[Mangekyo Sharingan Test] - MC.T vs Sinister

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- Rei's Rules and Regulations
- KG allowed
- No Customs Jutsu, weapons, or Elements
- You can use the basic 5 elements up to your current rank
-You both will be battling each other to gain the Mangekyo Sharingan, this will result in the death of one of you. The death will be confirmed by 3 sensei or mods other than me to get majority vote.

Location: An open field with a nearby (10 meters away) stream.
Distance: Mid-range.

MC.T shall make the first move. may the victor gain eyes of power

Only Myself, MC.T, Sinister and any moderator or sensei's may post here if they opinion is required. Good Luck!
 

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Good luck, Sinister. I am using bio of mines.

I start off by activating my sharingan and you immediately fall under illusion. In the illusion multiple crows circle around you along with Kirabi appearing on the left side of your face and choking you while in reality it's multiple wire attached shurikens that tie you up. I continue by throwing four kunais at your chest ( Which look as if you were pierced by gigantic nails from every direction in the genjutsu ) and by making five handseals, which causes a large amount of stone to grow around you from earth, in form of oven. The oven then releases lightning from every angle towards you. I immediately after that slam my hand on ground, sending a wave of earth chakra that causes earth to start shaking and when it reaches the stone oven it causes it to start spiral inwards on itself, leaving you inside of it shocked as the earth moves around you and crushes you. Due the lightning that's being released from the stone pillars you cannot escape underground.

(Genjutsu: Utakata) - Illusion Technique: Ephemeral
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.


(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.
 
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Good luck, Sinister. I am using bio of mines.

I start off by activating my sharingan and you immediately fall under illusion. In the illusion multiple crows circle around you along with Kirabi appearing on the left side of your face and choking you while in reality it's multiple wire attached shurikens that tie you up. I continue by throwing four kunais at your chest ( Which look as if you were pierced by gigantic nails from every direction in the genjutsu ) and by making five handseals, which causes a large amount of stone to grow around you from earth, in form of oven. The oven then releases lightning from every angle towards you. I immediately after that slam my hand on ground, sending a wave of earth chakra that causes earth to start shaking and when it reaches the stone oven it causes it to start spiral inwards on itself, leaving you inside of it shocked as the earth moves around you and crushes you. Due the lightning that's being released from the stone pillars you cannot escape underground.

(Genjutsu: Utakata) - Illusion Technique: Ephemeral
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.


(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.
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Alrighty, As the match begins and you Activate your sharingan I also active my Sharingan as well. Using my skill with the Sharingan (I know it doesn't breakthrough A-rank Gen) and since we are equal rank Ninja with great skill; Even if i were to be caught inside your genjutsu i could be able to recognize the foreign chakra. Due to this I start to focus my own body and chakra to quickly release myself by causing pain to myself(biting my hand with rigor). By this time, you state you are throwing your Cables and Kunai in which case as i release myself from your genjutsu i swiftly use...
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

... Placing exploding tags on the replacement to keep you confused as well as To Successfully avoid your kunai and puting myself in position to Evade your Raiton and Doton Techniques(Insead of being in front of you i'm now at your east). Keeping you confused from the tags Still unaware of my location from you attacks I follow up with...
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
To attack you with two powerful blast surprisingly. Following that I immediately proceed to then jumping over 5 feet (Putting me toward a slant at your back and using...

(Katon: Bakuhatsu Enhogan) – Fire Style: Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Sending flame shots Toward you exploding on contact. Keeping enough distance between them to still keep a visual of where you are with my sharingan. Ending my move by returning to a defensive standpoint.
 

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Alrighty, As the match begins and you Activate your sharingan I also active my Sharingan as well. Using my skill with the Sharingan (I know it doesn't breakthrough A-rank Gen) and since we are equal rank Ninja with great skill; Even if i were to be caught inside your genjutsu i could be able to recognize the foreign chakra. Due to this I start to focus my own body and chakra to quickly release myself by causing pain to myself(biting my hand with rigor). By this time, you state you are throwing your Cables and Kunai in which case as i release myself from your genjutsu i swiftly use...
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

... Placing exploding tags on the replacement to keep you confused as well as To Successfully avoid your kunai and puting myself in position to Evade your Raiton and Doton Techniques(Insead of being in front of you i'm now at your east). Keeping you confused from the tags Still unaware of my location from you attacks I follow up with...
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
To attack you with two powerful blast surprisingly. Following that I immediately proceed to then jumping over 5 feet (Putting me toward a slant at your back and using...

