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*I focus on the shape of every particle and try to make exact cubes*

(I'm afraid I don't quite understand. >.>)
Water droplets in the mist take a few forms - a random shape that the water vapor takes, or something akin to a crystal, if they are closer to snow. We're going to cause this jutsu to work by basically creating jewels - the water will become faceted and will reflect the light from within, once struck.

You are to take the shapeless or incorrectly shaped water molecules, and use your chakra, in addition to your shape manipulation, to have those drops of water become cubes. This is only the first step we take.
 

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*I start to to change the form of the droplets and each of them take on different shapes. I visualize a cube and attempt to form each of these into cube-like structures as I harden them with my chakra so that they are now microscopic crystals.*


(Sorry if I'm not getting this, but I'm not really at optimum mental level. Sleep deprivation. >.>)
 
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*I start to to change the form of the droplets and each of them take on different shapes. I visualize a cube and attempt to form each of these into cube-like structures as I harden them with my chakra so that they are now microscopic crystals.*


(Sorry if I'm not getting this, but I'm not really at optimum mental level. Sleep deprivation. >.>)
xd It's fine. I don't exactly have a major in this kind of thing, so my explanation may not be spot on either.

Good.

Now, we need to take this a step further. o_o"

Using the chakra that's now in the water, turn the cubes into
 

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(Guren should be able to help with this. xd . She actually makes dodecahedrons..)

* Remembers Guren's prisms that she makes and has some familiarity with the shape. I then attempt to make the cubes gain more faces, making misshapen figures with 12 faces. I then make each face into a pentagon and make the vertexes of each side connect with those of the others while faces on ends are given shape by the meeting of the other vertexes.* (This happens on both sides.)

(I really hope that made sense. >.<)
 

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(Guren should be able to help with this. xd . She actually makes dodecahedrons..)

* Remembers Guren's prisms that she makes and has some familiarity with the shape. I then attempt to make the cubes gain more faces, making misshapen figures with 12 faces. I then make each face into a pentagon and make the vertexes of each side connect with those of the others while faces on ends are given shape by the meeting of the other vertexes.* (This happens on both sides.)

(I really hope that made sense. >.<)
Good. ^_^ Pulling form other sources can help you understand how things work.

*The mist becomes very bright, momentarily blinding us before I disperse it.*

You have completed the jutsu. ^_^

Alright, the next jutsu is:

(Suiton: Mizu No Tatsumaki) - Water Style: Water Tornado
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: Utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the ninja. The water acts both as a barrier and attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious. Can only be performed if there is a water source near by.

This is a water jutsu that can be used a number of different ways - you can either for the tornado around or near the opponent to damage them, between them and you as a shield, or around yourself as a barrier. It's a very useful move, if you can use it right.

First, before we get on to how the jutsu works, I want you to practice the handseals: Ram, Horse, and Bird.
 

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*I perform the hand seals a few times.*
"Ram.. Horse.. Bird...
Perhaps I could make some sort of mnemonic device..
Riddles hide bologna..
Works for me."
 

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*I perform the hand seals a few times.*
"Ram.. Horse.. Bird...
Perhaps I could make some sort of mnemonic device..
Riddles hide bologna..
Works for me."
Okay, what you'll need to do now is focus your chakra into a water source as a you form the handseals.

From there, you'll use that chakra to lift the water into the air - you'll have it dispersed though, as you don't want it visible at the moment.

I'm slowing the process of this jutsu WAY down for training purposes. In battle, this'll all happen very quickly.
 

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* I focus my chakra on a spot in the river and cause it to rise, while keeping a very weak hold on it, similar to the way that I failed the first time with the Hidden Mist jutsu. The trained eye would see a very, very faint mist(I guess.)

Was it meant to be dispersed in this manner?
 

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* I focus my chakra on a spot in the river and cause it to rise, while keeping a very weak hold on it, similar to the way that I failed the first time with the Hidden Mist jutsu. The trained eye would see a very, very faint mist(I guess.)

Was it meant to be dispersed in this manner?
Not quite. You want to take all the water that you gather from the river and disperse it across an area of land (I'm teaching you the land variant, as it requires more work, so using it on water will be easier) and basically form a mist with it. What's different, though, is that you need to have the water so spread out, across and vertically, that no one can see it - almost like its just the water that's naturally in the air.
 

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*I focus my chakra on a large section of the river that I manipulate upwards over the area where we are standing. I then weaken my grasp on the water so that the molecules spread from each other. As it would begin to make a mist, I disperse the water molecules all over the area in which we are standing, so that the molecules are not in mass and therefore cannot be seen.*
 

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*I focus my chakra on a large section of the river that I manipulate upwards over the area where we are standing. I then weaken my grasp on the water so that the molecules spread from each other. As it would begin to make a mist, I disperse the water molecules all over the area in which we are standing, so that the molecules are not in mass and therefore cannot be seen.*
Alright, now, when you're actually preforming the jutsu, you'll fuse the previous step together and this one, so that when you actually preform it, you'll bring the water straight to were you want it.

Now, using your chakra, I want you to manipulate the water so that it forms a column around a tree, by bringing all the scattered water together.

From there, cause your chakra to rotate - if you do it fast enough, you'll create a small tornado.
 

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*I make the Ram seal and the molecules in the air fly towards a nearby tree where they compress around the trunk and form into a cylinder around it. I then make the Horse seal and make the chakra-infused molecules start to spin.*

(I may have messed up which seals go with the parts of the technique.)
 

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*I make the Ram seal and the molecules in the air fly towards a nearby tree where they compress around the trunk and form into a cylinder around it. I then make the Horse seal and make the chakra-infused molecules start to spin.*

(I may have messed up which seals go with the parts of the technique.)
You really don't have to continue stating the seals. I require it that you atleast see them, so you know the move has handseals, and you can see how many there are.

Good. Now, you want to add additional Sution chakra to that. You'll need to make it spin faster and use your chakra to complete the vortex, and form the tornado.
 

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Good.

Now, preform the entire justu, from the top. Do it quickly, too; you can actually disperse the part about distributing the water chakra into the air. I simply had you do that for practice. So you can take the water straight from the source and form a column.
 

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*I focus my chakra into a spot on the river and make the Ram seal, manipulating it upwards, in a rough cylindrical form. I then make the Horse seal as I focus more chakra into the cylinder and make it spin as fast as I can make it. I then form the Bird seal, elongating the spinning cylinder.*

(Time-elapsed: 1-2 seconds?)
 

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*I focus my chakra into a spot on the river and make the Ram seal, manipulating it upwards, in a rough cylindrical form. I then make the Horse seal as I focus more chakra into the cylinder and make it spin as fast as I can make it. I then form the Bird seal, elongating the spinning cylinder.*

(Time-elapsed: 1-2 seconds?)
Just about, maybe faster.

Good.

Now, the next jutus is:

(Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: causes a large volume of water to materialize out of nowhere. The water can then be directed at his target.

We'll begin with the handseals: hands clapped together.
 
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