ok like if im writeing a story and wanna put in quotes like he's sleeping and starts to dream do i put it like this. AS sasuke dream he remember the past*dad am ready to take over the clan not yet son you still to weak* then he wakes up. is that how i should do it
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no its like this
As sauske laid on the ground he found it hard to keep his eye's open, he was losing conciousness from the over use of his fight earlier with Naruto. Soon he began drifting off his eye's heavy and diffucult to keep open he closed them and drifted into the darkness. While there he saw his father and approached him, "Father" He said, "Am I ready to avenge our clan". His father stared intensly at him as if he where a forighn enemy and said, "No son, I don't believe your hate is strong enough yet".
does that help ya?????
As sauske laid on the ground he found it hard to keep his eye's open, he was losing conciousness from the over use of his fight earlier with Naruto. Soon he began drifting off his eye's heavy and diffucult to keep open he closed them and drifted into the darkness. While there he saw his father and approached him, "Father" He said, "Am I ready to avenge our clan". His father stared intensly at him as if he where a forighn enemy and said, "No son, I don't believe your hate is strong enough yet".
does that help ya?????
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