6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 3

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CHAPTER 3 – Enter! The Wizard World.

1 hour passed

Shikamaru: Are you sure to go? I mean…

Naruto: Don’t worry, I’m sure of myself. Besides, once this mission is successful, I’ll just get bored. Even if this will be convenient for you, isn’t it?

Shikamaru: Guess you’re right.

Naruto stood up.

Naruto: I’m going to see Hinata. I promised to name our son after the ceremony and since I will not be here after that, I’ll better go on. I might need to pacify her.

Shikamaru: You are impossible.

Naruto: You think so. By the way, I wanted to ask Gaara, Kankuro and Temari for this mission and…

Shikamaru: You know that I will get pummeled so hard that I may be no more in a state to even come with you.

Naruto: I know but you did a job that’s worth that. Anyways, I think that they might be of a good help since we do not really know Kabuto’s actual force.

Shikamaru: Yes, but we do not know his position or his plan, so we cannot take most of the most affluent ninjas with us.

Naruto: Guess so. Then, just inform Tsunade to ask for Suna’s help if mishaps may occur in the Wizard World.

Shikamaru: Right, I’ll ask Tsunade to tell her invite my own death if problem should occur. Crap, I always knew that women are source of problem.

Naruto: See, I’m not the only one who is impossible here. Okay, once everybody arrives, explain them the mission and meet me at the central gate. Don’t forget to take the scroll.

Shikamaru: Right.

He said that with a very depressed and disinterested expression on his face.

*some minutes later*

Hinata: Oh, Naruto-kun. You’re back!

Naruto: Yep and we might need to rush it up with the naming.

Hinata: But why?

Naruto: I need to go in less than an hour and it might be for a long time. We found Kabuto and…let’s forget this and think of a name for this champ.

Naruto began cajoling his son while Hinata looked on them, depressed a bit that Naruto will be gone for a while. Naruto saw her concern.

Naruto: Hey, don’t worry.

He put the baby on a bed and Naruto reached up slowly to Hinata coming very close to her. Hinata blushed, looking into Naruto eyes.

Hinata: You’ll be back soon, won’t you?

Naruto began rubbing her cheek with his hand.

Naruto: Hinata Hyuuga…

Naruto approached nearer to her, almost feeling her breath and her warmth which was increasing just as her face’s redness.

Naruto: ….You are the most incredible, fascinating and shyly woman I’ve ever seen in my life.

Hinata felt speechless. Naruto moved his face forward. His lips just innocently grazed across hers for a moment, but it sent Hinata's soul ablaze. She grabbed the back of Naruto's head, deepening the kiss. The kiss seemed to last forever, each moment blissful and heavenly. Finally, they broke apart after savoring the passionate, slow and lusty taste. Both looked at each other and Hinata almost fainted but Naruto caught her in time.

Naruto: So, what about the name? Any thoughts?

Hinata: Well, since you promised Sasuke about…

Naruto: You want me to name him after Sasuke?

Hinata: Well, not exactly but more of a de-facto name of his. I searched the names book and I found this.

Hinata showed Naruto the found name.

Hinata: “Hei” for peace is also what Jiraiya-sensei wanted, so I came up with this.

Naruto: Heisuke…

Naruto could not restrain his emotions and tears felt from his eyes.

Naruto: It’s perfect. So, Heisuke, you’ll be having a huge inheritance to carry on this great name. Thank you, Hinata. I must go now.

Hinata: But there is still time for the mission departure, isn’t it?

Naruto: Yes, but I have stuffs to do with Shikamaru. See you later and take care of our Heisuke.

He smiled to Hinata and went away. Hinata took Heisuke in her arms and kept feeling Naruto’s smile and the kiss they just had. She then looked to Heisuke.

Hinata: Daddy will come back soon, Heisuke.

At the Konoha grave…

Kakashi was standing in front of Obito’s grave.

Kakashi: Ehh…..I see, you are here too, Naruto.

Naruto: Well, I had to come. What about you, Kakashi-sensei? Shouldn’t you be with Shikamaru for the mission-briefing?

