Helvetes Gjenfødelse [Infernal Rebirth] Act X: Heartbeat

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HELVETES GJENFØDELSE
[Infernal Rebirth]

Act X

Heartbeat

Venera: I cannot sense it any longer..

Tiberiu: I think that may be because it is beneath us...

*Cracking sound*

Narrator: The earth underneath the two begins to crack as an enormous creature rises with its mouth open in an attempt to swallow them whole.

Venera: (Shouts) Their seems to be more than one!

Tiberiu: (Shouts) I’ve taken notice!

Narrator: Aura envelops the two as they barley avoid the swift creature.

Venera: Look! They appear from under the Earth and in the sky!

Narrator: Three different types of dragons; Wyvern, Lindworm and Guivre appear.

[Insight: Wyvern]

Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, singled tailed creature.

Origin: Great Britain.

[Insight: Lindworm]

Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal, singled tail with a venomous bite.

Origin: Germany.

[Insight: Guivre]

Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath.

Origin: France.

Tiberiu: (In thought) Damn it this is his doing but I do not understand his intentions..

Tiberiu: (Shouts) Be wary of the one with the horns on its head..the Guivre as it breaths diseases!

Tiberiu: (In thought) What!

Narrator: All three dragons head in Venera’s direction.

Tiberiu: (In thought) Why do they target only one of us?

Venera: (In thought) I’ve been needing a fight!

Tiberiu: (In thought) These creatures are fearsome however...I sense them to be eerily stronger than what I was told by-

Tiberiu: He must have either infused his aura or that magic into them..

Narrator: Each dragon began to emit a a blackish color flared energy as the Guivre dove into the ground.

Venera: (In thought) They’re attempting to confuse me but I know better..

Narrator: In an attempt to aid his accomplice, Tiberiu began to move but was quickly blocked by the Wyvern. The ground then tears revealing an acrid pale green colored mist that sprouted and engulfs the hybrid Dhampiresa.

Tiberiu: (In thought) Venera!???

Narrator: Her afterimage is swallowed by the plagued mist.

Venera: (In thought) Had I not release my aura...it would have had me!

Narrator: She thought as she lifted her gripped crucifix blade at the dragon’s neck.

Venera: (In thought) *Gasp* What! It’s skin reflects my sword...

Venera: (In thought) Shit! Not only is the body as hard as diamonds but is secreted in some sort of acid..

Narrator: Her sword then began to melt away.

Venera: (In thought) My blade!

Venera: Shit! Weapons seem to have no effect at least on this one..in fact they are all most likely the same way...

Narrator: Tiberiu’s aura began to leak out.

Wyvern: (Shouts) You will not pass me!

Tiberiu: (In thought) It speaks! This is not at all in the teachings he taught-it must be that magic they all have..

Tiberiu: (Shouts) NOTHING WILL STOP ME!!!

Wyvern: (In thought) What power..

Narrator: Tiberiu’s aura explodes.

Venera: (In thought) I did not think I would have to..

Narrator: She too releases her full aura.

[Setting change: Abrud Town Outskirts - North Area]

Narrator: As nightfall settled in, both vampires began to awake from their slumbers.

Neculai: *Yawn* ..I really needed that

Attila: I take it young master healed me?

Neculai: Yeah...we were able to get you to him in time..

Attila: I am pleased to have recovered to serve our young master-

Narrator: A black portal abruptly opens behind the two as a huge figure exits it.

*slamming sound*

Narrator: One of its colossal arms quickly swings at Attila sending him several feet into the air.

Neculai: (Shouts) Attila are you okay?!

Attila: (Shouts) Yes..I was able to block with my weapon and absorbed about half the damage as I sensed it from behind

Neculai: (In thought) Damn! I was late in noticing it..

Neculai: (Screams) You’ll pay for choosing us as opponents..

Attila: (Shouts) Do not permit it any chances-

Neculai: Right!

Narrator: The younger appearing vampire releases his blooded weapon.

Attila: (In thought) This enemy appears like a-

Attila: (Shouts) I think this is a Golem!

