(Here’s the first chapter of my new story! The rest won’t come out for a few days! Enjoy! Note: I know in the anime the Star Village bans the star training due to big side effects, but this is a fanfic. SCREW THAT! In my story there are no side effects other than chakra consumption like any other jutsu. I suggest going to Narutopedia and looking up the Mysterious peacock method to visualize it, and someone else! This story has some unusual topics that exist, and some completely made up! I make quite a few hints at the setting/time period! Play:
Hagane’s the name. I’m a twenty-five year-old man, have long brown hair, and grey eyes. I’m always with a cowboy hat, and chewing on a toothpick! I’m currently on the desert plains, but oh screw that crap! Just know that I’m a bad ass who’s escaped the Sand. You don’t need to know my whole life story! Just watch what I do, that should be enough! I’m quite strong in wind style jutsu, and I used to be a great Jonin-level ninja from that rat hole they call a village, but now I’m important as hell. I’m ready to take on anything! In fact, why don’t I just tell you what I am! Did you guess? I’m a kage hunter! I hunt wack-job kages! Whom do I work for? How the hell should I know? He’s really secretive. Anyways, am I good or evil? What are they anyway? Well, why don’t you decide, sugar?
Have you ever felt so hot, that even a sea of water couldn’t quench your thirst? That’s how I feel right now! Man, running around this desert is the worst thing I’ve ever had to do! My clan, the Yakuzas, is being persecuted because of the people’s jealousy! It’s not our fault that we can have a keke genkai! What is it? I’ll show ya later! I know, at least we didn’t get wiped out like the Uchihas did two months ago, but still! That’s why I had to leave a few months ago, to escape that hell. I was stranded for a week, but then I ran into a man who was part of an organization called Fushigi. He was a formidable guy from the Star Village. It is part of a small-ass country, the Country of Bears that is far away. He and his partner were the only members at the time. His partner was the leader. They wanted mercenaries to help them. That’s where I come in. I assassinate corrupt and outright unfit kages for them, and I get a sizeable amount of cash. It’s that simple!
Now, I had my suspicions about who is the leader; I think it’s their “Hoshikage” of the Star Village. I’m not sure though. Man, those star ninja are weird! He wore a gas mask for some reason. When I first fought that guy, he the used the goddamn strangest jutsu, but the trademark of his village. {End cowboy music if not done already}
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(6 months ago)
“I am from a group called-” That guy I told you about, Fuma, tried to say, but I was already behind him with my sword ready. {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PVmUl3AzCk&feature=related}
“Humph. Mysterious Peacock Method: Choke”
Purple fricken feather-like chakra emerged from his back. They then choked me before I could do anything. I thought, ‘WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?’
“Now, do you wish to settle down before I snap your neck?”
“Fine, ass” I managed to say while he squeezed me tighter. The squeezing lessened, but he still held me.
“I have an assignment for you. I wish for you…Blabby-blah-blah-blah” I’m sorry, but I just wrote what he said. Do I need to repeat?” The last part of what he said after I accepted his offer was important. “ The first on your hit list is the third-tail’s Jinchuuriki. His powers are similar to the Shukaku’s host, but with water. Water will defend him no matter what. It’s his ultimate defense. He also is adept with genjutsu; don’t go into the fog! Your first target is…the Fourth Mizukage, Yagura” {End}
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I walked through the desert in the Land of Wind, and then I went to the Land of Earth’s desert. There’s no way in hell, I’d ever cross through the Land of Fire. That place has blood on its hands. I prefer to keep it on my sword! My sword is I. It is unique, like me, in the sense that it is made from something special. I won’t reveal that to you yet, kiddy.
I guess I should tell you about one last goddamn thing. As I was strolling through the Rain village to get to the Earth, I heard a ruckus. That place Hanzo has is always raining! Hence the damn name! Anyways, I went down the alley to find this kid in trouble. A pickpocket was trying to hurt him with a kunai! He swung, and I channeled my wind chakra into my sword, and swung, shattering his kunai into little metal pieces. I said, “Leave this kid alone, or we’re going to have a problem, see?” The guy’s billiard balls for eyes stared for a minute in shock at me, and then, SCRAM! He left and yours truly won, hero!