(Katon: Bakuhatsu Enhogan) – Fire Style: Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Sending flame shots Toward you exploding on contact. Keeping enough distance between them to still keep a visual of where you are with my sharingan. Ending my move by returning to a defensive standpoint.
I expected nothing less from you., Sinister. xD

When I hear the Crackling lightning of Gian I use my I quickly release massive thunderstorm from my body fast enough to defend from the gian while I'm turning my head towards the spot where the gian was fired. I then gaze at you with my sharingan. I can see you sending the exploding bullets at me and using my sharingan I gain better reaction time and perform two handseals and expel gigantic Wind ball that catches up each one of your exploding shots on it and continue tiowards you with its strength boosted. As finishing touches I cause the earth beneath you to start sucking you in and hopefully cursh you as the Wind + Fire attack hits you.

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Great Balls of Wind
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals the user launches a large, explosive bullet of wind chakra from their mouth at their target.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.
 
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I expected nothing less from you., Sinister. xD

When I hear the Crackling lightning of Gian I use my I quickly release massive thunderstorm from my body fast enough to defend from the gian while I'm turning my head towards the spot where the gian was fired. I then gaze at you with my sharingan. I can see you sending the exploding bullets at me and using my sharingan I gain better reaction time and perform two handseals and expel gigantic Wind ball that catches up each one of your exploding shots on it and continue tiowards you with its strength boosted. As finishing touches I cause the earth beneath you to start sucking you in and hopefully cursh you as the Wind + Fire attack hits you.

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)
Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a circular area destroying all thats in its way.

(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Great Balls of Wind
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals the user launches a large, explosive bullet of wind chakra from their mouth at their target.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.
As you are doing the hand seals for your wind style technique, i use my capabilities with the Sharingan to instantly pick up the form of jutsu you are doing. in order to combat it I use...
(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).
Doing it at the same time as your wind move(to stay within time frame)and Drowning out your Wind + Fire combo that was supposed to be coming my way, following that since the large collision of elements are both blocking our field of vision all we can see is a large mass of water and chakra, to attack you by surprise i use this move instantly following my first attack...

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
Aiming the wind in a way that it shoots through my water+wind attack used to drown out your fire, Creating an even stronger Water+wind attack that is travelling fast toward you at the time that you had been doing the seals for the earth technique striking you because it'd be very difficult to change elements or styles that quickly, while also pushing me slightly up and back to avoid your Earth technique (if it had ever had enough time to be created which i doubt). Now i am at long range from your body in which cas i use...
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninjas chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Creating 1 clone That runs to Mid range in an offensive position( I stay at long range). to see if the outcome of the match is continuous or over.
 

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As you are doing the hand seals for your wind style technique, i use my capabilities with the Sharingan to instantly pick up the form of jutsu you are doing. in order to combat it I use...
(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).
Doing it at the same time as your wind move(to stay within time frame)and Drowning out your Wind + Fire combo that was supposed to be coming my way, following that since the large collision of elements are both blocking our field of vision all we can see is a large mass of water and chakra, to attack you by surprise i use this move instantly following my first attack...

Fuuton: Atsugai (Wind Style: Pressure Damage)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast
moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.
Aiming the wind in a way that it shoots through my water+wind attack used to drown out your fire, Creating an even stronger Water+wind attack that is travelling fast toward you at the time that you had been doing the seals for the earth technique striking you because it'd be very difficult to change elements or styles that quickly, while also pushing me slightly up and back to avoid your Earth technique (if it had ever had enough time to be created which i doubt). Now i am at long range from your body in which cas i use...
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninjas chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Creating 1 clone That runs to Mid range in an offensive position( I stay at long range). to see if the outcome of the match is continuous or over.
After going through your move with Zenryoku we've found few flaws from you move.

1. The Atsugai wouldn't be powered up after hitting straight on our clashing moves and would go through them, weakening it.
2. My sharingan can see through the clashing moves since it's mainly Water and wind that's clashing.

