Good job.Wind is useful to blow the mist away I think.
-I focus my Sui chakra in the center of my body.When I think I have gathered enough chakra to create enough mist to cover a large enough area.I start releasing the chakra from my body in the form of a dense mist which hides me from the opponents eyes but makes me unable to see the opponent too.-
-I begin by focusing my chakra around me.I start taking it in and focusing it.I imagine water touching my skin,flowing.I concentrate hard on gathering the molecules of water from the air and gathering them in my hand.I keep focusing until the molecules I gather up with my chakra tighten up and start becoming a form.After some time of concentration I finally have water gathered in my hand.I send chakra to the water and use shape manipulation to change the shape of the water and form it into a one sided katana.I wave the sword a few times around to see if the sword will lose it's form.While I am holding the sword I keep adding Sui chakra to it to keep it in form.-Good job.
Next jutsu is
(Suiton: Mizu Kuri No Yaiba) - Water Style: Sword of Draining
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a sword. The sword can be wielded in the normal fashion, allowing the ninja to cut and stab like with a normal blade.
*Forms a sword of water in my hand*
Focus on forming the water out of the molecules in the air, then reshape it into a sword with shape manipulation.
for this, even though it is a D rank, requires concenctration and strain. (8 sentences minimum)
C rank-Barf jutsus xdGood Job. Now on to C Rank Jutsu.
(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user projects a stream of sticky, syrupy liquid which can be spit onto a surface to form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.
I spit out a sticky Syrupy liquid onto your foot, making you incapable of moving.
I want you to gather chakra into your mouth. Concentrate on making the substance a certain texture and material, and then spit it out.
-As I see you run at me I begin creating the liquid again.I change it's texture and consistency to make it sticky.As you are running at me zigzag I follow your movement and spew the liquid at your feet to stop while you are running.As the liquid hits your feet it glues your feet to the ground stopping you in your tracks.-You will get used to the taste. do it again, but this time try to hit me.
*runs in zigzag formation