“Thanks mister!”
“No problem, kid” I started to walk away.
“Wait, I don’t have parents, they died because they betrayed Lord Hanzo, and then-”
I placed my hand on his mouth, “Kid, I don’t have time for this, what’s the deal? What do ya need?”
“I need to find my brother who lives in the Land of Tea!”
“And you want me to help? Sorry, kid, but find someone else!”
“Pleeeeaaase! I’m only 12” He used the cute puppy-dog face on me.
“Aren’t you a little old to use that? See ya, kid! Good luck!” I walked away.
“No, but I guess I’ll find someone else to give my parents’ huge fortune to”
I ran back and said, “Kid, let’s go find your brother!”, because I really needed the dough. So here I am, in the Earth desert with this kid! He doesn’t stop talking! {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=We60ZX5C99I&feature=related}
“My first name is Kodomo. I don’t know my last! Did I ever tell you about the time I wrestled a huge fish from the Land of Rivers?”
“No, but-”
“It was enormous, and green! It had a big tail that splashed everywhere!”
“I don’t care! Don’t you have something better to do?”
“No, I don’t talk to anyone”
“Why are they so lucky?”
“Well, anyways I caught it with my water ninjutsu! I ate for weeks! Oh, did I tell you the time I-”
“Shut up? No, because you NEVER DO!”
“You didn’t have to put it that way, mister! So, what’s your name?”
“Yakuza Hagane of the Sand. I already explained my job to you to try to scare you. Well, let’s stop here. It’s getting dark”
“We have to stop by hot springs, I need that right now! There was this one time, in the Rain-”
“I want to cook our beans and rice now” My voice overpowered his, but he did it again.
“Oh, that’s so good! It reminds me of the time--“
“SILENCE!”
So he’s here now with me. He’s annoying, but apparently rich as hell. I can’t say I don’t feel bad for him, but he never shuts his trap! Well, good night!
So, what did you think? I apologize for the profanity, but I based him off of Holden Caulfield and Clint Eastwood.
Yagura’s powers are unknown, but I added my own and I am implying that Madara hasn’t started controlling him yet. In a couple of days, the next chapter will be released. How do you like the title by the way? You won’t get it until the end!
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)Hagane’s the name. I’m a twenty-five year-old man, have long brown hair, and grey eyes. I’m always with a cowboy hat, and chewing on a toothpick! I’m currently on the desert plains, but oh screw that crap! Just know that I’m a bad ass who’s escaped the Sand. You don’t need to know my whole life story! Just watch what I do, that should be enough! I’m quite strong in wind style jutsu, and I used to be a great Jonin-level ninja from that rat hole they call a village, but now I’m important as hell. I’m ready to take on anything! In fact, why don’t I just tell you what I am! Did you guess? I’m a kage hunter! I hunt wack-job kages! Whom do I work for? How the hell should I know? He’s really secretive. Anyways, am I good or evil? What are they anyway? Well, why don’t you decide, sugar?
Have you ever felt so hot, that even a sea of water couldn’t quench your thirst? That’s how I feel right now! Man, running around this desert is the worst thing I’ve ever had to do! My clan, the Yakuzas, is being persecuted because of the people’s jealousy! It’s not our fault that we can have a keke genkai! What is it? I’ll show ya later! I know, at least we didn’t get wiped out like the Uchihas did two months ago, but still! That’s why I had to leave a few months ago, to escape that hell. I was stranded for a week, but then I ran into a man who was part of an organization called Fushigi. He was a formidable guy from the Star Village. It is part of a small-ass country, the Country of Bears that is far away. He and his partner were the only members at the time. His partner was the leader. They wanted mercenaries to help them. That’s where I come in. I assassinate corrupt and outright unfit kages for them, and I get a sizeable amount of cash. It’s that simple!
