[Photoshop] Extending Past Boundaries/Thumbs down

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Never got any criticism on these before, I put 'em on DeviantART but I just started using it so I know I don't have enough people looking at my stuff to be giving criticism already, but hopefully someone here can criticize constructively. I have never been rated before by another person, so currently, I am considered beginner, although I think I've improved a lul bit from my first image. Criticism is more appreciated than the average 'nice pic,' so if you really want me to appreciate what you say, criticism please. I'm pretty sure this is in the moderate novice - low moderate range.

Oh yeah, and don't ask about concepts. One thing about every image I have made and will make, is that the concept will only be known to me.

Alright, I've come to the conclusion that the only flaw is that the second one doesn't have enough of the render uncovered thanks to Akaton. I'm not really listening too much on the first one because it was simply an experiment.
 
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What direction are the shoulders of character in the bottom picture supposed to be facing? To me, it seems like her neck is twisting unnaturally because I can't determine how the rest of her body is angled.
 

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Your certainly not a beginner! Your amazing, the second one IS A AMAZZZZING.

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The first one isn't great.


Keep working on the same style like the second one as it's good.
 

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Never got any criticism on these before, I put 'em on DeviantART but I just started using it so I know I don't have enough people looking at my stuff to be giving criticism already, but hopefully someone here can criticize constructively. I have never been rated before by another person, so currently, I am considered beginner, although I think I've improved a lul bit from my first image. Criticism is more appreciated than the average 'nice pic,' so if you really want me to appreciate what you say, criticism please. I'm pretty sure this is in the moderate novice - low moderate range.

Oh yeah, and don't ask about concepts. One thing about every image I have made and will make, is that the concept will only be known to me.
I really like both of them!
The second one is the best from those two.I don't know.Myabe the blending,the colours(?).I am not a pro or anything but I like it.
 

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I really like both of them!
The second one is the best from those two.I don't know.Myabe the blending,the colours(?).I am not a pro or anything but I like it.
It's the blending. If you look at the first one, I failed to do any sort of blending.
 
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