the story of Takashi Tetsuya

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to read about the Tetsuya clan click this link

you dont need too because the clan will be explained throught the story but if you want too read it you can.


the first part of the story tells about toshiro tetsuya, takashi tetsuyas father and is the back bone of the story and after this it will be more like a fan fic.

takashis father, this is the back bone of the story
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Part 1 of this story

Narrator: Takashi Tetsuya is from the Tetsuya clan but was born in the village hidden in the grass, he is the only child and his father was the second hokage of the village, and his name was Toshiro Testsuya, he ran away from his clan at the age of 17 because he was one of the 3 people to be chosen to battle for the tittle of hokage of the Tetsuya clan. he was a very skilled ninja all his life even at an early age and because of that he would always put in the least amount of effort because he was afraid that people would notice his abilities, he always hated his clan because of there ways, he hated the money system of the village because the only jobs around were high rank assassination missions from other villages he could have taken on lower rank non assassination missions but they pay very little money.he thought about the dream of being a hokage but he hated that the 3 strongest ninja of the clan were too be placed in a forest to battle to the death for hokage. He has heard all of his life that his clan is good and if for peace but he never believed any of it. so the night before his 17th birthday he had got a notice in the mail saying that he has been elected for hokage, in fear and in shock he dropped the paper and he fell to his knees wondering what he would do, he didn't want too kill anyone, he did not want the pressure and guilt of being a hokage for a clan that he hated and thought of as evil, and he knew that by being hokage of such a clan he would end up hating him self because he would end up being part of the reason why the clan is the way it is.
he decided too run too the closest village which was 3 days of walking a way, so he tied a bag to a stick and filled it with 3 days worth of food, a few ninja tools such as kunai and shuriken, he needed a way of leaving that wouldn't cause enough suspicion that would make people go looking for him.
so he decided to fake his death by burning his house down.
he set one corner of his house on fire and placed a string of oil and paper bombs spaced far apart on the floor so when the fire reached the paper bombs they would explode and that way no one would go looking inside.
he then ran far enough from the village too were no one could see him.
he then ran on too the top of the hill were he could view the fire.
he looks beside the burning house and sees his mother on the ground crying with his father crying and trying too comfort her. Toshiro then starts crying and thinks about how he didn't get to say good bye or even tell them how much he loved them, with his body shaking with tears in his eyes and his head looking down from shame and guilt, he turns away and heads for the nearest village. he takes secret path ways that only he knows about from doing missions so that way he wont get caught by bandits.
after 3 days of walking he sees the village and tells them that his name is Takumi Shunichi and that his parent were recently killed by bandits in the forest because he knows that if he gives them his last name then they will take him back too his village/clan. they accept him into the village and treat him as one of there own years pass he has completed every mission assigned to him successfully he has made friends with his team mates and the hokage becomes a father figure to him and the hokage thinks of Toshiro as a son, every year toshiro has mailed a gift to his parents on there birthday and on holidays anonymously with flowers for his mother and a holiday card with extra money in it from doing extra missions, for his dad, he knows he can never tell them who he is or how much he loves them and so sometimes he will write letters saying how much he loves them and misses them and never sends them instead he sticks them in a drawer that has a family photo on top with a stack of unsent letters underneath.
one day on Toshiros birthday while he is off doing extra missions, the hokage walks in his house to leave a gift and a cake for toshiro he then notices that theres an unsent letter on toshiros desk were he usually writes letters, curious, the hokage *whos name is Mitsuru* goes too pick up the letter too stick it in the mailbox for Toshiro he then notices that its for the Tetsuya clan who is a clan that is very secretive too the point were they have there own clan members go too pick up mail from other villages, Mitsuru then notices that there is a drawer half way open showing a photograph and other unsent letters, Mitsuru realizes that the name on the letters say toshiro and he reads one of the letters and figures out who Takumi really is and that's when toshiro opens the door and sees Mitsuru holding one of his unsent letters. toshiro then starts to apologize when Mitsuru interrupts his apology and says

Mitsuru: what are you sorry for? theres nothing wrong with loving your parents.

*he then smiles at toshiro and then looks at the photograph and says with a calm and happy voice*


Mitsuru: heh, i wont tell anyone about this, and im pretty sure there's a good reason for why you left your village and your clan, and i trust you enough not to ask any questions.

