[Bio Test] - Riku's Minato Bio Test

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- Rei's Rules and Regulations
- KG allowed
- No Customs Jutsu, weapons, or Elements
- You can use the basic 5 elements up to your current rank
- As you know you will be Minato
-Your conductor shall be Scarface and he will be using a Basic Madara Uchiha Bio and he shall make the first move

Location: An open field with a nearby (10 meters away) stream.
Distance: Mid-range.

Only Myself, Scarface, Riku and any moderator or sensei's may post here if they opinion is required. Good Luck!
 

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Ok, good luck ^::^

*activate EMS*

I quickly form a fuuton raqsengan in one hand and a destruction torrent in the other then slam my hands together creating:


(Suiton: Gufuu Suika) - Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: ‘Wind Style: Rasengan’ and ‘Water Style: Destruction Torrent’ combo that makes a tornado of water that can be used to attack or defend. Can also be used to drown out wind and fire combos (no water source required).
Cause a large vortex of water and wind to come straight at you. As soon as the vortex is barelling at you I use:

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
Throwing a punch of hard wind directly beneath me, thrusting my into the air. While in mid air I focus my chakra and perform the clone handseal and use:

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
Creating 3 clones in mid air, we all land on the ground securely and take this formation:

~~~~~C1

C2~~~ME~~~C3
 

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Ok, good luck ^::^

*activate EMS*

I quickly form a fuuton raqsengan in one hand and a destruction torrent in the other then slam my hands together creating:




Cause a large vortex of water and wind to come straight at you. As soon as the vortex is barelling at you I use:



Throwing a punch of hard wind directly beneath me, thrusting my into the air. While in mid air I focus my chakra and perform the clone handseal and use:



Creating 3 clones in mid air, we all land on the ground securely and take this formation:

~~~~~C1

C2~~~ME~~~C3
Oh crap, sorry, didn't know that this thread was made. o.o And thank you ^^.

Being that you're using this as only one person, I use the time that it takes you to form both of those jutsu (recall how much trouble Naruto had and still has with trying to create just the basic rasengan alone with as one person, just trying to make it spiral, and so the wind rasengan and the water destruction torrent would likely take you quite a while, either having to do them one at a time or taking a bit of time to do it in each hand simultaneously, which I doubt is possible, as, when shown in the manga, two people were doing this separately) I quickly unleash three kunai, one goes straight toward you, the other out to my left side at an angle, and the other to my right, both in your direction but they fly off course and go toward your sides. I throw them out far enough so that when they get to your sides, they would be at mid-range, and would therefore bypass the water jutsu. By the time the water comes anywhere near enough to me to be of any danger, I quickly begin to run forward and then use:

(Hiraishin no Jutsu) - Flying Thunder God Technique

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: N/a
Damage Points: XX(Dead if hit)
Description; To activate this jutsu, the user needs a special seal or "jutsu formula" (術式, jutsu-shiki) to mark the destination. After this is done, the user enters a dimensional void that almost instantaneously transports himself to the location of the seal.
Note; The technique is unavoidable unless with time/space and can only be used by Minato Namikaze.

Quickly teleporting to the kunai on your left side (which would now be off to your side) where I quickly grab the kunai as it goes past me, and fling it up in the air, spinning vertically, which would make it go high up and over your current location. I land on the ground a moment after (having been very slightly in the air from the Flying Thunder God technique) and as I land I make several seals and then use:

(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 50
Description: The user performs five handseals and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.

Two large jaws rise up from below. Given the size of the jaws and how high they rise up, even if you manage to use your hurricane fist (which you would just barely be capable of doing, scarcely rising up an inch in the air before this happens, the jaws still rise up around you and crush you between them. Note that you don't even seem me doing the seals nor slamming my palm on the ground, and are henceforth completely caught off guard by this, being that the typhoon obscured your vision of me and the kunai were thrown a distance away from you, and therefore you would assume that I was already caught by that. From there, immediately following this I run toward you while shooting two blasts of lightning into the sky, which then come down as several large lightning bolts:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.

Several bolts of lightning sneak through the jaws before they close, striking you as you go down. Even as the lightning bolts go through the jaws, I stop running, a little further than short-range from the jaws at this point.
 

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Problems...

