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*Stares at you flying towards me*

This could get ugly

While you were busy making the rock turn into stones, a huge hand of dense sand grabs your body up to your head without you knowing as this came from underneath you, this happens before you could even end forming the handseal boar, hence your tornado doesn't happen. The hand of sand then crushes you and your wings, then slams itself onto the ground with you in it, causing a huge deal of pain to you. This probably cause the hand of sand to lose it's form. I can now see parts of your body sticking out of the leftover sand from that jutsu. I then crush you using the remaining sand on top of you. Just in case your still alive, i do a string of 10 handseals, making a dentist chair coming your way.

(Hando Suna)- Hand of Sand
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This allows the user to be able to create a hand out of sand which can be used for blocking or attacking the enemy.

Note : Must be a sand user
Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~
Note : Can only be used 3x
Note : Last only one turn.

(Messaba Kusou) - Destroying Desert Burial
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A huge variation of Imperial Sand Burial that crushes with such force that it leaves behind only a giant crater.

(Doton: Shitae Shikaishi Kata: Unten Kouza) Earth Release: Animated Dentist Style: Operating Chair
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Type: Supplementary/Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Description: Forming the necessary 10 handseals, the user will then focus their chakra into the earth, and summon underneath their opponent, suprising them, a large Dentist's Operating Chair, which then binds them to the chair by the arms and legs, to be 'operated on' by the user with their following jutsu, such as an attack like Chidori or Hard Water Spike, numbing or rinsing their mouth out, respectively, but more likely killing them since either jutsu would separate their upper head from their mouth. The jutsu rises up quite quickly however if the opponent doesn't counter within 5 seconds, they are drawn into the chair and bound, even if they try to move away from it.
 

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*Stares at you flying towards me*

This could get ugly

While you were busy making the rock turn into stones, a huge hand of dense sand grabs your body up to your head without you knowing as this came from underneath you, this happens before you could even end forming the handseal boar, hence your tornado doesn't happen. The hand of sand then crushes you and your wings, then slams itself onto the ground with you in it, causing a huge deal of pain to you. This probably cause the hand of sand to lose it's form. I can now see parts of your body sticking out of the leftover sand from that jutsu. I then crush you using the remaining sand on top of you. Just in case your still alive, i do a string of 10 handseals, making a dentist chair coming your way.

(Hando Suna)- Hand of Sand
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This allows the user to be able to create a hand out of sand which can be used for blocking or attacking the enemy.

Note : Must be a sand user
Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~
Note : Can only be used 3x
Note : Last only one turn.

(Messaba Kusou) - Destroying Desert Burial
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: A huge variation of Imperial Sand Burial that crushes with such force that it leaves behind only a giant crater.

(Doton: Shitae Shikaishi Kata: Unten Kouza) Earth Release: Animated Dentist Style: Operating Chair
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Type: Supplementary/Summoning
Range: Short-Long
Description: Forming the necessary 10 handseals, the user will then focus their chakra into the earth, and summon underneath their opponent, suprising them, a large Dentist's Operating Chair, which then binds them to the chair by the arms and legs, to be 'operated on' by the user with their following jutsu, such as an attack like Chidori or Hard Water Spike, numbing or rinsing their mouth out, respectively, but more likely killing them since either jutsu would separate their upper head from their mouth. The jutsu rises up quite quickly however if the opponent doesn't counter within 5 seconds, they are drawn into the chair and bound, even if they try to move away from it.
You've overlooked that both my jutsu happen the same time. So if the your sand was turned into rocks, youre within the column of wind.

You've also overlooked that my compression solidifies all the sand that was heading towards me, so if somehow you managed to pull that jutsu in the column the hand would be stone by the time it stretches up from the ground to me.

Also how can you form that dentist chair mid-air? Just wondering?

I think you might have to redo. If am i mistaken, please let me know and i'll post an adequate response. :D
 

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You've overlooked that both my jutsu happen the same time. So if the your sand was turned into rocks, youre within the column of wind.

You've also overlooked that my compression solidifies all the sand that was heading towards me, so if somehow you managed to pull that jutsu in the column the hand would be stone by the time it stretches up from the ground to me.

Also how can you form that dentist chair mid-air? Just wondering?

I think you might have to redo. If am i mistaken, please let me know and i'll post an adequate response. :D
o-O...I misunderstood your rock compression jutsu, i thought you did the clenching fist thing towards the sand coming towards you from the front to turn them into stone. If you aren't aware of the bottom, the jutsu wouldn't be redirected to the bottom? Unless this jutsu is an all angle-type of jutsu, using one jutsu to block two attacks coming from different angles o_O. Sorry, i am not very familiar with custom jutsus and the sort.

The hand of sand got you the time you turn my sand into stone...
 

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1st Mistake
Goro, to make your clone go underground, you must use 1 jutsu for each.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

2nd Mistake
Yond, Underground Fish Projection allows one to merge with earth, and thus merge with swamp as well. Goro is unaffected by your swamp and so your counter is incorrect.
but your opponent has overlooked it.

3rd Mistake
Goro, clones can't open the Gates.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

4th Mistake
Yond, Forbidden Ranked Fire turns your normal sand to glass. The only reason why Amateratsu didn't turn Gaara's sand into glass was because of the way Gaara used it. He made it so that only small amounts of sand would block the small amounts of Amateratsu Sasuke creates, and then he immediately dispersed them. The few grains of sand the amateratsu caught were quickly burnt trough, and, because the flames lost a surface to stand, they vanished.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

------

Now comes the actual problem.

