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Dammit. xd

(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death

Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and exlopsives seprately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and forceable puches it into the enemys behind.

Lol

(Konoha Senpu) - Leaf Hurricane

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the usere makes a jumping spin kick up high and while opponent has ducked makes a mid-level kick that connects in the rib cage area.

Ok, basically, you run at your opponent and jump. As you propell your body off the ground, you make a twirling motion, meaning that you will make your bdoy spin. Using that momentum, you quickly retrieve a kick to your opponent's head.

Since you've given that initial twirling motion, in the case your leg meets no enemy (E.g You opponent has ducked, or has leaned his head back) you will make a 360º spin, and will have the chance to attack once more, now retrieving a fast kick, that normally conects at the height of your opponent's rib-cage. In the end of the second kick, you sitting in the ground, or very close to it.
um... are we gonna perform these taijutsu moves now lili-sensei?
 

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Yes, youre gonna perform them now..

*Creates 2 clones*

Perform the two attacks separately on my clones.. xd

I learned them already so im waiting on you to complete them.
ok :D but we should train outside for bigger space
*goes outside and creates 2 shadow clones. Makes C1 clay bird and throws it towards my clones and explodes it just before contact performs Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu–Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique*

performs 1000 Years Of Death on one clone and Konoha Senpu on the other*
 

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ok :D but we should train outside for bigger space
*goes outside and creates 2 shadow clones. Makes C1 clay bird and throws it towards my clones and explodes it just before contact performs Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu–Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique*

performs 1000 Years Of Death on one clone and Konoha Senpu on the other*
Wtf is that? The whole first part of the post is completly irrelevant to the trainning we're doing (It is not that completly irrelevant, but I want it to be irrelevant because I like the word irrelevant)

I wrote 2 pharagraphs explainning the last technique and you can't even bother to do the same? *whips you*

Do it again!

At Seven:

(Konoha reppu) - Leaf Gale

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack that is a comprised of a leg sweep.

The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing - Taken from Wikia xd

Basically, you duck, and while supporting your weight in on leg, you stretch the other, sweaping your stretched leg beneath your opponent's leg, throwing them off balance and sending them flying, or simply making them fall backwards on the ground.
 

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:eek: @ Lily whipping Tendo

*Creates clone*

*I run towards the clone and somewhats crouch on my left leg while i spin backwards bringing my right leg around to sweep my opponents legs from underneath him causing him to fall backwards*
 

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Wtf is that? The whole first part of the post is completly irrelevant to the trainning we're doing (It is not that completly irrelevant, but I want it to be irrelevant because I like the word irrelevant)

I wrote 2 pharagraphs explainning the last technique and you can't even bother to do the same? *whips you*

Do it again!

At Seven:

(Konoha reppu) - Leaf Gale

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack that is a comprised of a leg sweep.

The move here is a simple rear spinning low kick, but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing - Taken from Wikia xd

Basically, you duck, and while supporting your weight in on leg, you stretch the other, sweaping your stretched leg beneath your opponent's leg, throwing them off balance and sending them flying, or simply making them fall backwards on the ground.
^.^ oh yeah... whip my arse baby... I mean lili-sensei... O_O

*creates 2 shadow clone, they move at a short distance away and I use Body Flicker Technique for me to appear behind my first clone to use 1000 Years Of Death on him... then jumps towards my second clone and performs Konoha Senpu
 

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^.^ oh yeah... whip my arse baby... I mean lili-sensei... O_O

*creates 2 shadow clone, they move at a short distance away and I use Body Flicker Technique for me to appear behind my first clone to use 1000 Years Of Death on him... then jumps towards my second clone and performs Konoha Senpu
Dude, you have to describe what youre doing, not say that you used the technique..

Example: *I quickly sneak behind the clone and perform the tiger handseal and stick it in his butt* = 1000 Years of death..

Okay now, no copy and paste. Describe it in your own words dude :|
 

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Dude, you have to describe what youre doing, not say that you used the technique..

Example: *I quickly sneak behind the clone and perform the tiger handseal and stick it in his butt* = 1000 Years of death..

