper surrounding their skin, a semi-thick layer that prevents lower level fire jutsu from affecting the user. This also lowers the damage of kunai and shuriken.
Note: Can only be used by a Konan Bio
Note: Only protects against fire techniques C rank and below.
Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.
Note: Can only be used twice a battle.

(Kami Shikakejirai Jutsu) - Paper Booby Trap Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 30
Description: The user spreads paper all over the ground, and when the opponent steps on it, it lifts up all together and traps the user, slightly damaging them.
Note: Can only be used by a Konan bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.

(Kami Hakuchou Jutsu) - Paper Swan Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 0
Description: User creates a huge origami swan, the size of a car. The swan can fly at fast speeds and can hold the user on top.
Note: This technique takes time to form, so it can be easily stopped if interrupted.
Note: Can only be used by a Konan bio.
Note: Can only be taught by Dragonfly X.
Can only be used once a battle.

Feel free to make any changes you deem necessary, and a thanks in advance

~All pending~ If you don't link me to your Konan bio (since there's no link in your sig), then I can't approve those. Re-submit with a link.

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mizu no hōshutsu: Shōtotsu suru miu no kabe)Water Release Colliding Water Wall

Type: Defense/ Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The User Will do One Handseal and make three spinning Water Vortex that collide and make a giant protective wall. The user can eitherUse the wall to defend againist attacks or have the giant wall fall onto their oppent and drown them

Note: Can only Be used by -Itachi- Unless taught
Note: Can only be used Three time per Battle

~Declined~ Where are the damages?

(Mizu no hōshutsu: Shōtotsu suru miu no kabe)Water Release Colliding Water Wall

Type: Defense/ Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The User Will do One Handseal and make three spinning Water Vortex that collide and make a giant protective wall. The user can eitherUse the wall to defend againist attacks or have the giant wall fall onto their oppent and drown them

Note: Can only Be used by -Itachi- Unless taught
Note: Can only be used Three time per Battle

~Approved~

 

[Madara..]

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(Meiton: Kura Denryū) - Dark Release: Dark Current
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused dark energy chakra from their body. Because the energy isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only numbs limbs. The dark chakra can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Note: Only 3x Per Battle
Note: Can be channeled into a sword.
Note: This technique works similar in the way Nagashi does.
Note: Must Have Permission to use by Madara.. & Nagato..

~Declined~ Complete rip-off of Nagashi, try and be more creative next time.


(Meiton: Shūshū ōbu) - Dark Release: Gathering Orb
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60 (+10 w/ Absorbtion)
Description: The user uses both hands to channel a large amount of dark chakra into a dark energy ball that is released towards the target that absorbs the energy from fire and lightning techniques rendering them useless, but also making the dark orb highly unstable filled with so much energy and then it explodes.

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Blast radius is 5 meters in every direction.
Note: Only absorbs S ranked or lower.
Note: No Dark Release techniques for 1 turn
Note: Must have permission to use by Madara.. & Nagato..

~Declined~ Elaborate on it's ability to absorb techniques, Kirin is S-rank, can it be absorbed? (I hope the answer is no lol). Try and develop on the size of the techniques it can absorb and the range of the explosion. Make it S-rank and restrict accordingly.


(Meiton: Dākuenerugī no Supin) - Dark Energy Spin
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid (Depending on the speed and power of the spin)
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 80
Description: Much similar to the Hyuga clan rotation the user spins at top speed while emitting large amounts of dark release chakra around him creating a dark release dome. Because of the spinning it releases waves of dark energy chakra that thrashes everything in it's path(goes in all directions) at high speeds (the same speeds as pressure damage). When the technique ends the entire battlefield is left in ruins.

Note: Once Per Battle
Note: Takes one turn to prepare enough chakra.
Note: The thrashing originates from the user giving the opponent time to counter.
Note: No other Dark Release techniques this turn and the following one.
Note: Only two jutsus can be performed the next turn due to being disorientated from spinning so much.
Note: Must have permission to use by Madara.. & Nagato..

~Approved~ Made it up to mid range and added the bold part in the restrictions.

(Meiton: Kurai Chakurasutaffu) - Dark Release: Dark Chakra Spear
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will condense their dark chakra condensing it into a thick 6 foot solid spear. It can be fired at high speeds, hitting the opponent within seconds and when it makes contact with the target or ground it will explode in a 6 foot radius of dark energy.

Note: Can Only Be used 3x per battle
Note: Can be split to strike multiple enemies.
Note: Can be shot from the mouth
Note: Must have permission to use by Madara.. & Nagato..

~Declined~ Enough with the explosive techniques, I feel every CJ I check can explode. Add hand seals.

(Meiton: Chakura no kobushi) - Dark Release: Chakra Fist
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A massive vortex blast of wind and dark chakra is released when the user punches that rips along the ground as it travels towards its target.

Note: Only 3x per battle
Note: It has the same speed and force as pressure damage.
Note: It has enough size to wipe out a group of people standing together.
Note: Must have permission to use by Madara.. & Nagato..

~Declined~ No only do you need yin yang release to mold 2 chakra at once, but now you're basically using 3 different chakras in 1 move.

 

[Enzup]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Summoning Animal: Albatross
Scroll Owner: Enzup
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

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(Fuuton: Dojou Kiri) - Wind Style: Soil Mist
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user puts his hands on earth and then quickly passes wind chakra in it to convert earth into fluffy/fine dust particles of anywhere in battlefield. The fluffy soil (when beneath the target) can be used as soil mist, which goes upto 3m height instantly like an explosion and thus dust particles goes into the opponent's eyes and also blocking the vision of target, as the dust particles are all around him.
Note: ~The soil mist automatically settles after 2 turns~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~
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~Declined~ Change the description and make it so you simply use the dust on the ground with wind chakra. The way it's phrased now it seems you're using both wind and earth chakra for this jutsu. Also, work on the explosion part, change the wording. Check the bold part too.

(Doton: Kyojin Koudo Hibi) - Earth Style: Mega Earth Crack
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User hardens both of his hands and then punches the ground with full power. The earth splits horizontally into two parts creating a wide crack of width 15m and also unbalancing the opponent. This technique can also be used to prevent from jutsus like tsunami, as all the water will go down in the crack.
Note: ~This is the advanced version of "(Doton: Koudo Hibi) - Earth Style : Earth Crack" (my tecnique only)~
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~
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~Declined~ Please mention where you are through this. I can't help but picture you'd create the crack and fall in it as you'd be in the middle. Rest is fine.