There are two situations, which come from the fact that I don't know your jutsu, Goro. It creates 2 extra arms, totally functional. But can you really use them to preform two jutsus simultaneously? it would mean charging two different chakras and chakra natures at the same time. If your jutsus allows you to do it, then go with situation 1. If it doesn't, go with situation 2. (Of course, this isn't even a question if you have Yin and Yang training, for it allows you to charge two different natures at the same time)

Situation 1:

Both jutsus Goro used happen at the same time. The wind jutsu would carry the Sand hand with it, and thus it was the wrong counter to Goro's move.
In this situation, Goro wins and Yond dies.

Situation 2:

Both Jutsus Goro used happen one after another. The Sand hand would try to grab Goro after he uses the Earth compression and before he uses the Wind jutsu (it as to be AFTER the Earth jutsu or it would break the time frame, which means that it's doubtful if you could prevent the wind jutsu, either way, I'd let it slide). In this situation, Goro has to defend against the hand of sand in the next turn, no one dies.

Ps: The hand of sand would bring you to the ground, and thus, it would bring you into the dentist's chair range.
 
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1st Mistake
Goro, to make your clone go underground, you must use 1 jutsu for each.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

2nd Mistake
Yond, Underground Fish Projection allows one to merge with earth, and thus merge with swamp as well. Goro is unaffected by your swamp and so your counter is incorrect.
but your opponent has overlooked it.

3rd Mistake
Goro, clones can't open the Gates.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

4th Mistake
Yond, Forbidden Ranked Fire turns your normal sand to glass. The only reason why Amateratsu didn't turn Gaara's sand into glass was because of the way Gaara used it. He made it so that only small amounts of sand would block the small amounts of Amateratsu Sasuke creates, and then he immediately dispersed them. The few grains of sand the amateratsu caught were quickly burnt trough, and, because the flames lost a surface to stand, they vanished.

------

Now comes the actual problem.

There are two situations, which come from the fact that I don't know your jutsu, Goro. It creates 2 extra arms, totally functional. But can you really use them to preform tow jutsus simultaneously? it would mean charging two different chakras and chakra natures at the same time. If your jutsus allows you to do it, then go with situation 1. If it doesn't, go with situation 2. (Of course, this isn't even a question if you have Yin and Yang training, for it allows you to charge two different natures at the same time)

Situation 1:

Both jutsus Goro used happen at the same time. The wind jutsu would carry the Sand hand with it, and thus it was the wrong counter to Goro's move.
In this situation, Goro wins and Yond dies.

Situation 2:

Both Jutsus Goro used happen one after another. The Sand hand would try to grab Goro after he uses the Earth compression and before he uses the Wind jutsu (it as to be AFTER the Earth jutsu or it would break the time frame, which means that it's doubtful if you could prevent the wind jutsu, either way, I'd let it slide). In this situation, Goro has to defend against the hand of sand in the next turn, no one dies.

Ps: The hand of sand would bring you to the ground, and thus, it would bring you into the dentist's chair range.
kinda hard to follow that...U_U i agree w/ what she said about Situation 1 and 2...
 

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i'll a take third senseis vote just to be fair, preferably someone i haven't trained this time. kirabi yours would work. we've been foes for a while now.

@ lil: Thank you, and um yes both arms are free to preform jutsu at the same time. the reason why it was created. also i do know void which requires some ying/yang knowledge..

@ toku: thanks :p xd

@yond: i'll make my retort after you've posted your view point on this battle.
 

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1st Mistake
Goro, to make your clone go underground, you must use 1 jutsu for each.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

2nd Mistake
Yond, Underground Fish Projection allows one to merge with earth, and thus merge with swamp as well. Goro is unaffected by your swamp and so your counter is incorrect.
but your opponent has overlooked it.

3rd Mistake
Goro, clones can't open the Gates.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

4th Mistake
Yond, Forbidden Ranked Fire turns your normal sand to glass. The only reason why Amateratsu didn't turn Gaara's sand into glass was because of the way Gaara used it. He made it so that only small amounts of sand would block the small amounts of Amateratsu Sasuke creates, and then he immediately dispersed them. The few grains of sand the amateratsu caught were quickly burnt trough, and, because the flames lost a surface to stand, they vanished.
But your opponent has overlooked it.

------

Now comes the actual problem.

There are two situations, which come from the fact that I don't know your jutsu, Goro. It creates 2 extra arms, totally functional. But can you really use them to preform two jutsus simultaneously? it would mean charging two different chakras and chakra natures at the same time. If your jutsus allows you to do it, then go with situation 1. If it doesn't, go with situation 2. (Of course, this isn't even a question if you have Yin and Yang training, for it allows you to charge two different natures at the same time)

Situation 1:

Both jutsus Goro used happen at the same time. The wind jutsu would carry the Sand hand with it, and thus it was the wrong counter to Goro's move.
In this situation, Goro wins and Yond dies.

Situation 2:

Both Jutsus Goro used happen one after another. The Sand hand would try to grab Goro after he uses the Earth compression and before he uses the Wind jutsu (it as to be AFTER the Earth jutsu or it would break the time frame, which means that it's doubtful if you could prevent the wind jutsu, either way, I'd let it slide). In this situation, Goro has to defend against the hand of sand in the next turn, no one dies.

Ps: The hand of sand would bring you to the ground, and thus, it would bring you into the dentist's chair range.
kinda hard to follow that...U_U i agree w/ what she said about Situation 1 and 2...
i'll a take third senseis vote just to be fair, preferably someone i haven't trained this time. kirabi yours would work. we've been foes for a while now.

@ lil: Thank you, and um yes both arms are free to preform jutsu at the same time. the reason why it was created. also i do know void which requires some ying/yang knowledge..

@ toku: thanks :p xd

@yond: i'll make my retort after you've posted your view point on this battle.
Too much powerful aura, too many experienced rp-ers here :eek: :(
Sure, go get kirabi or another sensei of your likings ;)
I'll be waiting but if you want me to get it, sure ^^
 
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