Okay now, no copy and paste. Describe it in your own words dude :|
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^.^ oh yeah... whip my arse baby... I mean lili-sensei... O_O

*creates 2 shadow clone, they move at a short distance away and I use Body Flicker Technique for me to appear behind my first clone to use 1000 Years Of Death on him... then jumps towards my second clone and performs Konoha Senpu
^.^ :zise: oh yeah... whip my arse baby... I mean lili-sensei... O_O

*creates 2 shadow clone, they move at a short distance away and I use Body Flicker Technique for me to appear behind my first clone to use 1000 Years Of Death on him by making the tiger seal... then jumps towards my second clone and jumps then performs Konoha Senpu
 

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Seriously, Tendo... Even after Paths' explained you what to do, you still made the same mistake. And you made it twice. That's three times already...

Don't write, better yet, don't EVER write: "I use Konoha Senpu" or any other Taijutsu moves. The first thing I said was that you have to DESCRIBE EVERYTHING YOU DO. You have to re-write the Taijutsu description with your own words, applying it to the situation you're using it.

Do over.
 

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Seriously, Tendo... Even after Paths' explained you what to do, you still made the same mistake. And you made it twice. That's three times already...

Don't write, better yet, don't EVER write: "I use Konoha Senpu" or any other Taijutsu moves. The first thing I said was that you have to DESCRIBE EVERYTHING YOU DO. You have to re-write the Taijutsu description with your own words, applying it to the situation you're using it.

Do over.
:confused:
ok... I'll give it another shot... :confused:

*creates two clone, when I saw my 1st clone then I use Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique and appears under his behind, does the proper handseal to insert it in his hole*
*saw my 2nd clone next to my first clone, jumps after finishing my first clone then does a spin kick in my second clone's torso*
 

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:confused:
ok... I'll give it another shot... :confused:

*creates two clone, when I saw my 1st clone then I use Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique and appears under his behind, does the proper handseal to insert it in his hole*
*saw my 2nd clone next to my first clone, jumps after finishing my first clone then does a spin kick in my second clone's torso*
-_- Oh well.. Good enough I guess...

Do the Taijutsu I posted afterwards and then do the one bellow:


@ Nagato:

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

Self Explanatory. You run quickly towards your opponent and then jump frontwards, raising your foot to the place you want it to hit. Basically just throw all your momentum and body weight towards your opponent.
 

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-_- Oh well.. Good enough I guess...

Do the Taijutsu I posted afterwards and then do the one bellow:


@ Nagato:

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

Self Explanatory. You run quickly towards your opponent and then jump frontwards, raising your foot to the place you want it to hit. Basically just throw all your momentum and body weight towards your opponent.
*Creates a clone*

*Begins to run towards the clone with great speed*
*I do a leaping jump with my right knee tucked in towards my stomach and my left foot directly pointed to the ground*

*I quickly kick the clone in the throat with my right foot damaging his airway killing him*
 

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-_- Oh well.. Good enough I guess...

Do the Taijutsu I posted afterwards and then do the one bellow:


@ Nagato:

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

Self Explanatory. You run quickly towards your opponent and then jump frontwards, raising your foot to the place you want it to hit. Basically just throw all your momentum and body weight towards your opponent.
Konoha reppu - Leaf Gale and Dynamic Entry?
___
ok...
*creates two clone, squats down and performs a leg sweep to one clone, then jumps towards my second clone performing a jump kick*
 

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We will proceed, but I'd like you, Tendo, to notice this:

This is how Nagato used Dynamic Entry:

Nagato said:
*Begins to run towards the clone with great speed*
*I do a leaping jump with my right knee tucked in towards my stomach and my left foot directly pointed to the ground*

*I quickly kick the clone in the throat with my right foot damaging his airway killing him*
And this is how you used it:

Tendo said:
then jumps towards my second clone performing a jump kick
Notice the difference?






Anyways:

(Hayabusa Otoshi) - Peregrine Falcon Drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user grabs his target and lifts them into the air.Where the user attaches him/her self to there back and then locks his/her ankles at the targets neck and smashes there enemy head first into the ground.

Ok, first you have to throw your opponent in the air. You can either pick him up and toss him in the air, kick him and lift him up, punch him, w/e. Once your opponent is in the air, you jump to him, and place yourself behind him.