(Doton: Atakku Tou) - Earth Style: Attacking Tower
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user puts his hands on earth and pulls out a small cylindrical tower of height 2m and diameter 1m from beneath the legs of user, with a thick layer of gravel on it. Tower starts spinning very fast on its own axis by throwing earth needles from the curved part of the tower from each point rapidly. Although the tower is spinning but the user sitting on it does not spin because he is sitting on layer of gravel, which is spinning counterclockwise, which nullifies the rotation. The throwing of needles will not stop untill user's hand are on tower.
Note: ~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Last up to one full turn~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~
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~Approved~ Edited the bold part.

(Raiton: Raikou Houmen) - Lightning Style: Lightning Release
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user can put his hand on anything and passes waves of electric shock of lightning. If the target gets in contact of anything in which the user is passing the current, the target will receive the electric shock and get stunned. And thus double time will be required to perform any jutsu for opponent till 2 turns.
Note: ~Current will not pass through from one medium to another i.e. from solid to liquid, liguid to gas, and vice versa~
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is basically a simple taking a simple principle and extending it far beyond it's boundaries.

Its been a complete 1 week and few hours since My last submission

Plz edit where needed for approval of justus.

(Fuuton: Ubuge Tochi) - Wind Style: Fluffy Soil
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:The user puts his hands on earth and then quickly passes sharp wind chakra in it to convert earth into fluffy soil/fine dust particles of anywhere in battlefield. This technique can be used to turn the earth techs of the opponent into fluufly soil.
Note:~The earth technique(which has to be converted in soil) should be in contact with the earth(base, on which user puts his hand) to be converted into soil~
~Can only be used 4 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

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(Fuuton: Dojou Kiri) - Wind Style: Soil Mist
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user puts his hands on earth and then quickly passes sharp wind chakra in it to convert earth into fluffy soil/fine dust particles of anywhere in battlefield. This technique can be used to turn the earth techs of the opponent into fluufly soil. The fluffy soil (when beneath the target) can be used as soil mist, by passing wind chakra quickly into it and forcing the soil to go upto 3m height instantly and thus dust particles goes into the opponent's eyes and also blocks the vision of him, as the dust particles are all around him.
Note: ~The soil mist automatically settles after 1 turns~
~As the opponent eyes are filled with dust particles, he can't see and perform the jutsu properly for one turn (more time will be required to perform any jutsu)~
~The earth technique(which has to be converted in soil) should be in contact with the earth(base, on which user puts his hand) to be converted into soil~
~This is the advanced form of - "(Fuuton: Ubuge Tochi) - Wind Style: Fluffy Soil".
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Declined~ You never take control of your opponent's jutsu, take out the part where you turn it to soil. Why wouldn't your opponent be able to perform chakra if he can't see clearly? Either take that part out or explain it better. Take out the part where you say it's an advanced form of the submission above; it was declined. I only consider approving this one because the whole jutsu doesn't revolve around converting earth to sand/soil/dust.

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(Doton: Kyojin Koudo Hibi) - Earth Style: Mega Earth Crack
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User hardens both of his hands and then punches the ground with full power. The earth splits horizontally into two parts, the front part which is spilitted moves apart while the back part remains still, creating a wide crack of width 15m and also unbalancing the opponent. This technique can also be used to prevent from jutsus like tsunami, as all the water will go down in the crack.
Note: ~This is the advanced version of "(Doton: Koudo Hibi) - Earth Style : Earth Crack" (My tech only)~
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Approved~

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(Fuuton: Dojou Kadou) - Wind Style: Soil Vortex
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user puts his hands on earth and passes wind chakra in it to create soil vortex anywhere in battlefield. The soil vortex created is very fast and strong which is upto 10m height, resulting in first pulling nearby objects towards it including opponent, the vortex spins and send the objects and opponent at top of vortex, and secondly throwing them away resulting in stunning the opponent. And also dust particles goes into the opponent's eyes and also blocks the vision of him.
Note: ~As the opponent eyes are filled with dust particles, he can't see and perform the jutsu properly for one turn (more time will be required to perform any jutsu)~
~No wind jutsu can be used in following turn~
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Declined~ I've considered approved the custom above, but let's not turn this into a CE. If you want to create a fighting still around dust/soil, submit it as a CE.
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(Katon: Baizou Fenikkusu Haretsu) - Fire Style: Double Phoenix Explosion
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (40 for each phoenix explosion and 40 for each ash explosion)
Description: The user creates 5 phoenix made up of fire which rushes towards the target with great speed one from each direction and the last one goes from top and then they make explosion on contact and turns into ashes. The ashes will ignite, creating a violent explosion by making a single handseal for single phoenix.
Note: ~Because the phoenix are reaching the target from different directions, so they will not reach the target at same time.
~Cannot use any fire technique above A-Rank in same turn.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle~
~Can only be taught by Enzup~

~Declined~ OP. Explosions...read what I said above. Too similar to existing technique.

 

[Scarface]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Hiraishin Mokuton Hebi) ~ Flying Wood Snake
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A snake interbred with cells from Hashirama Senju and cells from Manda. The snake is half the size of Manda with wood platelets for scales. It has the ability to use Wood jutsus. And it has wings allowing it to fly. Given its size, it is able to fly with the added weight of 3 people, of Orochimaru's build.

~Wood jutsus require the use of said jutsu, and count toward the maximum 3 jutsus per turn as per Rei's R&R
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~A direct hit with an S rank or above fire , lightning or slicing wind jutsu, or 2 direct hits from an A rank fire, lighting, or slicing wind jutsu are the only things that are able to kill the snake
~The snake flies at the speed of Pein's giant bird
~The snake can only stay on the field for 5 turns
~Can only be summoned by someone who knows wood, or Orochimaru

~Declined~ You didn't change anything from what I asked.
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(Senei Ta Jashu) - Hidden Shadow Million Snake March
Rank:Forbidden
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Million snake march is a Ninjutsu technique that manifests a incredibly large torrent of snakes, which extend from the sleeve. Orochimaru can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snake can bite into the target to hold and bind them. Chakra can be infused into the snakes to inflict extra damages. The snakes are also strong enough to grab onto things like trees or the ground and pull the user to safety. They can extend to long range in a matter of a second or two

Note:Must be able to summon snakes
Note: Chakra damages

Fire chakra: causes a serious burn

Lightning chakra: causes paralyses and electrocution, depending on how much the opponent is bitten. The opponent could even die should 10 snakes lightning bite the opponent at once.

