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*repeats handseals until memorized*
*throws the string (useing the kunia) at a tree and begins to make the handseals*
*exhales with fire chakra, and makeing it burn, so it begings to burn the string*
*the flame comtunes down the string until it hits the tree*
How was this?


(Katon: Ryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Flame Jutsu
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord, string or any other type of long object.
 

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sorry but please do it again and this time dont wirte like this:
*I do this*
*I do blah*
*I do blah blah*

I want you to use clear sentances and use proper linking words.

also why memorizing the hand seals when you already know the jutsu O______O
 

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dunno xd
*i throw a kunia with a string attached at the nearest tree and begin chaining handseals. Then i exhale with fire chakra, makeing a fire come out of my mouth and it catches onto the string. Then fire continues down the string until it comes into contact of the tree*
this ok now?
 

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dunno xd
*i throw a kunia with a string attached at the nearest tree and begin chaining handseals. Then i exhale with fire chakra, makeing a fire come out of my mouth and it catches onto the string. Then fire continues down the string until it comes into contact of the tree*
this ok now?

(Katon: Boya Kasui ) – Fire Release: Small Fire Stream

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user releases a small short ranged stream of flame at the opponent, cuasing them to collapse. The move requires no hand seals.

concentrate fire chakra into your mouth while breathing in. Then try to spit a smal short ranged steam of flame at my clone *poof*
 

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PFFT is the sound of the fire, when it comes out of my mouth xd
*i inhale once again and focus my fure chakra. I then breathe out slowly, and a short stream of fire comes out, making your clone poof in agony, due to the burns on his face*
this better?
 

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PFFT is the sound of the fire, when it comes out of my mouth xd
*i inhale once again and focus my fure chakra. I then breathe out slowly, and a short stream of fire comes out, making your clone poof in agony, due to the burns on his face*
this better?
*poof*

*sigh* it was good but you need to take your time and work on your description...

lets move on


(Katon: Karyudan) - Fire Style: Fire Dragon Bomb

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu is used in conjunction with Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet to ignite the mudballs fired by the latter technique, making it more devastating.

first use Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet and then concentrate fire chakra into your lungs while taking deap breath and exhale a steam of fire to ignite the mud.
 

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srry for long reply, i went to do some errands >.>
*as i see you release your earth tech, i inahle, and focus my fire chakra so when i breathe out, i release fire, and the fire conjoins with the earth bullets, making a firey bullet towards your clone*
how was this?
 

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srry for long reply, i went to do some errands >.>
*as i see you release your earth tech, i inahle, and focus my fire chakra so when i breathe out, i release fire, and the fire conjoins with the earth bullets, making a firey bullet towards your clone*
how was this?
(Katon Ninpo: Hibashiri) - Fire Style: Jet Flare
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu will create jets of fire that can be manipulated into several forms such as rings of fire to strike a target. Can also encircle the opponent in fire.

perform these hand seals *shows you* ad then manipulate your fire chakra and release jets of fire that take the form as rings of fire.
 

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*looks at the handseals and memorizes them. Then preforms the handseals and ihales, also focusing fire chakra. I then exhale, and release a few bursts of air, resulting in jets of fire coming out. After making the jets of fire, i manipualte my chakra to make the jets turn and become rings, making multiple rings of fire go towards your clone*
 

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*looks at the handseals and memorizes them. Then preforms the handseals and ihales, also focusing fire chakra. I then exhale, and release a few bursts of air, resulting in jets of fire coming out. After making the jets of fire, i manipualte my chakra to make the jets turn and become rings, making multiple rings of fire go towards your clone*
*the rings fall apart on their way*

maintain the shape more and keep inserting chakra.
 

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*i make the handseals again and inhale, focusing my fire chakra. I then exhale makeing jets of fire by ocationally stopping the air flow. I then manipulate the chakra by continueing to add chakra to the fire, keeping it alive. I then channel the chakra so that it turns into rings*
 

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*i make the handseals again and inhale, focusing my fire chakra. I then exhale makeing jets of fire by ocationally stopping the air flow. I then manipulate the chakra by continueing to add chakra to the fire, keeping it alive. I then channel the chakra so that it turns into rings*
good.


(Katon: Hosenka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Phoenix Flower Jutsu

Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This jutsu sends multiple balls of fire at a target. It is also possible to hide shuriken within the fireballs, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. For the most part, however, this jutsu is used as a distraction.

I want you to perform these hand seals *shows you* and then release multiple fire balls at my 4 clones *poof* then try to throw 4 shurikens into the fire ballsm creating a surprise attack :p
 

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*i watch the handseals, and memorize them. Then i inhale, focus my fire chakra and breathe out, createing 4 fire balls. I then throw 4 Shurikens into the fireballs.
 

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*i watch the handseals, and memorize them. Then i inhale, focus my fire chakra and breathe out, createing 4 fire balls. I then throw 4 Shurikens into the fireballs.
*the shurikens miss the fire balls O_O do I need to take you back to the academy !

again...(more description)
 

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*i inhale and focus my fire chakra. I then exhale, breatheing ou 4 fireballs that go towards you. As soon as the fire balls are about 2 m away from me, i throw 1 shuriken into each fire ball (4 in total)*
better now?
 

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*i inhale and focus my fire chakra. I then exhale, breatheing ou 4 fireballs that go towards you. As soon as the fire balls are about 2 m away from me, i throw 1 shuriken into each fire ball (4 in total)*
better now?
good enough...Let's continue


(Katon: Karyu Endan) - Fire Style: Dragon Flame Bomb
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique exhales a long stream of incredibly hot fire from the user's mouth like that of a flamethrower. The fire can spread along the ground.

So I want you to concentrate Katon chakra into your lungs while taking deap breath and performing these hand seals *shows you handseals*. Heat the chakra as much as possible and try to release a long steam of incredibly hot fire like that of a flamethrower. Aim the fire at my clone *poof*

this is the jutsu:
 
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