Ninja War Chap 7: Madara vs Bee

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Gaara: What the?!

The Tsuchikage stopped moving.

Tsuchikage: What the hell? Why can't I move?!

Naruto's clone pummeled it with Rasengan. Naruto's clone landed near Temari. The Tsuchikage fell to the ground and regenerated.

Tsuchikage: This is your chance! The caster of this jutsu isn't making us move! Seal us!

A few moments later, all the resurrected Kage were sealed.

Temari: What the hell is up with you Naruto?!

Naruto-clone: I'm a clone. The real me has taking control of the Nine-tails. This is what we got so far.

Gaara: Take us to Naruto.

Naruto-clone: Su-

Naruto-clone vanished in a puff of smoke.

Gaara sighed. Looks like we gotta do it the old fashioned way.

Naruto opened his eyes and he was in Sage Mode. He made two clones and they transformed into bushes.

Naruto: (Now to go. I sense what appears to be Neji's chakra and a darker chakra. It feels like- I've got to get moving!)

Naruto rushed off with high speed.

Bee: You!

Bee launched his tentacle at Madara. Madara used Shinra Tensei and suspended the tentacle in midair.

Bee: Wasteful idiot!

Bee shot a giant stream of raiton at the the Paths of Madara. The Six-tails came forward and created an invisible barrier around the Paths and Madara and absorbed the Raiton.

Bee: What the?!!

Bee then roared loudly and created a shockwave around the area. Madara countered with a shockwave of his own. The Three-tails then transformed his hand into a cannon filled with bombs. Three-tails then blasted dozens of bombs at Bee. Bee blocked with his tentacles. The bombs exploded around Bee. When the smoke cleared, Bee lay weakened.

Madara: Now to rip out his soul.

Seven-tails rushed forward to finish Bee, when Bee lurched up and blasted it, vaporizing it with a larger raiton blast.

Bee: Ya fool! You aint cool!

Madara: You're not just a mindless Jinchuriki, are you? You're smarter than you look.

Bee shoved three of his tentacles into the ground. He then sent two of his tentacles over at Madara.

Sasuke: You exhausted your chakra, which was weak to begin weak.

Tenten: Why are you doing this?! You used to be a Konoha ninja!!

Sasuke frowned.

Sasuke: I'm done talking.

Sasuke created a partial Susano'o with two giant arms covered in muscle and two arms made of bones. Sasuke prepared to launch an arrow.

Tenten:!!!

Tenten grabbed Neji and braced herself. Sasuke grinned and shot the arrow. In a split second, a shower of sand exploded around Neji and Tenten.

Sasuke: You again?

Gaara and the Tsuchikage floated down.

Sasuke: And you brought that geezer with you?

Tsuchikage: I'll blow you to dust!

Sasuke: Oh really?! You think a feeble shit like you can actually hurt me?!!!

Sasuke went full Susano'o and created a sword made of Amaterasu. The Susano'o had four arms, one with a shield, the sword, one with a ball of Amaterasu and one was shaped to shoot arrows. A shroud covered the Susano'o monster.

Sasuke: I'm the ultimate ninja right now. Not even the Kage can beat me.

Tsuchikage: What you lack in respect, you make up in arrogance.

Gaara: Besides, there is one ninja that has surpassed you. Naruto!

Bee launched more tentacles at Madara and he and the jinchuriki's dodged. Madara then took his fan weapon off his back.

Madara: Time to get serious.

Madara launched a Fireball and then made it stronger using his fan. Bee countered with a blst of lightning. At that moment, Seven-tails leaped up next to Bee's face and released a powerful Shinra Tensei that disoriented Bee. Then, Madara grabbed the scythe part of his fan and launched the top part at Bee. On contact, Bee burst into blue flames.

Bee: What is this?!

Madara: (My weapon is special. I can put a genjutsu in it and activate it against an opponent upon touch. By the time he realizes he's in a genjutsu, it'll be too late.)

Eight-tails: Bee! I think its a genjutsu!

Bee: Then how about I end it!

Bee wrapped his tentacles around the six jinchuriki. Then he threw them up into the air and blasted them with a giant ball of lightning.

Madara: (He can completely obliterate them if he tries. I have to use my ultimate fire!)

When the regenerated jinchuriki landed near Madara, he put his hand in front of him as if he was making a Fireball Jutsu. Then, fire came from Madara's mouth, but instead of launching it, the fire kept on flowing and wrapping around on itself.

Madara: (Usually, this jutsu takes to long to prepare and the target can easily dodge,but I have my paths and he's too big for me to miss.)

Bee: You think that'll work?!

Bee prepared a Tailed Beast Bomb.

Madara: (Hmph. My Pressure Inferno is special. It wraps a continuous stream of fire upon itself that builds up tons of pressure. Upon contact, it releases all of the pressure at once, creating enough force that could rival even a Tailed Beast Bomb!)

The Seven-tails and Five-tails rushed towards Bee as he launched the TBB. The Seven-tails started absorbing the TBB. The resulting force from the absorbing caused the TBB to explode. The Five-tails quickly started warping away the excess explosion.

Madara: (The amount of chakra these beasts contain never cease to amaze me. The Rikudou must be strong if the Ten-tails didn't go insane with power!)

Madara launched the powerful fireball. It hit the exploding, dispersing TBB and caused a massive explosion. Madara realized the blast was nearing upon him, so he went intangible. When the explosion cleared, it revealed Bee in his regular form in a crater. Fire lined the opening of the crater. Madara, the Five-tails and Six-tails were left.

Madara: (Looks like the others were completely disenegrated.)

Suddenly, a blue blur went straight through Madara. The Four-tails and Six-tails suddenly found themselves unable to move.

Madara turned and saw A. He then turned the other way and saw Shikaku using Shadow Possession on the remaing jinchuriki.

Madara: How did you find me?

A: We had sensor we met up with on the battlefield tell us where you were.

Madara: You're pretty nosy, interfering in my match with the Eight-tails.

A: What?!!

Madara gestured towards Bee.

A: BEE!!!

A growled and rushed towards Madara, but he just went through.

Shikaku: Shadow Style! Shadow Pin Cushion!

Shikaku's shadow turned into several spikes that went through the jinks and pinned them down.

Madara: You never learn.

A: Give back the Hokage!!

Madara: You can't have her back, but I'll be glad to reunite you with her.

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pretty good, the whole part about shikaku getting madara seems unrealistic, if madara can break a neck with a slight swing of the hand, he can probably move enough to go intangible or keep moving to use jutsus
 

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pretty good, the whole part about shikaku getting madara seems unrealistic, if madara can break a neck with a slight swing of the hand, he can probably move enough to go intangible or keep moving to use jutsus
i appreciate it, thanks, but i made it madara was more focused on raikage. also, remember he said a nara could be trouble
 
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