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[Mattobi]

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(Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus when he reforms the crocodile.
Note: Requires two handseals.
Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.

~Declined~ Needs restrictions

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(Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile

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(Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
Note: Reforming the crocodile needs two turns.
Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus above C-Rank after he reformed the crocodile.
Note: Requires two handseals.
Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.

~Declined: Again, need restrictions. How many time can you use it per battle?~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is a little smaller than Gamabunta. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

~Declined~ Way too big to fly, if he is almost as big as gamabunta, his wings would stretch over a couple of kilometers.

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss

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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is as big as Gamakichi in the Pain Arc. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

~Declined: Make it use one of the two elements and restrict it's usage so it counts as one of your move too.~


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(Kage: Tama) -Shadow Sphere

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(Kage: Tama) -Shadow Sphere
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will gather his chakra into his shadow wich will extend. Afterwards the user will use the chakra in his shadow to form a sphere around his opponent. He will be unable to see anything and won't be able to run out of the shadow.
Note: One must have finished his shadow training.
Note: One must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
Note : Can only be used by Nara's.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

~Declined: What are the requirement for your jutsu to take effect? Must it connect with your opponent's sword? Elaborate~


(Kage: Akumu) -Shadow Nightmare

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(Kage: Akumu) -Shadow Nightmare
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: After the user has performed the Kage: Tama jutsu he creates tentacles out of the sphere wich surround the opponent to stab him. The user will be able to locate his opponent in the sphere thanks to the chakra in the shadow.
Note: One must have performed Kage: Tama.
Note: One must have finished his shadow training.
Note: One must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
Note : Can only be used by Nara's.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

~Declined: Kage Tama was declined~


(Kenjutsu: Naitomea no surasshu) – Sword Arts: Nightmare Slash

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(Kenjutsu: Naitomea no surasshu) – Sword Arts: Nightmare Slash
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will use his sword to stab towards the stomach of his opponent and as the swords hits the stomach, he will quickly draw his sword upwards to slash trough the head of his opponent.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread

~Declined: Restrictions? And change the description, we don't like instant kills~

 

[-Tauburn-]

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(Hyouton: Himari)- Ice: Ice Ball

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Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User creates a Ball of ice, in their hands by focusing water chakra in their dominate hand while using wind chakra to chill and freeze the ball and will the launch it at the opponent using their wind chakra.
- Can only be used 5 times per battle.

(Hyouton: Hikiba)- Ice: Ice Fang

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Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will focus their water chakra outside of their body, then chill it with their wind chakra, creating a fang shaped ice cicle. Sending it flying at the opponent with their wind chakra.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~Both Approved~

(Hyouton: Hyouchuu Shougeki)- Ice: Icicle Crash

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Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will manipulate the wind and water in the sky with their chakra to create a large amount of icicles, that will then drop down on the opponent. The icicles that drop down can be in a organized shape or fall at random.
- Can be used 4 times per battle.

~Declined: Please describe where the distance separating the created ice and your target~


(Hyouton: Odoribarahana)- Ice Release: Dancing Rose Petals

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Type: Sup
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: n/a
Description: By freezing the water molecules in the air with the users wind chakra the user can manipulate them into a blizzard of falling rose's that after making contact with the enemy start's to freeze them until they are frozen in ice, making it impossible to move.
- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Can only be taught by -Tauburn-

(Hyouton: Hishuriken)- Ice Release: Ice Shuriken

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Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will condense the moisture around them into numerous shuriken which are then launched at the opponent. As long there is moisture in the air the user can create an almost infinite supply of shurikens.
- Can be used 4 times per battle.
- Can only be taught by -Tauburn-

~Both Declined: The first one is definitely not A-rank (seen it in Bleach) and need to be restricted differently when you make it S-rank (at least). The second needs further restriction; how many shuriken can you create? Infinite is an automatic decline~

 

[Gitanshu]

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Summoning Animal : Chimpanze
Scroll Owner:GITANSHU
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

chimpanze summoning

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RANK:A
Type: Defence-Offence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:The user does a monkey handseal and summons the great falco
it has a natural affinity toward Earth and can use it up to A rank and moves fast on land and can climb on almost anything
~can only be thought by gitanshu~
~lasts for 5 turns~
~can only be summoned once per battle~
~no B rank and above jutsu for next 1 turn~

~Declined: Contract already exist:

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[Migualon J.J.]

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(Kageoni) - Shadow Demon

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (depends on position of opponent´s shadow)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user uses his shadow manipulation power to be able to hurt opponent through his shadow, meaning that if he for example stabs place where the opponent has heart in his shadow, he hits the opponent´s heart too.

Note:
*Usable once per battle
*Can only be used by Nara
*Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

~Declined~ unrealistic
(Kawa Kageoni) - Shadow Demon Hide

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (depends on position of opponent´s shadow)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Describtion: The user manipulates opponent´s shadow and focuses his chakra into it. Than the user manipulates his own shadow and combines his body with opponent´s and hides in it for as long as he wants to.

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Note:
*Usable once per battle
*Can only be used by Nara
*Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

~Approved~
My new CW, dropping my Katen Kyokotsu (well, it´s name isn´t Katen Kyokotsu, but whatever )

(Enraiha; Subeta No Faia) - Enraiha; Sword Of Fire

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Describtion: Enraiha is sword that is said to be created by king of Flame Spirits. It is very light weapon which was made from steel of the highest quality, it has special color, it is dark orange because the King of Flame Spirits put his powers into it and it became wanted by everyone for it´s special abilities. It can cut through human´s neck with not high problems if infused with normal chakra.

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Abilities and Notes:
*The user even if he has this sword "only" on his back on on his belt, can use Fire Jutsus without any hand seals
*The user can put his own Fire or Normal Chakra into this sword to make it be surrounded by Fire or Normal Chakra
*The user´s Fire Jutsus got powerboost +15 to damage
*Enraiha is indestructible

~Declined~ Too similar to existing Fire swords

(界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: (Taijutsu +15) (-10 to the user for every turn activated)
Describtion:
Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.

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Note:
*Can only be used once per battle
*Lasts for 7 turns
*The user´s speed increases by 5 (by the Speed chart)
*The user can´t use genjutsus and Water element while the Kaio-ken is activated

~Declined~

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(界王拳; Kaio-ken) - Fist of the World King

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 50 (-10 chakra for each turn it´s activated)
Damage: (Taijutsu and Kaito´s Taijutsu +10) (-10 to the user for each turn activated)
Describtion:
Kaio-ken is technique which was created by famous martial art master King Kai who wasn´t able to completely master it so he taught it to his student Migualon J.J. who completely mastered it and currently he is the only person able to use it. The user can at any time deactivate Kaio-ken. The user focuses his chakra around his body which creates crimson "cloak" around the user thanks to which the user´s strength and speed increases dramatically. The user´s chakra is active all the time Kaio-ken is activated, the user is hurt every turn it is active.