But now I will continue with my move:

I can see you performing your atsugai through the Clashing Water and Wind, at the same time as the earth begins sucking you in. When you fire the atsugai you are being blown back and to defend myself from Atsugai I cancel earth technique and pull out a scroll with kanji for wind on it, and it absorbs your jutsu. I then immediately follow up with Boar and Tiger handseals to manipulate the existing chakra inside of the ground from my canceled technique to turn the area in front of me into a swamp.the moment you get a good foothold from the flying.I then finally follow up with a tigerhandseal and spew multiple fireballs out of my mouth. One of the fireballs hits the tar pit and immediately ignites it due the very high temperatures inside of these fireballs, while the others go to ground separately, creating slowly thunderclouds. ( The typhoon water vortex wouldn't be disturbing my swamp from forming, since the clash shouldn't take that long and your atsugai going through them weakened 'em alot. )

(Ho/Mizu/Kaze/Tsuchi/Rai Houin) - Fire/Water/Wind/Earth/Lightning Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique used to seal away either Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, or Lightning as a result from a jutsu(seals only one jutsu per usage).

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
 

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After going through your move with Zenryoku we've found few flaws from you move.

1. The Atsugai wouldn't be powered up after hitting straight on our clashing moves and would go through them, weakening it.
2. My sharingan can see through the clashing moves since it's mainly Water and wind that's clashing.

But now I will continue with my move:

I can see you performing your atsugai through the Clashing Water and Wind, at the same time as the earth begins sucking you in. When you fire the atsugai you are being blown back and to defend myself from Atsugai I cancel earth technique and pull out a scroll with kanji for wind on it, and it absorbs your jutsu. I then immediately follow up with Boar and Tiger handseals to manipulate the existing chakra inside of the ground from my canceled technique to turn the area in front of me into a swamp.the moment you get a good foothold from the flying.I then finally follow up with a tigerhandseal and spew multiple fireballs out of my mouth. One of the fireballs hits the tar pit and immediately ignites it due the very high temperatures inside of these fireballs, while the others go to ground separately, creating slowly thunderclouds. ( The typhoon water vortex wouldn't be disturbing my swamp from forming, since the clash shouldn't take that long and your atsugai going through them weakened 'em alot. )

(Ho/Mizu/Kaze/Tsuchi/Rai Houin) - Fire/Water/Wind/Earth/Lightning Sealing Method
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A technique used to seal away either Fire, Water, Wind, Earth, or Lightning as a result from a jutsu(seals only one jutsu per usage).

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
As i am falling backwards from my move I continue to watch you pul out a scroll and take in my wind move. along with that i pull out my [Kusanagi no Tsurugi (草薙劍, Grass Cutter Sword)] then throws it onto the ground using it as a foothold (instead of landing on the ground). As i am still looking at you i see you are using more handeals for doton in which case i use...
(Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.
Creating a Very large volume of water in which i stand on( allowing me to ignore the swamp because its under the water and is now fast travelling your way. The one fireball you sent at me is being extinguished, But i look up to now see thunder clouds forming. I take advantage of this moment and start to manipulate them by using...
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Following that, i would now have taken control of your thunder clouds that was formed and I use...
(Raiton: Kirin) Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

Striking you killing you (Hopefully >_>).
 

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As i am falling backwards from my move I continue to watch you pul out a scroll and take in my wind move. along with that i pull out my [Kusanagi no Tsurugi (草薙劍, Grass Cutter Sword)] then throws it onto the ground using it as a foothold (instead of landing on the ground). As i am still looking at you i see you are using more handeals for doton in which case i use...
(Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.
Creating a Very large volume of water in which i stand on( allowing me to ignore the swamp because its under the water and is now fast travelling your way. The one fireball you sent at me is being extinguished, But i look up to now see thunder clouds forming. I take advantage of this moment and start to manipulate them by using...
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Following that, i would now have taken control of your thunder clouds that was formed and I use...
(Raiton: Kirin) Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

Striking you killing you (Hopefully >_>).
I keep an eye on you standing on your sword, using it as foothold and the moment you create the water to distinguish my fireball I make one handseal and you're paralysed, preventing you from continuing manipulating Chidori. Just to make sure that you'll stay bound I run towards you and get good eye contact with you to execute Ephemeral which then further prevents you from moving and paralysis prevents you from causing pain over yourself. The Ephemeral causes me to disappear in cloud of crows that surround you at the same time as you're being tied up in the illusion by thousands of ropes that each one has weight placed on their end. In the illusion when I disappear I've gone behind you and now follow up with Raikiri, the moment you've being bound up by the ropes and weights, hitting my hand straight through your back, heart and chest. Instantly as the Raikiri hits you die and I take your body towards land, close your eyes and light a cigarette while sitting on you.