1. Typhoon water vortex is the same speed in the anime, just as one person instead of 2, on NB as of right this moment. It may be changed, but for now, its the same as in the anime.

2. I used my hurricane fist directly after firing the water vortex. So because you clearly state that just as the vortex is in range to do any harm you ftg away from it. Im up in the air already, clones made.

3. Because of my sharingan I can track you chakra, not that it would be necessary as I am at the moment of your ftg usage, airborne. However the fact that you think that I couldnt see your chakra through my vortex is just, wrong.

3.5. To prevent a wall of text :p if I was on the ground still, I would notice you chakra leave from behind my typhoon. Leaving me alot of opportunity to do many thins in a preemptive fashion lol

4. I will make my move according to the fact that I am mid air at the time of you ftg'ing to my left.
_________

As you reappear to my left and are doing your mid air flip I use:

Fuuton: Tatsuno Ooshigoto (Wind Style: Severing Pressure)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user sends wind into the sky to darken the clouds and make the envoronment stormy. These clouds will create These clouds will create a cutting tornado that comes down as a F-5 tornado with slicing wind.
Blasting a large some of wind at you, and your kunai that you threw, one of my clones then follow up by using:

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
Adding a large amount of fire to the wind creating a gigantic wind fire combo, effectively melting your special kunai.

Blowing/burning you a long way away and also giving me a boost to the right, making me land at long range and my 3 clones int he middle of us, landing like this:

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I am the red on the right, you are the red on the left. My clones are black, and the blue is where the fire wind blast began in mid air and blasted at you.
 

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Problems...

1. Typhoon water vortex is the same speed in the anime, just as one person instead of 2, on NB as of right this moment. It may be changed, but for now, its the same as in the anime.

2. I used my hurricane fist directly after firing the water vortex. So because you clearly state that just as the vortex is in range to do any harm you ftg away from it. Im up in the air already, clones made.

3. Because of my sharingan I can track you chakra, not that it would be necessary as I am at the moment of your ftg usage, airborne. However the fact that you think that I couldnt see your chakra through my vortex is just, wrong.

3.5. To prevent a wall of text :p if I was on the ground still, I would notice you chakra leave from behind my typhoon. Leaving me alot of opportunity to do many thins in a preemptive fashion lol

4. I will make my move according to the fact that I am mid air at the time of you ftg'ing to my left.
_________

As you reappear to my left and are doing your mid air flip I use:



Blasting a large some of wind at you, and your kunai that you threw, one of my clones then follow up by using:



Adding a large amount of fire to the wind creating a gigantic wind fire combo, effectively melting your special kunai.

Blowing/burning you a long way away and also giving me a boost to the right, making me land at long range and my 3 clones int he middle of us, landing like this:
1. I must disagree. I seriously doubt that you can use two jutsu simultaneously. You're literally focusing two ENTIRELY different forms of chakra, and even if your doing it in two hands, you still only have one chakra flow. It's like moving left and right at the same time.

2. You're underestimating the size of the jaws. I'll give it to you that your clones are made, I didn't make that part of my move as clear as I meant to, but the jaws would surely be capable of getting to you.

3. I'm 100% sure that what you just said is dead wrong. The sharingan cannot see through other forms of chakra. The typhoon is one mass of chakra. If you don't believe me, here's some pretty undeniable proof: . Quote: "...but, due to the mist being created with the user's chakra, any Sharingan-user will see the mist colored by their opponent's chakra..." You would see your own chakra, a giant mass of your own chakra, and would, in no way, be able to see me. Only the byakugan would be capable of seeing through another substance of chakra, not the sharingan.

3.5 I think I pretty much addressed that. As if you're looking forward, you'd have to have some pretty astounding peripheral vision to notice me from your left side at the range that I am, even if you're airborne. It's not like your scanning the area or anything.

4. Sure I suppose.

I wouldn't be doing a mid-air flip when you used your move (dunno where that came from, I'm guessing you mis-read the part where I said that I was slightly in the air from the FTG o_O), and so the second that you spew out the fire, I quickly spew out a stream of water:

(Suiton: Suijinheki) - Water Style: Water Encampment Wall
Rank: A
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. This wall of water is especially effective at stopping fire techniques. The wall can be formed from a preexisting water source or by spitting a protective stream of water from the mouth. However, it is unable to defend against elemental combinations such as those employed by Kakuzu.