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*Can only be used once per battle
*Lasts for 5 turns
*The user´s speed increases by 5 (by the Speed chart, in other words, speed of SM)
*The user can´t use genjutsus and Water and Earth element while the Kaio-ken is activated

~Declined: This should be ranked forbidden considering the great strain it puts on the user's body. Work on the restriction, 5 turns is too much and there should be some physical drawback other then 10 damage points which basically don't do anything~

(Sutaffu No Hinote) - Staff Of Fire

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: (costs 30 chakra when using Water Evaporation)
Damage points: N/A
Describtion: Sutaffu No Hinote is a spear-like staff, which is weapon, which is said to be made by gods for 1 person who masteres the Fire Release completely. This weapon is famous because it was weapon of Sage Of The Six Paths and than of his Older Son. This weapon has become even more famous for being 1 of the weapons of Madara Uchiha and when he was defeated by Shodai Hokage Hashirama, he took it and it became 1 of the biggest treasures of Konoha. This treasure wasn´t used for a long time, but during 2nd Shinobi Great War, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi was using it to increase his power in Fire Release. After the war, Sandaime Hokage Hiruzen Sarutobi created "law" thanks to which it must never be used, only in the War in which Konoha would need big help. It wasn´t used in 3rd Shinobi Great War, but on the start of 4th Shinobi Great War, Godaime Hokage Tsunade gave this weapon to Migualon J.J., shinobi from Amegakure who decided to help them in this very hard war.

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Abilities and Notes:
*The user, even if he has this staff "only" on his back, can use Fire Jutsus without any hand seals
*The user can put his own Fire or Normal Chakra into this staff to make it be surrounded by Fire or Normal Chakra (on it´s blade)
*When infused with Fire Chakra it can evaporate B-rank Water Jutsus and below when it hits them (3 times in the battle)
*Evaporating Water Jutsus is considered as 1 of the 3 moves per turn
*Staff Of Fire is indestructible
*If someone else than Migualon J.J. (or those who get permission to use it) touches this staff, they get burned

~Declined: this is a 7SM rip off even if it isn't technically a sword and is bit OP~

 

[Gobi Gobletsson]

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(Doton: Chikyū no naka Kami) - Earth Release: Rebirth of the Earth God
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self-Affected
Chakra cost: 50 (+10 per turn.)
Damage points: N/A (-20 to the user.)
Description: The user will make a single hand sign causing several brown Kanji signs to appear over his whole body which then begins to glow with a brownish aura. As the Kanjis appear they will begin to draw in natural chakra from the earth, causing the user to enter a state called Ancient Earth Mode, which makes him able to ultlize a stronger form for earth release, it's more hardened and faster than ever. Only the most high ranked and skilled Earth users have been able to get acces to this state.
Abilities which the user gains:
-The users durability, stamina, strenght and speed inceases drastically.
-The user gains mastery over the Earth Element which makes him able to mold/use earth techniques without the need of hand signs or requires contact with the ground.
-The users Earth techniques will get boosted by +25 and +10 Taijutsu as his skin will get hardened aswell.
-The user will be able to sense anything which contains chakra, that is in contact with the ground.
Drawbacks:
-The Kanjis on the users body will remain glowing brownish for five turns after entering the mode, when the five turns end, the kanjis will loose their glow and the user will return to normal and won't be able to enter this state for the rest of the battle.
-The user cannot use any elemental ninjutsu execpt for for earth release, mainly because of the high amount of earth chakra within his body. Though non-elemental ninjutsu may still be taken in use in this mode.
-When the five turns end and the Kanjis loose their glow the user will return to normal with a heavily strain on their body and heavy breathing which leaves him pretty much open for attacks(The strain will be equaling to 20 damage on the user.).
~Declined~ OP

(Doton: Chikyū no naka Kami) - Earth Release: Rebirth of the Earth God
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self-Affected
Chakra cost: 50 (+10 per turn.)
Damage points: N/A (-20 to the user.)
Description: The user will make a single hand sign causing several brown Kanji signs to appear over his whole body which then begins to glow with a brownish aura. As the Kanjis appear they will begin to draw in natural chakra from the earth, causing the user to enter a state called Ancient Earth Mode, which makes him able to ultlize a stronger form for earth release, it's more hardened and faster than ever. Only the most high ranked and skilled Earth users have been able to get acces to this state.

Ability which the user gains:
-The users durability, stamina, strenght and speed inceases drastically.
-The user gains mastery over the Earth Element which makes him able to mold/use earth techniques without the need of hand signs.
-The users Earth techniques will get boosted by +25 and +10 Taijutsu.
-The user will be able to sense anything which contains chakra, that touches the ground.
Drawbacks:
-The Kanjis on the users body will remain glowing brownish for five turns after entering the mode, when the five turns end, the kanjis will loose their glow and the user will return to normal.
-The user cannot use any elemental ninjutsu execpt for for earth release, mainly because of the high amount of earth chakra within his body. Though non-elemental ninjutsu may still be taken in use in this mode.
-When the five turns end and the Kanjis loose their glow the user will return to normal with a heavily strain on their body and heavy breathing which leaves him pretty much open for attacks(The strain will be equaling to 20 damage on the user.)
-The user aswell will only be capable of using two jutsus per turn for 3 turns after he exits this mode.

(Added bolded part, hopefully it will get approved now. >_<)

~Declined: Still OP~

 

[Lucifer]

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(Katon : Kasai Ni-Doru)- Fire style: Fire Needles
Type: Attack
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 35
Damage Points: 65
Desription: The User concentrates his fire chakra and blows out a fireball into the air once he blows out the fireball. It explodes directly so, it also harmes the user. But when it explodes it releases dozens of needles that the user directs at his opponent. The needles are so, small that your opponent barely can see them. So, when this jutsu is used the user has to protect him/her self.
.Note: This, jutsu can be used once per battle.
.Note: The user must be Sannin rank or above.
.Note: This jutsu can be cancelled out by water jutsu above A rank.
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~Declined: If it hurt you then it should be forbidden. The jutsu in itself is a bit OP and the restrictions don't make sense; it could be stop by something other then water. Talking about restrictions, this jutsu is seriously lacking them~

(Yoton: Maguma Koutetsu) - Magma Release: Magma Armor
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 100
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performing the necessary handseals then take in a deep breath as the user brings forth Lava out of the users mouth and then shoot it over your own body and create a Armor made out of Maguma (Lava, Yoton). So, the users whole body is covered in Lava.+ the user can move freely. This, forbidden jutsu can be used against wepons who try to cut the users body, Wind jutsu, Fire jutsu. And, any attack weaker then S-class won't work on;y the five Elements.
.Note: The, User must be Kage or above.
.Note: The, User must have Kurotsuchi, Terumi or a Rõushi Bio.
.Note: This, Jutsu Lasts 3 turns.
.Note: This, Jutsu can be used once per battle.

~Declined: Work on the bold part. Add some restrictions, cause right now you're basically moving freely with a lava suit. There needs to be some physical drawbacks to you wearing a lava armor~

 

[black uchiha]

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(Konchū sutairu: Saimin u~ēbu) Insect Style: Hypnotic Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user sends a huge (house size) rolling wave of insects towards the opponent. The insects, in this falling motion, use the shine of their shells/exoskeleton to refract the light of the sun or the moon into the opponent’s eyes (unknown to them…only sees the wave) to cause them to have a mild seizure from the light. This makes a slight muscle spasm of the opponent’s legs, paralyzing them as the wave of insect crash down on them.
-Can only use with a clear sky
-Can only use two times per battle
-Paralyzes last one turn
-Can be blocked by sunglasses
-Only A-rank and below bug techniques the next turn
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

~Declined: Reflecting the light with their exoskeleton? Really? Do no resubmit~

(Konchū sutairu: Konchū doragon-jutsu) Insect Style: Insect Dragon Jutsu
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user makes two handseals to create up to two large dragons of insects. The insects on the outside of the dragon release a constant supply of chakra, to protect them from A-rank and below attacks. Once the dragon get close/hits the opponent, the insects on the inside of the dragon begin to viciously feed on the opponent’s chakra. The dragon can also (with one more handseal) shootout insects from its mouth (like a dragon’s fire). The user can stand on the head of the dragon.
-Can only use three times per battle
-Last two turn
-Shot insect are A-rank and counts as a move
-No S-rank bug techniques the next turn
-Must be a bug user
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

