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Lines enclosed with “//” – Character’s thought.
“()” – Charcter’s expression.
If you encountered any wrong grammar, sorry in advance. English isn’t my expertise.
Story set: The 4th ninja war is over. Madara and Kabuto were defeated and Sasuke returned in Konoha. Everything is back to normal.
It was early in the morning. Naruto is in his room lie down on bed.
He had a dream last night that the great lord elder gave him another prophesy and there’s a woman beside him but he couldn’t see the woman’s face.
Naruto: //I wonder who is that woman? Is she Sakura chan? Anyway, I’m sure Fukasaku san will summon me to Mt. Myoboku//
Naruto: (get-up and look outside through the window) //Sakura chan is busy tending Sasuke’s wounds. I can’t ask her to go with me to Mt. Myoboku//
Naruto recalled the events happened during the war and before the war.
About Akatsuki, Madara, the tailed beast, his mother and father. Then suddenly, he remember Hinata saved him from Pain.
Naruto: Come to think of it, the war is over and everything is normal but I didn’t say “thank you” to Hinata when she saved me. I wonder if that girl with me is Hinata? Or maybe Ino or Ten-ten? Anyway, I have to thank Hinata since she saved me.
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Naruto is standing in front of Hyuga clan’s territory.
Naruto: I wonder if Hinata is around.
Hyuga clan member: Naruto Uzumaki?! What are you doing here?
Naruto (scratching his head): Hello! I wanted to talk to Hinata. Is she around?
Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama? Yes she’s here. Come inside.
Naruto: No, its okay. I’ll just wait here. It won’t be long.
Hyuga clan member: No, please come inside. You came all the way here. Why don’t you wait for Hinata sama inside.
Hyuga clan member is dragging Naruto inside the Hyuga’s premises.
Hyuga clan member: Neji!
Naruto: Neji!
Neji: Naruto?! Why are you here?
Naruto: I came here to talk to Hinata. There’s something I wanted to tell her.
Neji (smirking): its about time Naruto.
Naruto: Time for what?
Hyuga clan member: Anyway, I’ll leave Naruto san to you Neji. I’ll call Hinata sama.
Naruto: Neji! I didn’t expect I will see you here. I thought jounins are busy these days.
Neji: I just came home from my mission.
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Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama!
Hinata: What is it?
Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama, Naruto san is here to see you.
Hinata (blushing): Naruto kun came to see me?
Hinata’s mother: What?! Naruto is here?
Hiashi: Naruto Uzumaki? The miracle boy? The prophesy child and the hero that saves the ninja world?
Hyuga clan member: yes! He’s here to see Hinata sama.
Hinata (still blushing)://Naruto kun is here? What should I tell him?//
Hinata’s mother: Hinata! What are you doing! Go and see Naruto now.
Hinata came. Naruto is with Neji.
Hinata: (looking at the ground, pointing her both index fingers) N-Naruto kun. Good morning.
Naruto (beaming): Hinata! I just came here to tell you something.
Hinata’s mother: Naruto! I’m so glad to see you! Come inside our house and have some tea.
Naruto: No, no its okay, I just wanted to tell something to Hinata.
Hinata’s mother is dragging Naruto inside their house.
Hiashi, Hinata’s mother, Hinata’s sister, Neji, Hinata and Naruto having tea together.
Naruto: //I didn’t expect this//
Hiashi: I’m so glad you took your time to visit us Naruto. I’m Hiashi, Hinata’s father. This is Hinata’s mother and sister.
Naruto: (scratching his head and smiling silly) Hello, nice meeting you.
Hinata’s mother: you should visit us more often Naruto. You’re always welcome here.
Naruto: T-thank you!
Hiashi: Anyway, there’s something I need to do. Enjoy yourself here Naruto.
Hinata’s mother: I’ll also take my leave. I have to cook something since we
have visitor.
Hinata’s sister: Neji ni-san could you teach me new technique?
Neji: Sure, I have plenty on my sleeve.
