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you have a great talent, but i don't think this is your best drawing. =/ just compare her eyes they should be more alike, her right face a little too angled and don't skip her hair like that >.< your shading is perfect if you use it on her hair too and correct these little mistakes then it'll be perfect. right now it's just very good. :p
 

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haha yea sure My stick figures rock lol . :D
awsomeee xd

you have a great talent, but i don't think this is your best drawing. =/ just compare her eyes they should be more alike, her right face a little too angled and don't skip her hair like that >.< your shading is perfect if you use it on her hair too and correct these little mistakes then it'll be perfect. right now it's just very good. :p
ill give that a go sometime :) thanks for the help rep+ (for being the only one to help) xd

Your missing something ._.
what am i missing :T_T: ?
 

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this is it. only her right eye a little weird now. if you can give her eyelashes' a little bit more bow/arc(or how do you call it in english -.-") then you can say it's finished and perfect. :D

i mean something like this. i'm not sure it needs this much just a little. erm and sorry for ruining the pic xD
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