And then I quickly spread my arms out, releasing a wave of lightning in front of me that spreads through the water before me:

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Effectively making a large wall of water just before your fire gets to me. Even though both the fire and wind jutsu were done simultaneously, I would surely be able to get off the water before your combo gets close enough, and then pulling off the lightning would be a matter of a split-second, being that this requires no seals and is done instantly. This elemental combo rages against yours, and as the two jutsu collide, being shrouded by the two masses of chakra (which you wouldn't be able to see through) I create two clones:

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja�s chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.

Myself and one clone begin running toward you, both of us running out wide to the left side, and then curving so that we run straight toward you. The second clone does the same thing, but he moves outward to your right side, all of us unleashing a torrent of kunai to your clones as we run. The clone with me and the clone on your right side mix in explosive kunai with them as well. Basically, we would both be going toward you guys, but as your clones come down we would be flanking their left and right sides, running toward them.
 

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1. First, like I said, on NB, at this moment, it IS, as many people have used it the exact same way. Its not another substance of chakra. Its a substance of my own chakra creation. Are you implying that with EMS I wouldnt be able to discern my own chakra from yours? o_O You'd be wrong if you were.

2. The size of the jaws are meaningless as my attack was barreling at you before you could make them.

3. The hidden mist technique reference is invalid. Here is why: The hidden mist technique is a mass of mist that is created by water, and the users chakra. Kakashis sharingan couldnt see through it because it was an entire mass of airborne chakra that belong to Zabuza. The typhoon is a mass of my own chakra. Furthermore, I was in the air just after I launched my typhoon. Meaning in actuality I could just look down and see you :/ even without sharingan.

4.
I quickly unleash three kunai, one goes straight toward you, the other out to my left side at an angle, and the other to my right, both in your direction but they fly off course and go toward your sides. I throw them out far enough so that when they get to your sides, they would be at mid-range, and would therefore bypass the water jutsu. By the time the water comes anywhere near enough to me to be of any danger, I quickly begin to run forward and then use:
Blue: Into my typhoon? o_O
Red: Meaning it is in fact near you, meaning by that time im in the air.

As soon as you re-appeared from ftg, I would have seen you as I was in the air. When you reappeared you were in the air a bit due to ftg, then you did a flip as soon as you reappeared. That is when I unleashed my fire wind combo.
______

And now your making a small round wall of water around yourself, and sending electricity in it? o_O Pretty sure that would kill you. Also pretty sure that its not big enough to defend from searing pressure plus intense pain in a combo.

As you can see here, the water encampment technique is quite small:

You have 3 redo's, so dont worry, but ide like to get a second opinion before I make my move, or before you edit.
 

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Im sorry dude, but I was gonna continue, and then I saw all this:

Effectively making a large wall of water just before your fire gets to me. Even though both the fire and wind jutsu were done simultaneously, I would surely be able to get off the water before your combo gets close enough, and then pulling off the lightning would be a matter of a split-second, being that this requires no seals and is done instantly. This elemental combo rages against yours, and as the two jutsu collide, being shrouded by the two masses of chakra (which you wouldn't be able to see through) I create two clones:
You got out of an electrified dome of water? How? Do you not understand the water encampment wall? Its not a wall of water you know that right?

Myself and one clone begin running toward you, both of us running out wide to the left side, and then curving so that we run straight toward you. The second clone does the same thing, but he moves outward to your right side, all of us unleashing a torrent of kunai to your clones as we run. The clone with me and the clone on your right side mix in explosive kunai with them as well. Basically, we would both be going toward you guys, but as your clones come down we would be flanking their left and right sides, running toward them.
Huh? o_O Theres no range definition, theres no real trajectory of what youve done. And what exactly do you mean by "a torrent of kunai" Describe to me the size of a torrent of kunai, that is created by you and 2 clones?

Clones which you made when? Inside of the electrified dome of water? Or after you magically got out of the electrified dome of water? O_O
 

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1. First, like I said, on NB, at this moment, it IS, as many people have used it the exact same way. Its not another substance of chakra. Its a substance of my own chakra creation. Are you implying that with EMS I wouldnt be able to discern my own chakra from yours? o_O You'd be wrong if you were.

