6th Hokage Dimensional Chronicles ~ Chapter 1

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Okay, this is my 1st FF and this is crossover of Naruto with my favorite book and one of my favorite anime (mixing with the anime is still in doubt, we’ll see later on). I tried to differ it from usual crossovers found on the net and hence, I situated this one, 3 years after the current Naruto manga.

CHAPTER 1 – The 6th Hokage

Lady Tsunade was in her office sipping her sake, with the rising sun radiating. The incandescent sun definitely brought warmth unattained since quite long! Suddenly footsteps were heard and soon…
*knock knock*
The door opened, giving Tsunade the sight of a Shizune with pile of papers!

Tsunade:So is everything okay?

Shizune: Yes, the place is all set! However, the two counselors want to see him but he’s not at his place!

Tsunade: Tell the two oldies to calm down! Besides, I know where he is and he has definitely awakened quickly today. His dream is going to come true.

Kakashi: Yes, even I know where he is!

Tsunade: I can see that even latecomers make effort on special days even if they also could have use the door.

Kakashi: Guess some habits still die hard.

Shizune: Eh, sorry to interrupt you two but if you know where he is, you could perhaps tell me. I need him to meet these two, then some rules, the Alli… *interrupted*

Tsunade: Let it be. He’ll see all that later on and besides, he’s surely having taste of his best till date.

Kakashi: Not to forget, he’ll go some other place then to pay tribute.

Shizune: I see you all are supporting his ways but I maintain that he’s needed here.

Tsunade: I think I’ll support him since Nawaki and Dan’s dream are finally coming true.

Kakashi: I’ll see I’m not the only one whose habits die hard!

Tsunade: What do you mean by that?

Kakashi: With you stepping down, you finally get less jobs and taunts from the two elders.

Tsunade: Sharp as always, Kakashi.

With smile on her face, she continues appreciating her sake!
.....
Back in Konoha, Teuchi, seemingly very drowsy, was preparing ramen.

Teuchi: You definitely came very early today. Anxious?

Naruto: I was before coming here. So is it ready?

Teuchi: Yes, here it is.

Naruto: Finally….

He began eating at his legendary eating pace.

Naruto: Aaah, this is the best taste I’ve had ever.

Teuchi: It’s the moment and the feeling. Your dream is coming true today.

Naruto: Another?

Teuchi: What you finished already?

An hour later, with satisfaction on his face…

Naruto: So here you are and sorry for awakening you that early.

Teuchi: It’s nothing. I’ll go for a little snooze later on.

Naruto: Still, don’t forget to come.

Teuchi: Of course.

Naruto: Okay then, got to go.

In an orange-flash, he suddenly disappeared.
...........
Somewhere else…

ANBU member: Go now and deliver the letter to the Hokage. Oh no, he’s coming.
He makes the jutsu sign to eliminate himself in order to leave no sign of him when suddenly he is stroked dead with a green flash.
........
Back in Konoha, Naruto pays tribute to Jiraiya’s tomb.

Naruto: Ero-Sennin, finally, I’ll be attaining one step closer to complete your unachieved dream. I hope I did not disappoint you. I still regret though, not to have learned much more from you, not to have learned much more from your Godfather’s point of view. Dad was right, you are the perfect model. You may be pervy but you’re the best teacher I could have dreamed of. I don’t know if I’ll be able to change this world but I’ll never back down. Nagato, Granny Chiyo, Sasuke, Dad, Mom and you all have put your last breaths to make me attain this day. I need to carry on your legacy, your hopes! I’ll fulfill my promise at whatever cost. This curse will be broken!

Naruto closed his eyes to prevent tears but in vain. He saw everyone smiling to him, giving him an undescribed impulse. His desire to gloat was unstoppable and eventually, he smiled to everybody and said…

Naruto: Rest assured, I’ll never give up!
.........
Back to the Hokage’s office, the villagers have gathered all around to see the presentation of the new Hokage.

Sakura: What! He’s still not arrived?

Shikamaru: Really, that’s all him. His dream is becoming true and he does not even care to be punctual.

Kakashi: Come on, don’t blame him. He’ll be here.

Shikamaru: Oh, I guess it is useless to be surprised then. He just followed his sensei’s path.

