The New Generation Chapter 3: The Path between Right and Wrong

[ZK]

@Sinderella: Damn right,babe.

lolol
I soo need to submit that Liger mode now. >_>

I liked this chapter.
Good job!

O_O
*Looks at how awesome it is in the fanfic*

Hmm, i gotta see a LoK about a Liger contract <_<

 

[Akisha]

Thanks everyone

 

[Jinbei]

O_O
*Looks at how awesome it is in the fanfic*

Hmm, i gotta see a LoK about a Liger contract <_<

Your chances are 0.00000000000000000000001%.
I actually begged him for a year. ~_~

 

[ZK]

Your chances are 0.00000000000000000000001%.
I actually begged him for a year. ~_~

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[Akisha]

Your chances are 0.00000000000000000000001%.
I actually begged him for a year. ~_~

have you ever been a member for a year ? xd

 

[Akiza]

^_^ who is he ?

Dan. xD

*Writes down that name for if I ever reach Sage rank.*

o_o And dang. I'm a jerk. XD

Anyway, good chapter - nice details in the action seen, and the analytical points of the characters.

xd And again, good job with the epilogue, adding an element of mystery and interest to the story.

indeed. ^_^ can't wait for my role really lol

 

[The_Empire]

No Dei Dei so it is wack

 

[Akisha]

don't worry you are in my list as en enemy ^_^

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

The story progressed but the mystery is still in tact lol There are actually more questions than answers with each chapter but that is a good method you’ve got going on Onto the next chapter ^.^​