Now, I had my suspicions about who is the leader; I think it’s their “Hoshikage” of the Star Village. I’m not sure though. Man, those star ninja are weird! He wore a gas mask for some reason. When I first fought that guy, he the used the goddamn strangest jutsu, but the trademark of his village. {End cowboy music if not done already}
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(6 months ago)
“I am from a group called-” That guy I told you about, Fuma, tried to say, but I was already behind him with my sword ready. {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2PVmUl3AzCk&feature=related}
“Humph. Mysterious Peacock Method: Choke”
Purple fricken feather-like chakra emerged from his back. They then choked me before I could do anything. I thought, ‘WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?’
“Now, do you wish to settle down before I snap your neck?”
“Fine, ass” I managed to say while he squeezed me tighter. The squeezing lessened, but he still held me.
“I have an assignment for you. I wish for you…Blabby-blah-blah-blah” I’m sorry, but I just wrote what he said. Do I need to repeat?” The last part of what he said after I accepted his offer was important. “ The first on your hit list is the third-tail’s Jinchuuriki. His powers are similar to the Shukaku’s host, but with water. Water will defend him no matter what. It’s his ultimate defense. He also is adept with genjutsu; don’t go into the fog! Your first target is…the Fourth Mizukage, Yagura” {End}
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I walked through the desert in the Land of Wind, and then I went to the Land of Earth’s desert. There’s no way in hell, I’d ever cross through the Land of Fire. That place has blood on its hands. I prefer to keep it on my sword! My sword is I. It is unique, like me, in the sense that it is made from something special. I won’t reveal that to you yet, kiddy.
I guess I should tell you about one last goddamn thing. As I was strolling through the Rain village to get to the Earth, I heard a ruckus. That place Hanzo has is always raining! Hence the damn name! Anyways, I went down the alley to find this kid in trouble. A pickpocket was trying to hurt him with a kunai! He swung, and I channeled my wind chakra into my sword, and swung, shattering his kunai into little metal pieces. I said, “Leave this kid alone, or we’re going to have a problem, see?” The guy’s billiard balls for eyes stared for a minute in shock at me, and then, SCRAM! He left and yours truly won, hero!
“Thanks mister!”
“No problem, kid” I started to walk away.
“Wait, I don’t have parents, they died because they betrayed Lord Hanzo, and then-”
I placed my hand on his mouth, “Kid, I don’t have time for this, what’s the deal? What do ya need?”
“I need to find my brother who lives in the Land of Tea!”
“And you want me to help? Sorry, kid, but find someone else!”
“Pleeeeaaase! I’m only 12” He used the cute puppy-dog face on me.
“Aren’t you a little old to use that? See ya, kid! Good luck!” I walked away.
“No, but I guess I’ll find someone else to give my parents’ huge fortune to”
I ran back and said, “Kid, let’s go find your brother!”, because I really needed the dough. So here I am, in the Earth desert with this kid! He doesn’t stop talking! {Play: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=We60ZX5C99I&feature=related}
“My first name is Kodomo. I don’t know my last! Did I ever tell you about the time I wrestled a huge fish from the Land of Rivers?”
“No, but-”
“It was enormous, and green! It had a big tail that splashed everywhere!”
“I don’t care! Don’t you have something better to do?”
“No, I don’t talk to anyone”
“Why are they so lucky?”
“Well, anyways I caught it with my water ninjutsu! I ate for weeks! Oh, did I tell you the time I-”
“Shut up? No, because you NEVER DO!”
“You didn’t have to put it that way, mister! So, what’s your name?”
“Yakuza Hagane of the Sand. I already explained my job to you to try to scare you. Well, let’s stop here. It’s getting dark”
“We have to stop by hot springs, I need that right now! There was this one time, in the Rain-”
“I want to cook our beans and rice now” My voice overpowered his, but he did it again.
“Oh, that’s so good! It reminds me of the time--“
“SILENCE!”
So he’s here now with me. He’s annoying, but apparently rich as hell. I can’t say I don’t feel bad for him, but he never shuts his trap! Well, good night!
So, what did you think? I apologize for the profanity, but I based him off of Holden Caulfield and Clint Eastwood.
Yagura’s powers are unknown, but I added my own and I am implying that Madara hasn’t started controlling him yet. In a couple of days, the next chapter will be released. How do you like the title by the way? You won’t get it until the end! 
