Okay, sorry for the waiting, here we go again!
PART 4!
Kakashi and the others watching the fight, wondering whats going on.
Lee: What happened? Why did the 4 tailed beasts stop their attack?
Kakashi: ...i don't know.
Neji: Wait, something's wrong with Naruto.
Sakura: ...!
Neji: He seems to glow red, what's happening to him?
Tsunade: The nine tails..?
Scene change, you can see Madara, who seems to have an idea whats going on.
Madara: This can't be happening? The nine tails would never..? Why would it..."shocked" do that..?
Naruto changes completly, his Skin becomes red, glowing, smoking, like the sun. His eyeballs dissapear, only a white background.
Naruto: AHHHHHHHHHHHH "screaming in pain"
Sasuke: Naruto!
Sasuke heads to Naruto trys to touch his arm.
Sasuke: ahhh shit!
His hand burns, he drops on the back. Sparks spread out of Narutos body. They head into all directions, but don't hit Sasuke.
Sasuke: ...!
Naruto: Sasu....ke..
Sasuke: ..?
Naruto: Pro..mise...me. You will...be...
Sasuke: ... "his eyes wide open"
Naruto: The next...."taking a deep breath"
Naruto screams so loud, that the whole area can hear it.
Naruto: ...HOKAGE!!
Sasuke: ?!?!?!
Kakashi: ...!
Sakura: Naruto.."crying"
Neji, Lee and Sai: ...
???: Naruto will die.
The group turns around.
Kakashi: Not you again!
Kabuto: Heh, so after all, Naruto could not fullfill his dream, to become Hokage.
Sakura: Naruto won't die, he can't.
Kabuto: I think you don't realize what he is about to do. The nine tails is not without any reason the nine tails, its Chakra is the biggest from all tailed beasts, but not a single jinchuuriki could bring the nine tails to do what it's doing for Naruto now.
Neji: What does that mean?
Kabuto: heh..
Lee: He asked you something!! "screaming"
Silence, Kabuto watching into the group with a demonic face.
Kabuto: The nine tails can turn into pure Chakra, a Chakra that no one, not even Naruto can deal with, but even if he could, it wouldn't help him. I come to that later. That means, that the nine tails is dead, after this Chakra is used and so will the jinchuuriki. You can compare it with the pills, the akamichi clan is using.
Neji: Choji used them...i remember, it was when we were heading after Sasuke.
Kabuto: You could compare it, but you can't compare the power these 2 are using. The red pill could make you die, using the nine tails clean Chakra, will make you die.
Kakashi: You said, that no Jinchuuriki ever did that before, so how can you know that?
Kabuto: Heh..! Like the nine tails, Naruto will dissapear and form into pure Chakra. He can control both Chakras for a short period of time, before he vanishes, thats part of the "Endima-jutsu". It's a both sided kamikaze act. Between the nine tails and the jinchuuriki. If you think the nine tails is doing that, beacuse he likes Naruto, then i tell you that could be one reason, but i think the biggest reason is, that the Kyubi hates Madara. That's why Madara didn't want to capture Naruto by himself. He was always avoiding a fight with Naruto and wanted Sasuke to do that for him, because he knew, the nine tails would maybe be ready to use that Jutsu. He had no choice now, cause in the end, Sasuke teamed up with Naruto.
Sakura: No...please..no, his dream was "crying in bitterness" he can't...he just can't...
Kakashi: ...Naruto.."tears in eyes".
Tsunade who was very silent the whole time, now gets up.
Tsunade: ...
Tsunade: Sakura..take me to Naruto.
Kakashi: What? Are you insane? You can't go near him.
Tsunade: I need to tell him something very important.
Sakura: alright...
Sakura takes Tsuande they jump near Naruto.
Sasuke: ...!! Sakura, Tsunade, what are you doing here?
Sakura: ..Sasuke..Naruto..
Sakura remembers the past, they are finally together again, as one Unit. She begins to cry. She runs for Naruto.
Sakura: Naruto! "screaming" you can't do that now, you finally did it, you convinced him, you made it, i'm so happy, so happy right now, don't make my life hell again, with sacrifising yourself, i need you, you are the best friend i ever had, you made me smile, even in bad times, you were like ...