*he then looks at toshiro who has tears in his eyes.*


Mitsuru: now how bout some cake?

"Mitsuru and toshiro become closer than ever and Mitsuru even becomes toshiros sensei and teaches him several jutsus as he knows that one day he will die and will need someone strong and kind hearted to take his place and that someone will be toshiro"


"mitsuru thought that it would take 8-10 years of training but he soon realized that toshiros kekke genkai allows toshiro too learn and even master jutsu very quickly and because of that toshiro learns all of mitsurus jutsu and even the jutsu of the hokage before him with in 5 and a half years."


*and no more than 3 months after the training a ninja war had happen while toshiro was out getting food and supplies for the village, when he arrived back from his mission he had seen fire and heard yelling and kunai clashing every where he then droped the supplies and ran further into the village.
while running he soon heard a quiet voice and he immediately stopped, and his eyes opened as wide as he could in an instant from shock and fear because he knew whos voice that was. he slowly turned his head too see that Mitsuru was laying on the ground with knifes and swords in his back piercing his body all the way through him. he then started too shed tears and Mitsuru told him.*

Mitsuru: its okay toshiro, i may look pretty bad but i don't feel any pain.

toshiro: MITSURU! "toshiro yelled"
what happend!?!

mitsuru: it was the tetsuya clan, your parents died last week and they discovered the letters, and so they came over here looking for you, i told them that i never heard of you, but they saw a photograph of you on my wall.
and they wanted me too tell them were you were.
*Mitsuru smiles with tears in his eyes* i never told them about you....no matter how badly they hurt me, i fought til the end.... *he then looks at toshiro who is crying heavily* ....hey toshiro dont cry, no one should have too feel sad on there birthday........

*toshiro cries harder*

toshiro: b-but its all my fault, i shouldve let go of my parents when i left.

Mitsuru: *he uses his last bit of energy to speak to toshiro* ....theres.....nothing... wrong about..... loving your parents toshiro....i tought you that....long.....ago.....
hehe.... i almost forgot..... i left.... you a present... in the basement of the... hokage mansion, they dont know..... about the basement.... so it should still... be there. i was planning on... giving it to.... you tonight, i promise you willl like it hehe .
*that was his last words*

toshiro: *toshiro looks at Mitsuru noticing that his head is lowering too the ground and is now lifeless*
Mitsuru?....Mitsuru? dont die, its ok Matsuru lets go open it...
*he then notices Mitsuru lifless eyes*
Mitsuru!


*toshiro had planned to destroy and wipe out the tetsuya clan, he then remembered the present that Mitsuru was going to give to him and so he goes down to the basement in the hokage Mansion and he sees a hokage robe and hat waiting on him, he then walks over to it and sees a note that says
"Toshiro, i know that you will be a kind hearted and loving hokage and i hope that you will accept my gift too you" because of Mitsurus kind and gentle words, toshiro decides not to go after revenge on the tetsuya clan, instead he decides too rebuild his village and become the hokage that Mitsuru always knew he would be*

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thank you very much for reading!:)



ps: if you dont like it tell me why.
criticism is accepted because it helps me find my faults.


ive typed up the next part too takashi tetsuya if you want too read it click below
 
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so, you took my advice. good for you. writing is a very good way to express yourself, or just have fun. never give up your creative side, or your pen (or keyboard, as the case may be)
as for the story itself... I loved it! the grammar was a little askew here and there, but i didn't mind; i thought it was a good read. you have an amazing talant, and I can't wait to read the next instalment of Takashi Tetsuya. *thumbs up!* :)
 
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so, you took my advice. good for you. writing is a very way to express yourself, or just have fun. never give up your creative side, or your pen (or keyboard, as the case may be)
as for the story itself... I loved it! the grammar was a little askew here and there, but i didn't mind; i thought it was a good read. you have an amazing talant, and I can't wait to read the next instalment of Takashi Tetsuya. *thumbs up!* :)
thank you very much,
ill correct the grammar in about an hr.
then ill finish typing it up.
there will be at least 10 parts maybe 6 or 7 if i can find better ways of typing it.
 
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