Hinata: A-are you sure you all will leave?
Hinata’s mother: Hinata, Naruto is your visitor. you should entertain him.
The 4 of them leave Naruto and Hinata.
Hiashi: //I hope everything will be fine//
Hinata’s mother://I hope Hinata won’t get shy. We leave the two of them after all//
Neji: //Hinata sama good luck/
Hinata’s sister (stopped walking and looked at the sky): Naruto Uzumaki, he’s the son of the 4th hokage and has a bloodline of an elite clan. He has the potential to be a hokage and and very kind person. Sister is lucky if she ended up with him.
Hinata’s mother (smiling silly at her daughter): You just said it loud and clear my dear.
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Hinata: N-Naruto kun, what is it that you wanted to tell me?
Naruto: yeah! Did you remember the battle between me and Pain. You almost sacrificed your life to save me. I just wanted to say thank you. If you didn’t save me, maybe the Akatsuki already extract the 9 tails from me and because of you I got the opportunity to see my father. Thank you so much Hinata!
Hinata: N-Naruto kun, I would do that many times for your sake.
Naruto: What?
Gamakichi suddenly appear
Naruto: Hey! I didn’t summon you. Why are you here?
Gamakichi: Fukasaku sama wanted you to go to Mt. Myoboku.
Naruto: What? Right now! So I was right all along.
Gamakichi (looking at Hinata) Fukasaku sama said we’ll also bring her.
Naruto: You mean Hinata?
Gamakichi: Both of you hold on me. We’ll all be transfer to Mt. Myoboku.
At Mt. Myoboku
Hinata: What is this place?
Naruto: This is Mt. Myoboku. The place of the frogs.
Hinata look around.
Fukasaku: We’re waiting for you Naruto boy. Who is she?
Naruto: She’s Hinata. Gama said you wanted to bring her here.
Fukasaku: yes, lets go to the great elder. He has something to tell you.
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Great elder: What’s your name again?
Naruto: Naruto Uzumaki.
Great elder: Who is that woman with you?
Naruto: She’s Hinata Hyuga.
Hinata: Hello Great elder. It’s an honor to meet you.
Great elder: Me too, I can’t tell you yet about your prophesy Naruto. Why don’t you roam around here for a while and let Hinata enjoy this place.
Naruto: hmmmpp! Alright!
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Hinata (while walking): This place is beautiful and peaceful Naruto kun.
Naruto: Yes it is!
Gamakichi: What did the elder told you Naruto?
Naruto: (annoyed) He said we’ll have to wait for a while.
Fukasaku: Why don’t you eat at my house. I’m sure my wife will be happy to see you both.
Naruto: No! It’s okay. Well just walk here for the meantime. Let’s go Hinata.
----
Naruto and Hinata are resting in a big tree. Hinata is still amazed at the place.
Hinata: Naruto kun. Thank you for bringing me here.
Naruto: Its nothing. This is also the place where I mastered Sage mode. //So does this mean it was Hinata on my dream? But why Hinata? Why does the elder wanted me to bring Hinata here?//
Naruto: Hinata, there’s another thing I wanted to tell you. It was always playing on my mind.
Hinata: What is it Naruto kun?
Naruto: Before you attacked Pain. You said something but I didn’t hear it loud and clear since I was so worried about you fighting Pain. Could you tell it to me again?
Hinata (blushing so hard): //So Naruto kun didn’t hear it. I can’t tell him right now what will I do?//
Naruto: Hinata what is it?
Hinata: I-Its...Y-you see Naruto kun...
Naruto (annoyed): //Maybe I shouldn’t ask her//
Naruto (sighed): It’s okay Hinata. I just wanted to say “thank you” that’s
why I went to see you.
Hinata (panicking): //Oh no! Naruto kun is upset. What will I do?//
Hinata looked closely at Naruto. She felt sorry she couldn’t tell what she wanted to say right now.
Hinata: //This is now or never! It’s a perfect place since its only me and Naruto kun here. Maybe this is the reason why I’m here with him//
Hinata: N-Naruto kun, you see..
