The Legendary Sage of Konoha; Sasuke Chronicles 3

[madarauzumaki]

yay finally i loved the chapter

 

[Michael92]

Huge Reply Post To Everyone;​

So long,but seriously.......Kurotsuchi with.......it ain't right

Long as in long chapter?
Yeah as I said, I thought some would not like that part as muchxd​

oh cool thanks

Sure NP This is actually the 3rd chapter of this chronicles and the 17th chapter in all, so kind of wird to start reading on this one​

Nice story dude and i love when Sasuke become Tsuchikage. Hell Yeah! =)

Hehe, well I thought I had to better explain that part as it wasn't exactly too good explained in chapter 12
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Well , I think you nailed the last part of Sasuke Chronicles very well even if a grandiose fight was expected (but you had other plans )

Before I forget, I wanted to mention that you mispelled "ridiculous" into "ridicilous" where the Shinobis were considering Sasuke. It's silly but still...xd Also, remove that bold lettering before the start! It's kinda repulsive

hehe, finally Sasuke had 2 children (2 girls, isn't it):| Anyways, it's better like this! Btw, I love the idea of Kurotsuchi<3Sasuke. I didn't really liked her in the manga but I found her damn hot in the anime. They do look good together xd

On side notes...

- I thought that Kitsuchi was the son of Onoki (correct me if I'm wrong)
- hehe, old Onoki stopped havin' back problems with age xd I wonder how he remains so healthy xd He could have resumed his position

Well...I hope to see something new from you quickly enough!

Yeah, well I knew from the start that I would have Sasuke 1 and 2 somehow written, but an idea of a chronicle hadn't hit me back then, and I had no idea of writing this storyline down, just referring to it as I've done in the original. However as time went by, Sasuke 3 had to be made, but I didn't see him fighting them off, especially not in just one chapter, so I decided to drop that, and this became the end result.

Oh, thought I set that straight. changed it, thanks
Well it's kind of been a brandmark of all my chapters if you haven't noticed to show the start and the end of each chapter, so cutting it out now... Well I kinda like it. Overruled

Well Miyuki, the oldest (I'm thinking 10 years) is obviously a girl, but Mü the newborn... He's a boy, and if you paid close attention to the manga, you would notice that he's named after no other than the 2nd Tsuchikage

Well I just thought they fitted somehow as I mentioned in one of my above replies, and the timing of her, Kitsuchi and Akatsuchi in this chapter with the anime and manga was somehow perfect as I thought some people might not know who they where or forget about themxd Well I do agree with you on the anime part with her, Lolxd

Well I knew I wanted him as the 4th Tsuchikage before writing this chapter, and I knew from the manga that he was Kurotsuchi's father and she was Onoki's granddaughter, so I thought the same. But there are no place stated that he's Onoki's son, so he's either his son, or son in law as stated on Naruto.wikia. So I thought him as son in law fitted better than him being Onoki's son for some reason. Search him up on Naruto.wikia to read what I read about him

Haha, yeah he could, but the manga kind of state that he should choose a succsessor soon, and since this is 16 years after the manga, I just thought he would have already, and after the 4th died, this is what will happend. But as the chapter says and Sasuke and Onoki's convo says. Sasuke will be active one for the meeting and decide afterwards if he want to remain and if he's choosen. So he's in the same spot as Danzo. We'll see what happends

Yeah me too And sorry for the mega huge reply, just that everything you said needed me to write a lotxd

good chapter... i think you made the right choice about sasuke looking forward to your next chapter.

Thanks I guess there are some mixed feelings here​

Do I really need to say it? Great job and this sums up what happen before the summit.

Yeah, that was the plan Thanks for the support.​

Great Chapter. I mean it.
Looking forward to the next one

Thanks Hopefully in not too long.​

i think all of the people who likes this chapter likes sasuke LOL! =)

Depends, but it's Sasuke Chronicles after all​

What is this supposed to be? Is it just something random that you made up?

Don't want to sound harsh, but did you read the title? This is the 3rd chapter of this chronicles, and as I said to pain of uchiha, this is not my main work;​

Hey you're new to my FF? This is not my main work as this is one of the chronicles I've made beside my original. Thanks for reading.

So this is nothing random if you read the other chapters​

No, I don't like Sasuke (and that I mean it) but I do like the chapter since Michael's projection of Sasuke is differerent from the manga/anime.

Yeah maybe a little He's turned good after all​

finally out woot!
this doesnt seem like a conclusion tho...

Well if there would be a Sasuke 4, it would probably be about Ryu and Nobunaga's attack on Sasuke's convoy as I mentioned in my notes after the chapter, but there won't be a 4th one. However, Sasuke will play more parts in the original though​

Ah, I knew there would be no fight between Sasuke and Kabuto here, after all, it's only one chapter and you can't possibly put the whole battle and Sasuke's awesomeness (lol xd) in this last chapter. And nice job pairing Sasuke and Kurotsuchi up Looking forward to your next chapter (hopefully before May)

Well maybe not But having this as a battle chapter was never in my plans either. This was how I pictured it to be anyways Well she's the only known girl in Iwa, and there is just something about her that I like She kind of fits with Sasuke somehow, and she's also related to Onoki, which makes the whole Sasuke becoming kage more plausible

Yeahxd​

hahaha, hopefully before 2012

Haha, Lolxd​

yay finally i loved the chapter

Thanks​

 

[The_Empire]

*runs to Mike then gives him a hug*

Oh Mike, release another chapter and I wonder what is the plan Kabuto, Zetus and Madara has going on.