Kakashi: Eh, what do you mean? You…*interrupted*

Shizune: Silence, Tsunade-sama is going to address her speech to Konoha villagers

Tsunade: Since the Third’s death to the 4th Shinobi War, I acted as Hokage. While my decisions may sometimes go completely wrong, I hope that I did not disappoint you overall. The jewels that my ancestors kept throughout their lives were entrusted to me but they were protected by someone else mostly. Today, I’ll finally pass the torch to the next generation hero. I’ll present to you, the sixth Hokage…

Her body was chilled by the moment but using her firmness, she declared!

Tsunade: UZUMAKI NARUTO!

In a sudden flash, he appeared his back turned to all villagers! His orange-black coat was almost hanging till his feet. The Uzumaki sign was still present in broad yellow and his hair was grown a bit more! His determination was clearly seen in his eyes.

Hinata: Naruto-kun, your hat!

Hinata gave Naruto his official Hokage hat while handling their new-born in her other hand. Naruto took the hat and pointed it towards the Hokage Monument!

Naruto: You all will be astonished, believe me! I’ll be the best Hokage, so don’t expect me to disappoint you all!

He grinned a little and then turned back to all the villagers!

He hosted his hat and declared!

Naruto: I am the Sixth Hokage of the Hidden Village of Konoha!

Screams and chears broke out from everybody as the fierce sun dazzled him with light!

Shikamaru: He’ll never change, right?

Neji: Guess so!

Shino: The fact that Naruto reached here after all these sufferings proves that…*interrupted*

Kiba: It shows how hardwork, determination and courage pay off a day. Back there when he was just a brat, few could have foretold that his “impossible” dream will come true.

Shino turns his back, vexed of being cut in his opinion!

Lee: Way to go, Naruto-kun

Gai: Yes, that is called determination! You agree, aren’t you, Kakashi?

Kakashi: Heh, you said something?

Gai: Can’t you stop fretting me with this damn remark, Kakashi?

Kakashi: Whatever, he paved his way to this day! He surpasses each of his predecessors. You may be tired of hearing it but I repeat that I’m very proud of you, Naruto!

A Shinobi suddenly abrupted everyone!

Shinobi: Hokage-sama, we just received a message from one of our ANBU members.

Tsunade: Guess this will be your first task as Hokage, Naruto!

Naruto: Sure, Granny Tsunade!

He walked towards his new office as the Shinobi and Shikamaru – his new adviser – followed him. They arrive in the office as Naruto took seat.

Naruto: So, what it is?

Shinobi: We received a message from one of our Root investigator. He was charged in finding Kabuto and with this message; it seems that we got a lead of him!

Naruto was astonished suddenly! Flashback flowed into his mind with images of Sasuke, Kabuto, and Madara along with a background sound of screams, slashes and battle…

Shikamaru: Hey Naruto, snap out of it!

Naruto came back to him, panting a little! He swept his forehead

Naruto: So where was that bastard spotted?

Shinobi: Along by Hogsmeade, in the Wizard World!

Naruto: Can you repeat it?

Shikamaru: Yes, did you just say Wizards?

Shinobi: Yes, Hogsmeade is found near Hogwarts, the school of Wizardry and Witchcrafts! It is hidden in the Wizardry world!

Shikamaru: Are you kidding?

Shinobi: No, it’s the truth!

Naruto: Wiz…ards …W…orld?

~ END OF CHAPTER! ~

NOTE: As you surely noticed, this will be a Naruto-Harry Potter Crossover along with an anime (let me keep the surprise if it happens!). I know that the chapter dragged a bit on the Naruto world without much connections with Potter World but this was a considered step as I did not wanted to rush and present a senseless plot. Hope you liked it! I will also forewarn all readers that the crossover will happen after the epilogue of the last Harry Potter book. So I will request readers of this FF to read the book first so as not to get spoiler about Harry Potter. The same advice goes for Naruto anime watchers as it will contain information found in the manga mostly. Hope you understand and like it! Don't forget to comment, critics and suggest ways for me to improve.


