Bleach: The Lost Order Episode 10

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The standard canon Captains of Bleach have betrayed their comrades, the NarutoBase Captains, by planning to invade and take over the Human World! The NarutoBase Captains, joining forces with the Hollows, have returned to Soul Society, attacking the invasion force of the canon Captains head-on!

Bleach: The Lost Order
Episode 10: The Beginning of the End

Ex-Captains Ragnaroc, Roku, Kaze, and Emperor, accompanied by Arrancar Goro faced down Captains Yammamoto, Shunsui, Hitsugaya, Ukitake, and Komamura atop the Seireitei Hill.

Each of them had drawn their Zanpakuto, staring down their respected enemy. The wind lightly rustled their cloaks, the air dense with their concentration. The noise of the huge Shinigami/Hollow battle below was of no importance to them. The ground beneath Yammamoto's feet was lightly dampened by the blood dripping from the stump where his index finger, until it was cut off by Ragnaroc, used to be.

This time, Shunsui was the first to move. He flash stepped into the air above Roku. Roku flash stepped up to meet him, and the two locked swords, their reiatsu crackling as they made contact. Captain Ukitake suddenly appeared above both of them, blue reiatsu covering his hands.


Ukitake: Hadou 63 - Souren Souketsui

Ukitake shot forth two incredibly huge blasts of blue fire at Roku.

Roku: Emp!

Roku pushed off from Shunsui, sending both of them flying back, just as the Kido spell passed their previous location.

Just when the spell hit the ground, creating a huge explosion of high-density reiatsu that hardly phased the experienced captains, Emperor flash stepped behind Ukitake.

Emperor slashed downwards at his target. Ukitake flash stepped out of the way just in time to the right of Emperor, countering his attack with a slash of his own. The two locked swords and proceeded to attack each other with a flurry of slashes and flash steps, their speed and strength more or less equal. Ukitake made a horrendously quick downward slash at Emperor, which heonly barely dodged. Part of his cloak was sliced off.


Ukitake: You're getting slow, boy! I've got tuberculosis and I can still best you!

Emperor: *grits teeth*

Ukitake attacked with another downward slash. Emperor quickly side-stepped it and grabbed Ukitake's right wrist. With a burst of reiatsu, Emperor quickly momentarily immobilized Ukitake's left arm with a short kido rope.

Emperor: Bakudou 4: Hainawa

Emperor tightened his grip on Ukitake's wrist until the sound of a loud crack emanated from the bone.

Ukitake: AHHHHHH!!

Ukitake's reiatsu surged. His left arm broke free as he swung his kido-enhanced fist to attack Emperor. The punch made contact and Emperor flew backwards. Ukitake flash stepped above him and thrust him down to the ground.

Ukitake: Hadou 1: Shou!

Emperor shot down to the ground and hit the earth with explosive force, making a huge crater. Ukitake raised his finger and shot a bolt of blue, fizzling lightning at Emperor.

Ukitake: Hadou 4: Byakurai!

Emperor: *sigh*

The lightning hit the ground with extreme force, causing a gargantuan explosion. Wind from the explosion rippled the cloaks and hair of the Captains.

Ukitake: I knew that he'd die easily, but this easily? Hah. Pathetic.

Emperor appeared right behind Ukitake.

Emperor: Aren't you supposed to be the nice one?

Emperor through a massive punch at Ukitake while saying this. The punch made contact with the center of Ukitake's back and sent him flying forward.

Emperor: You're even more arrogant than I thought, Ukitake.

The sword of a huge metal giant suddenly appeared behind Emperor.

Komamura: Roar, Tenken!

Emperor turned his head around halfway and heard a static noise.

Goro sonido'd behind Emperor and held the blade of Komamura's shikai in his bare hand.


Goro: I'd say you've grown a bit arrogant yourself, Emp.

Komamura's blade faded away, as Goro sonido'd down to his opponent.

Goro: Let me guess, Sajin: you're going along with this big 'invasion plan' to finally fit in somehow, eh? Too much of a coward to convince people to accept you as you are, so you plan to force them to bow down to you as their ruler?