~Declined: sustaining a chakra wall capable of protection A-rank and lower attacks would most likely kill those bugs from chakra exhaustion. They're not ninjas, keep in mind the extent of their abilities~

(Konchū sutairu: Konchū barikēdo) Insect Style: Insect Barricade
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: S
Range Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user send out a wall/dome of insects that release the chakra of the user/opponent that they feed on, to make a wall able to withstand A-rank and below attacks and still stand. The wall then falls in an avalanche of insects (wall only) attacking the opponent and feeding on their chakra.
-Can only use three times per battle
-Wall/Dome falls if used to block an S-rank attack
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

~Approved: The bold part makes the difference between this jutsu and the last one~


(100 Ningyō no rikugun: Torappusukuwaddo no arufa) 100 Puppet Army: Trap Squad Alpha
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: S
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This squad is made up of 15 puppets of the 100 Puppet Army. These puppets have seals on them (feet, arms, and chest) and work in three teams of five; the tags are to make a five seal barrier. The puppets, after surrounding the opponent, plant their legs underground (via drills); in a pentagon formation and release the seals at once. This instantly makes a barrier from puppet to puppet, three feet underground and eight feet above the ground (block style). The barrier can be destroyed by an aggressive S-rank technique or two A-rank technique, otherwise it’s unbreakable. The user can shoot Senbon/smoke into the barrier (counts as a move) from the puppets that make up the barrier (via small holes in front of the puppet’s mouth)
-Must release the 100 Puppet Army before
-Can only use three times (15 puppets) per battle
-Barrier last two turns
-Once the barrier is used the puppets become unusable
-Senbon/Smoke bombs count as a move
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

~Declined: Check the bold part. Also, work on the restriction; 3 times per match is too much for example~


(Godai-juu no ayatsuri ningyō) The Five Great Beast Puppets
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user summons five puppets called The Five Great Beast. The five puppets are made to look like human/animal hybrids, each with different looks and abilities (A-rank & below). The puppets are outfitted with the normal puppet gear, with a few extras. The animals are Bat, Panther, Eagle, Tiger, and Octopus.

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1. Ulquiorra-Bat: Has large spring loaded wings that give him the ability to generate A-rank gusts of wind. He also has a whip tail, and uses it as such.

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2. Grimmjow-Panther: Is a basic combat puppet with blades extending from his elbows and legs. His lack of weapons, slender frame, and sharp claws give him an speed advantage over other puppets, this also increases his attack power to A-rank taijutsu

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3. Redder-Eagle: Has large wings with sharp feathers (kunai size) that can be shot out at the opponent with the flap of the wing (B-rank). He also has sharp talons for feet.

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4. Vega-Tiger: Has a sharp blade on each hand and a whip-like tail with a sharp short dual-sided blade on the end. On his head he has two steel fangs on each side of his face, with wire attached; these fangs are capable of being shot out and retracted. Vega has a small generator inside his head that applies a C-rank electrical current through the wire and fangs.

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5. Luppi-Octopus: Has eight large steel tentacles extending from his back. The tentacles can reach to mid-range to attack and have retractable spikes in the ends, they also can be used to make an A-rank shield

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-No other puppets can be used (unless sasori uses his chakra thread machine)
-Has to summon all at once
-Can be destroyed by S-rank attack
-Can only be taught by Black Uchiha


~Declined: Great jutsu, but some things to work on. Look at the bold part in the last puppet's description and change it to short-range. Also, lower that A-rank defense. Again, you're lacking restrictions. Such a jutsu should have major drawbacks. Take away the part about Sasori being able to summon more puppets when those are on the field~

 

[Howard]

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(Kchuysei: Sendo's kenshiki) Sendo's Pride
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short(Summon) Short-Mid(Lightning blast)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A(+80 for lightning blast)
Description: This sword is the second of two swords passed down from Lord Sendo. Named "Sendo's Pride" because of it's slick and slender beauty. This sword was always in Sendo's possession since he first obtained it from the Condor Elders long ago. He shared his chakra with it just as he did the other, so it too has the ability to rank up Raiton jutsu if the user so wishes it. It still feeds on the users chakra just as it did with Sendo taking in their Raiton chakra and making it it's own. The chakra absobed by the sword from the user can be sent out as a blast of lightning that can be used as a Short-Mid range attack. It can only be used a total of five times in battle. It's final ability is gained due to the fact that the sword has absorbed both the user's and Sendo's Raiton chakra. The sword can absorb B Raiton jutsu and below it then nullifies the attack this can be done 5 times as well.

Abilities:

+ 1 Rank to Raiton jutsu
Lightning blast(3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)
Absobtion of B rank and below jutsu Raiton jutsu (3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)

Notes:

~Has to be summoned within the first 3 turns~
~Cannot be summoned with any condors the turn before or after~
~Doesn't need to be summoned if it is in the user's bio~
~Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Condor contract~

~Declined~

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(Kchuysei: Sendo's kenshiki) Sendo's Pride
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short(Summon) Short-Mid(Lightning blast)
Chakra Cost: 40(+20 each turn to the user)
Damage Points: N/A(+80 for lightning blast)
Description: This sword is the second of two swords passed down from Lord Sendo. Named "Sendo's Pride" because of it's slick and slender beauty. This sword was always in Sendo's possession since he first obtained it from the Condor Elders long ago. He shared his chakra with it just as he did the other, so it too has the ability to rank up Raiton jutsu if the user so wishes it. It still feeds on the users chakra just as it did with Sendo taking in their Raiton chakra and making it it's own. The chakra absobed by the sword from the user can be sent out as a blast of lightning that can be used as a Short-Mid range attack. It can only be used a total of five times in battle.
Abilities:

+ 1 Rank to Raiton jutsu
Lightning blast(3 times per battle and counts as one of the users moves)


Notes:

~Has to be summoned within the first 3 turns~
~Cannot be summoned with any condors the turn before or after~
~Doesn't need to be summoned if it is in the user's bio~
~Can only be summoned by those who have signed the Condor contract~
~The sword takes 20 chakra from the user each turn feeding on his chakra~

Added the bolded and took out the underlined....

~Declined: In all honesty, do you believe the restriction you added will affect you in a fight?~

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

CUSTOM WEAPON
(Shingiri no Tachi)-Sword that cuts the Gods
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (when using effect)
Damage Points: 60
Description: This katana, named Shingiri no Tachi (Sword that cuts the Gods) is feared by many. The blade is made out of an unknown metal, in that it is a silent blade and when swung, its swipe is unheard. It has a golden brown diamond guard. It has the power to vaporize into dust which floats around the wielder, confusing the opponent that the weapon is gone. The wielder can instantly reform the sword to finish off an opponent.
~ Setsuna Chiri (Instant Dust) is the swords effect

Weapon's jutsu:
(Setsuna Chiri)-Instant Dust
Type: Supplementry
Rank: A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 0
Description: User converts the sword into dust which floats around the user. The user can freely convert the sword from dust to sword and vice versa instantly without sound.
~Only Byakugan can see the dust precisely

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CUSTOM SUMMON

Summoning Animal: Leopon
Scroll Owner: ~CoOkie Monster~
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none atm.