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Reps, Plus will Follow your fanfic. Please keep us updated via VM if possible :)

The main Points I liked

1. Ofc. Naruto as Hokage
2. Orange-Flash.
3. Hinata and Naruto together ( I am a Big Fan )
4. Kabuto still alive and bad-ass
5. HARRY POTTER ( again Big Fan)
6. Great Work. Keep it up and keep me updated if possible.
 
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Reps, Plus will Follow your fanfic. Please keep us updated via VM if possible :)

The main Points I liked

1. Ofc. Naruto as Hokage
2. Orange-Flash.
3. Hinata and Naruto together ( I am a Big Fan )
4. Kabuto still alive and bad-ass
5. HARRY POTTER ( again Big Fan)
6. Great Work. Keep it up and keep me updated if possible.
Sure I'll post links to you whenever I update. :) Glad you like it.

ill be surprised if this doesnt get atleast 4 stars.
Woah, I hope so. Thankies :D
 

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wow. i think you should make up your own anime. im not dissing but from what i see you have alot of ideas. so you should make up your own shit instead of using characters that have been copy writed
 

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wow. i think you should make up your own anime. im not dissing but from what i see you have alot of ideas. so you should make up your own shit instead of using characters that have been copy writed
Ever heard the word Fanfictions before?:|U_Uxd
And you probably meant manga, not anime...


Anyways, I must say I'm a little shocked! Didn't know you had such potential to write. You have a good writing style and a very impressive sentence construction; that's quite important when writing, and I must say that you nailed it perfectly, with the exception of maybe one or two wrong choise of words in the whole text:p.
So I'm looking forward to see how you handle a "fighting scene", as the conversations usually goes a little stiff there for some (including myselfxd).

I like the story and how you wrote it, and you nailed the canon characters pretty good. Wondering how you will mix Harry (Kabuto *kremt*) Potter into it all, but you're going to pull it off, I'm sure of it;).

Kakashi coming through the window was classicxd and with Hinata being with Naruto and that they have a newborn son feels both right and good:p

So Shikamaru is his new adviser... Who's the other one?
Spoilers from Harry Potter or not, this I'm following as I've already been kinda spoiled the end of it:p

I must say I kinda see myself in you when I started myself, but I must add that your first chapter is a he*k of a lot better than my first one:p Keep going my friend, looking forward to the next chapter. Just remember to link me;)

5/5 stars and reps for you;)
 
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wow. i think you should make up your own anime. im not dissing but from what i see you have alot of ideas. so you should make up your own shit instead of using characters that have been copy writed
Man, i respect your remarks but I think I have right to improvise since it an FanFic. Also, I have no technology to start an anime (if you're rich, good for you) and if you meant manga, then I suck at drawing.
Anyways since the copyright issue has been raised, I should say that the characters from my story are not self- created but owned and created by Kishimoto and JK Rowling (even if almost everyone knows it xd).

Ever heard the word Fanfictions before?:|U_Uxd
And you probably meant manga, not anime...


Anyways, I must say I'm a little shocked! Didn't know you had such potential to write. You have a good writing style and a very impressive sentence construction; that's quite important when writing, and I must say that you nailed it perfectly, with the exception of maybe one or two wrong choise of words in the whole text:p.
So I'm looking forward to see how you handle a "fighting scene", as the conversations usually goes a little stiff there for some (including myselfxd).

I like the story and how you wrote it, and you nailed the canon characters pretty good. Wondering how you will mix Harry (Kabuto *kremt*) Potter into it all, but you're going to pull it off, I'm sure of it;).

Kakashi coming through the window was classicxd and with Hinata being with Naruto and that they have a newborn son feels both right and good:p

So Shikamaru is his new adviser... Who's the other one?
Spoilers from Harry Potter or not, this I'm following as I've already been kinda spoiled the end of it:p

I must say I kinda see myself in you when I started myself, but I must add that your first chapter is a he*k of a lot better than my first one:p Keep going my friend, looking forward to the next chapter. Just remember to link me;)

5/5 stars and reps for you;)
Woah, you made me afraid when you said you were shocked (guess it was retribution for my previous "all in one post" comment) :D
I thank you for your comment and the fact of seeing you in my work made me proud.
I hope I nail it properly with the mix and fight scenes.:rolleyes: Also thanks for your suggestions for improvements :)