Sasuke stops her.
Sasuke: Sakura, you can't go near him, you will burn.
Sakura: I don't care, let me go! It's all your fault, it's all your god damn fault, i hate you..i...
Sasuke hugs her.
Sakura: ...?
Sasuke: Forgive me Sakura...
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Sakura feels something wet on her left shoulder.
Sakura: Sasuke..you are..you..are you crying?
Scene goes inside Naruto,the Kyubi behind the cage is now a big strong red Chakra form. Naruto's soul goes to the cage, puting his hand forward. He feels the Chakra rushing into his body, the hotest, coldest and strongest Chakra he ever experienced. After that the darkness behind the cage, where the home of the fox was for so long, dissapears, he can see through the eyes of his body, but can only act with his souls mind inside his own Body. Behind the cage, where the darkness was for so long, he can now see the Group through his bodys eyes. On his Body, tails are starting to grow. One after the other, till there are nine. Narutos soul watching through the cage and looking at the people he loves, but he knows, that this cage will never open for him again. He smiles in agony.
Naruto inside Naruto: I made it, now i bring you peace.
Tsunade looking into Naruto's face.
Tsunade: Naruto...i need to tell you something very important.
Sakura and Sasuke, both in tears, looking to Tsunade, curious what she will tell Naruto.
to be continued
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Okay, lets go on,
PART 5
The nature is shown, forest, the battleground with thousands of corpses. A lot of Konoha Ninjas are lieing on the ground. Some faces, we saw in the entire series, are now covered in blood. Shikamaru, Choji, tenten, Ino and a lot more, seem to be dead.
Scene goes back to the main battlefield. The smoke, Naruto is causing with his "Endima-jutsu" can be seen miles away.
Madara, watching in terror, is now certain. He takes off his Mask.
Madara: Damn you Naruto. Damn you Kyubi. Years, i worked for my Moons eye plan, years i worked for the Uchiha clan to rise again.
Madara: ...
Madara: "now screaming" Naruto, do you really think you create peace, if you kill me? Do you really think that matters at this point? You said it by yourself, that will just turn into a circle of hate.
Naruto inside Naruto: ...
He watches on the ground, then back up again.
Naruto inside Naruto: Some sacrifices must be made, no one will miss you..."now with a raging face" Madara!!
Narutos body gets ready to attack, Madara trys to cover himself with the 4 tailed beasts, who have fear in their eyes.
Tsunade: Naruto...
Narutos soul turns his bodys head in Tsunades direction.
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Naruto inside Naruto: ..granny..
Tsunade: I know that it's already to late, even if it's breaking my heart. Naruto...you should know, that we all love you and even if you are not with us anymore, you will be always in our memory. Humans are just lost, when they are forgotten, you will never be forgotten. I speak for everybody, as the current Hokage.
Narutos soul grabs the cage, in his memory, his old live. Disrespected, miss threaded by nearly everyone. The camera turns up, you can see Narutos face, with the biggest smile, he ever made.
Tsunade: You won't be forgotten, you hear me? "Tears start to fall down"
Sasuke Sakura and the others all watching with agony.
Tsunade: You won't be forgotten, because your face will be next to your dads, on Konohas rock.
Narutos eyes open up, he's speechless, he has this strange feeling, about his dream.
Tsunade: "screaming with falling tears" As Konohas offical 6th Hokage!!!
Kakashi: Tsunade...
Neji, Lee and Sai: 6th Hokage?!?
Sakura: Tsunade.. "tears falling down, her eyes are closed"
Sasuke:heh..
All the emptyness and the hole in Narutos heart dissapear. He did everything he dreamed off.
Naruto inside Naruto: hahahahahaha
Narutos soul falls back into the low water.
Sasuke remembers their first conversation with Kakashi, about the dreams. He begins to smile.
Sasuke: Naruto, when i remember you as a little dumbass, i really... "laughs"
Sasuke: i belived, that you will manage to reach your goals. You have this strange attitude, i think i would have never been able to really kill you. I tryed to not see it that way, but in the end you were always my best friend. So..i never stoped beliving in you for a second.
Naruto inside Naruto: Sasuke.."smiling with tears"
Right after that, Narutos soul can see his right hand, slowly dissolving.
