I need to improve.... <@:)

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I want to improve so... I can get.... Dust Release. ._.

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so?ice is awsome dust there is only one canon jutsu and it seems hard to get customs for it even zanji couldn't make customs for dust. also you have to fight zanji for dust relase
 

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so?ice is awsome dust there is only one canon jutsu and it seems hard to get customs for it even zanji couldn't make customs for dust. also you have to fight zanji for dust relase
Everyone is different, Zanji may have not gotten the customs approved, while I might can. If I have to fight Zanji then I'll do it. I mean I fought tons of tough opponents in Nb so..
 

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J/K J/K! xd

*As the kunai comes towards me, I create a pillar of earth to intercept them, causing them to explode mid-range from me. I also create a pillar of earth which hits you in the balls.*:|

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Descripton: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth
 

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J/K J/K! xd

*As the kunai comes towards me, I create a pillar of earth to intercept them, causing them to explode mid-range from me. I also create a pillar of earth which hits you in the balls.*:|

(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Style Technique
Rank: D
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Creates small pillars of earth, small tools, and small shields of earth
*As I see a pillar block my kunai I generate non-focused electrical charged chakra , that I channel through the ground, which destroys the earth chakra channeled into ground which you were going to use to create the second pillar, and then the current heads towards you.* (This was of pure insinct, like I knew something was gonna happen. I have seen may people doing this so..)

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

*I continue on by shooting a stream of wind combined with dust particles that, block your vision. (It's also very powerful, as shown in the manga, when Asuma used it to destroy one of Kakuzu's Hearts).*

(Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.

*I finish off by creating an opening into sky which drops mud onto you.*

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
 
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If you are trying to improve, how do you know the second pillar is going to happen. You don`t have a doujutsu or a sensor to know their is chakra in the ground that is under you. You need to explain how you know something is going to happen.

This is just a note to improve.
 

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If you are trying to improve, how do you know the second pillar is going to happen. You don`t have a doujutsu or a sensor to know their is chakra in the ground that is under you. You need to explain how you know something is going to happen.

This is just a note to improve.
I agree with Dei Dei here. You just can't have instincts, when defending a jutsu. What if I gave you a look and that look came off to you, as I'm using a fire style technique. But in reality I tricked you, then I use a lightning style, as you conjure up water style, to defend against the perceived look of fire style? It would end up, you getting fried, because of an instinct. Just a note...now to defend, rather counter attack.

*As I see a pillar block my kunai I generate non-focused electrical charged chakra , that I channel through the ground, which destroys the earth chakra channeled into ground which you were going to use to create the second pillar, and then the current heads towards you.* (This was of pure insinct, like I knew something was gonna happen. I have seen may people doing this so..)

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

*I continue on by shooting a stream of wind combined with dust particles that, block your vision. (It's also very powerful, as shown in the manga, when Asuma used it to destroy one of Kakuzu's Hearts).*

(Fūton: Fūjin no Jutsu) - Wind Release Dust Cloud Technique

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user creates a stream of high velocity wind combined with scouring dust. The completed technique is directed through overlapping hands.

*I finish off by creating an opening into sky which drops mud onto you.*

(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
*As Darui sees you create the lightning from your body, and destroy the earth pillar, he quickly raises his hands, summoning a vast amount of water, 1 inch above your head, which causes you to fry yourself. He then slams his hands onto the ground, causing a a huge dome to form over you, as the water fills it up. The water would react with the lightning, creating a reaction, which magnifies the lightning, causing you to electrocute yourself, as the earth dome forms around you, filling up with the water.*

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kairo) - Earth Style: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu will cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern or dome, imprisoning the target.
 
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I agree with Dei Dei here. You just can't have instincts, when defending a jutsu. What if I gave you a look and that look came off to you, as I'm using a fire style technique. But in reality I tricked you, then I use a lightning style, as you conjure up water style, to defend against the perceived look of fire style? It would end up, you getting fried, because of an instinct. Just a note...now to defend, rather counter attack.



*As Darui sees you create the lightning from your body, and destroy the earth pillar, he quickly raises his hands, summoning a vast amount of water, 1 inch above your head, which causes you to fry yourself. He then slams his hands onto the ground, causing a a huge dome to form over you, as the water fills it up. The water would react with the lightning, creating a reaction, which magnifies the lightning, causing you to electrocute yourself, as the earth dome forms around you, filling up with the water.*

(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.

(Doton: Tsuchi Kairo) - Earth Style: Earth Corridor
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu will cause the earth in the surrounding area to rise up and over a target and create a cavern or dome, imprisoning the target.
I'll try.

*As the water from the sky starts to fall down, I see the water casting a shadow from above (hope you understand what I mean), I instantly know from the sound, that it's a water technique so instead continuing to channel chakra to the ground, I channel my chakra throughout my body to give it a steel like property which protects me from the water as it falls down upon me*


(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Iron Skin Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

*As the dome fills up with the water, with no lighting surrounding my body anymore the dome would be just be with water. So I touch the ground, and I go underground, and I appear behind you, without disrupting the earth/ground around me.* (My body right now does not have the steel property any more.)

(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

*As I am right behind you, I without any hesitation use*

(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intense pain and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.

*Sending a huge blast of fire/wind at your back.* ( I was told by my sensei this counts as one jutsu*
 

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I'll try.

*As the water from the sky starts to fall down, I see the water casting a shadow from above (hope you understand what I mean), I instantly know from the sound, that it's a water technique so instead continuing to channel chakra to the ground, I channel my chakra throughout my body to give it a steel like property which protects me from the water as it falls down upon me*


(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Iron Skin Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

*As the dome fills up with the water, with no lighting surrounding my body anymore the dome would be just be with water. So I touch the ground, and I go underground, and I appear behind you, without disrupting the earth/ground around me.* (My body right now does not have the steel property any more.)

(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

*As I am right behind you, I without any hesitation use*

(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intense pain and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.

*Sending a huge blast of fire/wind at your back.* ( I was told by my sensei this counts as one jutsu*
I gotcha

*As Darui feels the heat behind him, he quickly punches a vortex of wind out of his hand, sending him sliding to his right, avoiding the blast. Also the blast would obscure your vision of him, so as he his sliding he thrusts his hand at you, releasing a claw of wind at you. He then steadies himself as he stomps onto the ground, causing earth spikes to erupt under you.*

(Fūton: Senpuuken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.

(Fūton: Juuha Reppou Shou) - Wind Style: Beast Wave Violent Wind Strike
Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A combo of a wind gut shaped like a claw with cutting wind that push and slice at the same time.

(Doton: Doryuso) - Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone from the ground and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
 
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