this is a continued version of my original series,but it also will be a bit different. As it will take place many years later after where I left off and I will add much more new things to it,which is why it shall also stand alone as a new FF at the same time.
Note: due to the correct way of writing and by tenzo's suggestion,I shall from now on write my FF with the correct style xd
Original series:
new series:
_________________________________
(btw turn the music and read the FF with it untill it ends...its more fun)
The day was as nice as it always was on Naboo,the sun was shining and warming the earth,the animals calmly giving out sounds in the background.It seemed so calm,but not in a place near by.The struggle and tension over there was amazing.
"More damn it,is that all you got",- yelled ragnaroc furious with scarface's performance.He swung from one side with his lightsaber,then disappearing and appearing at the other side and again swinging it.It seemed like scarface with each strike was closer and closer to death at his sensei's hand,-"you must be ready for treachery,you must be ready to defend all 360 degrees around you at any time and any day you hear!"
It was amazing at how scarface was blocking those merciless blows that were attempting to land on him.However rags blows were landing closer and closer to his flesh and soon he began to panic.His instinct was overwhelming the mind and he was slowly building tension until...he blew it out in a huge blast that left a huge crater on the land he was standing on.Scarface looked around to see if he had defeated rag.Then he looked up and saw the grinning face staring right at him.
"At last that rage of yours is becoming powerful,however you use it by instinct,a strong sith controls and manipulates his rage and instincts by will"
"But how am I to do that,is there a special way to do that,some sort of training?",-scarface asked blankly.
"yes there is",- rag replied excitingly,-"and I always enjoyed this part of the training most,since it determines whether or not you are worthy to be a sith...oh and did I mention that there is a 80% chance youll die.."
"No,y-you didn't"- he said gulping
"Oh well now you know,fallow me"
"Where are we going?",- scar asked horrified that this might be the last day of his life.
"You'll know soon,but ill tell you this,it has to do with a certain cave that is found only on Naboo"
As they went towards the place where the training would commence,2 of our characters were also on their way towards that same spot.Both of them were rather serous.The man in the white cloak stopped in front of the cave and spoke:
"Well jinbei,in there you will find your greatest enemy and you will have to face it"
"Who is that?I never had anyone as a enemy?",-jinbei said confused
"Ah,but the enemy you face in there will be like no other?Your enemy jinbei,is your fear,your doubt,your sins that you are afraid to confess.Those are the challenges that lie in front of you.Once you master this cave,you master your weakness.Then you are ready to be a jedi master.That is my last lesson to you jinbei,you are ready to wonder the world in search of justice by yourself.I must leave you now,best of luck to you,and may that force be with you."
Jinbei felt a great pain in his heart that was unbearable.The man he knew his whole life,who raised him would be gone.He tried to not think of it and holding his emotions he tried to casually enter the cave.Upon entering there were 3 ways to go.Jinbei was confused and did not know which to choose.The door that led to the right said "To learn your fear",the one in front said "to eliminate your doubt" and the left one said "to find yourself".Jinbei tried the one in front,but it would not open,he tried the left but with the same result.He then knew,that he first needed to learn his fear,in order to proceed.However before jinbei is to enter, 2 men,who knew each other for a long time meet.
"Y-Yamato?Is that you?It can't be,my eyes must be deceiving",-ragnaroc said not beleiving what he is seeing.
"I can't let you pass,your son must go through the training first.I can't allow you to corrupt him...even if it costs me my life.
"Hah!We shall see about that",-rag said once back to his senses.
Scarface jumped back in order to observe this inevitable fight.Both of the fighters held the lightsabers in the stance to land hard and slow blows.Both jumped to each other at high speed and landed a strike on each others lightabers that led to a huge wave of energy to blow on the whole field.Scarface observed as they exchanged some kind of conversation after which rag overpowered yamato and dashed behind him,delivering the final attack,with one thrust of his sword yamato lay on the ground motionless,until his body changed into force particles which then soared into the air. Rah motioned to scarface to proceed and he soon caught up.
