Improvement Spar II v2

[KeotsuEclipse]

Second in a series of challenges I'm setting for myself to improve. The first time I tried to do this one, it didn't go over so well, so let's try this again....

Rei's Rules and Restrictions.
I will be using only two elements: Katon and Suiton.
You can use three elements.
Nin/Tai/Genjutsu is fine.
Killing won't count
No stealing of any kind
Terrain: Ruins of an abandoned town, during a heavy storm. A lightning strike has set part of the town on fire.​

Bio is "Keotsu" in my sig - post your bio, and I'll make the first move.

 

[Passion]

Me, Me, Me!

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Me, Me, Me!

o_o Sure. Just post your bio, please.

 

[Passion]

o_o Sure. Just post your bio, please.

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[KeotsuEclipse]

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xd Jack Sparrow. Brilliant.

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*Quickly forming two handseals, I start by exhaling a large ball of flame, shooting it at you, the sheer size of which makes it hard to dodge. However, despite it's strength, it is used mainly as cover so that I may use:

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(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

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(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Creates small black clouds, which cover the area flammable oil.

I use the jutsu immediately after launching Blaze Ball, and run in an arc to my left while doing so, in order to get you back in my sight. The falling oil helps my fire jutsu to spread, while also increasing it's strength slightly, due to its size and the amount of falling oil it can feed upon.

I complete my turn by simply using:

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(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

And creating two clones, one to my left and right each.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1145)

 

[Passion]

xd Jack Sparrow. Brilliant.

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*Quickly forming two handseals, I start by exhaling a large ball of flame, shooting it at you, the sheer size of which makes it hard to dodge. However, despite it's strength, it is used mainly as cover so that I may use:

Spoiler

(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Kokuun) - Water Style: Black Clouds
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Creates small black clouds, which cover the area flammable oil.

I use the jutsu immediately after launching Blaze Ball, and run in an arc to my left while doing so, in order to get you back in my sight. The falling oil helps my fire jutsu to spread, while also increasing it's strength slightly, due to its size and the amount of falling oil it can feed upon.

I complete my turn by simply using:

Spoiler

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

And creating two clones, one to my left and right each.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1145)

I think I'll use Wind, Water and Earth then.

The moment you fire the blazeball, I am ready to counter it with a quick non-hand sealed Destruction torrent. I simply concentrate water chakra into my hand and release a torrent towards the incoming fire ball, negating the fireball and creating thick wall of steam that blocks our views from each other.

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiralling wall of water that can be used to attack or defend. (No water source required)

Having our visions blocked due the cloud of steam that's floating between us, I use the momentum to concentrate wind chakra into my finger tips and slice air multiple times, sending multiple blades of Wind towards your direction and even though you have moved, they're aimed for larger scale horizontally so that even if you moved they'd cut you on the height of your waist.

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangiablitity.

You never described where the oil's falling on. I could just go and assume that it's the whole village and we would all be fried thanks to the fire that's burning down the hauses.

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

I think I'll use Wind, Water and Earth then.

The moment you fire the blazeball, I am ready to counter it with a quick non-hand sealed Destruction torrent. I simply concentrate water chakra into my hand and release a torrent towards the incoming fire ball, negating the fireball and creating thick wall of steam that blocks our views from each other.

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Water vortex created in the palm of the user’s hand that can then be blasted forward creating a spiralling wall of water that can be used to attack or defend. (No water source required)

Having our visions blocked due the cloud of steam that's floating between us, I use the momentum to concentrate wind chakra into my finger tips and slice air multiple times, sending multiple blades of Wind towards your direction and even though you have moved, they're aimed for larger scale horizontally so that even if you moved they'd cut you on the height of your waist.

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A blade of wind that is unblock able due to wind intangiablitity.

You never described where the oil's falling on. I could just go and assume that it's the whole village and we would all be fried thanks to the fire that's burning down the hauses.

Didn't know I needed to specify the specify area it's falling - I always assumed it worked the same way as CSR. Anyway, I guess it was just going to be our immediate area, since its purpose was to strengthen the blaze ball.
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*As I'm running to my left and I see the large ball of steam form, I notice bulge and part in it, from where the wind blades come through, and come towards me. Due to my positioning, instead of going through with my shadow clones, I simply exhale a fire-ball in the direction the wind blades came from, the jutsu requiring no handseals. Though the range isn't enough to continue towards you, it serves its purpose in defending me.

Spoiler

(Katon: Hiendan) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fire Ball technique.

Continuing in my leftward movement, I form a single handseal and fire a large bullet of water through what little remains of the steam cloud after your wind blades decimated it.

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(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

This justu is accompanied by me throwing two explosive kunai with the jutsu, one on either side of the bullet.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1115)

 

[Passion]

Didn't know I needed to specify the specify area it's falling - I always assumed it worked the same way as CSR. Anyway, I guess it was just going to be our immediate area, since its purpose was to strengthen the blaze ball.
_________

*As I'm running to my left and I see the large ball of steam form, I notice bulge and part in it, from where the wind blades come through, and come towards me. Due to my positioning, instead of going through with my shadow clones, I simply exhale a fire-ball in the direction the wind blades came from, the jutsu requiring no handseals. Though the range isn't enough to continue towards you, it serves its purpose in defending me.

Spoiler

(Katon: Hiendan) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fire Ball technique.

Continuing in my leftward movement, I form a single handseal and fire a large bullet of water through what little remains of the steam cloud after your wind blades decimated it.

Spoiler

(Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers water in their mouth and then spits out a large sphere of rotating water that can blast a huge area leaving it soaked.