As for the 2nd adviser, I still don't really know xd. Guess i'll improvise xd
 
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Woah, you made me afraid when you said you were shocked (guess it was retribution for my previous "all in one post" comment) :D
I thank you for your comment and the fact of seeing you in my work made me proud.
I hope I nail it properly with the mix and fight scenes.:rolleyes: Also thanks for your suggestions for improvements :)

As for the 2nd adviser, I still don't really know xd. Guess i'll improvise xd
Haha didn't thought of that:pxd But I was stating shockingly good:p;)

Oh?:p I'm of no royalty, but always glad to hear people thinking such of me:Dxd

Hehe, looking forward to that:p But remember that with such a great start, you will also get high anticipation for the next chapter so now you'll have to work your ass off!, JK:p I'm curious to see how this HP mix will be. Just don't make it too out of place, if you get what I'm saying:p

Guess you will:p Maybe Tsunade? (No copyingxd);)
 

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wow, dude. 5 stars! i'm really excited to see where you're going with the Harry Potter thing. i honestly cannot wait. keep me updated!
Glad you liked it. Still you'll have to wait a bit xd

don't really like it
Never mind cause I appreciate that you've been frank. Not everyone likes can be similar, isn't it. xd


i like it a lot..naruto and hinata together very nice..
no offense but harry potter..no way dude..
sorry but i dont like harry potter..
Don't worry, I knew before hand that there'll be people who don't like HP and hence, will not like it as much
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Haha didn't thought of that:pxd But I was stating shockingly good:p;)

Oh?:p I'm of no royalty, but always glad to hear people thinking such of me:Dxd

Hehe, looking forward to that:p But remember that with such a great start, you will also get high anticipation for the next chapter so now you'll have to work your ass off!, JK:p I'm curious to see how this HP mix will be. Just don't make it too out of place, if you get what I'm saying:p

Guess you will:p Maybe Tsunade? (No copyingxd);)
Oh, you're no royalty but more divinity xd

Yeah, I guess anticipation will be greater next time. Hope there'll be no disappointment.

Tsunade...why not? As I said, I stil don't know. I did thought of Sakura once but since I never appreciated her, I dropped the idea. (i agree, no copying xd)
 

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Oh, you're no royalty but more divinity xd

Yeah, I guess anticipation will be greater next time. Hope there'll be no disappointment.

Tsunade...why not? As I said, I stil don't know. I did thought of Sakura once but since I never appreciated her, I dropped the idea. (i agree, no copying xd)
xd Yeah right:p...

I'm sure you will do fine;)

Haha, I meant why not her as in even if you have that part equal to mine, it's not copying. I was just referring to your post about not wanting to copy me:p;)
 
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During the first part of the chapter, I kinda thought I've read it somewhere here in NB's FF section that I doubted if I should go on or not. :rolleyes: So, I went down to the last part and the Harry Potter name caught my eye that I decided to go over and read through. Oh well, the chapter turned out wonderful after all. Naruto paying tribute to Jiraiya - Sasuke's loss, if I ever got that right as he was mentioned together with the dead ones?. I like the way you've put into words the scene of Naruto's presentation as the 6th Hokage. And then the sudden twist of Kabuto having been known to have gone to the world of wizards. I expect to see magic against chakra, and spells against jutsus with this one.:)
 

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During the first part of the chapter, I kinda thought I've read it somewhere here in NB's FF section that I doubted if I should go on or not. :rolleyes: So, I went down to the last part and the Harry Potter name caught my eye that I decided to go over and read through. Oh well, the chapter turned out wonderful after all. Naruto paying tribute to Jiraiya - Sasuke's loss, if I ever got that right as he was mentioned together with the dead ones?. I like the way you've put into words the scene of Naruto's presentation as the 6th Hokage. And then the sudden twist of Kabuto having been known to have gone to the world of wizards. I expect to see magic against chakra, and spells against jutsus with this one.:)
I appreciate that you liked it and didn't skip it :). Thankies :D

There'll be more about Sasuke's fate in the next chapters :cool: and of course, your expectations will surely be fulfilled :rolleyes: but after some more build-up xd
 
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