Earth chakra: creates a dirty wound and causes the opponent to become infected, infection makes the opponent unable to use the body part for the rest of the match, after 3 turns, the body part will actually fully decompose and rot off

Wind chakra: can inject air into the opponents body causing an air bubble in the heart, the bubble travels slowly and will kill the opponent in 3 turns.

Water chakra: thins the blood of the opponent causing them to become dizzy and disorientated, this issue lasts for 3 turns. During these 3 turns, the opponent will mess up every other handseal and have to correct himself. Meaning his handseals become doubled.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: The snakes shoot out as fast as a kunai is thrown
Note: The have no special health and/or resistance, they are just snakes
Note: The torrent is huge, which is why it takes forbidden rank amount of chakra, it is basically multiple hidden snake hand times 10. About 200 snakes out of each arm.

~Declined~ You didn't change anything from what I asked.

Please don't do this again, it's a wait for my time to check jutsu that are identical to the precedent submission =/
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(Kuchiyose: Hebi Chakra Sen'yaku) ~ Summoning: Snake Chakra Infusion
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a giant snake, the size of manda, and infuse into him upon summoning, a specific element of chakra (fire, water, lighting, ice, etc) of the users choosing. The snake will then be able to use all of that element's jutsus, and carry that element's weakness, example, a snake infused with fire chakra, will have a weakness to water.

~This jutsu can only be used twice
~Can be used with ANY base 5 element that the user knows
~The snake can only use a total of 5 jutsu
~To kill the snake, you must deliver either 3 C-rank techniques, 2 B-rank technique or 1 A-rank technique
~The snake's jutsus count as one of the users 3 jutsus

*fixed* lol

~Approved~fixed it for you

(Kuchiyose: Hiraishin Mokuton Hebi) ~ Flying Wood Snake
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Orochimaru fused the cells of hashirama senju, as well as the dna of Pein's giant bird summon, into the genes of Manda. The snake is half the size of Manda with wood platelets for scales. It has the ability to use Wood jutsus. And it has wings allowing it to fly. Given its size, it is able to fly with the added weight of 3 people, of Orochimaru's build.

~Wood jutsus require the use of said jutsu, and count toward the maximum 3 jutsus per turn as per Rei's R&R
~Can only be summoned once per battle
~The snake flies at the speed of Pein's giant bird
~The snake can only stay on the field for 5 turns
~Can only be summoned by someone who knows wood, or Orochimaru

~Approved~ Took out the restriction on what it takes to kill the summon. This is too subjective to be restricted.
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(Senei Ta Jashu) - Hidden Shadow Million Snake March
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Million snake march is a Ninjutsu technique that manifests a incredibly large torrent of snakes, which extend from the sleeve. Orochimaru can extend these snakes to attack a target. Once extended the snake can bite into the target to hold and bind them. Lightning chakra can be infused into the snakes to inflict extra damages. The snakes are also strong enough to grab onto things like trees or the ground and pull the user to safety. They can extend to long range in a matter of a second or two

Note:Must be able to summon snakes
Note: Lightning chakra causes paralyses and electrocution, depending on how much the opponent is bitten.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: The snakes shoot out as fast as a kunai is thrown
Note: The have no special health and/or resistance, they are just snakes
Note: The torrent is huge, which is why it takes forbidden rank amount of chakra, it is basically multiple hidden snake hand times 10. About 200 snakes out of each arm.

~Approved~ Took out the part about killing your opponent with 10 bites.

~Made edits that Izuna and I talked about through VM~

New submission:

(Saiko Bakufu) - Pore Blast
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user will blast out a controlled and focused current of an elemental chakra of his/her choosing. The current can continuously flow from the person's body. It can defend from attacks via canceling out the chakra flow in the jutsu. However, the jutsu must be activated before the attack hits the user. Wind chakra forced through the pores of the user will be enough to lift the user from the ground and/or move them around in the air, and keep them in the air. It can also move them around in the water extremely fast. The other chakras will just defend from attacks, and/or harm a foe in close to mid range.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can remain active a maximum of 3 turns
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Please, feel free to edit where needed to make these approvable

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist.

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

You know we good Goro ~.~

[ Mujitsu ] | Innocent

Rank| S
Range| Short
Type| Supplementary
Chakra| 40
Damage| 80
Description| This sword is call Innocent because of it's powers, the sword name has a meaning. The sword has hidden powers they all call 'Innocent' and they could only be use by the chosen ones, thought powers may have different name but the real name is 'Innocent'. Innocent is extremely sharp and is also, really long. Innocent is for those people who love peace and hate wars. Innocent is extremely strong, indestructible stuff like; kunais, shurikens and stuff like that wont work against this sword due to the sharpness. Innocent true powers are incredible this sword is able to give the user to see different chakra of nature for example, the user is able to see if they are being attack by a fire jutsu due to the chakra each element has different chakra here is the different chakra; Fire chakra is red, water chakra is blue, wind chakra is green, lightning chakra is yellow and earth chakra is brown, custom elements chakra are always gray. When, the user focus swift chakra in the sword the user speed increase immediately due to the swift chakra and when the user do this it count as a move due to the power of it. This sword is extremely light and long. The sword has a last, technique is known as the 'Innocent god' this technique is a genjutsu amazingly strong when the user spin the sword the sword will trap the opponent on the genjutsu, when the opponent is caught on the genjutsu the user is able to control the opponent mind and make him think of whatever the user want the opponent to think about.

• Genjutsu is only usable twice per battle and once use the user can't use any kind of genjutsu next, turn.
  
• The user speed can only last, four rounds and is extremely fast i will show an example.
  
• When the user activate's nature chakra it give's the user fifteen damage
  
• This sword call 'Innocent' can only be use by Miles "Ichigo"
  
• This sword is base on Swift element the user need to know Swift to be use.

