6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 5

[Escorpiius]

A "little" late, I know, but you know mexd

Anyways, I think this one is one of the best so far and I pretty much enjoyed all of it.
I like what you have come up with so far and the choices you have made, even though it feels like you kinda are changing the main point so to speak. Not that it's a bad idea, not at all, just that this one seemed to be sort of like a "change-over" from Naruto based to Harry Potter based instead of even-ing both themes out. However I guess this is needed to grasp the story better and I guess since that the three first ones + the special chapter and partly the 4th one mainly focused on the Naruto story, I think the FF itself will benefit from having some early Harry Potter based ones as well, pretty much like this one felt.

Still I like the familiar aspects you added like "...his hand for the umpteenth time." which made me quite frankly laugh pretty goodxd

The choice of having a time skip instead of placing it right after the books seem more propriety as well, even though this kinda makes Naruto and the rest look a little young in comparison

As I just re-watched the six first Harry Potter films (and because of this, I felt like re-reading chapter 4 as well), I think that you match the characters pretty good and the whole concept from story making to making good dialogues are pretty well done so far.

Think that concludes what I felt like saying, and I fell that this is one of the best FFs at NB at the moment, and everyone should try to read it.

Only one thing that I will have to say though (not a bad thing or anything), but I'll pm you about that instead as it might be a little too long and too off topic to write here

If I were a poet, I think Micheal and late will rhythm really well

Jokes apart, thanks xd
Well, kind of, I must agree that this is moving more towards HP storyline but I think both will blend together after some chapters or precisely after Kabuto's move takes more "importance." I'm indeed allowing some HP moments (despite retaining some elements from Naruto) since of the earlier chapters.

Haha, I didn't really noticed that part. I think it came naturally but I love the line Kakashi give to Harry though.

Euh, not really. It is in fact based right after the epilogue of the book. They are indeed a bit older. I think I'll post something on the time setting in a post for you and some who seems confused about.

Thanks for the compliments again but the mix, I must agree, went much better than I expected initially. Just a little more polishing about it but for me, it's the story/plot which deserved some new and crispy elements.

The long and tiring PM...yeah xd

 

[Escorpiius]

Okay, here is a post about the time setting of my FF. I used FICTIONAL dates/years for better illustration! Hope it'll be clear.

Chronicles Details (Years are invented for better example and Naruto and HP important events are compared next to each other)​

:

1963 – The Original Negotiation between Wizards and Ninjas (see C2)

1981 - Third Ninja War / End of 1st Wizarding War

1998 - Kyuubi Attack and Minato's Death / End of 2nd Wizarding War and death of Lord V and his troops

2014 - 4th Ninja War (the war in the current manga)

2017 - My 6th Hokage's Dimensional Chronicles FF events / Months after the last Harry Potter book's Epilogue

 

[Michael92]

Okay, here is a post about the time setting of my FF. I used FICTIONAL dates/years for better illustration! Hope it'll be clear.

Chronicles Details (Years are invented for better example and Naruto and HP important events are compared next to each other)​

:

1963 – The Original Negotiation between Wizards and Ninjas (see C2)

1981 - Third Ninja War / End of 1st Wizarding War

1998 - Kyuubi Attack and Minato's Death / End of 2nd Wizarding War and death of Lord V and his troops

2014 - 4th Ninja War (the war in the current manga)

2017 - My 6th Hokage's Dimensional Chronicles FF events / Months after the last Harry Potter book's Epilogue

Sounds interesting and well placed

 

[Escorpiius]

Thanks.

 

[Zith Driekwulf]

Well, I must agree. This, so far is a really good FF that I have read in NB. Though, I haven't really been reading a lot nor checked the others'. Even-ning out the plot could mean putting the two dimensions into one different territory. That sounds like an idea, is it not?!

 

[Escorpiius]

Well, I must agree. This, so far is a really good FF that I have read in NB. Though, I haven't really been reading a lot nor checked the others'. Even-ning out the plot could mean putting the two dimensions into one different territory. That sounds like an idea, is it not?!