Naruto inside Naruto: Shit, i need to finish it fast.
Narutos body gets ready, the 9 tails move into attack position.
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Madara: Okay, here he comes.
8 tails shoot forward, they hit all 4 tailed beats, the sparks move into the front side of the 8 tails who penetrated the 4 tailed beasts. A big explosion.
Madara "thinking": My god, even with the rinnegan and the sharingan i couldn't see what just happened.
Kakashi: ...i didn't see anything, what happened?
Neji: No idea.
Kabuto: No wonder, you think the Kyubi would sacrifice himself for some cool red glowing on Narutos body? So he becomes 50% cooler and attracts some chicks?
Kakashi: ...
Kabuto: After the Endima-jutsu is done, both die, but before they die, their attacks are not avoidable, because they move with the speed of light. That's why he is burning, because his body is prepared for a speed no ninja could ever reach.
Kakashi: The speed of light? "shocked"
Neji: Thats impossible!
Lee: ..and i thought i was fast, when i open my Chakra gates...
Scene goes back to Naruto, his body didn't move from his place. All 4 tailed beasts are history.
Madara: ... "speechless"
Madara "thinking: I need to get out of here, the Endima-jutsu is a timebomb, if i manage to just use my space and time ability i won.
The moment Madara starts to use it, some milliseconds after that, Naruto rushes in front of him.
Madara: wha...!
Naruto grabs his neck, moving madaras body back and slaming it on the ground hardly. Madara immediatly pukes blood and his neck begins to burn.
Madara: God..."cough".."cough" damn..you ..
Naruto inside Naruto: ...
Scene goes to Sasuke, Sakura and Tsunade.
Sakura: He doesn't finish him off?
Sasuke: Tze, Naruto belives in the good side of us, but Madara is evil, not even Naruto can do something about it.
Back to Madara and Naruto.
Madara: What.."cough" are you waiting for? I don't wanna live in this world anymore, if it's not controled by me. All tailed beasts are dead now, there is no way i can pull my moons eye plan off. It's over for me. Now do what you have to do.
Naruto inside Naruto: ...
Narutos right arm dissapeared completly, his left begins to dissolve.
Madara: Naruto..
Naruto inside Naruto: ..."with a sad face"
Madara: Free me from this world, i want to see my brother again. I miss him.
Madara: "cough"
Madara: I know that you can hear me in there, please, do it.
Naruto inside Naruto: Alright Madara, you won.
Naruto uses his left arm for the punch, he hits below Madaras left shoulder, penetrating the heart.
Madara: arghh..."coughing blood"
Madara: Brot...her..I...m..ehhh "closing his eyes"
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Narutos soul watching Madaras dead body. His right and left arm dissapeared already. He trys to move his bodys head around, to see his friends again.
Naruto inside Naruto: Come on!!
His body won't respond. Naruto looks down. His feets are gone, he is now dissolving from the bottom.
Naruto inside Naruto: Please, one last time, just one last time, i wanna see them again.
He trys to move his head, which now responds, he can see all of his friends.
Sakura: Naruto..? "completly crying and near a mental breakdown"
Sasuke: ...
Tsunade: You will be missed...6th...Hokage.
Scene goes to Neji, Lee and Kakashi.
Kakashi: Naruto..."he fells on his knees"
All remember their past and which role Naruto played. They realize, that Naruto did something for all of them.
Naruto keeps on dissolving, now only his neck and head are still visible.
Naruto inside Naruto: Take care of them, Sasuke. "smiling in the end"
Sasuke: ..."tears in eyes"
Naruto dissapearing. Narutos body spreads into sparks, who slowly dissolve.
Sakura: "screaming" NARUTOOO...!!!!!
She loses her consciousness. Sasuke catchs her. Kakashi and the others join the Group.
Kakashi: So, seems like, that's it?
???: Not yet, my dear friends.
Sasuke: ...
Sasuke stands up, with an evil face.
Kabuto: Now it's time to fullfill my plan and you, my dear old friends, are not part of it.
Snakes get out all over Kabutos body.
Kabuto: What a coincidence, that you are all out of Chakra, or was that just a genious move of mine?
to be continued
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