The Mafia of NB - Chapter 1

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chapter 1 - famiglia



Writer's Note: Finally, after a couple of months being away from FF business. I decided to start again in FF industry, thanks to my friends for the support, and here I am with a new FF. But first of all, this FF is purely random, it appeared in my mind out of boredom, the contents are made for fun purposes. So, I hope you guys could enjoy it :) Have fun reading it!

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Here lies the city of NB, congested with crimes and corruption, districts and town illegally dominated by respective outlaws. The Ricozenro Mafia Family, better known as the NB Mafia, is one of the most wanted and a famous gangstas in the city ever known. Own almost the whole city, this included Marijuana field, Not only that, the city is always filled with corruption even among the goverment it selft (or the Admin), or even the Police (or Mod) do some corruption.

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The time almost pass 11, this is when filthy city started to get cleared from the old rusty cars and well-occupied public transports. Here lies in a dark alley, a black Mercedes passed along the deserted Bashro Street which is where the "NB Times" Press building is located. The car stops just directly in front of the building, two guys then came up from the back seat of the car and one from front, wearing in black outfit. Three of them enter the unlocked door of the building and head for the elevator. One of them starts to speak.

???: Sir Scorp, what is the floor?

KingScorp: According to the Intel, he works at 8th floor.

???: *Presses the 8 button* ... What are we doing here btw?

KingScorp: .. Heh, Petro- kid .. just watch later. ... Your face seems to be afraid abt sumthing, I know this is your first time kid, dont worry we aint going to kill some ass tonight. Just watch us and learn.

???: Tsk, he isnt kid anymore Scorprenzo, beside handling a gun is an easy job, Petronio. Your father will be proud of you, you know.

KingScorp: Shut the hell out, Nikkou. And pls stop ruin our name, lady. I know you love so much about Italy. ~_~

Petro: Dont scare me guys, who is actually up there? Triads?

*ELEVATOR* -RING- "STOREY 8"

Narrator: The three of them step out from the elevator, and walks toward the room with a name on the door saying " Al Michael Caporov ". Instead of at least knock the door, they immediately force in They see a man on his office outfit, typing a couple of reports.

Nikkou: Ciao! O Michaelrio .. put your hands up before i blow this gun off.

KingScorp: .. Tsk, thats not necessary Nikkou, why you just love going the hard way.

Michael92: Holy crap ... what u guys want?!

KingScorp: Tsk, dont act cute kid, you know why we are here. Let me see the reports that you been typing...

Nikkou: He isnt a kid anymore, beside he looks older than you, brat. Come on, just get his head like how Boss ordered us to. I got a tv show to catch...

Michael92: Wait...hold on! What is this all about ??? Dont tell me u guys are mafia?!

KingScorp: Good guess but Play time over kid. You kid or whatever, been making reports on NB times about teh Rico Mafia Family. And yet, you f ag still ask why are we here, to get ur head dammit.

*Kingscorps pull out something from the inner-pocket of his coat.*

Michael92: O ... Holy ...an axe?! Wait, I can explain .... !!

Nikkou: go on, Scorpnio! Give no mercy.

Michael92: .. O la la...can u give me a min to talk .. tsk ~_~

Petro: ... Alright lets give him a chance to talk ... Who knows he got a good fairy tale to tell..

KingScorp: Fine .. whatever u say young padawan. Now talk!!

Michael92: Well, I know I been posting such stories in the newspaper abt u guys. But I guess, the story is true isnt? So, killing me like dat is just stupid, you might not know where did i get the source? ... O la la .. look at ur face, lady... your face change! Regret much?!

Nikkou: Watch your filthy mouth young man! Dare speak one more word, you will find yourself hanging on the fan >.>

Petro: This is just absurd ... So Mikey .. who give the source then?

KingScorp: *Holding a card* I guess theres no need to ask him. Look what I found, .. The Russian Syndicate huh?


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The Russian Syndicate



Leader: Unknown
Property: A large Casino called the Maddy O' Russia!
Uniform: Commonly, in tuxedo with hat

The Russian Syndicate, is the most rising gangsta in the city, together with their owned building and the expanding of their empire on each day. It is the main rival for the Rico Mafia Family, they are famous with their "coke" and have runners every corner of the city. It was said that they own a casino, called the "Maddy O' Russia Casino"! Which says that, the casino is also a secretly black market on illegal armory and of course the Cocaine.