[Insight: Golem]

Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

Origin: Jewish.

Attila: (In thought) Though something is different with this one as I sense such unusual power..

Narrator: Another figure charges from the west area.

Attila: (Shouts) It is slow in body and mind but makes up for it with power!

Attila: (Shouts) I’ll create an opening so you can attack it!

Neculai: (Shouts) Okay!

Narrator: His blooded spinning chakram whip is swung and wraps around the golem’s body with the sharp outer hoop grinding at its torso.

Attila: (In thought) I knew it..the sharp end of my weapon has no effect...

Narrator: It began to wriggle out of the whip’s constriction, Neculai then thrusts towards the Golem with his blooded paired thorn staffs.

Neculai: What!...its body takes no damage..

Narrator: He continued to whack his double staffs at its body. The bloodied whip is then pulled back as Attila catches the chakram.

Attila: Maybe if we-

Attila: (Shouts) Neculai pull back!

Octavian: (Shouts) I could sense something but I had no idea!

Narrator: The Lythimpir states as he arrives from the west.

Octavian: (In thought) Two on one and they still seem to be having much trouble..

Attila: It’s entire body is practically impenetrable!

Octavian: (In thought) ..I see

Attila: The three of us must attack it simultaneously!

Octavian: (Malicious tone) Alright!

Narrator: Attila launches his whip which enwraps the enemy once more as the chakram end spins slashing at its body. Neculai moves in and aims his weapons at the leg area as the Lythimpir flew onto its back and began to slash at it with his wrist wing.

Attila: (In thought) This seems impossible!

Octavian: (In thought) Even my durable wing has little effect!

Narrator: Their attempts end up in failure when the humanoid construct finally frees itself with a force that breaks apart the blooded whip as it splashes onto the ground.

Attila: (In thought) What sheer strength!

Attila: You two back away...I will restrain it once more!

Narrator: His weapon reforms as he hurled it at the Golem but before it was to reach, Neculai is caught in the Golem’s grip. It overlaps its fist with the other hand as it then slams him onto the ground. Blood splashes everywhere.

Act X End

Has the wild vampire met his end?

[ Monster Encyclopedia ]

The text in bold is relevant to this Act:

Origin: Vampires originate in central and eastern Europe.

[Insight: Pureblood Vampire]

Description: Is the result of one born from a genuine vampire mother and father. Pure blooded vampires are rare and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity.

Appearance: Is one who has vampire ethnicity and is born into or owns great power and money. An aristocrat of sorts.

[Insight: Turned Vampire]

Description: Is the result of a human bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chooses to turn their victim thus is cursed and transforms sometime within the hour.

Appearance: Will usually be a human who cannot fend for themselves. A tramp or an unfortunate victim in the wrong place.

[Insight: Mutated Vampire]

Description: This occurrence is unique and the result of Tiberiu’s soul not being able to normally pass on as due others who are turned.

In Tiberiu's case, he was bitten and sucked to death by a vampire who chose not to turn their victim thus at that time somehow a mutation occurred rather than death. The soul was imprisoned from continuing onto the afterlife and subdued into an enforced transformation. His form is unique as he died never turning into a vampire and was then forcefully given life again. He was re-birthed with vampire-like qualities. A mutated vampire has not been ranked due to this being the first of its kind.

Appearance: In the requirement for more power; Tiberiu undergoes a slight mutation in terms of his body becoming enveloped by a sphere of his own aura and a limb-like appendage that grew on his upper back; blood red in color. The next occurrence results in a second blood red colored limb to have risen and the initial limb has changed into a black color though his aura seems to take a longer time to retract. When the required power had been met it then retracts. The following time a third blood red colored limb rises while the previous limbs; the initial turning black and second retaining the blood red color and it has also taken an even longer time for his aura to retract. When the required power had been met it then withdraws.

[Insight: Lycanthrope]

Description: Is one who is bitten by another Lycanthrope during a full moon and thus cursed. After the next full moon and their official transformation, they can then transform at will on any given time of day.

