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U sure? i dont think we got 12 members yet, plus his guy is kinda epic and am i suppose to put new thread and post my bio on there i mean in our group place?
in the social group where you've been invited? yeah, post your bio in a new thread, and place your partner request afterwards. once all the legistics are laid out (partners, bio finalizations, ect.), we'll start the real fun. :zonder:
did i make it ? i wasnt paying attention lol
if you got an invite, you made it. If you didn't, remember.... ChrisWolf made all the cuts by himself. xd
 

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I mean i dont know if i got invited like were am i suppose to check and stuff its all good if i didnt make it its not like im applying for college.
Well hey I liked your character but if you really dont want to do it (because you would be expected to write a lot and stuff probably) then I will give the membership to uchihaclantheultimate because he really wants it bad lol so it seems unfair what do you say? you can still be a part later we can use your character I just mean in this group you will have to do a little work
 

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Submissions are closed. Our group has 12 members. If you still wish to submit characters for us to use in our ff, you may, but they will not be a part of our organization. Thank you for understanding.
 

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Well hey I liked your character but if you really dont want to do it (because you would be expected to write a lot and stuff probably) then I will give the membership to uchihaclantheultimate because he really wants it bad lol so it seems unfair what do you say? you can still be a part later we can use your character I just mean in this group you will have to do a little work
Naww relax ill do my part but truthfully im only having one problem and its joining the group i cant find the invitation lol i feel like an idiot:shy:
 

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Come up with your own ninja character a totally original character who is an S-rank criminal for example I will describe my character. This for a new akatsuki, this could hundreds of years after the events that are going on in Naruto. Describe your character and their jutsu, write a short description or story of their background,explain how they came to be with the akatsuki A.K.A their iffiliation. Explain their agenda A.K.A their goals. All Fan Fic writers just to make it more fun please don't use any characters for your fan fic come up with new unique characters and try to make them very unique in some way here this an idea of what it should look like, this is my character:

Name: Salem bastion
Nickname: Most know him as "Fade"
Age: 29
Village: Sand
History: Salem grew up in the sand village but took very little interest in the sands style of combat. He had loved the legends and stores of the uchiha and always wished her were one. His father was a legendary puppet master but also a very strict desciplinary as a father and as a leader in the military. He forced Salem to learn the puppet master jutsu and he forced him to master at a higher level than anyone in his generation. As Salem grew into his teenage years his obsession with the uchiha overtook him. Eventually he would go missing for days at a time and would occassionally be found by his fathers spies traveling the road from Konoha to his home. When he was 18 his father finally decided to do an in-depth check on him and he discovered something terrible. Salem had been hunting uchiha and killing them taking their eyes. He had used body parts from many ninja from different villages to create perfect puppets and then implanted the sharingan in them. He knew the sacrifice it took to wield the sharingan so instead of implanting it into himself he implanted it into his puppets. His father tried to kill him as a devine punishement but he was killed instead. This inadvertently cause the mangekyo sharingan to awaken in the two puppets he was using at the time. He disappeared from the village and formed his own version of the Akatsuki. "It doesn't have to be called Akatsuki I am open for suggestions on a name for the group". Now he has 20 sharingan puppets and only two with the Mangekyo. He also wields a unique puppet he built known as "Ghost" it is used as a spy and some believe it has some of Zetsu's DNA and therefore similar abilities. As for Salem himself he uses typical sand jutsu but has also mastered several jutsu from other styles that he learned through use of his puppets sharingan.

Abilities: Basic water style, fire style and advanced sand techniques along with his body being implanted with weapons and secret dangers he is almost half puppet, he wields 20 sharingan puppets and two mangekyo although he only use tsukynomi with them for now, his "Ghost" puppet has abilities similar to Zetsu's.

Note: He is also a strategetic genius above all others and this is to be feared more then anything.

Goal: Undecided specifically he simply desires change.
good job on the idea
 

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Name: Ash Senju
Age: 20
Looks: 5"7", white, brown eyes, black hair.