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Scene 2


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Another scene, same time, different location, the same night. In the NB's local police station known as the MOD Department. Their office has been busy with all their loaded crimes each day, and the most thing that causing them much of the trouble, is always the Rico Family. Suddenly, they received a call ...

MOD


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When the police cant handle it, you pass it to the officers, but what you get when the officers also get their ass own? You call the MOD, they are the elite of all. Who born like hero, who shall save the city of NB. They are cool, though they might look like a retard, but not until they came into the crime site, with their cool MOD Van. So ya? better not to mess with them .

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???: *Hang up the phone* Hey Fork, I just received a call from an unknown caller. He says that one of the Rico Family Caporegime is heading their way to the NB Times office.

???: Oh my Sgt Enemy ... Haisss .. it might be just a prank. Nowadays, kid in NB city getting to more wild ... what I call is "NOOB ***" .. who love to carry their ass around the city causing a lot of problem ..

Sgt Enemy: No the caller isnt a kid dumb***. Come on, maybe we should take a look ... Huh? .. Come on fork lets get into action ...

???: Yea yea .. you teh king .. you teh boss ... whatever. My beloved enemy ..

TO BE CONTINUED


 
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I just hope u guys like it ... xd So leave a comment below here, if you love this chapter, just REP it ... I got a few members to be my character, as you can see, there are only few character here. So if you wish to join, just say it :D
 

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Cool man! Nikkou chan, kingdude, miachel kun, i know them all! Seriously, liked all their characters! When are you going to put another chapter?! I like your way of writing, is funny and cool! 'watch your filthy word young man, you'l find yourself hanging on the fan' that sounded like a rhyme, cool! Next chap, plz
 

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Cool man! Nikkou chan, kingdude, miachel kun, i know them all! Seriously, liked all their characters! When are you going to put another chapter?! I like your way of writing, is funny and cool! 'watch your filthy word young man, you'l find yourself hanging on the fan' that sounded like a rhyme, cool! Next chap, plz
Thank you ^^ Glad you like it. Sure, will note you when I post the 2nd one :)
 

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Like it's something new...
The idea is okay, though I see only the FF geeks. xD
I always approve of these kind of FF's, the naruto ones are just not awesome.
Well, in other FF's with the NB as topic, it also the people around the writer that are in the story, no?


anyways, count me in for this, I got a feeling this is going to turn out in some Sin City FF. xd
 

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Like it's something new...
The idea is okay, though I see only the FF geeks. xD
I always approve of these kind of FF's, the naruto ones are just not awesome.
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Don't insult me again...I'm no geek!
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Well, Petro, nice work kid. :D Seriously, I barely say that word in life or here but I had a good laugh at it. So thumbs up!
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Love the writing - crisp and neat. It was funny how Micheal was always interrupted whenever he was talking.
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Sunny was a real Mafia girl. Awesomely done. xd

I wonder which mods along with Enemy will be present in your story. As I said to you, you've got great story development potential here, so keep us entertained with this FF :D
 

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I like my working uniform. :|

JK (tho I do like it xd). The whole FF is fun to read. ^.^

I wonder who was talking to me there tho. :lmao:
 

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Nice!!1 a Fanfic made from actual members..... Fascinating!!!!
Haha, it is not really something new actually .. but thanks ^^

Like it's something new...
The idea is okay, though I see only the FF geeks. xD
I always approve of these kind of FF's, the naruto ones are just not awesome.
:| Thanks for the approval ? xD

can i join? this is great guys
Roger that, i will try to insert you in the upcoming chapter.

Well, in other FF's with the NB as topic, it also the people around the writer that are in the story, no?


anyways, count me in for this, I got a feeling this is going to turn out in some Sin City FF. xd
Haha, I will put you in though.

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Don't insult me again...I'm no geek!
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:p
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Well, Petro, nice work kid. :D Seriously, I barely say that word in life or here but I had a good laugh at it. So thumbs up!
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Love the writing - crisp and neat. It was funny how Micheal was always interrupted whenever he was talking.
You must be registered for see images
Sunny was a real Mafia girl. Awesomely done. xd

I wonder which mods along with Enemy will be present in your story. As I said to you, you've got great story development potential here, so keep us entertained with this FF :D
Thanks bro ^^ Glad you like it .. :)

I like my working uniform. :|

JK (tho I do like it xd). The whole FF is fun to read. ^.^

I wonder who was talking to me there tho. :lmao:
But Sgt Enemy sounds weird isnt? Haha .. lol .. jk but actually it sounds good too. Glad you like it too :)
 

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Did you seen the Movie, Batman the Dark knight, Then add a Joker in it since he want's to kill every Police and FBI Working together with the mafia but unfortunately killing the mafia by himself.