Komamura: *Komamura's gaze narrows* I don't need to explain myself to you, scum.

Komamura swung his blade downward once again. Goro simply sonido'd a bit to the right and avoided the strike completely, the blade crunching into the ground with explosive force.

Goro: You do realize you're completely outmatched, don't you? Not only can my hierro withstand anything your blade could do to me, I'm also faster than you!

Just as Goro finished saying this, Komamura appeared in front of him and, using the momentum of a flash step, punched him straight in the stomach. Goro was sent flying backwards, off the Seireitei Hill completely.

Emperor: What was that you were saying about arrogance? -__-'

Everything was quiet for a moment.

Goro: Cero!!

A huge, dark cero shot straight down onto Komamura, engulfing him and the area around him in a considerable amount of black reiatsu. Goro was high up above the hill, his Zanpakuto brandished and his reiatsu crackling.

Komamura emerged from the cero completely unscathed except for a few blotches on his cloak, looking up at Goro and smirking.


Komamura: You are no different from what I expected.

Komamura flash stepped up to meet his opponent, and the two clashed blades, the massive sword of Komamura's shikai easily keeping pace with Goro's Zanpakuto. Their blades locked, and a test of strength began: their physical strength was equal, and neither managed to push the other backwards.

Suddenly, Komamura's blade began to be encased in ice. The ice began to run up Goro's blade as well.


Goro: Kaze!

Hitsugaya, with his Shikai released, emerged from just behind Komamura, his hand glistening with icey reiatsu outstretched. The ice kept creeping along Goro's blade and began to move up Goro's arm, starting to freeze him in place.

Kaze flash stepped just above Komamura and Goro and slashed downwards at their locked blades, his blade heavily charged with lightning reiatsu.


Kaze: Hadou 11: Tsuzuri Raiden!

Kaze's blade, charged with lightning, easily broke through the ice connecting Komamura and Goro. Goro sonido'd back to a safe distance as Kaze surged his reiatsu, causing Komamura to be electrocuted by his attack. Komamura flash stepped backwards and stared at Goro, while Kaze and Hitsugaya locked eyes.

Kaze: You can't win this, you realize.

A clone of Hitsugaya appears behind Kaze.

Hitsugaya: I think I'm doing pretty well.

Without so much as flinching, Kaze swung his blade around in a 360 degree rotation, cutting the clone behind him in half.

Kaze: No. You're not. And neither is that little army of yours down there.

Kaze pointed down to the battle between the Shinigami and Hollow forces at the base of the hill, where the Hollows, still in a strong formation, were continuing to decimate the Shinigami. Liliana was cutting through Shinigami with no trouble at all, with her Resurreccion released and not a scratch on her.

With each swing of her sword, Liliana released a slice of wind, cutting low-ranking Shinigami in half by the dozens.


Liliana: Double Cero!

A Vasto Lorde shot a huge cero straight at Liliana, who swallowed in and released it in a more powerful form at the Shinigami in front of her.

Yammamoto: Do not worry; your puny Hollow friends will be dealt with very soon.

The ex-Captains and Goro stared at Yammamoto, sensing a truthful seriousness in his voice that put them all on edge.

Kaze restored the mood of battle by charging at Hitsugaya and attacking him with a flurry of slashes and stabs.

Hitsugaya easily parried and dodged each of Kaze's vain strikes.

Hitsugaya flash stepped behind Kaze and slashed his released Zanpakuto at his enemy, launching a huge ice dragon at Kaze with the slash.

Kaze grit his teeth and launches a wave of yellow energy at the ice dragon, reciting part of the kido's incantation.


Kaze: Hadou 63: Raikouhou. Sprinkled on the bones of the beast! Move and become the wind. The sound of warring spears fills the empty castle!

The two attacks meet. At first, their power is somewhat equal and neither one can quite overtake the other. After a moment, however, Hitsugaya's dragon consumes and overcomes the yellow kido blast, hitting Kaze head-on and sending him flying to the ground, right next to Roku and Ragnaroc.

