a minato what if shippuden chapter 1

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i won't be able to log in for a while because of a hurricane just a heads up

konohamaru: i'm tired of these lame mission's

minato: ( he is to much like naruto really) well i'm sorry but you 3 are new genin and your scroes where the lowest in your class.

iruka: reminds you of naruto huh?

minato: yup speaking of which he should be returning soon.

iruka:yeah it's been 3 years since he left.

meanwhile...

naruto: the village hasn't changed at all!

j man: your right.

naruto jumps up on that poll jumps down sakura and konohamaru see him sakura and konohamaru say hi cacth up.

konohamaru: sexy jutsu.

naruto: *drolling*

sakura hits naruto over the head.

jman: * drolling even more the naruto was *

blah blah blah there's no action here lets skip ahead to when naruto see's shikamaru and he tells him how he"s the only genin.

shikamaru: naruto what are you going to do about the exams?

naruto: why?

shikamaru: your the only genin in our year every one else is a chuunin already.

naruto: WHAT!

shikamaru: and neji kankuro and temari are all jounin.

naruto: what about gaara what's he?

shikamaru: you see um...

naruto:???

mean while...

sand jounin: lord kazekage the meeting is about to begin.

???: under stood.

he turns around to revealthat it's gaara he walks with the sand jounin into the confressnce room.

later at the ramen shop ( in konoha)

naruto: every one's chuunin and i'm still a genin.

iruka: don't get hung up on rank naruto you've gotten alot stronger you where trained by one of the 3 lengedary ninja that counts for a lt more.

naruto: yeah i know.

back at the hidden sand village.

two figures are walking towards the village.

sasori: are you sure you want to go alone deidara?

deidara: i've got my sercet weapon with me just relax sasori my man.

deideara makes a gaint clay bird and gets on it.

deidara: what do you think of my artic creation hm?

sasori: just don't keep me waiting.

deideara flies off he notices the 3 gaurd wcthing the village's sky he drops 3 clay spiders.

sand jounin: what's that werid thing.

deidara: it's not weird it's art and art is *does the hand seal* AN EXPLOSION!

the 3 gaurds blow up.

deidaralands on the kazekage's roof.

deidara: and i'm in.

gaara stands in front of deidara.

deidara: guess the stealth mission failed well atleast i don't have to hunt for you anymore.

gaara: that cloak your one of the akatsuki aren't you?

deidara: how did you find me hm?

gaara: there are no birds like that in this village.

gaaras sand rushs out and almost hits him deidara jumps onto his clay bird and and starts flying into the sky he turns to face gaara.

listen to this while reading ( whacth it if you want it's gaara vs deidara in a video game)



deidara flies forwrad and throws a cay bird at him garra brings a wall of sand up in front of him blocking the blast the sand starts to surrond deidara deidara flies up the sand surronds the bird deidara jumps off and makes another he jumps onto it he throws 6 clay birds at gaara gaara jumps monto a cloud of sand and flies up he places his defence around him w large amount of sand flies towards deidara deidara tries to dodge it but after a while the sand garbs ahold of deidara's arm.

gaara: sand coffin.

deidara: AH!

deidara's arm is ripped off and blood comes flying out of his arm deidara is then surronded by a large amount of sand deidara explodes his clay bird making an opening in the sand he jumps out the sand starts to curmble and fall own on him it surronds him once more and garbs ahold of his ankle deidara makes a ginat clay bird and jumps on he starts to fly up and up till the sand can't go any further.,

deidara: must be a limit to how much sand he has ( that gourd must hold all of it.) i've gotten tired of the face let me show you my real art.

deidara: you did good but this is it for you and the whole village.

deidara throws his clay doll down upon the village.

gaara: ( NO!)

deidara: your to late. art is AN EXPLOSION!

a large explosion happens but gaara manged to make a gaint shiled to protect the village.

sand nin: lord kazekage!

other sand nin: wow what a large shiled.

kankuro: gaara would never put the village at risk not ever.

gaara: one day i would like to be important to other people to and not as some weapon of terror but as kazekage.


deidara: blocking that is amzeing.

the sand below starts to form the shukakus head and the mouth opens.

deidara: crap better gaion some distance.

the head starts to gather chakra in the form of a ball ( btw i stole this from a game) and relases alarge blast

deidara: oh no! the blast hits deidara and a large explosion happens the remianing sand form into a sphere around deidara flying body.

gaara: desert desction.

the sand becomes a small little ball crushing deidara then explodes the remainining parts of deidara fall.

gaara: a bunshin?

deidara: your wide open!

deidara appears behind garra and throws and explosive gaara brings some sand up and blocks it another deidara appears in front of gaara and throws one gaara puts his whole defence around him self.

deidara: you fell for it.

gaara: no!

deidara: art is AN EXPLOSION!

a large explosion takes place destorying gaaras defence gaara starts to fall but with the last of his power he moves all the sand over to out side the village.deidara cacths gaaras body and starts to fly off.


listen to the music

deidara: mission complete.

sasori: darn that deidara he just had to make a circus out of it.

kankuro: gaara!

baki: kankuro where are you going.

kankro: i'm going to get gaara back!

baki: fine but you are nnot to engage them in battle till reenforcements come got it!

kankuro: i can't make promises.

kankuro starts to jumps forward he takes out crow and make himy up to deidara crow shows a balde covered in pison and tries to srike deidara with it. deidara dodges it then kicks his puppet down to the ground deidara makes it out of the village.

sasori: i though i told you to not keep me waiting!

they start to walk off the papaer bombs go off and kankuro is almost hit with them kankuro jumps out and starts to look around he see's gaaras sand he starts to follow the trail.

sasori: i didn't think it was possable but it appears we've been followed.

kankuro: i'm taking gaara back.

sasori: deidara leave! your in the way.

kankuro: not so fast!

kankuro takes out all 3 puppets and sends crow at deidara sasori's taiul caths crow.

sasori: the spider has to be as fast as the fly. i don't like to wait or keep other waiting so i'm going to make this short.

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Nice job with this chapter, I didn't know you were actually going to call this a Minato what if shippuden, I was joking when I said that on your last one lol.

Anyway, I couldn't help but notice you mentioned a Hurricane, you're not talking about Hurricane Irene are you? If so where do you live because I'm supposed to get the same one, around Saturday.

Good chapter.
 

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Nice job with this chapter, I didn't know you were actually going to call this a Minato what if shippuden, I was joking when I said that on your last one lol.

Anyway, I couldn't help but notice you mentioned a Hurricane, you're not talking about Hurricane Irene are you? If so where do you live because I'm supposed to get the same one, around Saturday.

Good chapter.
estell manor it's near atlantic city
 

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Actually a pretty good story that manages to conform well to the real Shippuden story. Oh and I'm in central new york so I probably won't get it!
 
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