Just a Simple freak Ruining everything. :)

Moi
 
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Haha, it is not really something new actually .. but thanks ^^



:| Thanks for the approval ? xD



Roger that, i will try to insert you in the upcoming chapter.



Haha, I will put you in though.



Thanks bro ^^ Glad you like it .. :)



But Sgt Enemy sounds weird isnt? Haha .. lol .. jk but actually it sounds good too. Glad you like it too :)

Thanks man. cant wait for the next one
 

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well it seems my badassness is to good even for fanfictions xd


but i lmao when i saw the mods xd
Thanks ^^

Did you seen the Movie, Batman the Dark knight, Then add a Joker in it since he want's to kill every Police and FBI Working together with the mafia but unfortunately killing the mafia by himself.

Just a Simple freak Ruining everything. :)

Moi
Just say you want to be part of it xD

LOL awesome writer that image is Mafia 2 btw. do you watch Katekyo Hitman Reborn by any chance?
I didnt like Reborn much, it is not really like a real mafia too me. I cant get a better pic of mafia, so i get it from the mafia 2 game.

Thanks ^^
 

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Owkay, I'm gonna be writing my comments as to what was going on in my mind when I was reading through!

@first part:
OMG! I don't like my tone :T_T: You just turned me into a name murderer. And why is KC scolding me around?!:mad:
And wut's with me loving Italy?!?!?! OMG! OMG! OMG! I'm gonna fall off my chair!!!!!

Damn it Fallen! You never fail a single sec to make me laugh, laugh, laugh!

O la la! so gay!xd BS fallen!!! oh man! you just twisted all our talking tones! And why the accusing O la la look with Mikero?! Am I double jeopardizing the mafia here?O_O Hmm...I'm probably a spy from The Russian Syndicate, too? Or maybe an undercover agent?O_O Sounds like a plan!:D

Oh!O_O So Enemy is an officer sgt?xd Ehmm...I should talk to her a lot from now onxd


Cool man! Nikkou chan, kingdude, miachel kun, i know them all! Seriously, liked all their characters! When are you going to put another chapter?! I like your way of writing, is funny and cool! 'watch your filthy word young man, you'l find yourself hanging on the fan' that sounded like a rhyme, cool! Next chap, plz
Nice!!1 a Fanfic made from actual members..... Fascinating!!!!
He;s actually quite had a few written already. You might want to check on him with those. If you want to read and laugh off your chair then better check on him with those FF'! Never found anyone who could make me read and laugh as Petro does.

Well, in other FF's with the NB as topic, it also the people around the writer that are in the story, no?


anyways, count me in for this, I got a feeling this is going to turn out in some Sin City FF. xd
Hmm, Wes might be a good Chief of Police! Or probably one of the Russian Syndicate!

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Don't insult me again...I'm no geek!
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:p
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Well, Petro, nice work kid. :D Seriously, I barely say that word in life or here but I had a good laugh at it. So thumbs up!
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Love the writing - crisp and neat. It was funny how Micheal was always interrupted whenever he was talking.
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Sunny was a real Mafia girl. Awesomely done. xd

I wonder which mods along with Enemy will be present in your story. As I said to you, you've got great story development potential here, so keep us entertained with this FF :D
What's so awesome with the name changing and the face change?! On another thought, yeah, I guess Nikkou there is just awesome! Make her tougher as the story goes!:D

I like my working uniform. :|

JK (tho I do like it xd). The whole FF is fun to read. ^.^

I wonder who was talking to me there tho. :lmao:
I hope its not one from the other side of world?xd:lmao:

Once and for all, Petro.FINISH UP YOUR WORK PLEEEAAAASSSEEEE!!!!!! Its been long already and I'm not seeing the next chapter. Look, we all are busy so don't be discouraged, okay? We all will find time to read each other's work. Please don't stop making us laugh.

Ah, I just have the craziest thought! I wonder how the scenario would look like if all us were in one place sitting in front of the PC and reading this! It must be crazy fun!!!
 
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