Kakashi: I was about to go. Besides, I heard everything moments earlier.

Naruto: You should stop spying us at the window. It isn’t very glorious for my second adviser to listen secretly to us.

Kakashi: Perhaps but once I begin helping you inside, I’ll no longer be able to read. Besides, you know I’m here to help whenever necessary but Shikamaru is already there for that. Anyway, let go at your office for the briefing.

Naruto: You go; I’ll stay here a bit.

Kakashi: Need some space and peace. Okay, see you later, ‘Rokudaime’.

Kakashi went towards the Hokage’s office while Naruto advanced towards a grave.

Naruto: Sasuke…

Naruto closed his wet eyes…
Well, I originally planned to put a flashback battle here but since it was really getting’ long, I decided to write it in an exclusive chapter. Here's the CHAPTER - .


Finally at the Central Gate of Konoha

Naruto: So, I see, everyone’s ready?

Kakashi, Shikamaru, Sakura and Neji nodded.

Tsunade: Here’s the scroll, Naruto. Sign on it and you know the rest.

Naruto bloodied one of his fingers and then put his fingers on the scroll.

Naruto: So, here we go.

In a poof and a swirl of wind, they disappeared. Naruto, Kakashi and Neji landed their feet on the ground while Sakura landed awkwardly and Shikamaru fell flat on the face.

Naruto: You, okay, Shikamaru?

Kakashi: First time you were reversed-summoned, eh?

Shikamaru: Yes but it’s far more pleasant than my wife’s yelling at me.

Sakura: You really did not care about Temari, Shikamaru. You really deserve whatever she shouts at you.

Shikamaru: Oh what a drag! Hearing all that on a mission.

Eye drops were seen upon Kakashi and Naruto’s head while Sakura was still reasoning Shikamaru. Meanwhile, Neji looked around. Far from the sunny Konoha, they were in a dark, overgrown and thick forest. He used his Byakugan to find the end of the forest.

Neji: The end of the forest is quite far and in this darkness, its better that we stay here till morning.

They began setting up a fire when suddenly, they heard whistling and hissing sounds from the sky.

Kakashi: You heard that?

Naruto: Yes, Neji?

Neji: Right!

Neji scanned the sky when a thick fog was really sweeping around the forest.

Sakura: Woah, it’s really freezing here.

Naruto: Yes, it’s quite strange.

Naruto began shivering

Neji: Up there!

About a two dozen of Dementors were flying in the sky.

Shikamaru: What is that?

Kakashi: I don’t know but be ready, they really seems dangerous and scary.
They went into formation when they each experienced a sense of terrors and sadness.

Sakura: Genjutsu? Dissipation!

Nothing occurred.

Neji: Sixteen Trigrams Palms Ultimate Spin!

The Dementors retreated by less than a meter with Neji's new Heavenly Spin, giving Shikamaru and Naruto, a moment to snap out of the Dementors’ Kiss.

Naruto: What was that?

Kakashi: I don’t know but they really seem dangerous. It seems like they were sucking out your chakra or rather your soul.

Neji: It wasn’t chakra-absorption but definitely, they need to approach to have full efficiency with their illusion that they cast.

Shikamaru: Restraining them all of them are impossible.

Sakura: I agree!

Naruto began fixing the Dementors who were swirling around. He remembered the cold sensation he just had as his eyes went to Sage Mode.

Naruto: Still, we need to defeat them.

His voice regained confidence and he seemed to overcome the fear he just had.

Naruto: Sakura and Shikamaru, behind us! Kakashi, cover Neji and I.

Everyone took their position as Neji and Naruto charged!

~END OF CHAPTER~

As always, I hoped you appreciated this since I tried new things with this chapter. Finally, the mix will be much faster as from now since they finally entered the Wizard World. Don’t forget to post comments (no spamming though), criticize (and suggest ways to improve), reps, thanked and rate.


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Wow, nice!

FF between Naruto and HP, that's a first?!