Speed|

Spoiler

( Waku ) Arrow Art: Skate

Spoiler

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Range: Short
Description:
The user will first, focus chakra around his whole body and when the user do the 'Bird' hand seal an black arrow will pop out in front of the user. This arrow is able to push the user where the arrow is pointing for example, if the arrow is facing the opponent the arrow will push the user at the opponent at high speed.

- Only Pain.. can use/teach Arrow arts
- When the user release the arrow and is facing where the opponent wanted to be face the arrow can't move
- Only the user that did the arrow can be push
- The arrow goes away when the user has been push twice

Here are five more submissions since this submissions were last week.

( Hayatōn: Undoushinkei ken Handou ) Swift Release: Reflexes and Reaction

Rank: D
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 10
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus swift chakra through out his whole body when the user finish this the user will clap his/her hand twice, the jutsu will immediately activate when the jutsu is activated it gives the user better reflexes and better reaction when on battle.

• The jutsu can only be use on the first move on the battle
• On the same move the user can't do any Swift techniques
• Can only be taught/teach by Pain..
• Must have a Swift bio to be use

~Declined~ This is not D-rank and the restrictions are off. How long does it last and how many time can you use it (if you take out the restriction about it being activated on the first turn).

( Hayatōn: Awai Mo-do ) Swift Release: Light Mode

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will do thirteen hand seals while doing the hand seals the user will focus swift chakra through out his whole body when the user finish this the user heart will boost up immediately and the user blood flow would be irregular the blood flow will also boost up. The user energy will also, increase and be amazingly great this jutsu also, give the user faster speed which only the well known Mangekyou sharingan and the Eternal mangekyou sharingan can track another thing that this technique gives the user is power it gives the user amazingly strength something alike Tsunade strength.

• If the user surpass four rounds with this technique the user could easily die do to the heart beat rate
  
• The user can't use more swift techniques for the rest of the battle
• This jutsu is only usable twice per week
• The user can't use wind and fire techniques while light mode is activated
• The user cannot use Genjutsu techniques
• The user can't use an a-rank and above technique while Light mode is activated if the user do so the user heart will stop beating
• The user most know Swift to be use
• Can only be teach/taught by Pain..
• When the user time pass out the user will be extremely tired almost unable to fight and the user chakra will be almost out

Whoever check this is free to edit anything..

~Declined do not resubmit~ This is grossly OP while being a rip-off of the gates and similar custom techniques.

 

[DopeyDwarf]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
~Declined~ Where's the restriction I asked for concerning the number of time it can get you out of a genjutsu?



(Hetto-neko no Jutsu: Toku Senbon) - Civet Style: Hide Projectiles
Rank: C-B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20-25
Damage Points: 30-40
Description: This jutsu is the ability of Civets to shoot hardened strands of their fur towards their opponent, as sharp thrown projectiles. The fur that is shot is akin to sharp metal senbons but may varying in damage depending on the size and amount of chakra used. A Civet summoner can also create such senbon-like projectiles on their hands and can then use them as if they are kunais/senbon as they exhibit steel-like properties during their use, and may be further enhanced by chakra flow. Smaller Civets are capable of manipulating and using their fur to create projectiles that have the same damage and size as regular senbons. Normal Civets and human summoners can create projectiles that have the same damage and size as small daggers/kunais. While larger projectiles that are created by larger Civets would resemble the size and damage of

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- about 5times the size of a projectile a normal Civet could create.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
~Declined~ Restrictions?

My

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(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gama Samsara) – Civet Summoning Technique: Gama Samsara
Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Gama is a relatively young and small civet who is part of the Samsara branch of the Civet kingdom; he is known to be one of the most gifted civets in his generation for having a peculiar resistance to genjutsu (except for S-rank and above genjutsu, and Mangekyō Sharingan). It is quite hard to control Gama as he only helps summoners he respects in battle. However, once on good ground, he becomes rather protective and close to the summoner. Gama is a dark brown civet who attaches to the user’s body (most of the time he wraps around the user’s neck) and has the ability to use all ninjutsu the user knows up to C-rank. When joined with the user’s body, Gama can help the user dispel him from any A-rank or lower genjutsu since he can release chakra into the user’s body.
Note: Gama has a strong bond with the contract holder and/or creator, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he’s summoned. As for anyone else, he only stays on the field for 4 turns and can only be summoned once.
Note: Each of Gama’s jutsu used count as a jutsu of the user.
Note: Gama can only help the user dispel A-rank and under genjutsu.
Note: Gama can only help the user dispel genjutsu once per turn.
Note: Genjutsu performed by Mangekyō Sharingan cannot be overcome.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.

~Declined~ Once per turn, really? Might as well put "for the rest of the match" lol. Make it reasonable.

(Hetto-neko no Jutsu: Toku Senbon) - Civet Style: Hide Projectiles
Rank: C-B
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20-25
Damage Points: 30-40
Description: This jutsu is the ability of Civets to shoot hardened strands of their fur towards their opponent, as sharp thrown projectiles. The fur that is shot is akin to sharp metal senbons but may varying in damage depending on the size and amount of chakra used. A Civet summoner can also create such senbon-like projectiles on their hands and can then use them as if they are kunais/senbon as they exhibit steel-like properties during their use, and may be further enhanced by chakra flow. Smaller Civets are capable of manipulating and using their fur to create projectiles that have the same damage and size as regular senbons. Normal Civets and human summoners can create projectiles that have the same damage and size as small daggers/kunais. While larger projectiles that are created by larger Civets would resemble the size and damage of

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- about 5times the size of a projectile a normal Civet could create.
Note: Humans can only use B-rank version 4 times per battle.
Note: Must have mastered ninjutsu.
Note: Must have mastered Basic 5 elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.