Its 50 years after the 4th great war. Ash lived with his parents in a small village until his dad tenchi senju and older brother tenchen senju started to attack the village. Ash mom nakita uzumaki told ash to run away from here and head to the leaf village and look for *Sabutobi sensi and to get strong enough to stop his father and brother while she holds them off so he can escape. Ash ran to the leaf village and asked around for sarutobi sensi and found the retired hokage and asked him to train him. Konohamaru taught Ash how to better control his chakra by teaching him how to climb trees and walk on water, taught Ash how to use water element, shadow clones and used Ash enormous chakra reserves to use the shadow clones to do years of training in weeks strengthening Ash body and mind. Ash learned how to do the rasengan, water jutsus, taijutsus. Konohamaru sent Ash on missions to gain experiences where Ash was teamed with many different leaf ninjas and learned medical jutsus and genjutsus from some comrades and with konohamaru help mastered them as his own. Wanting to learn more Ash was sent to konohamaru's old sensi Naruto who lived in the mountains near the leaf village. Ash traveled to the mountains and met Naruto and gave him a scroll from konohamaru asking him to train Ash. Naruto challenged Ash to a battle to estimate his abilities and ranks him bearly a jounin. Naruto taught Ash how to summon Toads, make bigger rasengans, wind jutsus and took him to myouboku mountain (land of toads) to teach him To be a sage. After a year and a half of training Ash learned many wind jutsus, Sage jutsus, learned the basics of sealing jutsus, further his medical jutsus and made ice jutsus by combining wind and water element and strengthen his water jutsus with wind chakra. One day when Ash was 18, Naruto told Ash that he is going to seal the kyuubi into him and leave the protection of the ninja world on him. Naruto sealed the kyuubi into Ash and told him to go see his friend bee in the cloud village and learn to control the fox and to be careful of ninjas who are trying to capture tailed beasts, especially a new evil organization. Ash travel to the cloud village with a scroll from Naruto that grant him permission to enter the village and look for bee. Bee took *Ash in and trained him to learn to control the 9 tails, after a year of rigorous training Ash mastered chakra mode. Bee told ash he needs still needs to be on better terms with the fox but he believe Ash can pull it off.*

Abilities: has an enormous chakra and a strong body due to his Senju and Uzumaki bloodline. Master wind, water and ice elements. Mastered Sage mode, chakra mode, medical ninjutsus that allows him to heal himself. Sensory abilities with sage mode and chakra mode,some genjutsus, some sealing jutsus.
 

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Name: Unknown

Nick: "Path"

Age: Unknown (Speaks philosophically, yet looks to be at 25 of age)

Village: Unknown (But first encounter was outside Konoha village)

History: Much is yet to be known of Path. Only what is known is his weird features, which seem to scare some, while intrigue others. A tall young and well built man, his skin is that of a light healthy peach color. Bald with not a single strand in sight. There seems to be many circular scars each about a few cm thick all over his body. The placings of these scars also seem to coincide with chakra points or nodes in a persons body. The bloodshot in his eyes, seem to be moving and swirling, though in a very very slow manner. It is said, that the movements follow his emotions and heart rate. His pupils, are of a dark green color.

A person of not many words, he speaks only when spoken to, and only when needed. The rest, he leaves it to his jutsus.

Fighting Style: A form of Taijutsu, that has no pose. His hands are either by his side, or at his back or front, clasped together. He walks, fights, runs in the same manner and discipline, moving his limbs, only when needed to.

Abilitites: Since it is not known from which village or family he comes from, therefore no one is able to know his full potential. When given an elemental chakra sheet, to determine his elemental tendency, it just turned black. But for those who have been around him, and fought with him or against him and lived, these are the few things they have found out about his jutsus:

"Empath Mode"
Path brings his fingers together, and forms the "Seal of Confrontation" closes his eyes and slowly brings his head down, and touches the area between his eyes to the tip of his fingers. When he opens his eyes, he is said to be able to sense every living things emotions, in color, and from there, any living thing hidden from plain sight, becomes clear. Something like the Byakugan of the Hyuuga clan, only he senses emotions.


"Empath Mode: Fear Crushing Technique"
Path was found lurking outside the Konoha Walls, staring at its gate. An ANBU team was dispatched to handle this stranger. Hiding within the trees, the jounins approached him with the stealth like that of no other. The team surrounded him and tried to subdue him. Their efforts were fruitless and only resulting in broken limbs, from attacks, unseen. They mustered all the courage they had and said that the rest of the ANBU from the village is on its way and as the leader questioned him of his intentions, Path replied only with " The hidden are no more, for what you hide, even within your hearts, becomes clear as day. Your fear, my friend, betrays your words. And it is that fear that will kill you." With that, he raised his left hand, and closed it into a fist. As he did that, the ANBU leader was raised above the ground, and his limbs and head, folded into his chest. What was left was a mess of flesh, blood and broken bones. He looked to the other ANBUs and said "Go. Speak of this, like you would speak it of your own. Speak of me, like you would speak of a Demon". The next moment he used another technique.

"Empath Mode: Fear Insertion Technique"
After leaving his last words, Path casts his last technique into the minds of the ANBU, each falling to their knees, and holding their heads, screaming in pain. With that, he disappeared. It is believed that it was Genjutsu that he formed on the ANBU, but to what type of Genjutsu, is still unknown. It is speculated that he uses the emotions of his enemies to create such a jutsu.