 

[Michael92]

*runs to Mike then gives him a hug*

Oh Mike, release another chapter and I wonder what is the plan Kabuto, Zetus and Madara has going on.

Kakashi 2 is almost done, So I'll start with 14 soon

 

[darknesscreater]

finally back on track =P

 

[Michael92]

finally back on track =P

Hopefully I'll be busy today and tomorrow as well as Tuesday, but I guess I'll be done with Kakashi 2 on Monday for release, and then I'll start at 14 at Wedensday, and be done by Thursday, before another working-weekend with no time at all. We'll see how it turns out

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Hmm, the final version, at last. There's not much of a change in it really and I still find that Sasuke-Kurotsuchi a little awkward xd Also, I still wanted the 3rd chap to have been Sasuke's fight with Kabuto and Zetsu!

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Humph anyway! As you felt you wanted to give it a little - nah, a major, perhaps - twist then, okay..I'll just settle with the thought that the Anbu report about the 4th's death in LSoK1 was a little mixed up [or was wrong about the repelling shinobi to be the Tsuchikage as you said].

All in all, it was a surprise! Congratulations!

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You caught me and probably the rest of your readers off guard with that.

 

[Michael92]

Hmm, the final version, at last. There's not much of a change in it really and I still find that Sasuke-Kurotsuchi a little awkward xd Also, I still wanted the 3rd chap to have been Sasuke's fight with Kabuto and Zetsu!

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Humph anyway! As you felt you wanted to give it a little - nah, a major, perhaps - twist then, okay..I'll just settle with the thought that the Anbu report about the 4th's death in LSoK1 was a little mixed up [or was wrong about the repelling shinobi to be the Tsuchikage as you said].

All in all, it was a surprise! Congratulations!

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You caught me and probably the rest of your readers off guard with that.

So you did appear after all

Well I just added some scenes and some extra convos here and there, not much really, but I liked the final result as it was way bigger than Kakashi 2

Oh well, that didn't happend It was only rumors after all

Thanks I guess

 

[~Deidara~]

Your work is enticing and far better than mine. If it isn't too much trouble, would you judge my work "Tales of Hikusa" I am about to post a new chapter. It would be an honor.

 

[-Shanks-]

nice chapter dude. repped

 

[NamkazeNaruto]

YIHA

 

[Michael92]

Your work is enticing and far better than mine. If it isn't too much trouble, would you judge my work "Tales of Hikusa" I am about to post a new chapter. It would be an honor.

Thanks. Yeah I don't see no harm in that. Post me a link on my profile in a vm, as I'm a little busy now so that I won't forget, alright?

nice chapter dude. repped

Thanks

YIHA

Hehe



Update: Forgot to put in the title of this chapterxd So just fixed it The name is Invasion.

 

[Escorpiius]

Well, not all your chapters have that bold lettering initially :| Still, it looks better with a title Perhaps that's what was missing xd

 

[knots23]

Where's the next? cant wait to read LOL!

Nice work dude..Keep it up

 

[Faith]

No wonder you have so many views on every of your FF chapters ^_^
great work !

 

[Michael92]

Well, not all your chapters have that bold lettering initially :| Still, it looks better with a title Perhaps that's what was missing xd

Well every chapter so far has had it's title, just that I completely forgot about it this time around and remembered it when I was browsing through my notes on my pc and I went through "Notes 2: Chapter names" and thought "Sasuke 3 - Invasion... Did I put it on the chapter at NB" Then I checked and realized that I forgot to put it onxd Oh well

Where's the next? cant wait to read LOL!

Nice work dude..Keep it up

Kakashi 2 is next. It will be released on Wedensday or Thursday/In 2-3 days
Thanks

No wonder you have so many views on every of your FF chapters ^_^
great work !

Thanks

 

[Mei Waxton]

Good as always.You can say its worth the wait.I don't have much to say but this chapter was awesome, now waiting for KC and chapter 14, hope they don't take much time as this one.

 

[Michael92]

Good as always.You can say its worth the wait.I don't have much to say but this chapter was awesome, now waiting for KC and chapter 14, hope they don't take much time as this one.

Thanks, I'll try my best to not take that long But as I mentioned about, Kakashi 2 should be out in 2-3 days.

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Thanks, I'll try my best to not take that long But as I mentioned about, Kakashi 2 should be out in 2-3 days.

Hmm, is that 2-3 24-hour-cycle days or 2-3 Michael92 days?​

 

[darknesscreater]

lol, hopefully 24 hr cycles U_U