Thanks, good seeing more and more familiar faces appearing on this chapterAwesome chapter mangood job
Hehe no worries at all, I'm just glad you managed to read it. You even made a thread demanding this chapter not long ago, so here it is, Lolxdsorry took me too long to respond .
Great chap as allways 5000000/5
Bee was annoying me , I hope the next one to dies is either ino or sakura
As i have said be4 , Jiraya should have a baykugan
Ps. the Birth of a child details is really unnended , that is the only part in your FF which i tent to avoid, it is like Naruto is fighting an enemy who can kill him , and a shinobi comes up to say Hey you have a child ( normally a person would let his guard down )
Instead in the end ( if i were you ) i would make a happy ending .
but hey , if ppl still read ur ff more and more , means i'm the troll . and i should get a life , all of the above are simple advice
Regardless of the trolling and the skepticism i had towards the PREVIOUS Chap " as i said the brth and etc" aside from thatHehe no worries at all, I'm just glad you managed to read it. You even made a thread demanding this chapter not long ago, so here it is, Lolxd
You always seemed to be the type who favored people dying and I respect that as some deaths are pure epicness and the perfect way to go, just that I don't think too many will die during my FF
Well everything has a purpose, and if it doesn't, then it's there to fill out the gap between the personalities and bring more life to it and a more overall and complete story. But this is just my opinion about it so feel free to disagree
Well like I've mentioned in my SG, everything towards the end has been set, and I even know down to the last detail how this FF will end, and I'm pretty sure few people will be able to predicted how my final chapter will turn outxd So I'm not really able to predict a bad ending here, however I did have a theory on one of the villains surviving, for a long time, but the closer and closer I got towards the end in my notes (That's where all the story for the rest of the chapters are written down), I realized that it simply didn't fit in so I ended up pushing it down the chapters and into one of the earlier ones![]()
Well, your FF has always be a catalyst in many things for me but that you know xdWell I'm glad my FF could helpxd
It's hard as I've only made out silly ones yetxD Better find a Japanese one eventually
Yeah I noticed when I was going to color it as just replacing the names with colored ones (which usually is the fast way around the block), took ages as this chapter probably had all the main and still alive characters in this one except from Gai and SuigetsuxD
Yes I agree, LolThe whole "Sword stealing" arc was actually a last minute thing that struck me while brainstorming on my way home, so if I had released the chapter earlier, the whole plot would have been missingxd And yes, Chojuro said that Kabuto took the sword, so yeah, all the swords have been stolen
Hehe yeah, together with the fight in chapter 7, they are becoming a favorite team of minexD It's settled then, Rock Lee and Shikamaru is the ultimate team. The brain and the musclexd
Haha, well you didn't have to read it, now did you?
Your words/positive critics are almost too ehm... good to be true, Lol
Well I had to have a logical explanation to his Rasengan after all, and that was the only solution I saw
Yeah, but just wait till Kabuto's real goal is revealed, MuhahahaxD
Actually regarding that, there will be a poll held regarding two fights where you will be able to decide whether or not I should add them in. More about that when Chapter 3 of the SP (Sequel whatever) comes around
Yeah well I thought I had to make it seem more... touchable rather than Ao being a stone cold motherf*ckerxd
Well I was thinking on how to be able to show a flashback of Killerbee fighting so I remembered that I never said who accompanied him to the meeting, so I added them to be able to do the flashback. But while I was at it I realized that then Mei's escort was the only one un-revealed, and by adding them in the frame, I somehow could easier slide in the Ao - Chojuro Scene (Btw, this fight will probably not be among the two that I might do, Lolxd)...
As you just said yourself, you want to be surprised, so I'm going to let all the question regarding upcoming plot remain... unansweredxd
Well my reply isn't exactly shorter to say the leastxd
Haha yeah, but either way it's grown as well, now I want to see you make a 40 000 letters + chapterO.O
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NOOOOOO :T_T: How could you?I just read all the chaps in 3 hours =| I need a Medal xD .. But indeed its awesome.
Okay good to hearRegardless of the trolling and the skepticism i had towards the PREVIOUS Chap " as i said the brth and etc" aside from that
THIS chapter was awesome . More Naruto Action next time , i hope Sasuke will come up like in the last moment and Save Naruto's ass like "i'll be back"
Never as late as me anyway, LolxdIm late to the Party!
Great -- no thats not it--- EPIC chapter !!!
Im thinking that Naruto and Sasuke will fight together in the next Chap , since they will end up in the same place ( I think )
Lookin forward to the next chapter man.