Naruto looked at Hinata, he didn’t expect the other will continue to speak.
Hinata (looking at Naruto’s eyes): Naruto kun, maybe there’s a reason why I’m here with you. Naruto kun, you didn’t realized it but you saved me so many times. You are my inspiration that’s why I never gave up. I wanted to be strong. I wanted to chase after you because I wanted you to acknowledge me. Your smile saves me. I protected you from Pain and I know I’m no match against him but I’m not afraid to die, if it means to protect you. I’ll gladly lay down my life for you. Naruto kun I love you!
Naruto (stunned): Hinata, you...
Hinata: Naruto kun, that’s what I told you before that you didn’t hear. I confessed my love to you.
Naruto (lightly blushed): Hinata, are you sure?
Hinata: I always looked up on you even before Naruto kun.
Both of them are silent. Hinata is blushing so hard, she couldn’t believe she finally tell Naruto her feelings for him while Naruto cannot swallow everything what Hinata just said. He didn’t expect it was her confession of love to him. Both of them look at each other then look away.
Naruto: Hinata, why don’t we go and see the great elder right now. Maybe it’s about time he should tell his prophesy to me.
Hinata: S-sure..
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Great elder: Naruto, I’m glad to see you again. Did you and your companion enjoy your time together?
Both of them blushing. The great elder look closely at Hinata. You are indeed that woman in my dream.
Naruto: Hinata?
Great elder: Yes it is her. I am certain. A pretty woman with long black hair and with eye power.
Naruto: //So it was Hinata?// I also had a dream that I will be here to hear your prophesy to me and I’m with a woman but the woman’s face isn’t clear to me.
Hinata looked at Naruto with a shocked expression.
Great elder: Indeed it is a clue about my prophesy to you Naruto.
Naruto: So what is your prophesy to me great lord elder?
Great elder: In time, both of you will get married.
Naruto and Hinata: What???
Hinata suddenly faint and her face is red like a tomato. //Naruto kun and I will get married//
-----
At Fukasaku’s house.
Hinata is still unconscious but she is beginning to wake up.
Naruto: Hinata! Are you alright?
Ma: Are you okay? If you’re still dizzy you can still stay here for a while. I prepared something for all of us.
Knowing that it’s the disgusting food of the frog, Naruto insisted that they should be return to Konoha.
Fukasaku: Okay, since the elder gave you his prophesy, I’ll return you both
to konoha.
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Naruto and Hinata returned at Hinata’s house. The Hyuga family is eating lunch together.
Hinata’s mother: My! Where did you two go? You just suddenly came out of nowhere!
Naruto: Sorry, we were summoned to Mt. Myoboku. The great elder told us about his prophesy.
Hiashi: Prophesy? What is his prophesy?
Hinata remember the great elder’s prophesy that they’ll get married in time and Hinata suddenly faint again.
Hyuga family: Hinata!
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Naruto have his lunch at the Hyuga’s house and he’s about to go home.
Hinata woke up and say her good bye to Naruto.
Hinata: Thank you for bringing me there Naruto kun. Take care!
Naruto (smiling): It’s nothing. Thanks for coming with me, Hinata.
Hinata jumped at Naruto and embrace him.
Hinata: Naruto kun, I’ll work hard to be a better wife for you.
Naruto (shocked at Hinata’s hug at first but he wrapped his arms around Hinata): You don’t have to. You’re a better person Hinata.
Hinata (tightly embrace Naruto): Naruto kun...
The Hyuga family came to say their good bye to Naruto but where startled to
see Naruto and Hinata embracing each other.
Naruto: I-I have to go now Hinata. See you again!
Hinata’s face is blushing while her family silently look at her.
Hinata’s mother: What’s the great elder’s prophesy Hinata?
Hinata (began to blush hard again): T-that? Uhmm..Naruto kun and I will get married when the time comes.
Hyuga Family: ehhh!!!!!