This justu is accompanied by me throwing two explosive kunai with the jutsu, one on either side of the bullet.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1115)

The steam has cleared a bit from me using Wind techniques, granting me an eyesight to all of you and your incoming Water bullet. To counter it, I quickly focus chakra into my lungs and blow out a twister which then hits it, resulting the water to splatter everywhere and the kunais would be deflected/change their course by/from the water

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.

I then proceed quickly by making Rat, Tiger, Rat, Snake hand seals with one hand and slamming my hand on ground, raising a walls of earth around you that then collapse around all of you.

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

The steam has cleared a bit from me using Wind techniques, granting me an eyesight to all of you and your incoming Water bullet. To counter it, I quickly focus chakra into my lungs and blow out a twister which then hits it, resulting the water to splatter everywhere and the kunais would be deflected/change their course by/from the water

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a stream of wind infused chakra from their mouth that takes on the shape of a twister to attack the enemy.

I then proceed quickly by making Rat, Tiger, Rat, Snake hand seals with one hand and slamming my hand on ground, raising a walls of earth around you that then collapse around all of you.

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu allows the user to control multiple sections of rock and move them around their opponent. The user then forms two gigantic sections that crush the opponent.

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

*As your wind technique collides with my water technique, I watch through the dispersed water and can vaguely see you forming handseals. As your pillars come up on the ground around me, quickly jutting up from the ground, my first instinct is to quickly jump upwards, trying to avoid them. However, at the same time, I also use, forming the single handseal:

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(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Firing one large dragon head downward, destroying the pillars utterly.

Quickly, though, I simply form the handseal and fire three more of those dragons, directly at where you were.

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(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Then, as I touchdown again, I begin by immediately running in an arc to my left, closing the distance between us while trying to flank you, and using:

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(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons a large amount of water from the ground, crushing it into the opponent. This technique can also be used for further techniques as a water supply.

Using the handseal-less jutsu to create a massive wave of water that follow behind the dragon head, hoping to sweep you away.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1055)

 

[Passion]

*As your wind technique collides with my water technique, I watch through the dispersed water and can vaguely see you forming handseals. As your pillars come up on the ground around me, quickly jutting up from the ground, my first instinct is to quickly jump upwards, trying to avoid them. However, at the same time, I also use, forming the single handseal:

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(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Firing one large dragon head downward, destroying the pillars utterly.

Quickly, though, I simply form the handseal and fire three more of those dragons, directly at where you were.

Spoiler

(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Then, as I touchdown again, I begin by immediately running in an arc to my left, closing the distance between us while trying to flank you, and using:

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(Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Storm Upheaval
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons a large amount of water from the ground, crushing it into the opponent. This technique can also be used for further techniques as a water supply.

Using the handseal-less jutsu to create a massive wave of water that follow behind the dragon head, hoping to sweep you away.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 1055)

As I see you jump, I won't perform Stone Lodging Destruction and watch you send the dragon heads at me. To counter them I create Water sphere and Wind sphere in my hands, hit them together and launch them towards the dragon heads. When the water starts to fall on me I clap my hands together and point my hands towards you, sending a huge amount of Water in front of gigantic shark towards you.

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Tiger – Serpent hand seals to create a stronger version of the Water Release: Water shark Bomb technique, which creates a gigantic shark, far larger than the user, to attack the opponent. This technique differs from its parent jutsu in being able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique, and in turn use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.
Note: Technique can only absorb up to B rank level techniques.

What happened to your clones btw?

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

As I see you jump, I won't perform Stone Lodging Destruction and watch you send the dragon heads at me. To counter them I create Water sphere and Wind sphere in my hands, hit them together and launch them towards the dragon heads. When the water starts to fall on me I clap my hands together and point my hands towards you, sending a huge amount of Water in front of gigantic shark towards you.

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Tiger – Serpent hand seals to create a stronger version of the Water Release: Water shark Bomb technique, which creates a gigantic shark, far larger than the user, to attack the opponent. This technique differs from its parent jutsu in being able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique, and in turn use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.
Note: Technique can only absorb up to B rank level techniques.

What happened to your clones btw?

Wasn't able to form them - had to interrupt making them in order to defend against your Wind blade earlier.

*As I see the gigantic shark, I know that the only possible way I can counter it at the moment and in time is with one of my own, and so I form my own two handseals to use:

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(Suiton: Daikōdan no Jutsu) – Water Release: Great Shark Missile Technique
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs Tiger – Serpent hand seals to create a stronger version of the Water Release: Water shark Bomb technique, which creates a gigantic shark, far larger than the user, to attack the opponent. This technique differs from its parent jutsu in being able to absorb the chakra from an opponent's technique, and in turn use that chakra to grow larger and more powerful.
Note: Technique can only absorb up to B rank level techniques.

Forming my own massive shark to combat yours while I continue my leftward arc, but I immediately follow up the gigantic shark by using:

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(Suiton: Funshutsu Mizu Kinko) - Water Release: Gushing Water Imprisonment
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a flow of gushing water under the opponent which traps them in a sphere of water. The user can perform an attack while the opponent is trapped. This jutsu is similar to Water Prison Technique, though the user doesn't need to keep his arm in the sphere of water.

Causing the water flooding the field (provided by all the Water jutsu used previously, including the sharks) to gush upwards, and trap you in a water prison. While you are trapped, I simply use:

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(Suiton: Suiryuuben) - Water Style: Water Dragon Whip
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu creates an orb of water from which several sharp whips of water emerge that can be directed towards and impale a target or multiple targets.

Causing tendrils to form inside the water prison and impale you, or, if you somehow manage to dodge it, chase after you in an attempt to impale you.*

(HP: 1250, CP: 975)