Appearance: It usually has a height of around 6'5 to 7‘0 weighing of about two hundred-fifty to three hundred pounds. A bulky body, silvery fur, long thick claws, large jaw, massive fangs, powerful mid to long length tail and huge hind legs in appearance. It's origin is Europe.

[Insight: Hybrid Lycanthrope]

Description: Is a Lycanthrope who consumes blood of a differing ethnic creature. In Octavian’s case; he drinks the blood of a mutated vampire thus his form is unique.

Appearance: This pre-hybrid form invokes the Lycanthrope’s fur to malt, skin to turn a white color and the body becomes covered in opened cuts which is then stained red with the exposure to their blood.

[Insight: Lythimpir]

Description: Is a self named term Octavian gives himself and is unique to him as he transcended from that of a Lycanthrope by means of drinking the blood of a mutated vampire. It’s power differs by the vampire who offered his/her blood. This hybrid form is unique.

Appearance: His hybrid form is completed as his hair takes on a raven color and grows out above his lower back, bat-like ears replace the lycanthrope ears, the lycanthrope snout retracts creating a more humanoid visage, irises slit in two colored silver and raven which overlap each other resembling an x. He gains vampire fangs. His body from head to toe becomes silver colored and is elongated. The waist down is covered in raven colored fur. Bat-like wings; raven in color protrude one from the right arm and left leg located on the right side of his wrist and from the back of his ankle that spread with a wingspan of about six feet. His tail thinned out and grew several feet in length. His healing capabilities, strength and stamina have heightened.

[Insight: Mahr]

Description: Is a female goblin which rides on people's chests while they sleep inducing nightmares while their weight causes the victim to have difficulty breathing. It’s origin is Germany.

Appearance: Is a female spirit or goblin with a hideous visage. The goblin’s body is yellow-greenish in color, stout and when crawling on its victim which are usually female; will be in a sitting position on the chest area.

[Insight: Dhampiresa]

Description: Is a type of vampire hybrid who is birthed from a vampire father and human mother. Thus is half vampire half human and the male counterpart is named Dhampir. They will usually be carrying weapons and are considered high rank in the vampire ethnicity. It's origin is Balkan.

Appearance: Her weapons are a crossbow with arrows made of silver and wooden stakes as well as a long pointed end sword made of silver; forged into a close appearance to that of a crucifix thus far have been revealed.

[Insight: Hybrid Dhampiresa]

Description: In Venera’s case, a Dhampiresa who consumed blood of a differing ethnic creature; a Lythimpir thus making this form unique.

Appearance: Venera’s pre-hybrid form causes her irises to gain two extra slits on the bottom perpendicular to each other appearing as an upside down T; glowing orchid color.

[Insight: Zombie]

Description: Is a corpse reanimated by a sorcerer through a spell. It’s origin is Haiti.

Appearance: The corpse is no one in particular as the sorcerer simply will cast their spell over any grave sight. However, the sorcerer is sure to use a fresh corpse as it will be much more sustainable for the commands than a decomposed body. Although, the corpse will become greatly disfigured through the spell’s process.

[Insight: Bokor]

Description: Is a sorcerer who uses black and white magic to cast spells, curses or to create creatures. It’s origin is Haiti.

[Insight: Ghoul]

Description: Is a desert dwelling jinn possessing the ability to change its form into any animal or human. Their true form is that of a spirit. It’s origin is Arabia.

Appearance: Golden colored mist appearing in the form of a footless demon. Every Ghoul’s true form varies.

[Insight: Wyvern]

† Description: Is a legendary two winged, two legged, single tailed creature. It’s origin is Great Britain.

† Appearance: It’s body is ruby red in color, completely covered in spikes, having no arms and a barbed tail.

[Insight: Lindworm]

† Description: Is a legendary wingless creature with a long body, bipedal and single tail with a venomous bite. It’s origin is Germany.

† Appearance: It’s body has a emerald green color, lengthy serpentine body and has parts of its body intertwined.

[Insight: Guivre]

† Description: Is a legendary creature with a long body and horned head who spreads plagues through its breath. It’s origin is France.