You then have to wrap your arms and legs around him, locking him in place, and thus prevent him from protecting himself from the free-fall, aswell as conducting his fall, so that he falls the way you want, in this case, head first.
 

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We will proceed, but I'd like you, Tendo, to notice this:

This is how Nagato used Dynamic Entry:



And this is how you used it:



Notice the difference?






Anyways:

(Hayabusa Otoshi) - Peregrine Falcon Drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user grabs his target and lifts them into the air.Where the user attaches him/her self to there back and then locks his/her ankles at the targets neck and smashes there enemy head first into the ground.

Ok, first you have to throw your opponent in the air. You can either pick him up and toss him in the air, kick him and lift him up, punch him, w/e. Once your opponent is in the air, you jump to him, and place yourself behind him.

You then have to wrap your arms and legs around him, locking him in place, and thus prevent him from protecting himself from the free-fall, aswell as conducting his fall, so that he falls the way you want, in this case, head first.

*Creates clone*

*Runs towards the clone at full velocity and does a series of punches and elbows to his face..*

*Then I do a sideways/upward kick to his chin sending him flying into the air....as he reaches the peak and is about to be on his way dowards I jump into the air and grab his belt(behind him) then I wrap my legs around his and my arms around his as well. While wrapped under his arms.. I place my hand right hand on the back of his head while we free fall to the ground causing him to fall head first, busting his brains open*
 

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We will proceed, but I'd like you, Tendo, to notice this:

This is how Nagato used Dynamic Entry:



And this is how you used it:



Notice the difference?






Anyways:

(Hayabusa Otoshi) - Peregrine Falcon Drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user grabs his target and lifts them into the air.Where the user attaches him/her self to there back and then locks his/her ankles at the targets neck and smashes there enemy head first into the ground.

Ok, first you have to throw your opponent in the air. You can either pick him up and toss him in the air, kick him and lift him up, punch him, w/e. Once your opponent is in the air, you jump to him, and place yourself behind him.

You then have to wrap your arms and legs around him, locking him in place, and thus prevent him from protecting himself from the free-fall, aswell as conducting his fall, so that he falls the way you want, in this case, head first.
yeah... I'm not good with detail :ghehe:
 

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*Creates clone*

*Runs towards the clone at full velocity and does a series of punches and elbows to his face..*

*Then I do a sideways/upward kick to his chin sending him flying into the air....as he reaches the peak and is about to be on his way dowards I jump into the air and grab his belt(behind him) then I wrap my legs around his and my arms around his as well. While wrapped under his arms.. I place my hand right hand on the back of his head while we free fall to the ground causing him to fall head first, busting his brains open*
Very well done.

yeah... I'm not good with detail :ghehe:
Since Taijutsu is an art that requires alot of description, then you should reconsider your expertises... Nonetheless, try. It's not like I don't give you enough time to think and edit and perfect your replies...

I'm still waiting on your Peregrine Falcon Drop.


To Nagato:

(Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi) - Clone Spinning Hel drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack done after 3 shadow clone are made.The user somersaults into the air spinning and landing a blow to the shoulder of there enemy with there heels.

Quite a simple technique, actually...

Use a couple of Shadow Clones, or whatever you want, to keep your opponent distracted. Using that distraction, you somersault over your clones and strike a kick on your opponent's shoulder, pining him down.
 

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Very well done.



Since Taijutsu is an art that requires alot of description, then you should reconsider your expertises... Nonetheless, try. It's not like I don't give you enough time to think and edit and perfect your replies...

I'm still waiting on your Peregrine Falcon Drop.


To Nagato:

(Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi) - Clone Spinning Hel drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack done after 3 shadow clone are made.The user somersaults into the air spinning and landing a blow to the shoulder of there enemy with there heels.

Quite a simple technique, actually...

Use a couple of Shadow Clones, or whatever you want, to keep your opponent distracted. Using that distraction, you somersault over your clones and strike a kick on your opponent's shoulder, pining him down.
~Creates 3 clones~

...........N1........

...N2....Me....N3..

~We begin running at your clone and N1 is about to do a leg sweep under it...I quickly run faster doing a leaping somersault over my clone and as your focused on dodging the leg sweep I land and do a heel kick to your clones shoulder knocking her over~
 
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