"In the cave you may meet my son,no matter what,do not tell him who you are,and why your there.And do not attack him.Now enter,I will be waiting here for both of you."
"As you wish sensei"
He entered the cave slowly,looking from side to side.After walking a few minutes he enters the same room with 3 doors jinbei was in,but jinbei had already entered.The doors were closed and he entered the same one jinbei was forced to.He met jinbei on the end of the tunnel standing there.Scarface hesitated at first,but then said casually:
"Uh..Hi there"
Startled jinbei grabs his green lightsaber and asks "Who are you?"
"Just a padawan..Uh..training..uh...you?"
Confused by the weird talk jinbei deactivates his lightsaber.He then turns around to face the door and starts mumbling something.Scarface took a look and saw another sign on the door,written in blood and stating "Here is were you conquer fear,here is where you conquer death...here is where your last days might come as well"
_________________________________
Next chapter- "Enemies-fear,doubt,yourself and a friendship by fate"
Hope you liked it,sorry it was short
Note: due to the correct way of writing and by tenzo's suggestion,I shall from now on write my FF with the correct style xd
Original series:
1-
2-
3-
4-
5-
6-
7 & 8-
You must be registered for see links
2-
You must be registered for see links
3-
You must be registered for see links
4-
You must be registered for see links
5-
You must be registered for see links
6-
You must be registered for see links
7 & 8-
You must be registered for see links
new series:
chapter 0(prologue)-
You must be registered for see links
Padawan Arc
chapter 1-
You must be registered for see links
(btw turn the music and read the FF with it untill it ends...its more fun)
It is a disturbing time on NB,
floods of noob siths are attacking the galaxy known as NB,
The old republic and its senate has crumbled under the the Dark Emperor Nexus who betrayed the jedi and conquered the galaxy over 15 years ago,
those who opposed him was killed and those who joined him were merely tortured.
The jedi and the mangolorians,the most feared in the whole galaxy have too scattered through out the galaxy,
Some have joined nexus and with them nexus has assembled the most crazy and weird of siths for his generals,
they are simply known as "mods".
The growing threat,the call for freedom,the call of the force has now awakened the jedi and the mangolorians from there deep sleep,
Now it is up to the old and new jedi along with their enemy manglorians to forget the past,to gather,unite and overthrow these so called admins, mods and most of all-Nexus...
________________________________________floods of noob siths are attacking the galaxy known as NB,
The old republic and its senate has crumbled under the the Dark Emperor Nexus who betrayed the jedi and conquered the galaxy over 15 years ago,
those who opposed him was killed and those who joined him were merely tortured.
The jedi and the mangolorians,the most feared in the whole galaxy have too scattered through out the galaxy,
Some have joined nexus and with them nexus has assembled the most crazy and weird of siths for his generals,
they are simply known as "mods".
The growing threat,the call for freedom,the call of the force has now awakened the jedi and the mangolorians from there deep sleep,
Now it is up to the old and new jedi along with their enemy manglorians to forget the past,to gather,unite and overthrow these so called admins, mods and most of all-Nexus...
Chapter II
The struggles
The struggles
The day was as nice as it always was on Naboo,the sun was shining and warming the earth,the animals calmly giving out sounds in the background.It seemed so calm,but not in a place near by.The struggle and tension over there was amazing.
"More damn it,is that all you got",- yelled ragnaroc furious with scarface's performance.He swung from one side with his lightsaber,then disappearing and appearing at the other side and again swinging it.It seemed like scarface with each strike was closer and closer to death at his sensei's hand,-"you must be ready for treachery,you must be ready to defend all 360 degrees around you at any time and any day you hear!"