† Appearance: It’s body has a sapphire blue color, long serpentine body, the single tail splits in two at the end and has five horns on the head; it’s forehead containing largest two.

[Insight: Golem]

† Description: Is a mythical construct created to serve its creator; either a greatly empowered sorcerer or wizard. It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud; resembling a humanoid. This construct has no mind, soul and cannot speak. It’s origin is Jewish.

† Appearance: It is constructed from inanimate matter consisting usually of rock or mud thus the body will have a brownish color of sorts; resembling a humanoid. It has no mind, soul and cannot speak.

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act X: Heartbeat

Lulian really seems to be going through a lot of trouble to stop Tiberiu. But the way you wrote this chapter implies there is something important you will reveal very soon and that will explain a lot :) Wouldn't have even thought you'd get dragons in here, too :p Nice chapter
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act X: Heartbeat

what is that?? a book? sounds interesting.
To think of my Fanfic as something like a novel, well I'm honored ;) Thank you!

Cul one bro
Thanks ^.^

Lulian really seems to be going through a lot of trouble to stop Tiberiu. But the way you wrote this chapter implies there is something important you will reveal very soon and that will explain a lot :) Wouldn't have even thought you'd get dragons in here, too :p Nice chapter
Yes, that is apparent XD You are very perceptive ;) Well, I attempted to throw in every kind of Folkloric creature out there but I could fit in so much. -Thanks :)
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act X: Heartbeat

Hehe, i was a little bit late due to some tireness and some stiffs jobs :p

Anyways, nice chapter once more. It was a good battle-orientated chapter, less intense than the one against the zombies but it was pretty interesting with the introductions of those dragons.

They got my attention but for once, Tiberiu interested me. he seemed really powerful with this aura-thingy becoming really unstoppable till now and Venera seem more like his best complement.

I really liked this phrase "Damn it this is his doing but I do not understand his intentions.". I smiled, thinking that it was the same case for me. Lulian's moves are more intriguing but his overall idea is something else. And this really got me hooked.

The Golem was presented to be quite powerful but I wonder if you'll indeed kill Neculai. This is getting interesting but it's nail-biting mostly because, 10 Acts passed and Lulian has made some moves but still, he's still hiding in the darkness. That's some brilliant stuff. No need to re-praise your excellent writing...
 

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Re: Helvetes Gjenfødselse [Infernal Rebirth] Act X: Heartbeat

Hehe, i was a little bit late due to some tireness and some stiffs jobs :p

Anyways, nice chapter once more. It was a good battle-orientated chapter, less intense than the one against the zombies but it was pretty interesting with the introductions of those dragons.

They got my attention but for once, Tiberiu interested me. he seemed really powerful with this aura-thingy becoming really unstoppable till now and Venera seem more like his best complement.

I really liked this phrase "Damn it this is his doing but I do not understand his intentions.". I smiled, thinking that it was the same case for me. Lulian's moves are more intriguing but his overall idea is something else. And this really got me hooked.

The Golem was presented to be quite powerful but I wonder if you'll indeed kill Neculai. This is getting interesting but it's nail-biting mostly because, 10 Acts passed and Lulian has made some moves but still, he's still hiding in the darkness. That's some brilliant stuff. No need to re-praise your excellent writing...
Well, kudos to you for being able to juggle all of that and still have time for reading Fanfictions-you remind me of Mikey ;) I love how honest you can be and I think the following Act may pick up from the lack of intensity. Not attempting to sound conceded but hopeful lol So I take it that you like for the Protagonist to usually or always be powerful...interesting..well if I haven’t made much reference to it I know for a fact the future Acts will compliment that. I liked how you liked Tiberiu’s quote and how it made you smile. I could picture the smile that Sai gave off when he was deciding nicknames for Sakura/Naruto (which is awesome!!! XD). There will be interesting things that will occur with Venera’s character, etc. I can’t wait to reveal them but one thing with me is that I am slow with revelations and thus will test my reader’s patience indeed. Thanks for the compliments and if the fight does not escalade in opinion I will at least know that the following Act should surprise ^.^
 

