me vs rakurai

Aomine Daiki

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Reis R&R
No Killing/stealing¨
No CE
No CJ

place:forest

u make the first move

i use my patch cipriano bio
 

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using shino
*i start by shooting a ball of lightning at you*
(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.

then, i send my bugs under you. they then swarm around you and begin sucking your chakra

(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
 

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takes cover behind a tree and uses

clone jutsu(bunshin no jutsu)
E rank
type:supplementary
range:short
chakra kost:5
description:a clone that is made by the user that can move(not use jutsu)this clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user

u cant se me use the jutsu so the real me sneaks to a tree 5-m behind u and gathers my chakra meanvile my clone throws four shurikens at u
 

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all right then il counter it with



(Katon: Komakai Kaki) - Fire Style: Small fire
Rank: D
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user spews a small fireball

i spew that on your lightning maybe the lightning is stronger but still it gives me some seconds to hide*hides behind a tree and uses

clone jutsu(bunshin no jutsu)
E rank
type:supplementary
range:short
chakra kost:5
description:a clone that is made by the user that can move(not use jutsu)this clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user

u cant se me use the jutsu so the real me sneaks to a tree 5-m behind u and gathers my chakra meanvile my clone throws four shurikens at u
 

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so the real me has his sword with chakra inhailed in it prepaired for battle and in a coupple of seconds he jumps up behind u and cuts of both of your hands so u cant use any jutsu and then he stabs u in ur stumach and ure finishd(not dead)i mean u lose
 

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*as you come racing towards me with your sword, my bugs attack you and begin sucking on your chakra*

kinda hasty, arent you? even if i cant see you sneaking up on me, my bugs can.

(Hijutsu: Mushidama) - Secret Technique: Insect Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By using the destruction bugs, members of the Aburame clan surround their opponent with thousands of bugs, making a globe of bugs around the opponent beforehand to completely trap them. Once trapped, the bugs would normally drain the chakra and swallow their victim. The bugs covering the victims body prevent movement, but if they escape, the bugs will follow them.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
 

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You guys are doing so many things wrong... 0.o

Clone's can't throw shuriken, they're images created by chakra, they have no physical body... They can't do jutsu or throw actual shuriken. You can't just dodge a move, you have to block it. You can evade by using jutsu but in this case you didn't.

Small Fire jutsu doesn't defend from Lightning ball as it would jutsu travel through the fire and shock you, it doesn't slow down his jutsu like you said it would and the Lightning would travel through the tree shocking you... You can't evade a jutsu, book it.
 
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You guys are doing so many things wrong... 0.o

Clone's can't throw shuriken, they're images created by chakra, they have no physical body... They can't do jutsu or throw actual shuriken. You can't just dodge a move, you have to block it. You can evade by using jutsu but in this case you didn't.

Small Fire jutsu doesn't defend from Lightning ball as it would jutsu travel through the fire and shock you, it doesn't slow down his jutsu like you said it would and the Lightning would travel through the tree shocking you... You can't evade a jutsu, book it.
What he said... You have to add more description of your moves. You can't say that (in this case it didn't even count) that your clone throws shuriken and the next move you say that it stepped aside and then hided again...
You have to say it like this:
As my clone stands behind a tree, it steps aside and throws X shurikens at you. Immediatly after he has thrown the shurikens, he hides behind thee tree again.

Just add more description in one turn, instead of explaining what you did in 2 seperated posts...
 

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*as you come racing towards me with your sword, my bugs attack you and begin sucking on your chakra*

kinda hasty, arent you? even if i cant see you sneaking up on me, my bugs can.

(Hijutsu: Mushidama) - Secret Technique: Insect Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: By using the destruction bugs, members of the Aburame clan surround their opponent with thousands of bugs, making a globe of bugs around the opponent beforehand to completely trap them. Once trapped, the bugs would normally drain the chakra and swallow their victim. The bugs covering the victims body prevent movement, but if they escape, the bugs will follow them.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.
so im coverd by your bugs and i use

(Katon: Kasumi Endu no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Mist Covering Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user is able to create and blow a flammable gas from their lungs. Once it comes in contact with fire or sparks, the gas ignites into a large fireball.

on the ground and the gas is all around me so i pick up my lighter and light it your buggs gets burnd and falls on the ground but not me cuz youre buggs shielded my body and again i run toward u with my chakra inhailded sword and cuts of your hands u cant use jutsu now and then stab u in the stumach
 

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*i block and punch away the spear with my sword with chakra inhailed in it and now i stand in front of you so i stab you in the stumach very fast almost impossible to dodge cuz i stand so close to you and i stab you very fast so u lose *
 

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Spear? WTH You don't has a sword... Need Kenjutsu to know how to use a sword. To infuse chakra, you need to learn the element, Raiton or Fuuton. In you move with covering the bugs and using mist covering, you burned yourself because you're in the fire. You lost right there O__O Bugs don't shield you from fire O__O
 
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