Weaving Destiny 12: Giving Up and Letting Go
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That's good, your highness!Okay princess
I'll get back to work
Better work your ass off or your fans will go crazy!
Kuroi Honoo
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I liked the battle scene very much and again you have wonderful detailing and expression skills. It felt like reading a Harry Potter book lol I am a little confused on something though. Kakashi was not responsible for Arashi’s pain of losing everything precious and it was due to her own uncontrollable power instead? I apologize but I have a really horrific memory and so I can tend to get somethings mixed up now and then as a result I am definitely happy to hear next chap "will be another action packed chapter" ^.^
I am definitely happy to hear next chap "will be another action packed chapter" ^.^
AWWww... that last three portions where you talked about obito being a cry baby that tears came out from his left or right (i forgot) eye, that was a touchy, and then again, that sai went through a couple of pages to learn expressions, lol that was funny and was a happy ending to your chapter!! I loved it, good work, you got some good fresh brain, nikkou chan
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Reading a Harry Potter book, ha?xd Well, must only be because you are in to reading the book (HP Book)xd...Good thing for you to have noticed Kakashi's blaming himself about Arashi's pain, really. Because, you know what? As I lost the Kakashi-Arashi passion months ago, I think I am able to recall some things and that would get me right back on track in the ending chapters..Soo, you will have to wait for the end to get your answer.xd I might as well re-read my previous chaps to recall and get the ending I wanted to portray when I started building up this story.I liked the battle scene very much and again you have wonderful detailing and expression skills. It felt like reading a Harry Potter book lol I am a little confused on something though. Kakashi was not responsible for Arashi’s pain of losing everything precious and it was due to her own uncontrollable power instead? I apologize but I have a really horrific memory and so I can tend to get somethings mixed up now and then as a result
Good fresh brain?xd Check on the next chapters then, if I still have those intact.LOL!xd Thanks, uzukyubi-kun, I'm glad you liked it.
And I'm glad you noticed that part, too. It's some kind of a drama, is it?xdwhat should i say drama or something elseReading a Harry Potter book, ha?xd Well, must only be because you are in to reading the book (HP Book)xd...Good thing for you to have noticed Kakashi's blaming himself about Arashi's pain, really. Because, you know what? As I lost the Kakashi-Arashi passion months ago, I think I am able to recall some things and that would get me right back on track in the ending chapters..Soo, you will have to wait for the end to get your answer.xd I might as well re-read my previous chaps to recall and get the ending I wanted to portray when I started building up this story.
Good fresh brain?xd Check on the next chapters then, if I still have those intact.LOL!xd Thanks, uzukyubi-kun, I'm glad you liked it.
just understand that the last portions were a charm to your chapter, i mean i was smiling plus happy after reading those few lines just like when i read the real manga or watch the anime well i was going to thank you but i didn't find the *thank you* button and why didn't you send me links for this chapter?! i just saw it yesterday and went rushing in, lol i was kind of sad u didn't inform me, nikkou chan and where can i find the next chapters?!
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I suppose so however, besides how novelistic your Fanfic gives off it is very descriptive something I somewhat lack lol Well, I invoked something that cannot be revealed just yet...that is very intriguing and I am now excited to know what still lies between these two that is yet to be unraveled ^.^ I also forgot to mention on the previous post about Sai's part which was epic!Reading a Harry Potter book, ha?xd Well, must only be because you are in to reading the book (HP Book)xd...Good thing for you to have noticed Kakashi's blaming himself about Arashi's pain, really. Because, you know what? As I lost the Kakashi-Arashi passion months ago, I think I am able to recall some things and that would get me right back on track in the ending chapters..Soo, you will have to wait for the end to get your answer.xd I might as well re-read my previous chaps to recall and get the ending I wanted to portray when I started building up this story.
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