~Approved~

New:

(Kikaichu Tsukamu Nadare) – Destruction Bug Avalanche
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will send a large swarm of his Kikaichū bugs and manipulate them so that they form a large wave which is directed towards the target and is used to wrap around the target and immobilise him. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to move around the battlefield.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Approved~

(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kabigon) – Civet Summoning Technique: Kabigon
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Kabigon is a huge brown civet about the same size as Gamahiro, well known among the Civets for being one of the biggest and heaviest of their kind. His fur is unusually thick and dense giving him quite a sturdy defence against attacks; this thick fur coupled with his huge body gives Kabigon a great natural defence, allowing him capable of withstanding attacks up to A-rank. However, if hit by any S-rank or above jutsu, Kabigon is dispersed. The summoner is able to summon Kabigon to appear in the air and once per battle, Kabigon can destroy one earth-based jutsu (only up to S-rank) by slamming his body (or body part) with extreme force. Kabigon has no elemental affinity and hence can not use elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Can only be summoned twice, lasting two turns each time.
Note: Can only withstand A-rank and below jutsus.
Note: If hit by an S-rank or above jutsu, he can not be summoned for the rest of the battle.
Note: Must have mastered ninjutsu.
Note: Must have mastered Basic 5 elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Declined~ Take out the part where you specify what is needed to kill him. I'm ok with him being able to block 3 A-rank or lower before dispersing, but only if it's his "ability" as a summon.

(Hetto-neko Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Samson) – Civet Summoning Technique: Samson
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user summons Samson, a dark-yellow adolescent civet roughly the size of an average human. He is a very energetic, flamboyant and exuberant pup very well known among the civets for his devious nature and excessive pranking. Samson is a master of the Transformation Technique allowing him to transform into anything he chooses; however in the midst of battle, Samson takes preference in transforming into offensive weapons such as swords, large shurikens or even spears – all of which are made of a special alloy which is indestructible. These weapons are able to be wielded by the summoner; however, the weapon uses a great deal of chakra and puts a strain of 10 chakra points on the user each turn he is used. Samson is also capable of using all ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu the user knows up to A-rank although he can not use any elemental ninjutsu. The summoner can summon Samson to the field in his transformed state but only short range from the user.
Note: Can only be summoned thrice, lasting two turns each time.
Note: Samson can only use up to A-rank ninjutsu, genjutsu and taijutsu.
Note: Samson can not use any elemental ninjutsu.
Note: Each of Samson’s transformations on the battlefield, count as a jutsu of the user.
Note: Must have signed the Civet Contract.
Created by DopeyDwarf

~Declined~ Even Emna who could transform into Adamantium was hurt by Kusanagi, so take out the part where your summon is indestructible. Make it twice per battle for 2 turns, or once for 4 turns, your decision. Nice idea.

 

[McKnockout]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hijutsu: Kanchiki Kikaichū) – Secret Technique: Sensory Kikaichū
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user disperses his Kikaichū bugs all around the battlefield which are then used to alert the host about the location and presence of any nearby chakra on the battelfield. This is made possible due to the close relationship that the host has with his bugs and thus, his Kikaichū bugs can communicate to him and relay him information in a number of ways. By simply watching and/or hearing his bug's movements, the user is capable of interpreting their responses and can determine the presence and location of all/any chakra bearing objects on the battlefield. It should also be noted that the bugs inside the host are capable of receiving these messages from their fellow bugs and can relay this to the user - i.e. another method to communicate.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by DopeyDwarf, McKnockout and Faith.
~Declined~ I'm pretty sure a similar technique exist based on the pheromones the insects release. That's how they'd communicate with the user.

(Hijutsu: Kanchiki Kikaichū) – Secret Technique: Sensory Kikaichū
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user disperses his Kikaichū bugs all around the battlefield which are then used to alert the host about the location and presence of any nearby chakra on the battelfield. This is made possible due to the close relationship that the host has with his bugs and thus, his Kikaichū bugs can communicate to him and relay him information in a number of ways. By simply watching and/or hearing his bug's movements, the user is capable of interpreting their responses and can determine the presence and location of all/any chakra bearing objects on the battlefield. It should also be noted that the bugs inside the host are capable of receiving these messages from their fellow bugs and can relay this to the user - i.e. another method to communicate.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Note: Can't detect opponent if underground.
Created by DopeyDwarf, McKnockout and Faith.

I think the technique you're referring to is Faith's CJ which has not yet been approved, but we collaborated and co-created this jutsu.


~Approved~ No I wasn't referring to that, turns out I was thinking about the basic abilities the Aburame clan has which allow them to receive info from their bugs, so your jutsu isn't really that much custom, only an extension of a cannon.

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Btw, added a note in your restrictions.

(Kikaichu Junshuu) – Kikaichu Territory
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The host performs two quick handseals as he releases or commands his Kikaichu bugs to burrow into the ground beneath him up to a mid range radius, releasing a small amount of chakra as they’re underground. The result of this jutsu means that the ground will be imbued with the user’s chakra, making it impossible for the opponent to use earth-based jutsus using the earth from the ground in which the user’s Kikaichu bugs have burrowed through for a short period of time i.e. the opponent can not manipulate the earth in which contains the user’s Kikaichu bugs for earth jutsus. After two turns, the user’s Kikaichū bugs resurface and hence the jutsu ends.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Lasts for 2 turns.
Note: Must wait 2 turns to activate again.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
Created by McKnockout
~Declined~ Doesn't make any sense. You'd basically die from chakra exhaustion if you were able to infuse the earth with enough chakra for your opponent to be unable to use it.

(Kikaichu Junshuu) – Kikaichu Territory
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 each turn it's activated)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The host performs two quick handseals as he releases or commands a large amount of his Kikaichu bugs to burrow into the ground beneath him up to a mid range radius. While underground, the mass of the user's Kikaichu bugs lay in wait and upon the detection of any foreign chakra i.e not the user's, they will instinctively absorb/suck the chakra (this is what they usually do). The result of this jutsu means that the opponent would not be capable of performing earth-based jutsus using the earth from the ground in which the user’s Kikaichu bugs have burrowed through for a short period of time i.e. the opponent can not manipulate the earth in which contains the user’s Kikaichu bugs for earth jutsus. That is, the opponent can channel their chakra into the ground but it would quickly disappear and thus will disallow the opponent from manipulating the earth due to the absence of their chakra. After two turns, the user’s Kikaichū bugs resurface and hence the jutsu ends.
*Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
*Note: Lasts for 2 turns.
*Note: Must wait 2 turns to activate again.
*Note: While this is active, the user can only use up to A-rank Aburame jutsus.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

I changed the mechanism in which this jutsu works, instead of infusing a huge amount of chakra into the ground, I changed it to using the Kikaichu bugs to suck the ground dry of the opponent's chakra (i.e. foreign chakra, chakra that is not the user's - this is possible since the bugs spend all their lives inside the user so they would be well accustomed to the user's chakra). Anyways, in order to manipulate the earth, one must use their chakra to do so. But if there is no chakra this is not possible. And in this jutsu, the user must send a very large number of his bugs underground hence he can not use any S-rank or higher Aburame jutsus while this is active.