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“()” – Charcter’s expression.
If you encountered any wrong grammar, sorry in advance. English isn’t my expertise.
Story set: The 4th ninja war is over. Madara and Kabuto were defeated and Sasuke returned in Konoha. Everything is back to normal.
It was early in the morning. Naruto is in his room lie down on bed.
He had a dream last night that the great lord elder gave him another prophesy and there’s a woman beside him but he couldn’t see the woman’s face.
Naruto: //I wonder who is that woman? Is she Sakura chan? Anyway, I’m sure Fukasaku san will summon me to Mt. Myoboku//
Naruto: (get-up and look outside through the window) //Sakura chan is busy tending Sasuke’s wounds. I can’t ask her to go with me to Mt. Myoboku//
Naruto recalled the events happened during the war and before the war.
About Akatsuki, Madara, the tailed beast, his mother and father. Then suddenly, he remember Hinata saved him from Pain.
Naruto: Come to think of it, the war is over and everything is normal but I didn’t say “thank you” to Hinata when she saved me. I wonder if that girl with me is Hinata? Or maybe Ino or Ten-ten? Anyway, I have to thank Hinata since she saved me.
-----
Naruto is standing in front of Hyuga clan’s territory.
Naruto: I wonder if Hinata is around.
Hyuga clan member: Naruto Uzumaki?! What are you doing here?
Naruto (scratching his head): Hello! I wanted to talk to Hinata. Is she around?
Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama? Yes she’s here. Come inside.
Naruto: No, its okay. I’ll just wait here. It won’t be long.
Hyuga clan member: No, please come inside. You came all the way here. Why don’t you wait for Hinata sama inside.
Hyuga clan member is dragging Naruto inside the Hyuga’s premises.
Hyuga clan member: Neji!
Naruto: Neji!
Neji: Naruto?! Why are you here?
Naruto: I came here to talk to Hinata. There’s something I wanted to tell her.
Neji (smirking): its about time Naruto.
Naruto: Time for what?
Hyuga clan member: Anyway, I’ll leave Naruto san to you Neji. I’ll call Hinata sama.
Naruto: Neji! I didn’t expect I will see you here. I thought jounins are busy these days.
Neji: I just came home from my mission.
-----
Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama!
Hinata: What is it?
Hyuga clan member: Hinata sama, Naruto san is here to see you.
Hinata (blushing): Naruto kun came to see me?
Hinata’s mother: What?! Naruto is here?
Hiashi: Naruto Uzumaki? The miracle boy? The prophesy child and the hero that saves the ninja world?
Hyuga clan member: yes! He’s here to see Hinata sama.
Hinata (still blushing)://Naruto kun is here? What should I tell him?//
Hinata’s mother: Hinata! What are you doing! Go and see Naruto now.
Hinata came. Naruto is with Neji.
Hinata: (looking at the ground, pointing her both index fingers) N-Naruto kun. Good morning.
Naruto (beaming): Hinata! I just came here to tell you something.
Hinata’s mother: Naruto! I’m so glad to see you! Come inside our house and have some tea.
Naruto: No, no its okay, I just wanted to tell something to Hinata.
Hinata’s mother is dragging Naruto inside their house.
Hiashi, Hinata’s mother, Hinata’s sister, Neji, Hinata and Naruto having tea together.
Naruto: //I didn’t expect this//
Hiashi: I’m so glad you took your time to visit us Naruto. I’m Hiashi, Hinata’s father. This is Hinata’s mother and sister.
Naruto: (scratching his head and smiling silly) Hello, nice meeting you.
Hinata’s mother: you should visit us more often Naruto. You’re always welcome here.
Naruto: T-thank you!
Hiashi: Anyway, there’s something I need to do. Enjoy yourself here Naruto.
Hinata’s mother: I’ll also take my leave. I have to cook something since we
have visitor.
Hinata’s sister: Neji ni-san could you teach me new technique?
Neji: Sure, I have plenty on my sleeve.