Kaze: Gahhh!

Hitsugaya: I'd suggest you release your Shikai. At least make things a little interesting!

Roku stares at Shunsui.

Roku: He's got a point, you know. Shine Upon All Things, Kintsuki!

Roku's blade morphs into a glowing gold nodachi as he charges straight for Shunsui, who also releases his Shikai.

Shunsui: Flow Wind Rage and Flow God Roar, heavenly Wind Rage and Heavenly Demon Sneer, Katen Kyokotsu!

Shunsui's blades turn into large scimitars. Roku continues to charge at Shunsui and sends a slash of freezing, condensed reiatsu.

Roku: Getsuga!

Roku's freezing Getsuga shoots out at Shunsui, who counters it with a wind slash.

Shunsui: Bushogoma!

Shunsui's wind attacks and Roku's ice slash meet and explode, resulting in freezing ice shards shooting out everywhere.

Roku jumps over the two attacks and attacks Shunsui with a powerful downward slash. Shunsui parries the attack with both of his swords, his feet digging into the ground. With their blades locked, Shunsui speaks..


Shunsui: Let's make this a little interesting, why don't we? I'm sure you know this game: whoever has their shadow stepped on loses. Kageoni!

A shift in Shunsui's reiatsu is noticeable.

Roku: Hah. Bad move.

Roku backs off a bit and releases a crescent-slice of sun fire reiatsu from his blade. The slice of sun-fire moves just above Shunsui's head. The light from the crescent causes Shunsui to cast an extremely long shadow straight onto Roku's feet.

Shunsui: Shhhi-

Roku appears behind Shunsui, his blade poised.

Roku: Looks like you lost that one.

Roku slashes straight down Shunsui's back, creating a huge, burning gash.

Shunsui, severely wounded, flash steps to Yammamoto's side.


Roku: ...Rag? Why haven't you done anything yet?!

Ragnaroc: ...I think I'm in a staring contest.

Roku: WHAT?!

Ragnaroc: I've just been staring at Yammamoto... I haven't blinked yet. I can't tell if he's blinked, though... His eyes are so closed...

Kaze: What the hell? -_-

A silence fell upon the Seireitei Hill, as the combatants took a moment to consider what exactly was going on.

Yammamoto: ENOUGH OF THIS!!

Yammamoto's voice boomed across the entirety of Soul Society.

Yammamoto: RELEASE THE EXPERIMENTS.

The ex-Captains and Goro suddenly grew tense. All of a sudden, they felt a conglomeration of strange reiatsus that somehow seemed familiar, but were just a bit... off. They soon saw the sources of these reiatsus.

The 'experiments' moved without any noise. They didn't even seem to breath. Their ambulation seemed more like gliding than walking. They wore simple black robes, unadorned by any distinguishing characteristics. They had no faces. They had no eyes, no noses, no mouths; they were completely featureless. There were five of them. They were all the same height. In fact, the only thing that was unique about each of them was their Zanpakutos.

One wore a katana at his waist. It had a deformed hexagonal crossguard with a green handle.

One wore a katana on his back. The blade was long and had an octagonal crossguard with a black and green handle and a green tassle.

One wore a katana at his waist. It had an oval-shaped crossguard with black hilt-wrapping.

One wore a nadachi on her back. The crossguard was an oval and the handle was red.

The last wore a cleaver sword on his back. It had no proper crossguard. It was wrapped in white cloth.


Ragnaroc: No...

Roku: ...

Emperor: **** O_O

Yammamoto: Ahh, what a pleasant reunion! Gentlemen, I'm sure you recognize these five. Allow me to reintroduce you to Sosuke Aizen, Bishamon Sarutobi, Kisuke Urahara, Retsu Unohana, and, of course, Ichigo Kurosaki.

The five dark figures stood there. Motionless.

Yammamoto: Well, no sense wasting time. We do have a world to take over. Kill.

END OF CHAPTER.
 