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

(Genjutsu: Utakata) - Illusion Technique: Ephemeral
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
 

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I keep an eye on you standing on your sword, using it as foothold and the moment you create the water to distinguish my fireball I make one handseal and you're paralysed, preventing you from continuing manipulating Chidori. Just to make sure that you'll stay bound I run towards you and get good eye contact with you to execute Ephemeral which then further prevents you from moving and paralysis prevents you from causing pain over yourself. The Ephemeral causes me to disappear in cloud of crows that surround you at the same time as you're being tied up in the illusion by thousands of ropes that each one has weight placed on their end. In the illusion when I disappear I've gone behind you and now follow up with Raikiri, the moment you've being bound up by the ropes and weights, hitting my hand straight through your back, heart and chest. Instantly as the Raikiri hits you die and I take your body towards land, close your eyes and light a cigarette while sitting on you.

(Kanashibari no Jutsu) - Temporary Body Paralysis Technique
Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:15
Damge Points:N/A
Description: Kanashibari no Jutsu is an advanced Ninjutsu technique used to temporarily bind an individual or animal. With the person frozen in place, the ninja can either take the opportunity to attack or to retreat.

(Genjutsu: Utakata) - Illusion Technique: Ephemeral
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:An illusion were the user simple points at the target and if the target glances at the pointing hand they fall into a genjutsu where they first see birds and then they turn to kunai that attack them.They are future damaged by being tortured by images of there friend insulting them.

(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
Creating a Very large volume of water in which i stand on( allowing me to ignore the swamp because its under the water and is now fast travelling your way.

Here you say:
I keep an eye on you standing on your sword, using it as foothold and the moment you create the water to distinguish my fireball I make one handseal and you're paralysed, preventing you from continuing manipulating Chidori. Just to make sure that you'll stay bound I run towards you
Because you acknowledged that my water is made it would still be travelling toward you, If/when i get caught in the in your paralysis i escape it by Focusing my chakra and using my inner strength to break free (much like hidan did with shikamaru's shadow bind but this is obviously much weaker).You also stated you are running toward me, so essentially you'd be running toward my water. Hitting you with a hard wall of water. In which case I now resume taking control of your thunder clouds while you are down with...
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
By the time you atleast attempt to stand it is to late. Evilly staring at you with my sharingan, i use...
(Raiton: Kirin) Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
It electrocutes your even more heavily with strong Killing blow >=]
 

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Here you say:


Because you acknowledged that my water is made it would still be travelling toward you, If/when i get caught in the in your paralysis i escape it by Focusing my chakra and using my inner strength to break free (much like hidan did with shikamaru's shadow bind but this is obviously much weaker).You also stated you are running toward me, so essentially you'd be running toward my water. Hitting you with a hard wall of water. In which case I now resume taking control of your thunder clouds while you are down with...
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
By the time you atleast attempt to stand it is to late. Evilly staring at you with my sharingan, i use...
(Raiton: Kirin) Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.
It electrocutes your even more heavily with strong Killing blow >=]
After having long discussion with three different people ( with them being Akiza, Gatsandshanks, Zenryoku ) about your move, conclusion is that your move's flawed.

1. You're allowed to use Kirin once per battle. No matter whether it succeedes or fails
2. You cannot break out of Temporary paralysis like that. Unlike Shadow Imitation, it places Physical restrains on opponent, preventing him/her from moving.

This will lead you to edit/re-do ( 1 out of 3 possible edits ) your move and defend from Body paralysis and incoming genjutsu ( If you cannot defend yourself from Paralysis before Genjutsu lands, resulting you both Physical and mental restrains that prevent you from doing pretty much anything ). If you happen to be unable of doing so, it will result a hit from my Raikiri and dead bio to you, along with MS to me ( hopefully ).
 

