[Approved] Damir Umitachi

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Basic Information
Name: Damir Umitachi
Nickname: Umi-kun
Gender: male
Age: 24
Clan: ...

Looks:
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Personality:
Does not lose his composure, or possess any arrogance. No enjoyment in violence or combat, instead preferring to avoid battle, or, if this was not possible, end it as quickly as possible. Only interest in the shinobi profession is in the maintaining of the family tradition and protection of well-being of loved ones. Has a deep loyalty towards village, friends and family. Very attached to his nee-san.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: none
Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chunin
Specialty: none
Elements: air
Your ninjutsu:
Shadow Stealth Technique
(Bikoku Ninjutsu)
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Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

Change of Body Stance Technique
(Kawarimi no Jutsu)
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Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

Escape Skill
(Nawanuke No Jutsu)
***
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

Clone Technique
(Bunshin No Jutsu)
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Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

Transformation Technique
(Henge no Jutsu)
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Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.


Background Info.
History: Since his childhood, environment [read: parents and extra-talented peers] has made a great influence on the development of this young shinobi. Almost everything that he's ever done, his colleagues have done it better... well... except shuriken and kunai manipulation. Each families lineage had it's own specifically evolved techniques, but this Umitachi decided not to give up! So, after tons of efforts, he exceeded his limits, realized that development can never be completely finished, and his determination for further improvement is constantly growing. While quickly expanding his knowledge in jutsus, he's aiming to further develop old as well as brand new techniques.
Almost all of his childhood friends are almost always on a mission journeys, so his best everyday friends are his baby brother Masashi.
Excelled in a few low-ranked missions. No distinguished achievements. Just an another talented young shinobi... stories to tell are yet to be made.

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Theme Song and Background Music:



Battles

Won: none
Lost: none

~Approved~
 
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You need to put in more history. And remove your village of allience for you don't have one yet. Other then that I think your good to go. I really like the Brother song with Itatchi and Sasuke. I thought it matched perfectly with them. :D
 

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1: Remove one element, as a genin you can only learn up to one element.

2: If you say you're an Inuzuka, you need to state your dog companion.

3: Inuzuka techs have to be taught, so remove them till you learned them unless there wouldn't be an Inuzuka sempai/sensei anymore. Oringally Gatsandthanks was one.

4: Expand your history, that can't be even called a history.

5: There have been people before who used canon characters in custom bio's however at least they only used one character or they even edited the pictures so that they looked different. However don't you think you're going to far to use Itachi's entire family ~_~
 

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...put in more history. And remove your village of allience for you don't have one yet... :D
Done! Glad you liked the song! :y

you cant have dogs as specailty
Removed! Haven't known about the existence of the scroll owners... Thanks for the new info! :D

remove speciality, and as genning u can only learn 1 element
Ryoukai! Aye-aye, sir! :shino:

a custom bio cannot have a clan until your reach kage rank... so remove that clan...and add some more in your history..
Undersood! Adding in more history info... :crazy:

1: Remove one element, as a genin you can only learn up to one element.

2: If you say you're an Inuzuka, you need to state your dog companion.

3: Inuzuka techs have to be taught, so remove them till you learned them unless there wouldn't be an Inuzuka sempai/sensei anymore. Oringally Gatsandthanks was one.

4: Expand your history, that can't be even called a history.

5: There have been people before who used canon characters in custom bio's however at least they only used one character or they even edited the pictures so that they looked different. However don't you think you're going to far to use Itachi's entire family ~_~
1 - air :)
2 - decided not be one one, but thanks, can't believe I forgot that... U_U
3 - decided not be one one, since they generally have fang tattoos on face, which I do not like :(
4 - any better now? :eek:
5 - actually I wanted to revise the bio into Itachi's, as soon as I get 1500 posts for an Uchiha (if it's kk?) :omg:
 

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Done! Glad you liked the song! :y



Removed! Haven't known about the existence of the scroll owners... Thanks for the new info! :D



Ryoukai! Aye-aye, sir! :shino:



Undersood! Adding in more history info... :crazy:



1 - air :)
2 - decided not be one one, but thanks, can't believe I forgot that... U_U
3 - decided not be one one, since they generally have fang tattoos on face, which I do not like :(
4 - any better now? :eek:
5 - actually I wanted to revise the bio into Itachi's, as soon as I get 1500 posts for an Uchiha (if it's kk?) :omg:
You loose the ability to edit your posts after a while. Unless you start spamming like hell, against the time you have enough posts you can't even edit this anymore so just make another bio when you have enough posts, then I can trash this one.
 

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Kk! Hmm... Everything I learn with this character will be transferred or erased? :confused:
You can't even learn anything atm without a bio, let alone with this character.

As long as you don't have a bio, you can't RP. If you mean that you want to RP with this character till you have 1500 posts and then make it into an Uchiha, then you are not revising this one into an Uchiha, but you drop this one and make an Itachi bio. In real the result is exactly the same, however there's still a difference as one is a custom and one a canon bio.

It are two different bio's, so when you make an Itachi you can't say that it's an update from this bio, it's a whole new bio. And what you learn, you learn forever. If you learn fire, you don't need to learn it again, even if you drop a bio and make a new one.
 

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When you make an Itachi you can't say that it's an update from this bio, it's a whole new bio. And what you learn, you learn forever. If you learn fire, you don't need to learn it again, even if you drop a bio and make a new one.
Thank you, all clear. :worshippy:
*open to suggestions* :no_ignore:
 
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