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why revive a weakling :p

and Yes that staring contest was one of many with Yamamoto. the old fart doesn't ever blink
because this weakling can kick yo Behind ( Careful with words against a Mod ) in Rp ;) and it's a challenge. Ofc. Not Bleach Rp since it depends on the longer time you have stayed in Rp and hence you are higher in Rank. But In naruto Rp >.> I challenge you.
 
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Damn Author >.>



because this weakling can kick yo Behind ( Careful with words against a Mod ) in Rp ;) and it's a challenge. Ofc. Not Bleach Rp since it depends on the longer time you have stayed in Rp and hence you are higher in Rank. But In naruto Rp >.> I challenge you.
there are things I have to take care of first, like my custom MS abilities and some CJ's that i want to submit before i forget them
 

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Sooo amazing. I seriously laughed out loud from this chapter's random Ragnaroc joke. Awesome. And I like my character. I didn't know people still remembered my wind manipulation and double cero O_O
 

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How long have you been writing?
There's a few mistakes in this fanfics regarding the Kidou and some other minor stuff, but it's no big deal and it has very little effect on the experience of reading this.
This story was surprisingly easy to follow considering that i haven't read any other chapters of this, points to you regarding that.
I'm a bit dissapointed regarding the behavior of the captains, they seem very OC and it made me frown a couple of times. But then again, your story needs a plot and with all these powerful ex-captains, i suppose good antagonists were hard to find xd
The plot itself is easy to follow and it made me curious as to how Ichigo and the others ended up dead and resurrected.
I honestly expected Kurotsuchi, if anyone, to be the puppet-master of these experiments. Yamamoto is headstrong and prideful sometimes, but he's an honorable man and his OC behavior was the most dissapointing in this chapter.
Your general writing is good, though i dislike that you use the 'newbie' method of writing.
BishamonSama: What did you say, kid?
Zero: Yes, that one T-T
This made me want to Bleach RP, it's really sad that nobody wants to train me. It's generally sad that everybody has given up on the Bleach RP and is just fighting the enemies they've alreay fought a thousand times before. Helpt some new people, it would be kewlio! D: (Damn Roku forgot about my Kidou training <_<)
Generally a good fanfic, though it has a few mistakes that you should probably fix. A beta writer would be a great supplement to this fanfic, especially if he/she could help you make the fighting scenes more lively and longer.
 

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How long have you been writing?
There's a few mistakes in this fanfics regarding the Kidou and some other minor stuff, but it's no big deal and it has very little effect on the experience of reading this.
This story was surprisingly easy to follow considering that i haven't read any other chapters of this, points to you regarding that.
I'm a bit dissapointed regarding the behavior of the captains, they seem very OC and it made me frown a couple of times. But then again, your story needs a plot and with all these powerful ex-captains, i suppose good antagonists were hard to find xd
The plot itself is easy to follow and it made me curious as to how Ichigo and the others ended up dead and resurrected.
I honestly expected Kurotsuchi, if anyone, to be the puppet-master of these experiments. Yamamoto is headstrong and prideful sometimes, but he's an honorable man and his OC behavior was the most dissapointing in this chapter.
Your general writing is good, though i dislike that you use the 'newbie' method of writing.
BishamonSama: What did you say, kid?
Zero: Yes, that one T-T
This made me want to Bleach RP, it's really sad that nobody wants to train me. It's generally sad that everybody has given up on the Bleach RP and is just fighting the enemies they've alreay fought a thousand times before. Helpt some new people, it would be kewlio! D: (Damn Roku forgot about my Kidou training <_<)
Generally a good fanfic, though it has a few mistakes that you should probably fix. A beta writer would be a great supplement to this fanfic, especially if he/she could help you make the fighting scenes more lively and longer.
I'm sorry :T_T: I was very busy this week...

Interesting chapter again. I'm still wondering why the Captains are such haters, but meh xd

:overjoy: I kicked Shunsui's arse!
 

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I'm sorry :T_T: I was very busy this week...

Interesting chapter again. I'm still wondering why the Captains are such haters, but meh xd

:overjoy: I kicked Shunsui's arse!
It's not a problem, you are under no obligation to train me ^^
But eh, it was more than a month ago <.<
 
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