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Well, kudos to you for being able to juggle all of that and still have time for reading Fanfictions-you remind me of Mikey ;) I love how honest you can be and I think the following Act may pick up from the lack of intensity. Not attempting to sound conceded but hopeful lol So I take it that you like for the Protagonist to usually or always be powerful...interesting..well if I haven’t made much reference to it I know for a fact the future Acts will compliment that. I liked how you liked Tiberiu’s quote and how it made you smile. I could picture the smile that Sai gave off when he was deciding nicknames for Sakura/Naruto (which is awesome!!! XD). There will be interesting things that will occur with Venera’s character, etc. I can’t wait to reveal them but one thing with me is that I am slow with revelations and thus will test my reader’s patience indeed. Thanks for the compliments and if the fight does not escalade in opinion I will at least know that the following Act should surprise ^.^
No problem...
Feedback should always be honest and one with respect also, that's always my opinion. Well, tempting me by saying that the chapters will heighten in intensity definitely works in my case.
It's not that I like Protagonist to be powerful but I usually like a character's development and characteristics first. As I said earlier, I prefer Lulian ans Octavian more than him but this chapter worked in getting me more intrigued by Tiberiu's development.
I can't really picture the Sai's smile but I hope you didn't visualize a gay smile Lol.
Interesting, that indeed is a great tease...Awaiting for the next then.
 

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No problem...
Feedback should always be honest and one with respect also, that's always my opinion. Well, tempting me by saying that the chapters will heighten in intensity definitely works in my case.
It's not that I like Protagonist to be powerful but I usually like a character's development and characteristics first. As I said earlier, I prefer Lulian ans Octavian more than him but this chapter worked in getting me more intrigued by Tiberiu's development.
I can't really picture the Sai's smile but I hope you didn't visualize a gay smile Lol.
Interesting, that indeed is a great tease...Awaiting for the next then.
Yes, you are completely correct and I feel the same way ;) I’m pleased to know that there is still hope for this mini battle arc XD Okay, I somewhat assumed though I was incorrect lol I can understand Octavian as a likeable character but I was surely surprised when you chose Lulian as another choice. That character of all the others I think would be the least likeable being a sadistic bisexual rapist serial killer with no remorse and yet another side to him; caring and protective of that opened up when he met the protagonist. However, I am grateful that a character like that could be liked as I enjoyed creating it ^.^ Well I believe that smile was depicted in the anime only though it was not homosexual at all rather epic in my opinion XD
 

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Nice Chapter! I'm loving all of the folkloric creatures you're incorporating into this FF to spice it up and give it a whole lot of variety! Keep it up! It's getting quite Epic! :D
 

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Nice Chapter! I'm loving all of the folkloric creatures you're incorporating into this FF to spice it up and give it a whole lot of variety! Keep it up! It's getting quite Epic! :D
Thanks and I would also say that the folkloric creatures I blend within my story is most likely the high light lol I hope I can continue to release Acts that only excel the previous ones in terms of arousing my readers ;)
 

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Nooooo!:T_T: I so envy your knowledge of the dragons!!! I need to covet those! I have this work that have been pending for 2 years now and it involves them! *sigh* why am I such a lazy searcher?!:? I am definitely spellbound with the appearance of the dragons and to your knowledge about them. Their form, their origin, their capabilities, and powers. I really just love mythical creatures, beings, and everything that comes from imagination no matter how they are and where they come from.

The chapter moved fast that I thought it was so short but, it was not. It must be because of how you delivered the fights in there. Clear and concise. Also, I would admit that I seem to have better picture and appreciation of the weapons now than before. After being addicted to Dynasty Warriors xd:D I've at least eased out some of the frustrations I have on my very limited knowledge of it. So, that must have helped me picture out every detail of the fight. It is however incomparable as to how you delivered the scenes.:)

Hehe - while Venera was plunging into the dragon's heart and finding out that her weapon could not penetrate (infact it meltedxd) I thought of Kakashi's Raikiri and the creature in the fiction that I have been planning to make since I started watching Supernaturalxd:p