Hinata: A-are you sure you all will leave?
Hinata’s mother: Hinata, Naruto is your visitor. you should entertain him.
The 4 of them leave Naruto and Hinata.
Hiashi: //I hope everything will be fine//
Hinata’s mother://I hope Hinata won’t get shy. We leave the two of them after all//
Neji: //Hinata sama good luck/
Hinata’s sister (stopped walking and looked at the sky): Naruto Uzumaki, he’s the son of the 4th hokage and has a bloodline of an elite clan. He has the potential to be a hokage and and very kind person. Sister is lucky if she ended up with him.
Hinata’s mother (smiling silly at her daughter): You just said it loud and clear my dear.
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Hinata: N-Naruto kun, what is it that you wanted to tell me?
Naruto: yeah! Did you remember the battle between me and Pain. You almost sacrificed your life to save me. I just wanted to say thank you. If you didn’t save me, maybe the Akatsuki already extract the 9 tails from me and because of you I got the opportunity to see my father. Thank you so much Hinata!
Hinata: N-Naruto kun, I would do that many times for your sake.
Naruto: What?
Gamakichi suddenly appear
Naruto: Hey! I didn’t summon you. Why are you here?
Gamakichi: Fukasaku sama wanted you to go to Mt. Myoboku.
Naruto: What? Right now! So I was right all along.
Gamakichi (looking at Hinata) Fukasaku sama said we’ll also bring her.
Naruto: You mean Hinata?
Gamakichi: Both of you hold on me. We’ll all be transfer to Mt. Myoboku.
At Mt. Myoboku
Hinata: What is this place?
Naruto: This is Mt. Myoboku. The place of the frogs.
Hinata look around.
Fukasaku: We’re waiting for you Naruto boy. Who is she?
Naruto: She’s Hinata. Gama said you wanted to bring her here.
Fukasaku: yes, lets go to the great elder. He has something to tell you.
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Great elder: What’s your name again?
Naruto: Naruto Uzumaki.
Great elder: Who is that woman with you?
Naruto: She’s Hinata Hyuga.
Hinata: Hello Great elder. It’s an honor to meet you.
Great elder: Me too, I can’t tell you yet about your prophesy Naruto. Why don’t you roam around here for a while and let Hinata enjoy this place.
Naruto: hmmmpp! Alright!
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Hinata (while walking): This place is beautiful and peaceful Naruto kun.
Naruto: Yes it is!
Gamakichi: What did the elder told you Naruto?
Naruto: (annoyed) He said we’ll have to wait for a while.
Fukasaku: Why don’t you eat at my house. I’m sure my wife will be happy to see you both.
Naruto: No! It’s okay. Well just walk here for the meantime. Let’s go Hinata.
----
Naruto and Hinata are resting in a big tree. Hinata is still amazed at the place.
Hinata: Naruto kun. Thank you for bringing me here.
Naruto: Its nothing. This is also the place where I mastered Sage mode. //So does this mean it was Hinata on my dream? But why Hinata? Why does the elder wanted me to bring Hinata here?//
Naruto: Hinata, there’s another thing I wanted to tell you. It was always playing on my mind.
Hinata: What is it Naruto kun?
Naruto: Before you attacked Pain. You said something but I didn’t hear it loud and clear since I was so worried about you fighting Pain. Could you tell it to me again?
Hinata (blushing so hard): //So Naruto kun didn’t hear it. I can’t tell him right now what will I do?//
Naruto: Hinata what is it?
Hinata: I-Its...Y-you see Naruto kun...
Naruto (annoyed): //Maybe I shouldn’t ask her//
Naruto (sighed): It’s okay Hinata. I just wanted to say “thank you” that’s
why I went to see you.
Hinata (panicking): //Oh no! Naruto kun is upset. What will I do?//
Hinata looked closely at Naruto. She felt sorry she couldn’t tell what she wanted to say right now.
Hinata: //This is now or never! It’s a perfect place since its only me and Naruto kun here. Maybe this is the reason why I’m here with him//
Hinata: N-Naruto kun, you see..