2. The size of the jaws are meaningless as my attack was barreling at you before you could make them.

3. The hidden mist technique reference is invalid. Here is why: The hidden mist technique is a mass of mist that is created by water, and the users chakra. Kakashis sharingan couldnt see through it because it was an entire mass of airborne chakra that belong to Zabuza. The typhoon is a mass of my own chakra. Furthermore, I was in the air just after I launched my typhoon. Meaning in actuality I could just look down and see you :/ even without sharingan.

4.

Blue: Into my typhoon? o_O
Red: Meaning it is in fact near you, meaning by that time im in the air.

As soon as you re-appeared from ftg, I would have seen you as I was in the air. When you reappeared you were in the air a bit due to ftg, then you did a flip as soon as you reappeared. That is when I unleashed my fire wind combo.
______

And now your making a small round wall of water around yourself, and sending electricity in it? o_O Pretty sure that would kill you. Also pretty sure that its not big enough to defend from searing pressure plus intense pain in a combo.



You have 3 redo's, so dont worry, but ide like to get a second opinion before I make my move, or before you edit.
1. Just because people use it like that doesn't mean that it's correct, what kind of argument is that? It IS a seperate substance of chakra. There's no possible way that any argument you can give disputing that will make sense. Did you, like, not read the jutsu? The move clearly states that these are two different jutsu, not one in the same, combined. Saying that people on NB have used it like that just isn't a valid argument.

2. I'm not going to dispute the time frame, as I said that I did mess up during explaining that, but I do not believe that the size of the jaws are meaningless, especially since you don't even see me.

3. Dude, I'm pretty sure that you can't. Explain to me this. You're saying that you can seem me because there is chakra within me. What are you basing that on? You're basing it on the fact that the sharingan can see chakra? Essentially, you're simply making an assumption here. Why do I say this? The typhoon and the water vortex would pretty much be like a giant wall in front of you. What could you possibly base you being able to see through that giant wall which is both physically visible and, in your case, visible chakra wise in order to see me? I'm talking about a reference from the manga/anime itself. Thus far, the closest thing that we've seen to something like this is the Hidden Mist jutsu example, which shoots down your argument. Unless you can clearly prove to me that your sharingan would be capable of seeing through the typhoon by using a reference that disproves my own, how can you possibly argue? Also, you could just look down and see me? Why would you just happen to be looking down at the exact moment that I just happened to appear, using an utterly silent jutsu? Why would you look anywhere but where the typhoon was at that point in the battle? I suppose that your head was lolling around for no apparent reason?

4. @ Blue: Yes, into your typhoon. I accidentally put that in, well, there was a reason but I decided that it wasn't very sensible, and simply did not bother to edit that after seeing no reason to do so. I don't see any relevant or threatening problem there.
Red: Did I not already acknowledge that in my previous post? I did so in number 2.

I was in the air slightly, that basically means that my feet were maybe an inch off of the ground after using it and that I was, therefore, still moving to the side a bit before landing. And can you please tell me where I did a backflip? You keep saying that, and yet it's no where in my move?

Im sorry dude, but I was gonna continue, and then I saw all this:



You got out of an electrified dome of water? How? Do you not understand the water encampment wall? Its not a wall of water you know that right?



Huh? o_O Theres no range definition, theres no real trajectory of what youve done. And what exactly do you mean by "a torrent of kunai" Describe to me the size of a torrent of kunai, that is created by you and 2 clones?

Clones which you made when? Inside of the electrified dome of water? Or after you magically got out of the electrified dome of water? O_O
o_O I dunno if I implied that I ran out of the water encampment, but I didn't. I was in there, I created my clones, and then when the two jutsu went down (I can control the duration of the water at will, as shown by the link at the end of this paragraph), we began running. It's possible for me to create the clones whilst in there because I can, in fact, control the amount of water: .

Trajectory? Range definition? Ok, I'm all for being descriptive in my move, but that's just... too much. Trajectory. Um... from such an angle that it would move toward your clones perhaps? If it makes you feel any better, we'll just say that I threw kunai at one, the clone with me at another, and the clone on the opposite side of us threw them at the last clone. Descriptive enough? Range. Uh... from our location to yours? By a torrent of kunai, I mean a bunch of kunai. Do you want an exact number as well? I mean, come on, do I seriously need to go that in-depth? Trajectory and range should be self-explanatory, it's from the thrower to their target(s) end of story, and saying that I throw a bunch of kunai toward you should be able to be left at that. I mean, how much description do you want for a simple action?