Ps- I expect to see the next chapter in the next week or so![]()
Damn I had something long written here... ehm, one could easily think; " hah, I only need to read 14-17 chapters and I'll probably use one or two minutes per chapter, so I'll be done in no time!", and one would usually be right as most FFs at NB have very short and many chapters, while most of mine are pretty big to say the least. At least it took a he*ck of a time re-reading my FF before posting this chapter. I wanted to freshen up with the story and check some things before releasing this one so I read all of them in row as well as revising a little on each of them and before I knew it I had used more than six hoursxd Probably the last time I'll re-read my FF again, or at least for a long whileI just read all the chaps in 3 hours =| I need a Medal xD .. But indeed its awesome.
Well, your FF has always be a catalyst in many things for me but that you know xd
Next time, we talk on MSN, we'll propose all kind of titles. Some has to eventually cling I suppose. U_U
I see. O, didn't noticed Gai. Now that you mention him, Sonia also was not hereStill, it's a hell lot of characters to manage. No mention about coloring but that's the precise reason why I don't color usually xd
LOL, missing out the main part in your chapter. Luckily, you remembered. On the other hand, you take some much time to release a chapter that you'll surely remember some parts some time or the other
Yeah, it's settledWell, Shikamaru and Choji's teamwork is basically the same thing but indeed, I find it better with Lee.
Nope, no need to read now(@everyone 1000 Kumi and I'll give you a spoiler of Chapter 15 lol) and yes, I do mean my words.xd
Yeah, indeed there was a need for logical explanation but the spice with crow shouting "aho~aho" was funny.
I see that not only I, is more interested in seeing Kabuto as main evil
You sure about that poll and why don't you want to add this fight xd
Anyways, I'll prefer you write those battle chapters later (if you haven't wrote it already that is)I want to see the end out of LSoK more quickly. Envy you that I need to wait till December to be able to write full-steam again
Well, Ao will not have been seen as a stone-cold motherf^*ker since he was already crying. You could have said something like "his cries echoed through the forest or whatever..." I hate that phrase kind of. A character is killed. His friend cries for 2 seconds and then scream I will kill that bastard who did this to you. Reminds me of DBZ days. xd
Well, guess what? It's surprise but this reply is shaping out to be a huge one again xd
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I'm pretty sure I wrote something deep hereFor the gap of months you took in releasing this chapter-I have to say was well worth the wait! It did take me forever to read (joke lol) but it was truly EPIC!!! I absolutely loved how you went about your story in this chapter. Chojuro/Kirabi dying was just perfect! I also thoroughly enjoyed Ao's appearance ^.^ It is funny how in your story verse current manga; Madara is succeeding in his moon eye plan (well in your story a little more so lol). Oh no-I hope Sasuke is not lead to his demise! I would be crushed T_T I liked the part about the crows saying "Aho" was comedic and good memoryIt seems as though this fanfic will be ending within the next or following chapter seeing as Naruto now faces the antagonists. Wonderful job with the many fight scenes and I’m sure this upcoming chapter will be no exception
Can’t wait especially for the part about Sasuke -_- *fingers crossed* XD
Thanks, glad you liked my comebackPretty Good! And long.
Well I'm glad my FF could helpxd
It's hard as I've only made out silly ones yetxD Better find a Japanese one eventually
Yeah I noticed when I was going to color it as just replacing the names with colored ones (which usually is the fast way around the block), took ages as this chapter probably had all the main and still alive characters in this one except from Gai and SuigetsuxD
Yes I agree, LolThe whole "Sword stealing" arc was actually a last minute thing that struck me while brainstorming on my way home, so if I had released the chapter earlier, the whole plot would have been missingxd And yes, Chojuro said that Kabuto took the sword, so yeah, all the swords have been stolen
Hehe yeah, together with the fight in chapter 7, they are becoming a favorite team of minexD
Haha, well you didn't have to read it, now did you?
Your words/positive critics are almost too ehm... good to be true, Lol
Well I had to have a logical explanation to his Rasengan after all, and that was the only solution I saw
Yeah, but just wait till Kabuto's real goal is revealed, MuhahahaxD
Actually regarding that, there will be a poll held regarding two fights where you will be able to decide whether or not I should add them in. More about that when Chapter 3 of the SP (Sequel whatever) comes around
Yeah well I thought I had to make it seem more... touchable rather than Ao being a stone cold motherf*ckerxd
Well I was thinking on how to be able to show a flashback of Killerbee fighting so I remembered that I never said who accompanied him to the meeting, so I added them to be able to do the flashback. But while I was at it I realized that then Mei's escort was the only one un-revealed, and by adding them in the frame, I somehow could easier slide in the Ao - Chojuro Scene (Btw, this fight will probably not be among the two that I might do, Lolxd)...