~Both declined: the first one is OP and the second one falls under the "jurisdiction of either the lion contract or the leopard contract~

~Update: contract approved~ a Liger contract exists too

 

[Scarface]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō) ~ Summoning: The Hell Wasp
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform the tattoo version of the summoning jutsu of the wasp contract, summoning forth Saimyōshō~The Hell Wasp. Saimyōshō is a single gigantic king of the wasps, the size of Gamabunta with the flying speed of Pein's giant bird. Saimyōshō can use all fire element techniques, he can only use 5 techniques per summoning. They count as one of the users 3 jutsus per turn. Saimyōshō's poisonous stinger is unlike any other bug, a single drop of venom from Saimyōshō paralyzes the foe for 1 turn.

~Saimyōshō can only be summoned once per battle
~Saimyōshō can only remain on the field for 5 turns of the summoner
~Nothing under B-rank can harm Saimyōshō, to kill Saimyōshō you must deliver 4 b-rank techniques, 3 a-rank techniques, or 2 s-rank techniques irregardless of element.

~Declined~ Too big for an insect, make it smaller..

(Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō) ~ Summoning: The Hell Wasp
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform the tattoo version of the summoning jutsu of the wasp contract, summoning forth Saimyōshō~The Hell Wasp. Saimyōshō is a single gigantic king of the wasps, the size of a horse with the flying speed of Pein's giant bird. Saimyōshō can use all fire element techniques, he can only use 5 techniques per summoning. They count as one of the users 3 jutsus per turn. Saimyōshō's poisonous stinger is unlike any other bug, a single drop of venom from Saimyōshō paralyzes the foe for 1 turn.

~Saimyōshō can only be summoned once per battle
~Saimyōshō can only remain on the field for 5 turns of the summoner
~Nothing under B-rank can harm Saimyōshō, to kill Saimyōshō you must deliver 4 b-rank techniques, 3 a-rank techniques, or 2 s-rank techniques irregardless of element.

EDITED SIZE

~Declined: Work on the bold part. 2 S-rank is too much for a summon. Kirin and Amaterasu are S-rank and I'm pretty sure one shot of those could kill your wasp~


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(Kuchiyose: Saimyōshō Chakra Sen'yaku) ~ Summoning: Hell Wasp Chakra Infusion
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will summon a giant wasp, the size of a horse, and infuse into him upon summoning, a specific element of chakra (fire, water, lighting, ice, etc) of the users choosing. The wasp will then be able to use all of that element's jutsus, and carry that element's weakness, example, a wasp infused with fire chakra, will have a weakness to water.

~This jutsu can only be used twice
~Can be used with ANY element the user knows, KG or otherwise
~Can only be destroyed by high rank jutsus from the weakness element (3 a rank, or 2 s rank jutsus of the wasps current weakness. Example: if the wasp is infused with fire chakra, he needs to be hit by 3 a rank water or 2 s rank water jutsus to be destroyed)
~The wasp's jutsus count as one of the users 3 jutsus

~Declined: I like the general idea, but same as above, the restrictions are off in my opinion. Also, take out the part about your wasp being able to copy any element including KG. It should be restricted to the basic fives~

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu:-Hi no yoru) Genjutsu: A Night Of Fire

Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user cast a genjutsu on his oppent That make the oppent see themselves by themselves on a very dark night and as the oppent is standing there all the surrounding around the oppent catches on fire and make the oppent think hes burning alive

*Note: Can Only Be Used by -Itachi - Unless tought by -Itachi-
*Note: After the use of this Genjutsu the User can no longer use Genjutsu for the rest of the fight
*After Using this Genjutsu the user can not uses Any S ranked tech for the rest of the match
*Note: Can Only use once a battle
*Note: Can only Be Used by Uchiha Bios
*Note: Jutsu Does Damage to user due to the strain it takes on the user to pull of the Jutsu

(Genjutsu: Surīpīhorou)Genjutsu: Sleepy Hollow

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short/Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user cast a Genjutsu on his oppent that make the oppent believe he ended up in a old broken down town and as the oppent is walking throught the town a head-less horsemen Comes up behind them and makes the oppent believe that their head has been cut off which cause the oppent to pass out or be frozen in fear (Depending on the Rank of the Oppent)

*Note:Can only be used by -Itachi - unless tought and can only be tought by -Itachi-
*Note: After using this Genjutsu the user can no longer use genjutsu for the rest of the fight
*Note:After the use of this Genjutsu the user can not use S ranked jutsu for thr rest of the battle
*Note: Can only be used once a battle
*Note: Can only be used by Uchiha Bios
*Note: This Genjutsu Does Damage to the User due to the strain the jutsu takes to pull off

~Both declined: unclear descriptions~

 

[Rokusho..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates 2 Shadow Clones , then the Shadow Clones and the user will channel chakra into the muscles of the arms and legs to increase their speed and strength for a brief moment , the 2 Shadow Clones will then dash up to the target and punch the target in the left and right of his torso . Then the user following behind the Shadow Clones , will land a blow on the target's chest

-No taijutsu the turn after this is used
-Can only be used 3 times due to the amount of stress it poses on the user's arms and legs
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

you sure you want this creating two shadow clones and not using two existing cause if ya want this one add a note that it counts as one your shadow clone technique usages per battle

(Kyokudai Inguramu) - Maximum Ingram

Spoiler

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user and two of his existing Shadow Clones will channel chakra into the muscles of the arms and legs to increase their speed and strength for a brief moment , the 2 Shadow Clones will then dash up to the target and punch the target in the left and right of his torso . Then the user following behind the Shadow Clones , will land a blow on the target's chest

-No taijutsu the turn after this is used
-Can only be used 3 times due to the amount of stress it poses on the user's arms and legs
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

~Accepted~

 

[Black Butler]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ranton: Kago za Arashi) Storm Release: Cage of the Storm
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 70
Damage: 140
Description: THe user does 4 handseals and 16 pillars made of storm erupt from the ground and encage the opponent. The pillars paralyze anything it touches (including the user). Once the target is encaged, the user can clap his hands together, causing the cage to shrink into a tiny cube, killing the opponent, or they could just encage them.
+ 30 Damage to user, because of immense strain
User can't use Water/Lightning/Storm A-Rank or above for 2 turns
Usable 2x
Paralyzes on contact
~Declined~ make it only once

(Ranton: Kago za Arashi) Storm Release: Cage of the Storm
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 70
Damage: 140
Description: THe user does 4 handseals and 16 pillars made of storm erupt from the ground and encage the opponent. The pillars paralyze anything it touches (including the user). Once the target is encaged, the user can clap his hands together, causing the cage to shrink into a tiny cube, killing the opponent, or they could just encage them.
+ 30 Damage to user, because of immense strain
User can't use Water/Lightning/Storm A-Rank or above for 2 turns
Usable 1x
Paralyzes on contact

~Declined: I know the last mod who checked it said to add a restriction, but it doesn't change the fact that this jutsu is OP. Take away the paralyzing effect and follow the official template for Forbidden techniques~

 

[Sonne]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton/Doton: Yuuen Taba)- Great Coil

Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50(+3 For D Rank,+5 For C Rank,+8 for B Rank,+10 for A Rank,+15 for S Rank)
Damage Points: 0(Explained Bellow)(-15 to the user)

Description: After Performing a string of Handseals, the user brings his hands to the ground and sends tremendous amounts of Chakra into it. As he keeps channeling chakra into the ground, a Huge Coil emerges from the it.
Any Lightning attack directed towards the the Coil is absorbed instantly, because the coil attracts all lightning jutsu within a Range from it.
At Will, the Lightning attacks stored inside the Coil can be released in the form of a huge and powerful surge of Electricity.
The electric blast emanating from the coil will be 20% weaker the the damage given by the original attack that was stored in the coil.
~Note : Can only Be taught by Nocturnal.
~Note : Using this Jutsu makes the User unable to move, due to constantly channeling Chakra. This will cause the user to be exhausted from chakra overuse.
~Note : Jutsu can Only be Used once.
~Note : The coil stays on the field for 3 turns.