Nice writing style and storyline so far!
Thankies!
Well, I think it's the 1st on NB but you can find others on the net :eek:
I like that you appreciated this especially since you surely gonna win a prize for this month's FF contest xd Goodluck. Btw, check out the previous chapters if you havn't. :D

Great stuff once again....i'll be following this!!
Yep, please follow! I'll really appreciate :cool:
 

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Yay! Dementors! I wanna see soon how you'll let them handle them. Geez, this is getting interesting. On a side note, that scene for Naruto and Hinata was so daring. I can't dare write something like that here.xd...And Shikamaru - LOL! so typical of him, he's the exact person I imagine him to be Temari's wife.xd
 

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Yay! Dementors! I wanna see soon how you'll let them handle them. Geez, this is getting interesting. On a side note, that scene for Naruto and Hinata was so daring. I can't dare write something like that here.xd...And Shikamaru - LOL! so typical of him, he's the exact person I imagine him to be Temari's wife.xd
Yay! Dementors. Initially, I planned Giant Spiders but I finally went with Dementors.

The Naru-Hina part is one of the best part I've written as a writer. It's daring but on the other hand, I was almost going to write a love-making scene...ooops, forget about that. Well, the fact is that I almost felt myself into Naruto's place wile writing this part xd

About Shika, well...I have a surprise for y'all about him. That's a small twist by me xd
 

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Amazing as always, If Hinata fainted by kissing , I really don't know how Heisuke could have happened :D , but loved that part nonetheless.
Dementors arrival was perfect. Kabuto and Orochimaru are so much common :p
 

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Amazing as always, If Hinata fainted by kissing , I really don't know how Heisuke could have happened :D , but loved that part nonetheless.
Dementors arrival was perfect. Kabuto and Orochimaru are so much common :p
xdxd! Ooops, I did not consider that fact about Hinata part! It's true but guess it was since I was so into the kissing moment that I let it go :p I love that part cause' I rarely try things like that and so passionately. :D

Yep, glad you liked the Dementors part xd I didn't quite understand the kabuto-oro question but never mind :p xd I agree that they ressemble each other
 
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Good chapter once again. Almost felt akward reading the "***"- scenexd

So Sasuke is dead?!:eek: Let me guess... He took down Madara in the attempt?

Chapter 4 next, or special chapter?:p
Thanks,xd Well, it was no "***" scene but I agree that it quite a bold writing but I just loved that part (especially it's the 1st time I tried something like that) :p

Sasuke's fate...You'll see it more in the next chap. And yes, I'll be doing the special chapter first.
 

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Thanks,xd Well, it was no "***" scene but I agree that it quite a bold writing but I just loved that part (especially it's the 1st time I tried something like that) :p

Sasuke's fate...You'll see it more in the next chap. And yes, I'll be doing the special chapter first.
Hehe:pxd

So what are you going to call it? Sasuke Chronicles:D Or maybe Sasuke special:p
 

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Hehe:p So only one chapter, then the rest original, or have you planned something big?:p
Well, I'll be writing the whole entirely, then I'll see its length! If it fits in one, good otherwise better be two xd
Also, I think the rest will be continuing the original storyline indeed and I'll plan something big if any inconvenience occurs :p
 

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ok this is the best FF but...

1st Sasuke is dead...
2nd Naruto gave up on sakura...how so ? (please give us some info about it xd)
3rd sasauke was so easily convinced he is wrong...
4th where is madara ?

except that everything is just perfect...
 

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Thanks for all the good compliments

About the points then -

1. Well, firstly, I'm not one of his fans but I know his importance in the Naruto world. I have no future plans for him in the story! Now, about the revivin' him, I don't really know xd

2. I think Hinata is the right girl for Naruto. There is true love between them and not childish obsession like Naruto has over Sakura! I think with time, he'll realize that Hinata is the one for him.

3. Well, I think that for sasuke to be convinced, Itachi should has a master part in it. Itachi is the person, Sasuke loves the most and with that in mind, I think he has been convinced not that easily. Sasuke is a kind of antihero that should at the end remains the same in attitude but changes in his ways of doings.

4. More about Madara in the next Special chapter! I won't reveal spoilers xd
 
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