~Approved~ Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. If I were you, I'd keep that one to myself as it's extremely valuable.

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(Kyousei Kikaichu Misairu) – Great Destruction Bug Projectile
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will send a medium size ball-like projectile of destruction bugs at the enemy.
*Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

~Approved~

(Kyousei Kikaichui Kame no Jutsu) - Great Destruction Bug Jar Technique
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60 (-10 to user)
Description: A special technique in which the user commands his Kikaichu bugs to fly in a 360 degree dome shape around him at high speed. The mass of Kikaichū bugs all have very sharp wings, which will make the rapidly spinning dome of Kikaichu bugs capable of dealing slashing damage and will slice anything that comes in contact with it. This jutsu serves as an attack and defense, and is able to withstand all elemental attack up to A-rank except for B-rank and above Katon attacks.
*Note: The user takes 10 damage due to his proximity to the his Kikaichu bugs.
*Note: Can only be used 4 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

(Kakukaku Kikaichui Kame no Jutsu) - Glorious Destruction Bug Jar Technique
Rank: S
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 (-15 to user)
Description: A more advanced version of "Great Destruction Bug Jar Technique" in which the user's Kikaichu bugs actually release a small amount of their chakra as they fly around the user in a dome shape at high speed, this gives the Kikaichu bugs a higher resistance to damage and also augments their sharp wings to deal more damage (much like chakra flow on weapons) in comparison to the parent technique. Again, the rapidly spinning dome of Kikaichu bugs is capable of dealing slashing damage and will slice anything that comes in contact with it and serves as an attack and defense; and is able to withstand all elemental attack up to S-rank except for A-rank and above Katon attacks.
*Note: The user takes 15 damage due to his proximity to the his Kikaichu bugs.
*Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 2 turn to be used again.
*Note: No S-rank or above Aburame jutsus in the same turn.
*Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
*Note: Can only be taught by McKnockout

~Both Declined~ I feel it's a bit OP. What about lightning? It certainly can fry you bugs with ease. Re-work the ability of those techniques, check the strength and weaknesses.

 

[Punk Hazard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Katon:Atsuryoku no inferuno( Fire Release Pressure Inferno)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80(10 to the user if used in Short Range)
Description: The user forms a seal and releases several flames from his mouth. The flames wrap in on itself to build large amounts of pressure. When it hits its target, it explodes, releasing all the pressure at once, resulting in severe damage or death.
~Only Rikerslade or those with his permission can use this~
~ Only usable twice per battle~

~Declined~ Similar techniques already exist and I'm fed up with all the explosive techniques.

Suiton:Aranami( Water Release: Raging Waves)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 40
Description: The user slams his hand on a water source and releases several large waves at the opponent that can knock them back or slam them violently into the ground.
~Can only be thought by Rikerslade~
~Requires a water source~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist.

Raiton:Taiyō furea (Lightning Release: Solar Flare)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user places his middle and index fingers of both hands on his temple and releases a blinding light from around their body, blinding anyone looking at them.
~Blinding lasts one turn after use~
~Can only be thought by Rikerslade~
~Usable only twice per battle~

~Declined~ Similar technique already exist. Use the search button next time to see if your ideas aren't already taken.

 

[-Sasuke-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Asaito Enjin )-Ring of Threads
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The User sends chakra into the ring which is on the middle finger, he is then capable of releasing out hundreds of thick, dark grey threads out of the ring and control them to do what he wants. These threads are like what Kakuzu has used out of his body.
The user is able to use the threads to catch, hold, reattach body parts and strangle the opponent.

Ring:

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~Declined do not resubmit~ This is not a LotR RP and only Kakuzu can use those dark thread.

 

[~The Norwegian~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kairai Ginou: Go Kairai Kaishuu)-Puppet skills: Five Puppet Collection
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack-Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50 for each summoned puppet
Damage points: 90 for each puppet
The Five Puppet Collection is ~The Norwegians~ most secret weapon. There are Five different puppets that are beeing controlled by the user controlls one puppet using two fingers. Each of the puppet are unique and has unice skills. Controlling five puppets at once takes a lot of damage to the user, so if the user can't finish his opponent in three rounds he will die of overuse of chakra. The puppets are kept in one scroll and can be summoned one time during the battle. The puppets are:

Sylar:
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Sylar is one of the first puppets that ~The Norwegian~ made. His design is simple and he looks like a normal human. Sylar wields a huge sword that can slash trough almost anything except for rocks. Sylar can withstand attacks that are lower then B-Rank.

(Raion)-Lion:
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Lion is one of the first puppets made by ~The Norwegian~. It has the size and body of a normal lion only with a few differances. Lion's tail is simply a very long and sharp sword that Lion can swing right at an opponent. Lion is also very fast, but due to the sword it can't jump. The teeths and the claws of Lion is sharp enough rip the flesh of a normal human. Lion can withstand attacks that are lower then B-Rank.

Bear:
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Bear is one of the first puppets made by ~The Norwegian~. It looks just like a bear, and have about the same strenght as it. Bear's body is so thick that he can withstand all attacks under A-Rank and one A-Rank. Bear is so strong that if he punch the ground it cause a fissure.

(Kaiju)-Monster
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Monster is one of the first puppets made by ~The Norwegian~. It's the double the size of a normal human and can withstand attacks that are A-Rank and lower. Monster carry a large whip that he can swing around the whole field and either strike down or pull in the opponent.


(Kame)-Turtle
Rank: S
Type: Defence/Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Turtle is one of the first puppets made by ~The Norwegian~. Turle looks like a turle, only that is 10 times larger. Turle can cover up a human and defend them. Turtle has a giant shield over it's body and to break the shield the opponent must strike Turtle with atleast a S-Rank attack, any weaker would just be nullified. Turtle can also destory itself by exploding and sending an endless rain of senbons at the opponent.

Note: The Five puppet collection can only be used by ~The Norwegian~.


