WeavingDestiny 5: Shōkō Seigen: The Vanishing Light Limit

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lol what's all the fuss about the word 'herculin', you meant herculean and i understood it right away xd

anyway, liked it... keep up the good work!! :D
Ahahaha...It was my fault, I believe. So since its a FanFic and we create a lot of stuffs in it, I'd probably be just be creating new words, too. xd:D
Add it to your vocabulary, HERCULINE - a female hercules :eek::Dxd
 

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Truly AMAZING!

Well, this time round you doesn't make a dialogued version. But its okay because I found it much worth it reading this way! And Im sure it will not be so amazing if you make a dialogued one. About your story, I can see it's improving very well and the plot is getting interesting and astonished! Keep it up the good work, pal! Surprise us in the next chapter ;)

~Reps~ It's really worth it reading them!
 
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Truly AMAZING!

Well, this time round you doesn't make a dialogued version. But its okay because I found it much worth it reading this way! And Im sure it will not be so amazing if you make a dialogued one. About your story, I can see it's improving very well and the plot is getting interesting and astonished! Keep it up the good work, pal! Surprise us in the next chapter ;)

~Reps~ It's really worth it reading them!
I actually find making a dialogue version for this hard. :)
Chapter six is already out. I don't know though if it will be as surprising as you expect it to be. :) Though it will give you something to brainstorm on as you go along with the story. 4 or 5 more chapters and we're done with this. So, more or less, the next ones are packed with revelations. ;)
 

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I actually find making a dialogue version for this hard. :)
Chapter six is already out. I don't know though if it will be as surprising as you expect it to be. :) Though it will give you something to brainstorm on as you go along with the story. 4 or 5 more chapters and we're done with this. So, more or less, the next ones are packed with revelations. ;)
Yeah! Your chp 6 is still awesome! Anyway, may I noe why this fanfic is called the Weaving Destiny? xd
 

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Yeah! Your chp 6 is still awesome! Anyway, may I noe why this fanfic is called the Weaving Destiny? xd
Hahaha, a very interesting question. Its because *** would have to *** later. And that's when *** he challenged *** to weave destiny and ***...ehehehehe..sorry... :eek: hehehehe
Hmm, I suggest that you read the Synopsis of this story, I did not post that here in the FF section so you it was not noticeable. Its posted together with the prologue here: ;):)
 

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This was definitely an action packed chap and I liked it ^.^ I liked how you depicted Sai/Sakura the most in battle. I haven’t seen much of those two battling in the manga and it was nice to view it here ;) So, Miss Ruirein has a godly Kekkei Genkai! lol She is like tier zero XD I like her awesome and very devastating technique. Skye reminds me of the Samurai out of the manga ;) I also think he is a very capable fighter and the solar sword is cool! I loved your quote "And about whatever Kakashi told Naruto back in the Sun Village - THAT - I do not know, too" as it was amusing and unexpected. It was a nice read and looking forward to more of your battle scenes whenever they come up :)
 

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This was definitely an action packed chap and I liked it ^.^ I liked how you depicted Sai/Sakura the most in battle. I haven’t seen much of those two battling in the manga and it was nice to view it here ;) So, Miss Ruirein has a godly Kekkei Genkai! lol She is like tier zero XD I like her awesome and very devastating technique. Skye reminds me of the Samurai out of the manga ;) I also think he is a very capable fighter and the solar sword is cool! I loved your quote "And about whatever Kakashi told Naruto back in the Sun Village - THAT - I do not know, too" as it was amusing and unexpected. It was a nice read and looking forward to more of your battle scenes whenever they come up :)
Hmm, I don't think I know who or what Tier Zero is:eek: I'm glad you liked the KG. The quote is also there to remind the readers about that part.:)

Its gr8. I loved it
Thank you. I'm glad you loved this chapter.:)
 

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Hmm, I don't think I know who or what Tier Zero is:eek: I'm glad you liked the KG. The quote is also there to remind the readers about that part.:)
Well, tier zero is a term meaning best rank of sorts used in ranking Yu-Gi-Oh decks lol The logic is Ruirein in my opinion is ranked one of the highest fighting characters :)
 
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