It was amazing at how scarface was blocking those merciless blows that were attempting to land on him.However rags blows were landing closer and closer to his flesh and soon he began to panic.His instinct was overwhelming the mind and he was slowly building tension until...he blew it out in a huge blast that left a huge crater on the land he was standing on.Scarface looked around to see if he had defeated rag.Then he looked up and saw the grinning face staring right at him.
"At last that rage of yours is becoming powerful,however you use it by instinct,a strong sith controls and manipulates his rage and instincts by will"
"But how am I to do that,is there a special way to do that,some sort of training?",-scarface asked blankly.
"yes there is",- rag replied excitingly,-"and I always enjoyed this part of the training most,since it determines whether or not you are worthy to be a sith...oh and did I mention that there is a 80% chance youll die.."
"No,y-you didn't"- he said gulping
"Oh well now you know,fallow me"
"Where are we going?",- scar asked horrified that this might be the last day of his life.
"You'll know soon,but ill tell you this,it has to do with a certain cave that is found only on Naboo"
As they went towards the place where the training would commence,2 of our characters were also on their way towards that same spot.Both of them were rather serous.The man in the white cloak stopped in front of the cave and spoke:
"Well jinbei,in there you will find your greatest enemy and you will have to face it"
"Who is that?I never had anyone as a enemy?",-jinbei said confused
"Ah,but the enemy you face in there will be like no other?Your enemy jinbei,is your fear,your doubt,your sins that you are afraid to confess.Those are the challenges that lie in front of you.Once you master this cave,you master your weakness.Then you are ready to be a jedi master.That is my last lesson to you jinbei,you are ready to wonder the world in search of justice by yourself.I must leave you now,best of luck to you,and may that force be with you."
Jinbei felt a great pain in his heart that was unbearable.The man he knew his whole life,who raised him would be gone.He tried to not think of it and holding his emotions he tried to casually enter the cave.Upon entering there were 3 ways to go.Jinbei was confused and did not know which to choose.The door that led to the right said "To learn your fear",the one in front said "to eliminate your doubt" and the left one said "to find yourself".Jinbei tried the one in front,but it would not open,he tried the left but with the same result.He then knew,that he first needed to learn his fear,in order to proceed.However before jinbei is to enter, 2 men,who knew each other for a long time meet.
"Y-Yamato?Is that you?It can't be,my eyes must be deceiving",-ragnaroc said not beleiving what he is seeing.
"I can't let you pass,your son must go through the training first.I can't allow you to corrupt him...even if it costs me my life.
"Hah!We shall see about that",-rag said once back to his senses.
Scarface jumped back in order to observe this inevitable fight.Both of the fighters held the lightsabers in the stance to land hard and slow blows.Both jumped to each other at high speed and landed a strike on each others lightabers that led to a huge wave of energy to blow on the whole field.Scarface observed as they exchanged some kind of conversation after which rag overpowered yamato and dashed behind him,delivering the final attack,with one thrust of his sword yamato lay on the ground motionless,until his body changed into force particles which then soared into the air. Rah motioned to scarface to proceed and he soon caught up.
"In the cave you may meet my son,no matter what,do not tell him who you are,and why your there.And do not attack him.Now enter,I will be waiting here for both of you."
"As you wish sensei"
He entered the cave slowly,looking from side to side.After walking a few minutes he enters the same room with 3 doors jinbei was in,but jinbei had already entered.The doors were closed and he entered the same one jinbei was forced to.He met jinbei on the end of the tunnel standing there.Scarface hesitated at first,but then said casually:
"Uh..Hi there"
Startled jinbei grabs his green lightsaber and asks "Who are you?"
"Just a padawan..Uh..training..uh...you?"
Confused by the weird talk jinbei deactivates his lightsaber.He then turns around to face the door and starts mumbling something.Scarface took a look and saw another sign on the door,written in blood and stating "Here is were you conquer fear,here is where you conquer death...here is where your last days might come as well"
_________________________________
Next chapter- "Enemies-fear,doubt,yourself and a friendship by fate"
Hope you liked it,sorry it was short