~Approved: I've edited it~

 

[Taiketsu Yagami]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This one is a mode for the buzzards and is allowed by Migualon J.J.

(Ingram Mo-Do) Ingram Mode
Type:Mode
Rank:S
Range:All
Chakra:-20 each turn its maintained
Damage Points:N/A (+10 to ninjutsu and +5 to Taijutsu)
Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user that is inbued with the special chakra of Ingram and fuses with the user's own chakra. It grants the user immense speed aswell as a sturdy defense of being able to block incoming things besides jutsu and explosives.Due to their fused chakra, jutsu based off chakra are enhanced and due to the armor, physical attacks are more powerful by releasing small burst of chakra through the armor.
Note:Last 3 turns
Note:+5 levels to the user's speed
Note:After deactivation the user is limited to B-rank and lower jutsu for 2 turns
Note:Can be activated twice but it must be a 5 turn interval after deactivation

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Declined, what is this ingram chakra ?

All this is allowed by Mig J.J. Quicksilver as he is too lazy to do this himself xd

(Ingram Mo-Do) Ingram Mode
Type:Mode
Rank:S
Range:All
Chakra:-20 each turn its maintained
Damage Points:N/A (+10 to nin/taijutsu)
Description: Shinobi who have signed the buzzard contract and are capable of summoning Storm Skyress get a special seal on their right shoulder. When this seal is released, a special armor is summoned onto the user that was forged in the buzzard realm with a special alloy built for speed and defense that is also inbued with the chakra of the Buzzard Ingram, Storm Skyress' daughter and fuses with the user's own chakra. It grants the user immense speed aswell as a sturdy defense of being able to block incoming things besides jutsu and explosives. Due to their fused chakra, jutsu in need of chakra are enhanced and due to the armor and speed, physical attacks are more powerful.
Note:Last 3 turns
Note:+5 levels to the user's speed
Note:After deactivation the user is limited to B-rank and lower jutsu for 2 turns
Note:Can be activated twice but it must be a 5 turn interval after deactivation

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~Declined: You need to elaborate a LOT more on your abilities if you want to get this one approved. "Great speed", "great strength", "being able to block jutsu and kunai...etc", this is all so vague. What are the limits of your technique? Make it restricted cause modes are really hard to get approve~

Im not familiar with submitting forms of taijutsu so please help me out if I do something wrong.

(Buzzard Sentou) Buzzard Combat

Description: Those who sign a contract with the buzzards are taught a special form of nin/taijutsu by Blaziken "The Combat Buzzard" in the buzzard realm. This form of nin/taijutsu is a special way of incorporating the fire element into the users battle style without hurting the user while doing it. Most of the techniques are wild and free such as fire itself and are just as destructive. The user learns this style of fighting by first being a master of the fire element. The next step is being able to release fire chakra through other areas other than the user's mouth. Once those steps are completed, the user is trained to release burst of fire through their limbs as they fight, making there attacks all that more destructive. (This fighting style is possible by releasing fire chakra through the very small holes in the skin that cant be seen by the naked eye which takes expert chakra control and causing it to ignite. The fire is special as the user is unaffected by the fire he/she releases due the training in buzzard realm, but can still be hurt by outside fire.) U can tell because the fire takes on more of an Orange-yellow hue than normal fire attacks.

Here are justu if it is approved:

(Buzzard Sentou: Kaen Handou) Buzzard Combat: Blaze Kick
Rank:C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage Points:30
Description: The user will perform a powerful kick and the second the user's foot makes contact, it will ignite releasing a small burst of fire dealing extra damage and sending them back.

(Buzzard Sentou: Kaen Sentou) Buzzard Combat: Blaze Combat
Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra:25
Damage Points:40
Description: The user will perform 10 consecutive hits of either fast paced punches, kicks, etc. while releasing small burst of fire with each hit.

(Buzzard Sentou: Kaen Nami) Buzzard Combat: Blaze Wave
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user will do a form of break dance (The user will get low, making a barrage of kicks while standing on his hands or laying on his back) that will kick multiple targets surrounding him at once. As he does the maneuver, he will release fire through his feet in a wave, incinerating everyone around him.
Note:Usable 3 times

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~All declined: combining elements with taijutsu as been done countless times. Either come up with something different of drop this taijutsu style~

 

[Alucard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Takamagahara) ~ High Plain of Heaven

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
Damage Points: -
Description: This weapon consists solely on the hilt and guard of a katana. As soon as the user ''unsheaths'' it from the scabbard, he immediately flows his chakra trough the hilt and shapes it like a katana, making it seem the user is unsheathing a blade made of chakra. This weapon has two unique abilities:

• The first is that it is intangible, meaning it can pass trough matter and won't be able to cut or do any kind of physical damage to the opponent, however, the opponent won't be able to know that just by looking at the sword (unless he possesses dojutsu).
• The other one is that when when it passes trough a living organism, it disturbs its chakra flow by hitting the tenketsu points on the chakra pathway system.

This sword was specifically made to do internal damage instead of physical damage in order to neutralize the opponent. This way the user could end a fight in a ''delicate'' manner, without spilling blood everywhere.

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~Declined~ makes no sense as hurting the chakra points is still physical damage and it's contradictory to say it would pass through matter, but actually does such damage as you make a sword out of chakra, whick only possible if it's higely condensed and thus more or less physical. If it's not that the amount of chakra is just so low that it wouldn't damage anyone.

(Takamagahara: Hiketsu) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Rejection

Spoiler

Rank: A or S
Type: Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: A-rank (30); S-rank (40)
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will point Takamagahara towards an incoming technique. Then using the sword's ability to disturb chakra, will flow his chakra trough the sword in form of a pulse. As soon as the pulse reaches the tip of the sword, it will be sent forwards to collide with an incoming technique, dispersing its chakra and thus neutralizing it. It can defend from techniques up to S-rank and only one per usage.
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*A-rank is usable two times per battle on techniques up to S-rank
*S-rank can only be used once per battle and can stop a forbidden rank technique.
*Requires Takamagahara to use

(Takamagahara: Heiwashugi) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Pacifism

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using Takamagahara's ability to disrupt the chakra system, the user will perform a vertical slash with it, from the opponent's head to below it's stomach. This slash attacks directly the opponent's chakra flow, being able to stop it completely. If successful, it stops one's chakra flow two turns after being hit by this technique. An external source of chakra can re-activate the flow of chakra.
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*Usable three times per battle
*Gap of one turn between usage
*Requires Takamagahara to use
*Based in (Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault

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(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

(Takamagahara Kinjutsu: Kaginoborizaka) ~ High Plain of Heaven Forbidden Technique: Key to Ascension

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will first build up a great amount of chakra in Takamagahara and will stab it on the opponent or on himself, aiming for one of the Eight Inner Gates. By disturbing one's chakra flow on that point, the user and Takamagahara force the respective gate to open.
One can either use this technique on himself or on the opponent. When done, whoever was forced to open a gate, will temporarily gain access to it during one turn, however there is a disadvantage to that: after the gates' effects wear off, on the next turn, their after-effects will be felt increased many times.
The after-effect of the gate which was opened will be equal to the gate two levels above (4th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as the 6th gate; 6th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as if the 8th gate was opened: death.). If the 7th or 8th Gates were to be open with this method, one will have his Chakra Pathway System completely destroyed and will possibly die, without even being able to access it's powers, meaning it is completely useless for the user to try and open the last two gates if he doesn't know how to do it normally. Everything listed above will only happen if used on someone who can't control the Gates. If used on a Gates user, he will be able to control it normally, like if he had opened it himself.
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*Requires Takamagahara to use
*Usable once per battle
*No techniques based on Takamagahara next turn
*If the user uses this on himself, he will get +5 per opened Gate

~All declined~ as the sword isn't approved.