I'm sure that you still disagree with over half of what I said, and so I presume that we'll be getting an outside opinion.
 

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1. Meh, its already done, and doesnt really matter now, as we have already moved on from that jutsu. Ive gotten further opinions, and its over, I was right.

2. It is meaningless because you couldnt have done the jutsu :/

3. Again, ive gotten another opinion, im right ~_~ I can in fact discern chakra through color, I can see your chakra through my own. And it still doesnt matter because I was in the air. So again, its over.

4. That was my fault now that I re-read your post. You speak in one long run on sentence alot of times lol I misunderstood your statement about "spinning vertically".

5. In regards to you saying that you can control it, did you not specifically say that when you were gone from the water, that the elements clashed? o_O meaning you were still there, and yet you said you werent?

6 A simple definition of range would have done here, short, mid, long. That was all that was necessary. Im not asking for a page and a half of explanation. But things like that are crucial, and will show your ability and right to possess a Minato bio.

Furthermore, are you attacking just my clones? because I am long range away from you. So who exactly are you throwing your kunai at?
 

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1. Meh, its already done, and doesnt really matter now, as we have already moved on from that jutsu. Ive gotten further opinions, and its over, I was right.

2. It is meaningless because you couldnt have done the jutsu :/

3. Again, ive gotten another opinion, im right ~_~ I can in fact discern chakra through color, I can see your chakra through my own. And it still doesnt matter because I was in the air. So again, its over.

4. That was my fault now that I re-read your post. You speak in one long run on sentence alot of times lol I misunderstood your statement about "spinning vertically".

5. In regards to you saying that you can control it, did you not specifically say that when you were gone from the water, that the elements clashed? o_O meaning you were still there, and yet you said you werent?

6 A simple definition of range would have done here, short, mid, long. That was all that was necessary. Im not asking for a page and a half of explanation. But things like that are crucial, and will show your ability and right to possess a Minato bio.

Furthermore, are you attacking just my clones? because I am long range away from you. So who exactly are you throwing your kunai at?
1 and 3. Who's opinion did you get, out of curiosity? (I'd simply like to see just because I'm curious as to their reason. I'd be more content hearing why straight from them as opposed to a "you're right, you're wrong" answer. I'm not arguing or anything, or not yet at least).

2. No, I was saying it wasn't meaningless due to my other points of how you wouldn't see me and even with the hurricane fist not being above them, but you still disagree with that so whatever. I already disregarded that in my move so it doesn't really matter.

4. M'kay, I'll split my sentences more lol.

5. Where did I say that? o_O I read through my move several times and I still haven't found anything like that. Can you quote where I said it, as I might have left remnants of an old strategy that I planned on using in there or something, but I certainly haven't found it.

6. I'm still not getting what you're saying here. Range definition as to clarify where was I as compared to you? Well, I did clarify that, in my first move. When teleporting, I was mid-range from you. I did not move before using the water encampment wall, lightning jutsu, and clones. Hence when I'm running toward you, I would be closing in on short-range, but going out a bit wider on both of your sides to make for a bit more distance.

They're going to your clones (I did clarify that in my move just in case you think that I didn't btw).
 

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Meh, lets drop it, youll be graded at the end. You can worry about any mistakes then :)
_________

As you begin to run at my clones and throw your kunais, my middle clone quickly uses:

(Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user then inhales and takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind as they move their head around. This technique is capable of exposing Susanno’s bones.
Blasting you and your kunai back and cutting into you a bit while at the exact same time my right clone uses:


(Doton: Doryuso) - Earth Style: Rising Stone Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique lets the user condense mud or stone from the ground and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground to skew the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.
Seeing as the power of the wind alone would destroy your clones, my clone raises spikes to catch you on, mortally wounding and probably killing you.