~Declined~ Where are the restrictions on some of those puppets? The bear that can create fissure and the Turtle really need to be restricted considering they can attack and defend without it being regarded as a jutsu and without counting toward your 3 moves per turn. Fix that. Also, make sure the turtle's explosion count as a jutsu and needs to be activated by a hand seal. Lastly, once you summon them you have 3 turns before you die right? Can you de-summon them before the end? If so then it's declined because it defeats the purpose of your forbidden technique.

(Kairai Ginou: Hebi)-Puppet skills: Snake
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30(if summoned)
Damage points: 60
Snake is a puppet made by ~The Norwegian~. It's a large snake that can wrap around the opponents body and crush it into dust. Snake can hide underground and while underground it travels fast, faster than above ground and above ground it moves just as fast as a normal ninja can run. Snake's tail is like Hiruko's, and it has poison in it that it can shoot at the opponent (the poison reach mid-range). Snake can withstand attacks that are C-Rank and lower. Snake is kept in a scroll and can be summoned when the user wants to.
~Note: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~.

(Hyuton: Retsu sunnapu)-Ice Release: Cold Snap
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
The user will freeze his own body down to 122 degrees fahrenheit. Then the user will blow out his breath like a thin fog and freeze the opponent so badly that the opponent will move slowly due too the cold, and the opponent must use atleast one fire tech every round to keep the warm up.
~Note: Since it'll be so cold inside the users body, no human can use this jutsu, only a human puppet that have mastered Ice.
~Note 2: Can only be used once per battle
~Note 3: The puppet use one round to freeze down the body
~Note 4: While the puppet use the cold jutsu, the puppet must blow out it out and can't use other jutsus.
~Note 5: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

(Kairai ginou: Uma)-Puppet skills: The Horse
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40(if summoned)
Damage points: 80
The Horse is a puppet made by ~The Norwegian~. It is the size of a normal horse. The horse can carry puppets that has the body form of a human, and lets them ride on him. This works with the user controlls The Horse with one hand and the other puppet with the other hand. The horse has powerfull legs and can kick the opponent, and inside the horse there's lots of swords that can be triggered and pierce trough The Horse so that everyone near it gets sliced up. The Horse is kept inside a scroll and can be summoned as the user wants to.
~Note: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~


(Kairai ginou: Airon Inu)-Puppet skills: Iron Dog
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40(if summoned)
Damage points: 80
Iron Dog is a puppet made by ~The Norwegian~. It is the only puppet that is made of Iron instead of wood so far. The reason this puppet is made by iron is that Sasori used the Sandaime puppet to wrap the Iron around the wood. Iron Dog can withstand attacks that are A-Rank and lower, and it can withstand one S-Rank attack before the Iron cracks and leaves it open for attacks. Iron Dog has very powerfull teeths and can bite of an opponents leg in one bite, same with it's claws. Iron Dog moves just as fast as Hiruko does in his last form without the cloak. When the Iron around Iron Dog is destroyed an endless rain of senbons will burst from Iron Dog and at the enemy before it gets destroyed. Iron Dog is kept in a scroll and can be summoned as the user wants to.
~Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
~Note 2: Can only be used by ~The Norwegian~

~All Declined~ You know that since all those summons in your first jutsu have official template they count as a jutsu? This means you're over your weekly submission. I won't ban you since you probably didn't know, but seriously that's cheap of you to submit so many techniques in one post. Next time I'll ban you.

 

[Mockingbird]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kazeakumaitto_)-Demon Sword of Wind
Rank:S
Type:Weapon
Range:Short
Chakra: Up to 40-When special ability is in use
Damage: Up to 80-When special ability is in use
Description: One of the strongest swords of all time, this blade has been forged by some of the greatest blacksmiths in ancient times. This sword is said to have once been wielded by several of the greatest, and most famous criminals of the ninja world. They used this sword, spilling the blood of thousands across the land for their own selfish purposes. All of them lived in infamy, until one day, each of their lives would end abruptly, as the sword was passed down from owner to owner. As such, many people refrain from using such a sword believing it to be bad luck, and deeming it cursed. The sword is made of an incredibly powerful Black Metal alloy. It is a daito with a black and red hilt, and an oddly shaped guard, which is in the shape of a four pointed-bronze colored star. The blade metal blade gives a feeling of ominousness to those who first see it, believing the sword itself represents death. Although the metal alloy of the sword makes it incredibly strong and sharp, it isn't the only asset to this sword. It also has a Wind Element affinity, allowing it to deal razor sharp blows to an human's body.

Ability:
Wind Affinity: In ancient times, it was said that people used this sword to emit howling winds, to bring a razor sharp death to all that opposed them. These winds were so powerful, they wound often break down surrounding trees and obstacles, leaving remains of the enemy and debris, scattered all over the battlefield. Knowing this information, it's easy to imagine it's capabilities when used against a human. The addition of the razor sharp Wind element allows the wielder the ability to cut through Lightning jutsu up to A Rank.

Limits for cutting through Lightning jutsu~

Spoiler

A Rank: 2 times per battle
B Rank:3 Times per battle. If used once already, can only cut one more A Rank.
C Rank:3 times per battle, if used twice, can only cut through one A Rank.
D/E Rank:3 times per battle, if used twice can only cut through one A Rank.

~Approved~ Well done.

(Tsuppane Kenten)-Spurning Circle
Rank:A
Type: Defense
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user of this jutsu starts off by drawing a circle shape in front of them using their finger, staff, sword, etc releasing their chakra into the air in front of them as they do. The chakra released then forms into a visible chakra circle in front on the user, which serves as a protective shield for incoming attacks. The circle will then become larger/smaller in proportion with the size of the incoming attacks, allowing the shield to defend against most oncoming attacks. Upon defending against the move, the two jutsu cancel out with each other.

Spoiler

~Usable 3 times per battle
~Is capable of blocking B Rank and below elemental techniques and A-rank ninjutsus.
~Can only be taught by Jakey

~Approved~ Changed the restrictions and made it strong against A-rank and below for ninjutsu while lowering it to B-rank and bellow for elemental techniques. Since raw chakra is weaker then elementally manipulated chakra, it'll only block weaker attacks.

