BishamonSama
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To certain people, I'm notorious for starting FanFics and never finishing them. My first was about a young Hiruzen Sarutobi. My second was about a completely unknown, 'normal' Shinobi. My third was about a world where Aizen had succeeded in taking over Soul Society, and had decimated the earth, with only a few separated Shinigami surviving. My fourth was about Yamamoto turning against half of the Gotei 13, who happened to be NB members, and casting them out of Soul Society. None of these Fanfics have ever been finished, although the fourth one did win me my only NB award xd (2nd place in the July 2010 "Fanfic of the Month".) I've decided to finish that fourth Fanfic, and I'm posting this thread as a preview of what's the come.
LAST TIME, ON BLEACH: THE LOST ORDER!!
(This is a highly shortened version of the previous chapter, chapter 9.)
(Chapter 9 can be read here:
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)(Read the others, if you like what you see)
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Bishamon's body exploded in a burst of black flames. The noise of the explosion rattled through the halls of the Maggot's Nest.
Ragnaroc: Yammamoto, the sick bastard... turning proud Shinigami into suicide bombs.
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Meanwhile, on the Seireitei Hill...
Captain Commander Yammamoto, along with Captains Shunsui, Ukitake, Komamura, and Hitsugaya stood at the top of the hill, looking down at Earth below them.
Suddenly, a huge Garganta opened up at the base of the Seireitei Hill. Liliana's head popped up at its base.
Liliana: Cero!!
Six Vasto Lordes appeared next to Liliana, and they all fired huge Ceros into the buildings of Soul Society in front of them. All of the ground visible from the Garganta was completely leveled, save for the Seireitei Hill.
A moment of fear passed over Yammamoto's face.
Yammamoto: What?! Hollows?! Damn it all!!!!! INVASION FORCE, ATTACK!!!!!
Suddenly, Shinigami were visible in the distance. A gigantic army of thousands of Shinigami was charging directly at the Hollows.
Liliana: Oh, this is going to be fun. Assume attack positions! Vasto Lordes, spread out in front! Adjuchas, between them!
The Vasto Lordes stood in the front of the group, motionless, equally spaced out in a horizontal line around Liliana. The Adjuchas stood in between them.
The Shinigami continued to advance.
Liliana: Steady...
The Shinigami came closer and closer - their Zanpakutos were easily visible.
Liliana: FIRE!!!!!!!!!
Liliana and the Vasto Lordes fired another round of gigantic Ceros at the advancing Shinigami. The Adjuchas shot out barrages of Balas at them. The resulting Reiatsu blast was humongous, and caught the Shinigami almost completely off guard. The front lines of the Shinigami were totally taken out, and the blasts were only stopped when the Kido-users create Reiatsu shields.
Liliana: Hahahaaaaa!! The fools! To think they could cross us! Today, the streets will run red with the blood of Shinigami!! WOOOHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Liliana unsheathed her sword and charged for the Shinigami, with the Adjuchas behind her, unable to keep up with her speed.
Liliana was the first to reach the Shinigami. She sliced four at once horizontally across the necks, beheading them instantly. She parried a slash from a fifth, and kicked one of the dead Shinigami bodies forward, knocking back about a dozen other Shinigami. She grabbed the throat of another Shinigami and broke his neck with one hand.
The Adjuchas lept into the Shinigami, biting necks and clawing Shinigami across the chest at very fast rates.
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Meanwhile, on the Seireitei Hill...
Yammamoto: Looks like the ex-Captains are coming straight for us. How convenient.
There was silence for a moment, as the Captains pretended to survey the battle going on below them.
Suddenly, out of nowhere, Ragnaroc, Roku, Emperor, Kaze, and Goro appeared behind the Captains. Ragnaroc was about to slash Yammamoto, Roku was about to slash Shunsui, Emperor was about to slash Ukitake, Kaze was about to slash Hitsugaya, and Goro was about to stab Komamura. The Captains turned around at the last moment to the ex-Captains, and all parried their attacks simultaneously. The ex-Captains and Goro Flash Stepped and Sonido'd backwards to mid-range from their opponents.
Yammamoto: Ahh, so good of you to join us.
Ragnaroc: Zip it!
Everyone looked at Ragnaroc oddly.
Roku: "Zip it"? That was the best you could come up with?
Kaze: Even I want to kill you now...
Ragnaroc: -.-
Yammamoto: As I was saying... A noble attempt of you to return here. But a very foolish one. How does it feel, knowing you've caused the deaths of so many? Urahara, Bishamon, Ali, and now all of your Hollow friends.
Goro: What are you talking about? It looks to me like us Hollows are kicking your ass.
Yammamoto: Ahh, Goro. I must say your presence here is somewhat of a surprise. But it makes no difference. You and your Hollows will all die.
Yammamoto extended a finger out towards a Vasto Lorde. A gigantic lightning bolt shot out of his finger at an incredible speed. The ex-Captains could only look in horror as the lightning bolt went straight through the Vasto Lorde's head, killing him instantly.
Yammamoto: You see? I alone am capable of destroying your entire army.
Yammamoto extended his finger once more towards the Hollows, and Reiatsu began to crackle around it.
Suddenly, Ragnaroc Flash Stepped in front of Yammamoto, slicing the finger off completely before he could cast the spell.
Ragnaroc: That's why we're here.
Yammamoto looked down angrily at Ragnaroc, and screamed.
Roku: That comeback was better, Rag. :|
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As I said, that was a severely-neutered version of chapter 9. Again, read the full thing here!
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In the coming days, I'll be posting chapter 10 so, if you're interested, read up on the older chapters so you know what's happened!
To save you the trouble of searching the forums, here's chapter 1. You'll have to search for all the others xd
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A brief summary of what's happened so far:
In a world without Hollows, Yammamoto, along with several canon captains, turn on Ragnaroc, Kaze, Roku, Emperor, Ali, and Bishamon during a Captain's meeting. Bishamon allows himself to be captured so that the others can escape. The others flee to Urahara's quarters, only to find he's been murdered, presumably by Yammamoto. The ex-Captains flee Soul Society to earth, with Ali sacrificing himself to take out Byakuya and Sui-Feng on the way. The remaining Captains find themselves in the middle of a desert at night, and run in a random direction. One of them uses Kido to create some light, and they are soon pursued by an attack squad of Shinigami that appear too fast to be real. They run for their lives and, just as everything seems lost, a dark figure emerges from a cave and carelessly cuts down the Shinigami pursuers in the blink of an eye. He is revealed to be Goro, thought to have died long ago with all of the other Hollows. Making peace with Goro, the Captains are led to Hueco Mundo 2.0, a secret, huge underground cave, where they make their plans to attack Soul Society together, as Goro surmises that Yammamoto is going to invade earth. Goro and the Captains enter Soul Society first, going into the Maggots' Nest to try to recruit some last-minute allies for their assault. And that's essentially where Chapter 9 starts up.