As you just said yourself, you want to be surprised, so I'm going to let all the question regarding upcoming plot remain... unansweredxd
Well my reply isn't exactly shorter to say the leastxd
Well I've decided to let all speculations be speculations as you will just have to be patientActually, you might have to be very patientxd As the plot goes pretty deep after a while
It's settled then, Rock Lee and Shikamaru is the ultimate team. The brain and the musclexd
Yeah maybe you're right as it was pretty big, and not only in length, but in content as well.
Haha yeah now that you mention it, you used to post short replies like thatThe time flies by fast.
Hmm... does it??We'll see
Like I mentioned in my update, everything towards the final, final, final, final has been set and all that remains now is to write it down. I hardly doubt I'll change or add anything now if nothing really unexpected happens in the manga
Haha Indeed
Haha yeah, but either way it's grown as well, now I want to see you make a 40 000 letters + chapterO.O
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Hehe no worries at all, I'm just glad you managed to read it. You even made a thread demanding this chapter not long ago, so here it is, Lolxd
You always seemed to be the type who favored people dying and I respect that as some deaths are pure epicness and the perfect way to go, just that I don't think too many will die during my FF
Well everything has a purpose, and if it doesn't, then it's there to fill out the gap between the personalities and bring more life to it and a more overall and complete story. But this is just my opinion about it so feel free to disagree
Well like I've mentioned in my SG, everything towards the end has been set, and I even know down to the last detail how this FF will end, and I'm pretty sure few people will be able to predicted how my final chapter will turn outxd So I'm not really able to predict a bad ending here, however I did have a theory on one of the villains surviving, for a long time, but the closer and closer I got towards the end in my notes (That's where all the story for the rest of the chapters are written down), I realized that it simply didn't fit in so I ended up pushing it down the chapters and into one of the earlier ones![]()
Well, your FF has always be a catalyst in many things for me but that you know xd
Next time, we talk on MSN, we'll propose all kind of titles. Some has to eventually cling I suppose. U_U
I see. O, didn't noticed Gai. Now that you mention him, Sonia also was not hereStill, it's a hell lot of characters to manage. No mention about coloring but that's the precise reason why I don't color usually xd
LOL, missing out the main part in your chapter. Luckily, you remembered. On the other hand, you take some much time to release a chapter that you'll surely remember some parts some time or the other
Yeah, it's settledWell, Shikamaru and Choji's teamwork is basically the same thing but indeed, I find it better with Lee.
Nope, no need to read now(@everyone 1000 Kumi and I'll give you a spoiler of Chapter 15 lol) and yes, I do mean my words.xd
Yeah, indeed there was a need for logical explanation but the spice with crow shouting "aho~aho" was funny.
I see that not only I, is more interested in seeing Kabuto as main evil
You sure about that poll and why don't you want to add this fight xd
Anyways, I'll prefer you write those battle chapters later (if you haven't wrote it already that is)I want to see the end out of LSoK more quickly. Envy you that I need to wait till December to be able to write full-steam again
Well, Ao will not have been seen as a stone-cold motherf^*ker since he was already crying. You could have said something like "his cries echoed through the forest or whatever..." I hate that phrase kind of. A character is killed. His friend cries for 2 seconds and then scream I will kill that bastard who did this to you. Reminds me of DBZ days. xd
Well, guess what? It's surprise but this reply is shaping out to be a huge one again xd
I'll do one but it needs to wait and my chapters needs to reach a point where it needs those kind of chapters or could do like Wes with those infinite "O O" s xd
NOOOOOO :T_T: How could you?I was the only one to have read all in a row till 12
And I did it in 4.5 hours, *sniff*
No award for youxd
You missed my 1st post U_U
Smiley... over...dose...
LolSmiley... over...dose...
Haha, yeah maybeYou missed my 1st post U_U
Okay, if I wrote a reply now Mikey, this might end up in the length of your chapterso I'll be wise...
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Thanksnice chap
Hehe, and more is on it's wayI want more!!..I want more!!..We want more!!..
I guess naruto and sasuke will meet up in the akatsuki hideout and BOOM! they will help each other to defeat madara hahaha..am i right michael nii-san![]()
Thanks, well you just have to push yourself to do it when you get sometime really. I bet many people thought I gave up on this FF when I hadn't released the next chapter in over five months (not counting the chronicles of course)Nice Bro i Wish I Could Finish My Fanfic