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There are many other things i'd like to share about Path, but if you want to know, or have a question, do tell me. Ill explain xd...

Tell me what u guys think, and if you want to incoporate him into your characters stories, please feel free... ill reply as to what is his weaknesses and other things.

Thanks!
 

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When i saw this thread, i was like i wanna be in it. Only to find that submission is closed =.=
Ah well, i will post my character and see whether you want to use it in your fan fiction

Name: Furawa - Flower
Nickname : Flower God
Age : 26
Village : Hidden Grass Village(yeh know, sth related to flowers? grass)
History :
Furawa was born in the Hidden Grass Village and lived in the outskirts of the village. Her house was surrounded by flowers and took a special liking to them since young. One particular flower caught her eye, the sakura. As a girl, she was never interested in fighting and spent almost all her time playing with flowers, developing her hidden potential and a special style and jutsu.
One day, however, several bandits attacked her home and killed her entire family. At that moment, when the bandits were about to strike Furawa a fatal blow, her powers appeared. All the flowers around the house rose to protect her, and using those flowers, defeated the bandits.
Furawa travelled far and wide when her parents died, scavenging for food. To defend herself from others, she used her special powers to fight against her will.
When she grew up, she became extremely beautiful. She used these looks to get money to make a living, thus developing a rather sarcastic personality.
While practising her ninjutsu one day, she met another young man. The man pointed out the weak points of her jutsu, taijutsu. Her flowers could guard against any forms of chakra, but a fist or kick could break through. To help her, the man taught her his ninjutsu and trained her in taijutsu. Furawa thus acquired the ability that whoever touches her, that thing would become twice as heavy.
Furawa parted ways with that man and is now travelling across villages, an extremely powerful kunoichi, with no goal whatsoever in mind.
Abilities: Senbonzakura(name of her flower jutsu), Rather good taijutsu, and the ability to make anything twice as heavy upon contact.
She can manipulate flowers easily to defend or attack, and is also rather fast.
Intelligence: Very smart, able to multi-task. Very fast in determining the weak points of jutsu(now!) and devise plans to fight.
Goal: No goal
 

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Name: Sharai
Nickname: Shock
Age: 19
Village: cloud
History: He was an orphan for the bigger part of his childhood, his parents died in the fourth ninja war by "friendly fire". He wanted to get revenge for his mother and father so he seeked to get stronger and stronger. He didn't have any friends because they feared him and thought he was mentally unstable. While seeking power at a young age, he practiced mainly lightning style and one night he discovered a banned by his clan s-rank jutsu. When the user activates the jutsu, it is active for one minute and if he touches (even barely) another person, the user sends an electric impulse strong enough to instantly stop the enemy's heart. What's most feared by the people is that there is no obvious sign (except if the enemy is a sensor ninja and sees his consentrated into his hand chakra). His second element is water and they say that if he uses both his elements (lightning and water) to make the ultimate variation of the forbidden raiton jutsu, he can use rain to carry that electrical impulse and one drop can stop a person's heart on a dime. This variation uses a tromendeous amount of chakra and is hard to control. He can use lightning clones to transform into the jutsu when they are in contact with the enemy which also uses a lot of chakra and that led him to train on his chakra capacity and he reached bijuu level. One rainy night, he sauth to partly make the people who feared and mocked him pay the price for their actions and partly to test his power, so he used his lightning and water elements to kill everyone in his clan that were outside (the banned jutsu thtough the rain droplets), then finished the job by his normal techs and joined the akatsuki.
Abilities: s-rank jutsu and jutsu variations, water and fire elements, lightning clone combinations with forbidden jutsus, perfect planing and executing.
Appearence: long black hair (like nagato by lenght), black eyes, big scar on his arm from fighting his best friend.
Personality: little emo, big avenger, no sense of humor, lonely.
Note: he is a cunning genious that combines his jutsus perfectly and is almost impossible to defeat him when he has a plan.
Goal: destroy the world for the "accidental" death of his parents.

sorry if i overdid it.. xD
 

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Name: Theocratarius

Nickname: Theo

Age: 21

Village: Formerly Hidden Leaf

History:

At a young age, Theo was abandoned by his family and raised himself. Living in what he thought might be his home village, he found he simply didn't belong. None of the other ninja hounds looked anything like him, and he had feelings that he was destined to walk his own path. From early on in his life, he showed signs of becoming a promising ninja hound. However, all of the hidden leaf ninja hounds were required to work as a team and were divided up into packs. Being more of a lone wolf and harboring doubts about his sense of belonging, Theo simply disappeared from the village. On his own, he traveled to many different regions perfecting his jutsus and techniques. At the age of 15 he learned of the rebirth of an organization called "Akatsuki." Since he was rapidly becoming more and more skilled with his jutsus, it wasn't long before he was approached by the Akatsuki with an offer to join their ranks as a mercenary. Seeing the others as being from situations much like his own, he accepted the offer on the condition that he work alone until one so fitting to his personality would come along and possibly tame him. Being blessed with incredible looks of cuteness, he simply had a way of distracting the hell out of the most seasoned ninja. His unconventional fighting style and prowess made him well-renowned in certain parts of the world.