Naruto looked at Hinata, he didn’t expect the other will continue to speak.
Hinata (looking at Naruto’s eyes): Naruto kun, maybe there’s a reason why I’m here with you. Naruto kun, you didn’t realized it but you saved me so many times. You are my inspiration that’s why I never gave up. I wanted to be strong. I wanted to chase after you because I wanted you to acknowledge me. Your smile saves me. I protected you from Pain and I know I’m no match against him but I’m not afraid to die, if it means to protect you. I’ll gladly lay down my life for you. Naruto kun I love you!
Naruto (stunned): Hinata, you...
Hinata: Naruto kun, that’s what I told you before that you didn’t hear. I confessed my love to you.
Naruto (lightly blushed): Hinata, are you sure?
Hinata: I always looked up on you even before Naruto kun.
Both of them are silent. Hinata is blushing so hard, she couldn’t believe she finally tell Naruto her feelings for him while Naruto cannot swallow everything what Hinata just said. He didn’t expect it was her confession of love to him. Both of them look at each other then look away.
Naruto: Hinata, why don’t we go and see the great elder right now. Maybe it’s about time he should tell his prophesy to me.
Hinata: S-sure..
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Great elder: Naruto, I’m glad to see you again. Did you and your companion enjoy your time together?
Both of them blushing. The great elder look closely at Hinata. You are indeed that woman in my dream.
Naruto: Hinata?
Great elder: Yes it is her. I am certain. A pretty woman with long black hair and with eye power.
Naruto: //So it was Hinata?// I also had a dream that I will be here to hear your prophesy to me and I’m with a woman but the woman’s face isn’t clear to me.
Hinata looked at Naruto with a shocked expression.
Great elder: Indeed it is a clue about my prophesy to you Naruto.
Naruto: So what is your prophesy to me great lord elder?
Great elder: In time, both of you will get married.
Naruto and Hinata: What???
Hinata suddenly faint and her face is red like a tomato. //Naruto kun and I will get married//
-----
At Fukasaku’s house.
Hinata is still unconscious but she is beginning to wake up.
Naruto: Hinata! Are you alright?
Ma: Are you okay? If you’re still dizzy you can still stay here for a while. I prepared something for all of us.
Knowing that it’s the disgusting food of the frog, Naruto insisted that they should be return to Konoha.
Fukasaku: Okay, since the elder gave you his prophesy, I’ll return you both
to konoha.
------
Naruto and Hinata returned at Hinata’s house. The Hyuga family is eating lunch together.
Hinata’s mother: My! Where did you two go? You just suddenly came out of nowhere!
Naruto: Sorry, we were summoned to Mt. Myoboku. The great elder told us about his prophesy.
Hiashi: Prophesy? What is his prophesy?
Hinata remember the great elder’s prophesy that they’ll get married in time and Hinata suddenly faint again.
Hyuga family: Hinata!
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Naruto have his lunch at the Hyuga’s house and he’s about to go home.
Hinata woke up and say her good bye to Naruto.
Hinata: Thank you for bringing me there Naruto kun. Take care!
Naruto (smiling): It’s nothing. Thanks for coming with me, Hinata.
Hinata jumped at Naruto and embrace him.
Hinata: Naruto kun, I’ll work hard to be a better wife for you.
Naruto (shocked at Hinata’s hug at first but he wrapped his arms around Hinata): You don’t have to. You’re a better person Hinata.
Hinata (tightly embrace Naruto): Naruto kun...
The Hyuga family came to say their good bye to Naruto but where startled to
see Naruto and Hinata embracing each other.
Naruto: I-I have to go now Hinata. See you again!
Hinata’s face is blushing while her family silently look at her.
Hinata’s mother: What’s the great elder’s prophesy Hinata?
Hinata (began to blush hard again): T-that? Uhmm..Naruto kun and I will get married when the time comes.
Hyuga Family: ehhh!!!!!
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