PS: if the sword is only a hilt and guard, how the hell are you going to place it in a scabbard as the only part of a sword that's in a scabbard is the blade?

Details, details >_>

(Takamagahara) ~ High Plain of Heaven

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn)
Damage Points: -
Description: This weapon consists on a sword with a very small blade, like if it was broken so that it can be held on its scabbard. As soon as the user unsheaths it from the scabbard, he immediately flows his chakra, that consists almost entirely of spiritual energy trough the small blade, increasing its size and shaping it like a katana, making it seem the user is unsheathing a blade made of chakra or energy. This created blade mostly composed by spiritual energy has two unique abilities:

• The first is that it is intangible because it consists almost entirely of spiritual energy (similar to the worm-like creatures released by Tayuya's Doki), meaning it can pass trough matter and won't be able to cut the opponent, however, the opponent won't be able to know that just by looking at the sword (unless he possesses dojutsu).
• The other one is that when the blade made of spiritual energy passes trough a living organism or a mass of chakra, it disturbs the chakra flow. If it passes trough a living organism, it will mess with the tenketsu points on the chakra pathway system. If it passes trough a mass of chakra, it can disturb it effectively enough to disperse it or neutralize it (These ability is to be used only trough techniques hereafter created).

This sword was specifically made to do internal damage in order to neutralize the opponent. This way the user could end a fight in a ''delicate'' manner, without spilling blood everywhere.

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~Declined: Please explain to me, in details, how disturbing an elemental attack's chakra would cause it to be nullified? A wave of water rushing at you will remain a wave even after it's hit by your sword, it doesn't need to be structured. You sword claim to have abilities that work on everything, which it don't. Either change it's description (actually making it like tayuya; either chakra. This way you could reduce the size of incoming attacks), or do something completely different~

(Takamagahara: Hiketsu) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Rejection

Spoiler

Rank: A or S
Type: Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: A-rank (30); S-rank (40)
Damage Points: -
Description: The user will point Takamagahara towards an incoming technique. Then using the sword's ability to disturb chakra, will flow his chakra trough the sword in form of a pulse. As soon as the pulse reaches the tip of the sword, it will be sent forwards to collide with an incoming technique, dispersing its chakra and thus neutralizing it. It can defend from techniques up to S-rank and only one per usage.
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*A-rank is usable two times per battle on techniques up to S-rank
*S-rank can only be used once per battle and can stop a forbidden rank technique.
*Requires Takamagahara to use

~Declined: OP. Either work on the restrictions or don't resubmit. A-rank to destroy S-rank? It's like your saying your sword is the elemental weakness of every element~


(Takamagahara: Heiwashugi) ~ High Plain of Heaven: Pacifism

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using Takamagahara's ability to disrupt the chakra system, the user will perform a vertical slash with it, from the opponent's head to below it's stomach. This slash attacks directly the opponent's chakra flow, being able to stop it completely. If successful, it stops one's chakra flow two turns after being hit by this technique. An external source of chakra can re-activate the flow of chakra.
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*Usable three times per battle
*Gap of one turn between usage
*Requires Takamagahara to use
*Based in (Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault

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(Zessho Hachimon Hougeki) - 8 Gates Assault
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Attack on the 8 gates them self that stops flow of chakra completely for two turns after the opponent is hit by it.

~Declined: The fact that it disrupt the chakra flow for two turns bother me, but not as much as the "unclear" part of your custom. What's the range of the sword? Does it need to make contact with the target? How much chakra does it take to re-activate it?~

(Takamagahara Kinjutsu: Kaginoborizaka) ~ High Plain of Heaven Forbidden Technique: Key to Ascension

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will first build up a great amount of chakra in Takamagahara and will stab it on the opponent or on himself, aiming for one of the Eight Inner Gates. By disturbing one's chakra flow on that point, the user and Takamagahara force the respective gate to open.
One can either use this technique on himself or on the opponent. When done, whoever was forced to open a gate, will temporarily gain access to it during one turn, however there is a disadvantage to that: after the gates' effects wear off, on the next turn, their after-effects will be felt increased many times.
The after-effect of the gate which was opened will be equal to the gate two levels above (4th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as the 6th gate; 6th Gate opened, after-effect will be the same as if the 8th gate was opened: death.). If the 7th or 8th Gates were to be open with this method, one will have his Chakra Pathway System completely destroyed and will possibly die, without even being able to access it's powers, meaning it is completely useless for the user to try and open the last two gates if he doesn't know how to do it normally. Everything listed above will only happen if used on someone who can't control the Gates. If used on a Gates user, he will be able to control it normally, like if he had opened it himself.
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*Requires Takamagahara to use
*Usable once per battle
*No techniques based on Takamagahara next turn
*If the user uses this on himself, he will get +5 per opened Gate

~Declined: Resubmit it when your sword is approved~

 

[Sharingdork]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Jiton: Gōrudenkunai) Magnetism Release: Golden Kunai
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Fourth Kazekage will use his Magnetism Release to collect gold dust and form it into a kunai shape, which can then be used as a regular kunai. When this kunai is thrown, the user will form the Ram handseal, causing the gold dust to reverse it's magnetic effects on each other, making the kunai disperse into a cloud of gold dust surrounding the target. If any particle of the gold dust touches the target, they become magnetised.
Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bio's
~Collecting the gold dust to form the kunai doesn't require handseals; like Gaara using sand
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

(Jishaku Ninpou: Ribingumagunetto) Magnetic Ninja Art: Living Magnet
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: (User)Short-Long (Target)Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After magnetising the target, the user will then form the required handseals, and all pre-existing magnetic material (kunai, shuriken, gold dust, iron sand, ect.) within range of the target will be drawn to them at great speeds, ninja weapons piercing the target, and sticking, and magnetic dust/sand forms puncture the skin at high speeds multiple times (as many grains of dust/sand are used for jutsu).
Note: ~If the user is in the way of a magnitised object, they will be hit
~Only pre-existing objects will be drawn towards the target (ie. gold dust left from a jutsu, or a thrown shuriken)
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

~Both declined~ gold dust and magnetizing are two independent skills, otherwise ever Jinton user in the manga would use Iron Sand, Gold Dust etc. So don't start saying you use gold dust to magnetize your opponent. So just magnetizing your opponent doesn't mean it's going to attract both Gold Dust and Iron Sand, not to mention unless you already collected some, it's not going to crawl out of the ground and you don't have a 3rd Kazekage bio, so you can't use Iron Sand either way.