Thanks...That's much compliments but you should check some others too
Hmmm...a new Territory :| I don't know. It will get a bit weird and tougher for me, I guess. There are two world (wizard and human) connected to Harry Potter history and the whole ninja world (in Naruto).
A new territory has to be outside of these three and also outside the human world which means new development and new characters. It's a bit hard and I don't think I'll be able to pull it off...
That, could perhaps give both plots (HP and Naruto) same importance but it's way too risky. Also, I'm havin' fun to see all the Naruto groups inside the mesmerizing castle...
I think I'll stick to Naruto group inside Harry Potter world.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Well, this was quite the talkative chapter lol This chap was meant to introduce the readers into the world of Harry Potter and boy did you do it well!!! I was very impressed with your absolute writing skills. There were some incorrect spellings however it is the most common of mistakes. However, your use of words is phenomenal and I am seriously jealous. I know it is a sin to envy though you make it very difficult Superb job with the introductions, detailing and descriptions. You can blend these two different genres, etc. wonderfully and I wish I could have those types of skills. I was thoroughly intrigued with the Tema/Shika/Shiho intanglement lol Fantastic idea with that one! I loved it as I think Shika/Shiho are perfect for each other if not with Ino XD I hope that continues to get attention later on. It was truly worth reading the final book in order to continue with your Fanfiction as I am enjoying it. I wonder what the following chap has in store. I can assume the introductions of the ninja but then afterwards what will ensue? Can’t wait! ​

 

[Escorpiius]

Well, this was quite the talkative chapter lol This chap was meant to introduce the readers into the world of Harry Potter and boy did you do it well!!! I was very impressed with your absolute writing skills. There were some incorrect spellings however it is the most common of mistakes. However, your use of words is phenomenal and I am seriously jealous. I know it is a sin to envy though you make it very difficult Superb job with the introductions, detailing and descriptions. You can blend these two different genres, etc. wonderfully and I wish I could have those types of skills. I was thoroughly intrigued with the Tema/Shika/Shiho intanglement lol Fantastic idea with that one! I loved it as I think Shika/Shiho are perfect for each other if not with Ino XD I hope that continues to get attention later on. It was truly worth reading the final book in order to continue with your Fanfiction as I am enjoying it. I wonder what the following chap has in store. I can assume the introductions of the ninja but then afterwards what will ensue? Can’t wait! ​

Hehe, thanks. Yeah, this was mostly done so as the characters of Naruto don't seem way too out of place in HP world. Stop envying people less talented in writing lol Yeah, the spellings error are often common mistakes made by me. Luckily MS Word limits the disaster effect I don't know if I made such a good job on this chapter but I am happy with it since I've improved much the something that I was far from ease in the previous chapters and that's with the scene changes.
Thanks, well, I originally planned to make this Shika-Temari-Shiho threesome bigger but it lost some importance in my mind while I progressed with the plot. I included it here since I did hyped it in previous chapters and I'll give it some attention in some other chapters perhaps but it will not be of upmost importance.

Heeh, keep reading then...

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Hehe, thanks. Yeah, this was mostly done so as the characters of Naruto don't seem way too out of place in HP world. Stop envying people less talented in writing lol Yeah, the spellings error are often common mistakes made by me. Luckily MS Word limits the disaster effect I don't know if I made such a good job on this chapter but I am happy with it since I've improved much the something that I was far from ease in the previous chapters and that's with the scene changes.
Thanks, well, I originally planned to make this Shika-Temari-Shiho threesome bigger but it lost some importance in my mind while I progressed with the plot. I included it here since I did hyped it in previous chapters and I'll give it some attention in some other chapters perhaps but it will not be of upmost importance.

Heeh, keep reading then...

Well in my honest opinion you are no where near a less talented writer. I believe that you are better than me in many aspects (seriously) I’m pleased to hear that you will not forget about the epic Shika threesome dilemma lol I know that it is not the bigger picture but it was very intriguing and a nice addition to the story. I will be off to chapter six! XD​

 

[Escorpiius]

Well in my honest opinion you are no where near a less talented writer. I believe that you are better than me in many aspects (seriously) I’m pleased to hear that you will not forget about the epic Shika threesome dilemma lol I know that it is not the bigger picture but it was very intriguing and a nice addition to the story. I will be off to chapter six! XD​

Thanks. That's interesting the mutual respect we give each other in terms of writing. Well, the Shika threesome was initially thought because I wasn't done with twisting enough things perhaps. I wonder if it's one of my quality or problem at times. Well, I take back a thought at it, I completely reversed some many aspects of both the HP and Naruto storyline apart from mixing them of-course. There's this threesome, Sasuke's death, Naru-Hina's torrid kiss in C3, giving Heisuke the Sharingan and without giving out spoilers, there are other things that are going to happen. Some certain, some that I dropped and some pending ideas. I take lot of risks with my FF, that's a fact that I assume but hopefully, I don't offense much Naruto or HP fans.
Okay

 

[MarBellarke]

Wonderful.. another lovely chapter

 

[Flash]

Keep it coming keep it coming bro......lol
Did you have to mention so many officials.....like you could have just said say 10 officials......but you mentioned the names and position.......
But anyway great chapter....