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Hmm, i shoot countless needles at you and some broke into your rotation thus piercing you O_O
Try again more sharper
(Fukumi Hari) - Hidden Needles
Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: The user is able to call
forth needles into their mouth and
then spit them at their opponent with
great accuracy.

Simply removes the Needles

I begin again by building up a large amount of chakra, making it flow throughout my body. I then being to release the chakra from every one of my chakra points, focusing harder than before on making the chakra as sharp as it possibly can be. Then rotating my body around as I expel the chakra.
 
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(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8
Trigrams Giant Rotation
Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger
scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

For this one,try to extend the chakra in your palms whilst manipulating it into thin sharp lines and then wave it at 360 degrees
 

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(Chou Hakkeshou Kaiten) - 8
Trigrams Giant Rotation
Rank: C
Type:Defence/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A rotation on a bigger
scale that leaves behind a huge crater.

For this one,try to extend the chakra in your palms whilst manipulating it into thin sharp lines and then wave it at 360 degrees

I begin by building up a large amount of chakra into my palms, then I focus hard and form the chakra into thin extremely sharp lines. Then I release the chakra as I rotate 36o degrees.
 

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You just repeated me
Meh the explanation i gave you was good enough>.<", if you doubt me go read the jutsu description and see if you will understand anything.

" i start by molding up huge chakra then channels it into both palms and out, intending and manipulating at the same time it into thin sharp line.
Then i waves it in such accuracy that it goes 360 degrees ,thus forming a chakra dome shield with out rotating"

Try it again-_-
 

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You just repeated me
Meh the explanation i gave you was good enough>.<", if you doubt me go read the jutsu description and see if you will understand anything.

" i start by molding up huge chakra then channels it into both palms and out, intending and manipulating at the same time it into thin sharp line.
Then i waves it in such accuracy that it goes 360 degrees ,thus forming a chakra dome shield with out rotating"

Try it again-_-

No, it is not.The NB description is almost as vague as what you said, so i couldn't make any sense of it, because both your description and NB's description are so vague. :|

I begin by building up a large amount chakra into both my hands. Then I hold my hands out while I manipulate the chakra into sharp lines, concentrating hard to make it extremely thin. I then wave it making it go 360 degrees, attempting to make a domed shield.
 

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams
Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user
makes his/her chakra into razor sharp
lines and spins to attack and defend all
in one move.
Next >.>
Mold up a huge amount of chakra,
Then channel into your hand and out in great rage that it turns into a burst of chakra.
 

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(Hakkeshou Kuuten) - 8 Trigrams
Heavenly Sky
Rank: C
Type:Attack/Defence
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A rotation were the user
makes his/her chakra into razor sharp
lines and spins to attack and defend all
in one move.
Next >.>
Mold up a huge amount of chakra,
Then channel into your hand and out in great rage that it turns into a burst of chakra.

I begin by building up a large amount of chakra into my body. Then I focus that chakra into my hand, concentrating hard to build up as much chakra as possible. I then violently force it out of my hand, releasing a blast of chakra.
 

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Ok good and the diffrences in our time zone is messing up our training.


Anywaz ,for this one ,go back to the dummy .giving him 100 palm strike but this a weaker version of 64 palm strike.
 

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Ok good and the diffrences in our time zone is messing up our training.


Anywaz ,for this one ,go back to the dummy .giving him 100 palm strike but this a weaker version of 64 palm strike.

"Yeah it is."

I begin by getting into my Gentle Fist stance. Then I rush up to the dummy, poking and closing 7 chakra points in your stomach area. Then poking and closing 10 in your left arm. Afterwards poking 10 more in the dummy's right arm. I then close 5 in his right hand, and 5 more in his left hand. Then I go and poke 10 in his left rib area, and then closing 10 in his right chest area. Then closing 10 more in it's upper abdomen. Then I close 10 in his right thigh and 10 in his left thigh. then closing 6 near his left shoulder and 6 more in his right shoulder.v Then dealing the final poke in his heart.
 

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(Hyaku Retsushou) - 100 power
palms
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A weaker version of 64
plams where the user strikes 100
times with gentle fist.This justu cuts
chakra flow of opponent by half for
one turn.

Moving on
Now do a 64 palms strike but this one can be used for both defense and offense just like hinata's
*makes a clone to race at you with a kunai in his hand*
 
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(Hyaku Retsushou) - 100 power
palms
Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description:A weaker version of 64
plams where the user strikes 100
times with gentle fist.This justu cuts
chakra flow of opponent by half for
one turn.

Moving on
Now do a 64 palms strike but this one can be used for both defense and offense just like hinata's
*makes a clone to race at you with a kunai in his hand*
Gets into stance

As your clone runs towards me with his arm outstretched I quickly sidestep to the right, and slightly twist my body counterclockwise and strike his hand that was holding the kunai, with two pokes. Then I use my other hand to poke him 4 times in the arm. Then poking and closing 8 in his stomach area. Then I close 16 around his entire other arm. I then hit 32 strikes around his entire mid section and hitting the ones in his stomach that I didn't previously hit. Then I finish it of with a 2 poke hit at the heart. Inserting chakra and closing every chakra point I hit.
 

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Then why are you waiting for my clone to come close O_O
You start the palm strike b4 the opponent gets close in other word it is a palm guard that guards the user and closes the chakra points of an attacker.
Try it now
 

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Then why are you waiting for my clone to come close O_O
You start the palm strike b4 the opponent gets close in other word it is a palm guard that guards the user and closes the chakra points of an attacker.
Try it now
I did it because you didn't explain it well enough. All you said was "do a 64 palms strike". Then you said it could be used for Offense and Defense.

Post the jutsu you want me to do, so I can try to understand what you are trying to say.
 

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Is all part of training ,i just want you to fully understand the jutsu from mistakes cos the jutsu itself is a bit confusing.
And i learnt from those "you didn't explain well enough", and u can go check em your self. Is the one after the 100 power strikes.
 

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Is all part of training ,i just want you to fully understand the jutsu from mistakes cos the jutsu itself is a bit confusing.
And i learnt from those "you didn't explain well enough", and u can go check em your self. Is the one after the 100 power strikes.

They need to explain it a bit more, MAJOR editing needs to be done to the jutsu list. And I know how you feel, the jutsu are very vague and hard to explain to others.

I looked on Naruto.wikia and I see something called "Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms. I'm guessing that is what it is, so i'll use that as a basis for this technique.

I focus and build up my chakra into my hands. Then I concentrate and make my chakra into very thin lines. Then as the clone with the kunai comes I use a thin line of chakra to knock the kunai out of his hand, then using more to pierce the clone and make him poof away

"Sorry if this isn't how you wanted it."
 

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Um,well yeah kinda

" i mold up a certain amount of chakra in my palms then as my clone starts running towards me .i take my stance with the chakra in my palm i start giving thin air 64 palms with such speed that my hand movements turns blur and forms a shield infront of me and then my clone jumps on me with his kunai ,so his kunai gets knocked away(defence) and 64 of his chakra points get closed cos of my rapid palm strikes(offense)"

If u get it now,lets move on ,we'v already weasted much time on this one.
 
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