(Jiton: Ōgon no Zō) Magnetism Release: Golden Statue
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After magnitising the target, the user will form the required handseals and cause golden dust to collect on the surface of the target. The golden dust will then become denser and form a solid object (simmilar to Gaara`s Ultimately Hard Absolute Defence: Shield of Shukaku), making it so the target can`t move. While in this state, lightning can be conducted through the gold to make it more deadly, and A-rank and above fire can melt the gold, causing severe burns all over the targets body.
Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bios
~If weapons are covered with the technique, they gain +10 attack
~Can only bind an opponent for 1 turn
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

(Jiton: Ōgon no Yoroi) Magnetism Release: Golden Armor
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+15 to physical attacks)
Description: The user covers themselves with a layer of gold dust. This gold dust provides a defence against A-rank and below attacks, and thrown projectiles. However, this jutsu makes the user highly vunerable to lightning attacks (being conducted through the gold) and S-rank and above fire jutsu (melting the gold onto the user`s body). The user can send their gold dust in front of them at any point in the battle (while the armor is active), and create a shield to conduct up to A-rank lightning away from the user, or to defend against up to S-rank fire (melting the shield before reaching the user). The user can also reverse his magnetic field, sending the gold dust flying at high speeds in every direction (can harm the opponent if in short-range).
Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bios
~The shield and reversing magnetic field counts as one of the three jutsu per turn
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

~Both declined~ these are practically Gaara's sand jutsu's, only changed into gold dust instead of sand.

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(Jiton: Gōrudenkunai) Magnetism Release: Golden Kunai
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The Fourth Kazekage will use his Magnetism Release to collect gold dust and form it into a kunai shape, which can then be used as a regular kunai. When this kunai is thrown, the user will form the Ram handseal, causing the gold dust to reverse it's magnetic effects on each other, making the kunai disperse into a cloud of gold dust surrounding the target. The user will then form the Snake handseal, and the gold dust particles will once again change polarities, and become attracted to each other, impaling the target with thousands of needle-like gold dust particles.
Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bio's
~Collecting the gold dust to form the kunai doesn't require handseals
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

(Jishaku Ninpou: Ribingumagunetto) Magnetic Ninja Art: Living Magnet
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: (User)Short-Long (Target)Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn it's active)
Damage Points: 80 (+5 to all metal weapons)
Description: After magnetising the target, the user will then form the required handseals, and all pre-existing metalic material (kunai, shuriken, ect.) within range of the target will be drawn to them at great speeds, piercing the target, and sticking in the targets body. All weapons thrown by the target will be drawn back to the target at great speeds.
Note: ~If the user is in the way of a magnitised object, they will be hit
~Only lasts for up to 3 turns
~Only pre-existing objects will be drawn towards the target (ie. a thrown shuriken)
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

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(Jiton: Ōgon no Yarinage) Magnetism Release: Golden Javelin
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The Fourth Kazekage creates a javelin out of gold dust in his hand. Then, he opens his hand, releasing magnetic chakra to propel the javelin at high speeds towards the target. Just as the javelin reaches the target, the user forms the Horse handseal, causing the gold dust particles in the javelin to separate, still traveling in the same direction. The fast-moving gold dust particles cut at the target like needles, though only doing minor scratches along the flesh. Then, the user forms the Snake handseal, and the gold dust reforms into a javelin behind the target. The gold dust is drawn back towards the user, piercing the target from behind.
Note: ~Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage bios
~Counts as two moves for the turn
~Can only be taught by Sharingdork

~All declined: they are either OP, unrestricted or both. Work on those because right now they're unacceptable~

 

[Bhil]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Onyx Foot Style - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu)
Description: The Onyx Foot Style is a unique use of taijutsu developed by a taijutsu ninja who was also a great chef , this was developed to allow the cook to fight effectively without the possibility of damaging his hands , a cooks prized possession. Due to this practitioners of this style have been noted to give off a relaxed image during the fight by usually either putting their hands in their pockets or folding their arms , the only time a practitioner of this style will use their hands is to prop themselves to use a wider array of kicks. As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill make it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing the user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries , though the use of momentum they can use the continuous combos for a lesser cost of energy but must end the combos after a certain amount of time.



Onyx Foot Style - Neck Meat - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu - Collier)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: This attack that the user executes from standing , placing their hands in their pockets they will deliver a powerful kick directly to the opponents neck. This is achieved with very little back lift which is surprising , the users foot will come in a roundhouse fashion sweeping from the side to attempt to damage the opponents neck. This is all done from a casual standing position with no indication of an attack.


Onyx Foot Style - Shoulder Meat - (Onikisu Ashi Sensu - Epoule)
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: This attack is used for a standing position much like Collier , this though is a forceful kick directed straight down with the heel. This axe kick as given away by the name is intended to hit the enemy on top of their shoulder , the idea behind this is an attempt t either knock the opponent off balance , or send them crashing into the floor with the force driving them down on that side taking them off their feet.

~All approved~

 

[The_Empire]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

-Name: Stance of Crime (Sutansu Zaigou)
Description: The user turns their body to the side and leans back. The user right arm is pointed up towards the sky while their left arm is pointed down. The user strikes are powerful and fast. This stance can be used with kunais or katanas. The strikes can only be dodge by true taijutsu master specialist/masters and not those who learned Kaito`s tai and Izuna`s ken but the ones who use taijutsu/kenjutsu 24/7. Also sharingan and rinnegan can dodge the strikes too.

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-Stance of Crime: Lightning Punches (Sutansu Zaigou: Raikou Panchi)
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user stands in the Stance of Crime and charges their fists up with lightning chakra. Lightning flickers around their hands. The user punches their opponent with five strikes to their chest with a final strike to the opponent`s face numbing their face for one turn.
-Only used three times per battle

-Stance of Crime: Lightning Slashes (Sutansu Zaigou: Raikou Slashes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user stands in the Stance of Crime with one katana in each hand. The user focus lightning chakra through their katana making lightning flicker around the blade. The user unleashes five fast and powerful slashes to the opponent`s torso area. Then finally does a horizonal slash with the katana in their right hand to the opponent`s head and a vertical slash with the katana in their left hand to the opponent`s waist. They happen at the same time.
-Only used three times per battle.

~Both declined: I have no problem with your actual jutsus, but the description above makes them unacceptable. Look at the bold part. These are Kenjutsu and Taijutsu and hence can be avoided and blocked with the correct technique. Doesn't need to be the master taijutsu to do so.~

-Madness Release (Kichigal)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: This release is a unique move for Solf J.Kimblee(look in sig). The user unleashes all their rage and madness. During this release the user Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Dark Release, Lightning and Fire jutsus are powered up. But the user can`t use anything else besides these things but can also still use Ninjutsu but without powered up. The user eyes are pitch black and a black flame/aura(not a real flame but like DBZ characters). The user speed increases by 2 levels.
-Only used once per battle
-(+20) to damage Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Dark Release, Lightning and Fire.
-(+10) to chakra Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, Dark Release, Lightning and Fire.
-No Earth, Water, Wind, Kinjutsu, Sealing and Genjutsu during this release.
-Last for five turns
-After the release is over the user is only left with 10 chakra points and speed and power is genin.

~Declined: OP~

 

[Fomo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: {OmnFuuinjutsu: Renkinjutsu Kujo} Yin Sealing Technique- Alchemy Seal Pt. 1: Destruction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 110
Damage Points: 90
Description: A seal compose of the runes on the user’s right arm. What is written is an intricate and arcane Transmutation Array tattoo. Because its a non-cyclical nature of transmutation arrays, it only stops at the Deconstruction phrase of Alchemy which means the seal only emphases the destruction. This seal itself is a conduit which focuses on the flow of the user's Yin as well following principles: suiton and doton chakra affinities. How it is done is by the user forming a Seal of Destruction hand sign via the arm free of the seal, and then afterwards the user grabs, touches, palm strike, and etc the target insight. Once contact has been made, the technique begins to manipulate the target's yin by injecting theirs, thus throwing its very basic foundation or existence into a flux of abnormality/unbalance. Hench, its self destruction. The size of an object is relevant since this seal is only existent on one arm, so the user is capable of destroying sizes comparable to a halved Doton: Yama Eikyō with an one jutsu turn. Anything bigger, will take two jutsu turns.
~ Earth/Material of S Rank quality and below lose to this jutsu.
~ Elements evading the use of Doton chakra/escape this jutsu.
~ By destroy, the targets will only reduce to a formless debris
~ Because only Yin was used, the user is subjected to focusing their next turn on only respective principles: suiton, doton, and fuuton. Or, the user can decide to fix their imbalance and use Yang.
~ Using this technique more then twice would have the seal forcefully shut down your chakra reserves.
~ Can only be used three times.