Abilities:

E-rank Loss of bladder Control Jutsu: Short-Long range defensive.

User begins urinating on nearby opponents grossing them out. Can be used twice in battle if user has not drank any more liquid than usual.

D-rank Growl: Long-range defensive.

User bristles his fur, bares his teeth, and emits a low frequency growl that disrupts the users chakra flow to counter genjutsu up to A-rank.

B-rank Bark: Short-mid range defensive.

User creates a pressure wave disguised as a sound wave in the form of a bark that propels nearby objects and opponents several hundred yards away. May be used several times during battle, but not in rapid succession. When combined with Growl, can counter S-rank genjutsu. This combination may be used once per battle.

S-rank Cuteness Substitution Jutsu: Short-mid range offensive.

Allows the user to temporarily distract and overwhelm his opponent with a sense of "Awe." Can only be used once per battle.

Forbidden Puppy Eyes Jutsu: Short-mid range offensive.

Causes the hearts of any nearby opponent to melt and gives them a desire to hug the user. Can only be used by me, once per 24hr period.


Note: Has a "Sun" affinity that amplifies the users cuteness and allows him to radiate in a glow of golden awesomeness.

Goal: To one day be tamed and understood. (And maybe get potty-trained)

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I'm new to this, I know I made plenty of mistakes, but I'm just trying to have some fun. :D
 

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Name: Theocratarius

Nickname: Theo

Age: 21

Village: Formerly Hidden Leaf

History:

At a young age, Theo was abandoned by his family and raised himself. Living in what he thought might be his home village, he found he simply didn't belong. None of the other ninja hounds looked anything like him, and he had feelings that he was destined to walk his own path. From early on in his life, he showed signs of becoming a promising ninja hound. However, all of the hidden leaf ninja hounds were required to work as a team and were divided up into packs. Being more of a lone wolf and harboring doubts about his sense of belonging, Theo simply disappeared from the village. On his own, he traveled to many different regions perfecting his jutsus and techniques. At the age of 15 he learned of the rebirth of an organization called "Akatsuki." Since he was rapidly becoming more and more skilled with his jutsus, it wasn't long before he was approached by the Akatsuki with an offer to join their ranks as a mercenary. Seeing the others as being from situations much like his own, he accepted the offer on the condition that he work alone until one so fitting to his personality would come along and possibly tame him. Being blessed with incredible looks of cuteness, he simply had a way of distracting the hell out of the most seasoned ninja. His unconventional fighting style and prowess made him well-renowned in certain parts of the world.

Abilities:

E-rank Loss of bladder Control Jutsu: Short-Long range defensive.

User begins urinating on nearby opponents grossing them out. Can be used twice in battle if user has not drank any more liquid than usual.

D-rank Growl: Long-range defensive.

User bristles his fur, bares his teeth, and emits a low frequency growl that disrupts the users chakra flow to counter genjutsu up to A-rank.

B-rank Bark: Short-mid range defensive.

User creates a pressure wave disguised as a sound wave in the form of a bark that propels nearby objects and opponents several hundred yards away. May be used several times during battle, but not in rapid succession. When combined with Growl, can counter S-rank genjutsu. This combination may be used once per battle.

S-rank Cuteness Substitution Jutsu: Short-mid range offensive.

Allows the user to temporarily distract and overwhelm his opponent with a sense of "Awe." Can only be used once per battle.

Forbidden Puppy Eyes Jutsu: Short-mid range offensive.

Causes the hearts of any nearby opponent to melt and gives them a desire to hug the user. Can only be used by me, once per 24hr period.


Note: Has a "Sun" affinity that amplifies the users cuteness and allows him to radiate in a glow of golden awesomeness.

Goal: To one day be tamed and understood. (And maybe get potty-trained)

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I'm new to this, I know I made plenty of mistakes, but I'm just trying to have some fun. :D

Lmao that was totally awsome our group is already full but when we start writing the fan fic we will inlcude your character :)
 
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