I just had to LOL on Attilaxd having been knocked back by the Golem after waking up and knowing that he have just been healed.:lmao: Good thing he was able to block it with his weaponxd I was thinking ahead he'd be injured again so, that just made it funnyxd...Uhmm -- who's got the power to mold his blood again? Sorry, I forgot and -- well:eek::p it'll take time for me to find it through each chaptersxd:D and I just mentioned that I'm working at the same time catching up with the FF's - hehe:p
 
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Nooooo!:T_T: I so envy your knowledge of the dragons!!! I need to covet those! I have this work that have been pending for 2 years now and it involves them! *sigh* why am I such a lazy searcher?!:? I am definitely spellbound with the appearance of the dragons and to your knowledge about them. Their form, their origin, their capabilities, and powers. I really just love mythical creatures, beings, and everything that comes from imagination no matter how they are and where they come from.

The chapter moved fast that I thought it was so short but, it was not. It must be because of how you delivered the fights in there. Clear and concise. Also, I would admit that I seem to have better picture and appreciation of the weapons now than before. After being addicted to Dynasty Warriors xd:D I've at least eased out some of the frustrations I have on my very limited knowledge of it. So, that must have helped me picture out every detail of the fight. It is however incomparable as to how you delivered the scenes.:)

Hehe - while Venera was plunging into the dragon's heart and finding out that her weapon could not penetrate (infact it meltedxd) I thought of Kakashi's Raikiri and the creature in the fiction that I have been planning to make since I started watching Supernaturalxd:p

I just had to LOL on Attilaxd having been knocked back by the Golem after waking up and knowing that he have just been healed.:lmao: Good thing he was able to block it with his weaponxd I was thinking ahead he'd be injured again so, that just made it funnyxd...Uhmm -- who's got the power to mold his blood again? Sorry, I forgot and -- well:eek::p it'll take time for me to find it through each chaptersxd:D and I just mentioned that I'm working at the same time catching up with the FF's - hehe:p
Thanks for your compliment over my research abilities XD Thank you again-I suppose the fast paced theme was a profound factor in this fanfiction as I think Black despair had dragged on forever lol Oh I checked out Dynasty Warriors and it looked really cool ;) That is awesome how a scene out of my story reminded you of yours ^.^ Well the ones who can mold their blood into weapons are simply the high ranking vampires such as purebloods and hybrid vampires. Turned vampires such as Attila/Neculai do not possess aura. Hope that helps ;)
 

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Thanks for your compliment over my research abilities XD Thank you again-I suppose the fast paced theme was a profound factor in this fanfiction as I think Black despair had dragged on forever lol Oh I checked out Dynasty Warriors and it looked really cool ;) That is awesome how a scene out of my story reminded you of yours ^.^ Well the ones who can mold their blood into weapons are simply the high ranking vampires such as purebloods and hybrid vampires. Turned vampires such as Attila/Neculai do not possess aura. Hope that helps ;)
Oohh..hmm..I was thinking Neculai could manipulate his blood and you probably just had him do something but revealed only his blood splattering all over the floor.:p I'm going to the next chapter anyways so, I guess I'll find out if he has or has not met his demise.:)

EDIT: After having partly read chapter XI (Internet was lost) - I think I'm lostxd. I'll ask you in VMxd...
 
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Awesome detail regarding the 3 dragons, I know it may not seem like much, but it's much more easier to picture when you can visualize how they each differ in appearance and abilities. Another action-packed chapter, with quite a few close calls, I might add - nevertheless, they've add that extra tinge of success to your story, and that's always good.
 

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Awesome detail regarding the 3 dragons, I know it may not seem like much, but it's much more easier to picture when you can visualize how they each differ in appearance and abilities. Another action-packed chapter, with quite a few close calls, I might add - nevertheless, they've add that extra tinge of success to your story, and that's always good.
Thank you for the compliments ;) I'm pleased that my details are enough. The thrills and action are most likely the main aspects I strive to add into my stories lol I'm happy to hear the story still intrigues you enough to read on ^.^
 
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