* This seal doesn't grant Yin and Yang dividing abilities. It only focuses on the yin symbolize by the user's right arm/side.

* This seal is only operable on targets the user has comprehension and understanding of the inherent structure and properties of the atomic or molecular makeup of a particular material, including the flow and balance of potential and kinetic energy within, and the ability to grasp Omnyoton. In simple terms, the user must have been trained in Omnyoton and Kinetic Energy.

* The Law of Conservation of Mass, which states that energy and matter can neither be created from nothing nor destroyed to the point of elemental nonexistence. In other words, to create an object weighing one kilogram, at least one kilogram of material is necessary and destroying an object weighing one kilogram would reduce it to a set of parts, the sum of which would weigh one kilogram.

* The Law of Natural Providence, which states that an object or material made of a particular substance or element can only be transmuted into another object with the same basic makeup and properties of that initial material. ​

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Resubmitting with a more realistic approach in the terms of Naruto universe.

Name: {YotonFuuinjutsu: Renkinjutsu Eizou} Yang Sealing Technique- Alchemy Seal Pt. 2: Construction
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 90
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A seal compose of the runes on the user’s left arm. What is written is an intricate and arcane Transmutation Array tattoo. Because its opposing non-cyclical nature of transmutation arrays, it skips the Deconstruction phrase of Alchemy which means the seal only emphases on construction. This seal itself is a conduit which focuses on the flow of the user's Yang as well following principles: katon and fire chakra affinities. How it is done is by the user forming a Seal of Destruction hand sign via the arm free of the seal, and then afterwards the user grabs, touches, palm strike, and etc the target insight. Once contact has been made, the technique begins to manipulate the target's yang by injecting theirs, thus throwing its very basic foundation or existence back into a stable flux of normality/balance. Hench, its construction. The size of an object is relevant since this seal is only existent on one arm, so the user is capable of constructing sizes comparable to a halved Doton: Yama Eikyō with an one jutsu turn. Anything bigger, will take two jutsu turns.
~ Earth/Material of S Rank quality and below lose to this jutsu.
~ Elements evading the use of Doton chakra/earth escape this jutsu.
~ By construct, the targets will only induce a form of structure.
~ Because only Yang was used, the user is subjected to focusing their next turn on only respective principles: katon and raiton. Or, the user can decide to fix their imbalance and use Yin.
~ Using this technique more then twice would have the seal forcefully shut down your chakra reserves.
~ Can only be used three times.

* This seal doesn't grant Yin and Yang dividing abilities. It only focuses on the yang symbolize by the user's left arm/side.

* This seal is only operable on targets the user has comprehension and understanding of the inherent structure and properties of the atomic or molecular makeup of a particular material, including the flow and balance of potential and kinetic energy within, and the ability to grasp Omnyoton. In simple terms, the user must have been trained in Omnyoton and Kinetic Energy. Which, especially means user can only use this jutsu on targets that are exerting energy.

* The Law of Conservation of Mass, which states that energy and matter can neither be created from nothing nor destroyed to the point of elemental nonexistence. In other words, to create an object weighing one kilogram, at least one kilogram of material is necessary and destroying an object weighing one kilogram would reduce it to a set of parts, the sum of which would weigh one kilogram.

* The Law of Natural Providence, which states that an object or material made of a particular substance or element can only be transmuted into another object with the same basic makeup and properties of that initial material.​

Name: {OmnyotonFuuinjutsu: Shin no Renkinjutsu} Yin & Yang Sealing Technique- The True Alchemy
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 90
Damage Points: 90
Description: A technique composed of both runes on the user’s right and left arms. When the user forms the hand sign, clapping of the hands, the written intricate and arcane Transmutation Array tattoos combine their non-cyclical nature thus creating forth true Alchemy. Which means the technique now emphases on destruction and construction, in that order. These seals themselves become joint conduits which focuses on the flow of the user's Yin & Yang as well following principles: suiton, katon, fuuton and doton chakra affinities. How the technique is performed is done is by the user forming hand sign via both arms composed of the seals, and then afterwards the user grabs, touches, palm strikes, and etc the target insight. Once contact has been made, the technique begins to manipulate the target's yin by injecting theirs, thus throwing its very basic foundation or existence into a flux of abnormality/unbalance. Hench, its self destruction but immediately constructing it in the desire image, thus throwing its very basic foundation or existence into a flux of normality/balance. The size of an object is relevant since this technique incorporates both arms, so the user is capable of destroying sizes comparable to a Doton: Yama Eikyō with an one jutsu turn. Anything bigger, will take two jutsu turns.
~ Earth/Material of S Rank quality and below lose to this jutsu.
~ Elements evading the use of Doton chakra escape this jutsu.
~ Can only be used twice with Onmyoton manipulation being cancelled for three turn intervals.

* This seal is only operable on targets the user has comprehension and understanding of the inherent structure and properties of the atomic or molecular makeup of a particular material, including the flow and balance of potential and kinetic energy within, and the ability to grasp Omnyoton. In simple terms, the user must have been trained in Omnyoton and Kinetic Energy.

* The Law of Conservation of Mass, which states that energy and matter can neither be created from nothing nor destroyed to the point of elemental nonexistence. In other words, to create an object weighing one kilogram, at least one kilogram of material is necessary and destroying an object weighing one kilogram would reduce it to a set of parts, the sum of which would weigh one kilogram.

* The Law of Natural Providence, which states that an object or material made of a particular substance or element can only be transmuted into another object with the same basic makeup and properties of that initial material.​

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~All declined: Honestly, how do you expect me to accept such incredibly powerful customs, when there close to no drawbacks? They're all forbidden, yet there's no restriction and you don't even respect the description of a "Forbidden" technique. Lower the abilities and strength of all those technique and work on the restrictions and drawbacks~

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Summoning Animal: Winged Lemur
Scroll Owner: Akira
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Momo
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Lemur

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Name: {Tsubasa no kitsunezaru Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Momo} Winged Lemur Summoning- Momo
Rank: S Rank
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Momo, the boss of all Lemur is equipped with large membrane-like wings attached to its arms that allow it to take flight. Its bones are presumed to be hollow like birds', which makes the lemur very lightweight and accessible to speeds that match the first gate. It has a prominently black face, with two proportionately large green eyes, and its fur is mostly white with several black stripes, although other color markings can be seen. Momo has two very wide and large ears on its head that give it fantastic hearing. These characteristics make the creature particularly difficult to catch, as it is quick and agile. The lemur seems to have a very acute sense of smell, as it is able to detect scents from a long range. All these qualities making Momo the best hunting ninja; maybe his cuteness too. Momo is small in size, being able to sit on his caster's shoulders, however that doesn't take away from his deadliness. Momo is far capable of employing drastic fuuton based techniques as well other secret techniques yet to be shown.
* Lacks the ability to speak, however he can communicate through chakra inscription. O_O
* He is extremely cute, but picky and curious. Only by a miracle, Akira was able to catch Momo and gain his interest/trust

~Declined: Check all the bold part. No gates copycat, no unknown abilities (be clear), and elaborate on the chakra inscription~