[Approved] 1st Bio Needs aproval plz!

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ok so im new to making this Bio. who can i go to to get this approved?

Basic Information
Name: rokai akushu
Nickname: M
Gender: Male
Age: 15
Clan:N/A

Looks:
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Personality: Rokai can be Quiet and prefer to remain to himself in secluded areas at times but gets along with just about anybody. some say he has potential to be Raikage someday if he would take being a ninja more seriously. he is the type to sneak around into the adult video/book store rather than training and learning jutsu. he is skilled at ninjutsu though and when it comes to completing a mission or protecting someone he wont fail you. No matter the situation Rokai always keeps calm.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance:Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Genin

Specialty: N/A

Elements:Suiton

Your ninjutsu:
Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info.
History:Rokai is a distant cousin to the 4th Raikage. He lives on his own (like Naruto) because of the tragic death of his parents. When he was 7 his parents were assassinated on a top secret mission to Amegakure. Not knowing the reason for leaving the village or how they even died left Rokai in Shock. This is why he is quiet most of the time. without any parents to guide him he saw bee as his role model, how the village didn't wanna accept him but he always kept his cool. Rokai followed that path.
At the age of 12 he became a Genin and has the potential to become a Chunin. His teammates were the twins Oyoto Yuki and Mamoto Yuki . Claiming that he doesn't feel like being a Chunin, he trained with barely any motivation. he soon begins to fall down the path of being a pervert. At 14 he was caught peeping into a hot spring that was occupied by a kunoichi. she quickly threw a kunai in defense and Rokai dodging a fatal attack was slashed on his lower left cheek.
Now 15, Rokai feels as though he is ready to become a Chunin and takes being a ninja more seriously. Rokai wants to better himself as a ninja and become as honorable as his parents once were

Other

Picture: N/A

Theme Song and Background Music: In The Endhttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=


Battles

Won:none
Lost:none

~Approved~ restored your picture
 
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Do this, take the last bit of your youtube link (C5jdG0mdVPw)

Go into advanced put youtube tabs around them

I recommend you get pictures

But its a nice first bio ^.^
More history is always nice
 

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Do this, take the last bit of your youtube link (C5jdG0mdVPw)

Go into advanced put youtube tabs around them

I recommend you get pictures

But its a nice first bio ^.^
More history is always nice
thanx so much.. i appreciate it... and how will i get a pic to fit my character
 

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its hard looking for a pic i might jus change my description

ok this is my final version of it i added a picture to it but it wont show up
 
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