As soon as your skewered by my stone spears, my left clone uses:

(Katon: Gouryuuka No Jutsu) - Fire Style: Great Dragon Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals, the user will expel dragon head fireballs at their opponent. These powerful fireballs can punch through concrete.
Blasting 3 giant dragon fireballs at you incinerating and turning your body to ash
 

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Meh, lets drop it, youll be graded at the end. You can worry about any mistakes then :)
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As you begin to run at my clones and throw your kunais, my middle clone quickly uses:



Blasting you and your kunai back and cutting into you a bit while at the exact same time my right clone uses:




Seeing as the power of the wind alone would destroy your clones, my clone raises spikes to catch you on, mortally wounding and probably killing you.

As soon as your skewered by my stone spears, my left clone uses:



Blasting 3 giant dragon fireballs at you incinerating and turning your body to ash
The second that you use the serial waves, my clones and I jump back as my clone makes several seals. Suddenly, sixteen pillars quickly rise up around you in the form of an oven:

(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

As shown in the anime, these pillars are both EXTREMELY widely spaced out (enough to trap Pein's giant dog) and they rise up very quickly (the dog was trapped completely in approximately one or two seconds). The effect is that your clones are surrounded by sixteen giant pillars, and the pillars also act as a giant wall, keeping the wind jutsu from getting past it. The timing of this would be done the moment that your clone releases the wind blades, and by us jumping back, we assure that there's enough distance between us and the blades to give us any extra time that we need (but, like I said, considering the speed of the pillars we wouldn't need much). However, at the same time, the clone who went off to the right uses:

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.

Inflaming the inside of the pillars. This both assures that the wind does not get through the pillars (the wind would likely be powerful enough to smash through the pillars, but between this and the magnitude of the pillars, there's no way it would get through), and that while your clones are being electrocuted, the fire, feeding off of the remains of the wind, finishes them. As you told me through VM, I am in no danger from the spike if I am not hit by the wind, and so while this is happening, the real me quickly pulls out a scroll and uses:

Summoning Technique (Kuchiyose no Jutsu)
Rank: C
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.

Bringing Gamabunta out onto the field. He quickly takes out his giant tanto and throws it straight toward the real you. Before he throws it, though, he leans it over his back, allowing me to plant my hand on it, placing the FTG seal on it (I don't believe that it counts as a move to simply place the seal, as it would be just like putting an explosive tag on something). Meanwhile, my two clones move away from me as I summon him so that they're on either side of him (or simply running under him for a while due to his massive size). As you're distracted by Gamabunta, they both run around the sides of the sixteen pillar bind, closing in on you, each with a kunai in their hands.
 

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As soon as you create the 16 pillar bind, i use:

(Doujutsu: Shukuchi no Jutsu) –Eye Technique: Teleportation technique
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points:
Description: This is a space/time Sharingan technique unique to Uchiha Madara/ Tobi. Madara is able to teleport himself or anyone he touches to another location in an instant. The technique can be used without predefining the location or with hand seals. It can also be used to teleport any part of Madara’s body leaving him visible to opponents but impervious to attacks.
Note: This is an advanced Sharingan technique only usable with Uchiha Madara
Note: Can only be used four times.
Teleporting myself short range (half of mid range) behind you and quickly use:

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
Poofing your clones and incinerating you
 

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As soon as you create the 16 pillar bind, i use:



Teleporting myself short range (half of mid range) behind you and quickly use:



Poofing your clones and incinerating you
When you suddenly appear behind us, you may be able to appear silently, but certainly we would hear the fire suddenly behind us the moment that you begin using it especially from short-range, and so I quickly jump forward while turning around, and then stopping completely. As I jump, I make the required hand seals to use:

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.

Making a thin tornado of water around me that appears the moment that I stop jumping and protects me from the fire. The clone who did the fire biscuit continues doing that to ensure the death of your clones and therefore dies. Meanwhile, since based on the wording of your move my pillar bind is already created before you teleport, or at the very least is rising up (in either case my clone would be free) and so the clone who did the pillar binding jumps forward with me, pivoting around when he lands as a drill forms in his hand:

(Suiton: Koukasuijin) - Water Style: Hard Water Spike
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user generates a huge, highly condensed spike of water around their arm that drills opponents into the ground (No water source required).