(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Taz)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Taz
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Taz is the leader of the Tasmanian Devil species, and Jacob's summoning boss. Taz is bigger than his son Akira, and dwarfs him by 25 meters. But unlike his son, he is unable to manipulate the size of his body. Taz is notorious for his extremely short temper and little patience. If there's one this that does make Taz happy, its food. His appetite knows no bounds, and he will eat anything and everything in sight if given the opportunity. Taz's anger tends to get the best of him, as he usually lashes out at anyone who so much as looks at him the wrong way. Being the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's, Taz is also the strongest of his kind. Taz has two elemental affinities. The first of which is Earth, and the second is Fire. Taz has become very adept at using these two elements, and often uses them in collaboration to create more devastating effects.

Spoiler

~Taz has mastery over the Earth element, and can use jutsu up to the same level known by the user.
~Remains on the field for 4 turns

~Declined~ make him use only 1 element. I don't know who started this "2 elements per summon" trend, but as far as I can remember, boos summons were always specialized in 1 element up to S-rank. I'll set this straight for coming summons too.

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(Kuchoiyse:Tasmanian Devil-Taz)-Summoning Technique:Tasmanian Devil-Taz
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Taz is the leader of the Tasmanian Devil species, and Jacob's summoning boss. Taz is bigger than his son Akira, and dwarfs him by 25 meters. But unlike his son, he is unable to manipulate the size of his body. Taz is notorious for his extremely short temper and little patience. If there's one this that does make Taz happy, its food. His appetite knows no bounds, and he will eat anything and everything in sight if given the opportunity. Taz's anger tends to get the best of him, as he usually lashes out at anyone who so much as looks at him the wrong way. Being the boss of the Tasmanian Devil's, Taz is also the strongest of his kind. He has mastered Earth Release, and has become very adept at using these this element.

Spoiler

~Taz has mastery over the Earth element, and can use jutsu up to S-rank techniques
~Remains on the field for 4 turns

~Approved~ Made it S-rank, I think I was very clear on that. If I left it the way you wrote the description, he could have used Forbidden techniques. Don't do this again (taking me for an idiot that is lol).

 

[-Blade-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchoiyse: Toro)-Summoning Technique: Toro the great bull
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Toro is the boss of the bulls he is normaly agitated when summoned and would at times slap the user with his tail for summoning him. He is the bull associated with earth and is around 7ft tall his horns are able to shoot off and grow back in very short time like all bulls, he can stomp his hooves and increase an earth jutsu by 20 dp, and up 1 rank

(Kuchoiyse: Riko)-Summoning Technique: Riko the fire bull
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Riko is the bull associated with fire and has the same attitude as Toro, he also hates being summoned even more than Toro. He is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back. His ability it he can manipulate any fire jutsu and make it bigger adding 15 dp to any fire jutsu

(Kuchoiyse: Aero)-Summoning Technique: Aero the wind bull
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Aero is the bull associated with Wind and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disapear into the wind and strengthen the users wind jutsu by one rank.

(Kuchoiyse: Marina)-Summoning Technique: Marina the water bull
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Marina is the bull associated with water and is more level headed than the other bulls and also the only female bull she is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off her horns and grow back, Her unique ability is that she can Sink into any water source and increase its damage points by 10 points.

(Kuchoiyse: Zeek)-Summoning Technique: Zeek the lightning bull
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Zeek is the bull associated with lightning and is more level headed than the other bulls he is 6ft tall and is also able to shoot off his horns and grow back, His unique ability is that he can disperse into lightning and go into the clouds to enhance the users lightning so moves that need to send lightning into the air can be automatic since he is lightning in the air.

-Only two bulls can be summoned per battle
-Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
-Each bull lasts 4 turns
-After the bull has left the user cant summon it and is limited to only B-Rank of that element for 2 turns

~All Declined~ Place your restrictions under each individual submission and personalize those restrictions. I've seen some very OP stuff (+20 damage point for example) and all their abilities need to be restricted.

 

[Zancrow]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~ Summoning Panther ~


Summoning Animal: Panther
Scroll Owner: Zancrow
Other Users who have signed contract: Sacrifice..
Summoning Boss if existing: Submitted.
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: not yet.

A black panther is typically a melanistic color variant of any of several species of larger cat. Wild black panthers in Latin America are black jaguars (Panthera onca), in Asia and Africa they are black leopards (Panthera pardus), and in North America they may be black jaguars or possibly black cougars (Puma concolor – although this has not been proven to have a black variant), or smaller cats.Black panthers are also reported as cryptids in areas such as the United States and the United Kingdom, and if these do exist, their species is not known. Captive black panthers may be black jaguars, or more commonly black leopards. Black panthers have sometimes been regarded as forming different species from their normally-colored relatives.The name "panther" is often limited to the black variants of the species, but also commonly refers to those that are normally-colored (tawny or spotted).The name "panther" is often limited to the black variants of the species, but also commonly refers to those that are normally-colored (tawny or spotted), or to white color variants:

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I would like to claim right to all species of Panthers because I want to make them as other summonings tied to this contract.

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, the feline genus which contains lions, tigers, leopards and jaguars

Panther (in Africa and Asia), the

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(Panthera pardus)

Panther (in North America), the

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or mountain lion (Puma concolor)

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, a subspecies of cougar (Puma concolor coryi or Puma concolor couguar) found in southern Florida

Panther (in South and Central America), the

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(Panthera onca)

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, a black variant of leopard, cougar or jaguar

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, a white or very pale variant of leopard, cougar or jaguar

Summoning tattoo:

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kuro Kokuou no Kurohyou)-Summoning Boss- Gituku: Dark King of Panthers

Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User bites their finger and starts drawing blood then performs a row of 10 handseals then slams their hand to the ground summoning Gituku from where ever he maybe.He is the same size as the Gamabunta.He is very respected by all the Panthers and was given a title: Dark King of Panthers.He has darkest fur then the rest of the panthers therefoer he is an Black Panther. Its been said that he is the one with most of battle experienced and knowledge wich is true.Gituku is the lightning master and can perform lightning jutsus up to A Rank himself.While jutsus wich are S Ranked need to be performed by the help of the user-in other words user needs to perform handseals for them.With his large paws Gituku is able to block opponents attack wich are up to C Rank and below but it counts as one of users moves.

Note: Gituku's lightning jutsus count as the move of user.
Note: Gintuku lasts for 3 rounds.
Note: Can be summoned twice per battle.
Note: Only Zancrow can summon or teach Gintuku.


Also if this gets approved i will be dropping Wombat contract.

~All Pending~ I'm waiting for a confirmation that Panthers weren't taken already.