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After having long discussion with three different people ( with them being Akiza, Gatsandshanks, Zenryoku ) about your move, conclusion is that your move's flawed.

1. You're allowed to use Kirin once per battle. No matter whether it succeedes or fails
2. You cannot break out of Temporary paralysis like that. Unlike Shadow Imitation, it places Physical restrains on opponent, preventing him/her from moving.

This will lead you to edit/re-do ( 1 out of 3 possible edits ) your move and defend from Body paralysis and incoming genjutsu ( If you cannot defend yourself from Paralysis before Genjutsu lands, resulting you both Physical and mental restrains that prevent you from doing pretty much anything ). If you happen to be unable of doing so, it will result a hit from my Raikiri and dead bio to you, along with MS to me ( hopefully ).
Although I do have to edit, Your move wont go as planned. i am using the same principles in which you still ignored...

Here you say:
I keep an eye on you standing on your sword, using it as foothold and the moment you create the water to distinguish my fireball I make one handseal and you're paralysed, preventing you from continuing manipulating Chidori. Just to make sure that you'll stay bound I run towards you
Because you acknowledged that my water is made it would still be travelling toward you,As you are raising your hands together to do the parylisis i read the movements so that when i get caught in the in your paralysis immediately look into your eyes (assuming you not looking at the water coming toward you) and use...
Magen: Kasegui no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion :Shackling Stakes)

Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion.
This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

Since it no physical body movements, as you are caught in the genjutsu, I use this opportunity to break free as well (by it wearing off or me fighting through it). I myself Had a conversation with akiza who wasnt even 100% on the whole situation to begin with (Sorry Nissaaan) and Gats who gave me more info on the confusing jutsu(it lacks detail which should really be revised), Since there is not alot of info on the jutsu it can be assumed that the jutsu uses the influence of foreign Chakra to disable my movement bind around my body, in which case when you are caught in my genjustu it would stop OR Weaken that influence on me since my Genjutsu is disrupting your chakra flow.

as you are combating the genjutsu You also stated you are running toward me, so essentially you'd be running toward my water. Hitting you with a hard wall of water. So when i am free, i use...

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

Electrocuting you heavily...
 

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Although I do have to edit, Your move wont go as planned. i am using the same principles in which you still ignored...

Here you say:


Because you acknowledged that my water is made it would still be travelling toward you,As you are raising your hands together to do the parylisis i read the movements so that when i get caught in the in your paralysis immediately look into your eyes (assuming you not looking at the water coming toward you) and use...
Magen: Kasegui no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion :Shackling Stakes)

Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:A Genjutsu technique unique to the Uchiha bloodline Sharingan holders. After activating their Sharingan, the clan member will look into the eyes of their target to bind them with a paralyzing illusion.
This illusion takes the form of giant spikes which stake them in place and restrict their movement. A powerful enough ninja will be able to fight the bind to give themselves an opportunity to gain freedom.

Since it no physical body movements, as you are caught in the genjutsu, I use this opportunity to break free as well (by it wearing off or me fighting through it). I myself Had a conversation with akiza who wasnt even 100% on the whole situation to begin with (Sorry Nissaaan) and Gats who gave me more info on the confusing jutsu(it lacks detail which should really be revised), Since there is not alot of info on the jutsu it can be assumed that the jutsu uses the influence of foreign Chakra to disable my movement bind around my body, in which case when you are caught in my genjustu it would stop OR Weaken that influence on me since my Genjutsu is disrupting your chakra flow.

as you are combating the genjutsu You also stated you are running toward me, so essentially you'd be running toward my water. Hitting you with a hard wall of water. So when i am free, i use...

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.

Electrocuting you heavily...
This fight doesn't seem to be progressing in any way. Maybe we should just speak Zenryoku to give us both Mangekyos.

The moment I am trapped in Genjutsu, I notice it to be a sharingan one and I easily use my Sharingan to weaken it along with fighting out of it with my power. Both of us should be free by now and once you make Rabbit handseal for wave of inspiration, I use my sharingan to recongnize your attack quickly. Once I identify the attack to be a Lightning attack used in combination with water, I release small layer of Chidori nagashi out of my body, defending from the raiton attack without getting shocked myself ( Just like Sasuke did in manga ).
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(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.
 
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