When this jutsu was shown, no seals were required, and so when the water spike is created, he jumps forward, moving through the flames, and stabs you with it. Even if he cannot see you yourself, you're at short-range and due to the size of the spike, it would be capable of catching you as a sort of off-shot. When the fire that was coming toward me has been doused and the rest is past us, I release the tornado and immediately run the distance between us (given that I jumped forward enough to give time for me to do a jutsu, I would suppose that it would be, what, ten or so meters?) as my clone attacks you with the water spike whilst using:

(Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere

Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja�s ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None

Creating a Rasengan with my right hand, as I throw two kunai with my left hand. The first goes out to my left side, while the second goes right past you, but within a few inches of you. Should you dodge or block the water sphere, I am immediately there coming from the side with the Rasengan while your are distracted, attacking you from an angle to your left as my clone comes from an angle to your right.
 

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As soon as your tornado of water begins to form I use:

(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.
Merging myself into the earth, then i sprint beneath the earth to mid range directly behind you to avoid any fire, then quickly come up, immediately using:

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.
Creating a swamp that is 15 ft wide by 30 feet deep, the water youve gathered around you in your spinning tornado will add to the swamp making it more soupy and sinking you faster. Now, this is a matter of seconds, so seeing as your clone wouldnt have seen me, he still used the water spike, dissipating his chakra and poofing him. And since all this happened so soon, youde still be using your tornado of water.
 

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As soon as your tornado of water begins to form I use:



Merging myself into the earth, then i sprint beneath the earth to mid range directly behind you to avoid any fire, then quickly come up, immediately using:



Creating a swamp that is 15 ft wide by 30 feet deep, the water youve gathered around you in your spinning tornado will add to the swamp making it more soupy and sinking you faster. Now, this is a matter of seconds, so seeing as your clone wouldnt have seen me, he still used the water spike, dissipating his chakra and poofing him. And since all this happened so soon, youde still be using your tornado of water.
As soon as I suddenly feel the earth beneath me change and turn into mud, I immediately punch one fist toward the ground, at a backward angle so that I move forward and therefore won't fall back into the swamp:

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.

This forcibly pushes me out of the swamp. By the time you would get out of the earth, running or not, I would definitely be done with my tornado, since you're not just moving the distance to get mid-range away from me, but you also close the gap from short-range to being right below me during your journey. Therefore, I would be close enough to the surface of the swamp for this to push me out with ease. However, if you do indeed believe that my water would have still been active when you used the swamp, then my move will still work because, as you said yourself, the swamp becomes more soupy and therefore looser and easier to blast out of (and I don't believe that you can possibly argue that I would at the very least be nearly done with the tornado by the time you resurfaced). Either way, I'm pushed out of the swamp and immediately I notice that you're no longer in front of me. Using the momentum from the hurricane fist, I turn myself around in order to check the other side of the battle area and I immediately see you on the other side of the swamp. Still I'm going through the air and I throw a spray of kunai toward you (spray as in I'm sweeping my arms out so that some of the kunai go straight toward you, and some of them pass you by, throwing a total of 3 to 5 kunai), and the moment between when they're in my hand and when I throw them, I imbue them with some of my wind chakra for extra speed. Right after the kunai are thrown, I then use:

(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin..

I spew out these dragon heads of fire as I leave mid-range and enter long-range. The first one comes at you from an angle slightly above you, moving downward, the next from another angle above you but lower than the first, the next does the same (coming from above you at a downward angle, but lower than the previous one) and the final one I shoot as I stand on the ground, going straight toward you. When I land, we're at long-range and immediately I use:

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the center, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated.

Making a giant pit that sucks you and everything near you in as you use whatever jutsu you use to block the fire. The mud nearby you (I would assume that you're near the edge of the swamp) would get sucked in as well, making your escape even more difficult as mud falls into your eyes from above, obscuring your sight as you're dragged down.
 

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Using my EMS i notice that your quickly focusing your chakra, as soon as your hurricane fist pops you out of my swamp I use:

Fuuton: Senpuuken (Wind Style: Hurricane Fist)
Type:Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the users fist wind he/she punches.
Knocking you off of your air based trajectory causing you to spin out of control wildly. Then further using my EMS i track your movements and use:

(Doujutsu: Kyokujitsu) - Eye Technique: Sun God
Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80(-20 to user per use)
Description:This jutsu creates black flames that draw in the users target burning them in a huge sphere of fire that can not be escaped.All thats left is a huge crater where the target once stood.
Catching you instantly inside a huge sphere of amaterasu flames
 

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Using my EMS i notice that your quickly focusing your chakra, as soon as your hurricane fist pops you out of my swamp I use:



Knocking you off of your air based trajectory causing you to spin out of control wildly. Then further using my EMS i track your movements and use:



Catching you instantly inside a huge sphere of amaterasu flames
Not completely sure if this will work as planned but here goes...

