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Updated: Edward Elric

Basic Information
Name: Edward Elric
Nickname: Ed, Full Metal
Gender: Male
Age: 21


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Personality: On the surface, Edward displays an immature sort of personality. He is decidedly stubborn and strong-willed, frequently letting his pettiness and vindictiveness get the better of him He is largely hostile towards figures of authority and feels little incentive to follow orders with which he disagrees, earning him the distinction of being a loose cannon of sorts.

However, for those people who have made an impact on him, Ed shows his deeper nature of unflinching loyalty and great compassion. As someone who has had to suffer greatly at such a young age, Edward cannot ignore the true suffering of others and becomes sympathetic upon sensing pain and resolve in people's hearts. Though his solemn advice to such people is often tempered with brusque criticism, it is only because he genuinely wishes to place them on the most direct path forward. As one who has to struggle with a maimed body, he urges those with healthy bodies to use their strong legs to move forward, and as one burdened by the mistakes of his past, he stresses the necessity of people taking responsibility for their own errors. Though he will intervene on behalf of the oppressed if he concludes that a situation has called for it, Ed tends to help only those with the will - but not the means - to help themselves, in which case his recklessness and disdain for authority often has him bending the rules to dole out a Robin Hood-esque justice in accordance with his strong belief in the concept of Equivalent Exchange, earning him notoriety and popularity as a "hero of the people".

Village Info.
Village of Birth:Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty:
Elements: Fire
Your ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info.
Edward Elric was born in Konoha a few years before the Third Shinobi War. As a child he witnessed the horror of the war and was almost killed during the attack of the Nine Tailed Demon Fox. During the attack of the Fox both his parents died, while trying to protect the village. Although he was still very young, he was 4 at the time, the war and the loss of his parents had a huge impact on him. After the dead of his parents, he lived with his parents best best friends.
The following years he grew up to become a talented shinobi. During his first year he became friends with Itachi Uchiha, a friendship that later on would become a heavy burden. He graduated the academy at age 8 and became a Chuunin at age 11. Later on he joined ANBU and did several missions together with his old friend Itachi.
After Itachi left Konoha, Edward tried several times to find him and get answers to why Itachi did what he did. Their last encounter was after Orochimaru attacked the Hidden Leaf. After hearing the news of the attack, Edward who was on mission, returned to the village and it was then that he encountered 2 cloaked men, Itachi and Kisame. After a small skirmish the two disappeared and he never saw Itachi again.
At the age of 17 Edward became an ANBU captain.

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This is not a shinobi bio, so you can't learn any ninjutsu with this. First and for all you always follow the template completely, you don't leave anything out. Even if you can't fill something in yet, you leave it open, but it still has to be mentioned. You removed the entire part of Village Info, which is crucial to be a ninja.

You didn't make the bio of a shinobi, but of Edward Elric. You always need to fill in Village of Birth and/or Village of Alliance and you need to mention in your history what you're exact link is to that village.

Sorry to say it, but at this point this bio is useless. You give Edward's Elric entire history, but this is Naruto, not Full Metal Alchemist. You need to adept your bio to the Naruto context. There is no alchemy in the Narutoverse, at least not in the way you say it like it's an actual skill that works and of which people do exams. On top of that I dont allow metal limbs. Such concept is not something that's available in Naruto, especially not because it would mean they would conduct chakra, which I'm certainly not going to allow.

Also binding souls, reviving the dead, transmutation circles...that's Edo Tensei and fuuinjutsu.
 

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This is not a shinobi bio, so you can't learn any ninjutsu with this. First and for all you always follow the template completely, you don't leave anything out. Even if you can't fill something in yet, you leave it open, but it still has to be mentioned. You removed the entire part of Village Info, which is crucial to be a ninja.

You didn't make the bio of a shinobi, but of Edward Elric. You always need to fill in Village of Birth and/or Village of Alliance and you need to mention in your history what you're exact link is to that village.

Sorry to say it, but at this point this bio is useless. You give Edward's Elric entire history, but this is Naruto, not Full Metal Alchemist. You need to adept your bio to the Naruto context. There is no alchemy in the Narutoverse, at least not in the way you say it like it's an actual skill that works and of which people do exams. On top of that I dont allow metal limbs. Such concept is not something that's available in Naruto, especially not because it would mean they would conduct chakra, which I'm certainly not going to allow.

Also binding souls, reviving the dead, transmutation circles...that's Edo Tensei and fuuinjutsu.
Thanks for the info, I'll do a big remake :D
 
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