As you shoot out the hurricane fist, I quickly throw a kunai toward the nearby stream, focusing wind chakra to add speed into it and add enough cutting power so that it sinks into the stream quickly (if you look through our moves, we never truly moved very far away from it). Based on the wording of you move (in particular your use of the word 'then') you did not use the Sun God technique until AFTER your hurricane fist actually hit me. Like I said, your use of the word then makes your move out to seem that you would do the hurricane fist, and when it pushes me off of my balance, trap me with the Amaterasu, or at the very least you would trap me as the hurricane fist nears me. Also, remember that I was moving away from you using a jutsu of equivalent strength that yours did, making me roughly move at the same speed of your wind jutsu. All of this accounted for, the kunai would be capable of reaching the stream before your hurricane fist reaches me. A moment before it hits me and/or as your amaterasu flames materialize, I teleport into the stream:

(Hiraishin no Jutsu) - Flying Thunder God Technique

Rank:S
Type:Attack
Range:Shor-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80(if used with a kunai slash as the finisher)
Description:This is a space/time ninjutsu.This jutsu can only work if the user throws a kunai with the special shiki-jutsu(seal jutsu)or has tagged the item or person by touch.The user can instantly teleport to the tags location.
Note:Only Yondaime/Fourth hokage can use this jutsu.And is unavoidable unless with space/time ninjutsu

Teleporting into the depths of the stream, with you having a very vague idea of where I am (you may see the kunai flying off, but in order to use Amaterasu which would require you to actually see me you would need to pinpoint my exact location). I then swim to one of the sides of it, but not resurfacing, and use:

(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

Merging with the ground. I'm not completely sure on whether or not you can use your sharingan to see through solid objects such as the earth that don't have chakra in them, but assuming that you can, I make sure to move around you, coming from your side where you would be unable to see me, and bursting from the ground right under you while quickly using:

(Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere

Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points:
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja�s ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None

Smashing you with a Rasengan from below and blasting you high into the air.
 

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Using my EMS, as soon as I see you throw the kunai my eyes dart to hat area. So that as soon as you disappear I see you reappear in the water. I watch you swim to the edge and then go underground using your underground fish projection. As soon as you are merged into the earth I use:

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.
Creating another swamp all around your already underground body, this swamp would be created before you could even realize it as it forms quite fast. And you would have no way to escape. Killing you underground
 

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Using my EMS, as soon as I see you throw the kunai my eyes dart to hat area. So that as soon as you disappear I see you reappear in the water. I watch you swim to the edge and then go underground using your underground fish projection. As soon as you are merged into the earth I use:



Creating another swamp all around your already underground body, this swamp would be created before you could even realize it as it forms quite fast. And you would have no way to escape. Killing you underground
According to Zen, I have to make a reply so that I'm the last person to post, not attacking but just countering, so... here goes nothing.

As soon as the swamp is created, I immediately tighten my mouth and close my eyes, as to not allow the mud to get into either one. If you look at this video: and skip to around 6:38, you'll see that the swamp is quite liquidy and loose, as opposed to thick mud. Notice how when the snake drops in, the mud splashes up just as any normal water would. You may argue that it's due to the snake's size, but the water blasted up very high before the snake even truly fell, it's stomach was barely skimming the mud when it blasted up. It's almost as if someone could simply swim through it, and the main reason why the snake was immobilized was because, due to being a snake and all, it found difficulty getting out of the deep mud. And so, as soon as I close my mouth and eyes, I immediately blast out of the mud by using:

(Suiton: Suichuu Teigen no Jutsu) – Water Release: Underwater Motion Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to properl themselves through a body of water by using their chakra. While underwater, this technique will also partially mask the users prescence.
Note: Must be a large water source such as a lake to use.

Propelling me through the mud upward, using it as though it had the properties of water (which, based on the video, it does) to use my chakra to push me out, and blasting me backward as well as fairly high into the air, as I would not be too deep in the mud. I then land at the backside of the swamp (opposite to you).
 
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