The Legendary Sage of Konoha 8

[Michael92]

Great chapter, as always, and a very good job on synchronising with the original manga So is chapter 3 of the Sasuke chronicles next?

Thanks


Hah!, good question

Nah not yet... I'm going to focus a little on the original now and go full steam ahead with it until chapter 10 or so. The thing is, I can't write S Chronicles 3 yet as there are something that needs to be revealed in the original first or I would spoil it all for you if I released S 3 nowxd

But if I wanted, I could have written it and kept it available until the time come as I know everything that happends in it, but you know me... Busy as ussual

So I will have to focus on chapter 9 first

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Hmm... Maybe Something big will come out about him next time
Yeah it's like instead of saying Sensei. But more than that I can't say for now Well.... Who knows

Sensei?! So, its probably Madara's teacher then?
Can't say more ha. I'll make you!

 

[Michael92]

Sensei?! So, its probably Madara's teacher then?
Can't say more ha. I'll make you!

Haha!xd Yeah right
Well look at it this way. Kakashi and many others called Jiraiya for Master or Lord Jiraiya, but he wasn't their teacher formally.

And Naruto calls Kakashi sensei or, as I think it appears in the manga volums, master, so it tends to be a little confusing sometime.

Who this person is and what relations he have to Madara and ? will yet to be revealed. But hey... I at least told you that it's a "he" now didn't I?

 

[Nikkou Arashi]

Haha!xd Yeah right
Well look at it this way. Kakashi and many others called Jiraiya for Master or Lord Jiraiya, but he wasn't their teacher formally.

And Naruto calls Kakashi sensei or, as I think it appears in the manga volums, master, so it tends to be a little confusing sometime.

Who this person is and what relations he have to Madara and ? will yet to be revealed. But hey... I at least told you that it's a "he" now didn't I?

I'm sure you just slipped on that one.
Okay, I won't bug you about it anymore. I'm going to find out soon, anyway.

 

[Michael92]

I'm sure you just slipped on that one.
Okay, I won't bug you about it anymore. I'm going to find out soon, anyway.

Yeah... On purpose

You will

 

[Uchiha Riyo]

nice work but some of the way they say things are pretty dull to me

 

[Michael92]

nice work but some of the way they say things are pretty dull to me

Well I don't find this one to be one of my best either as it was kinda hard to come up with how to make this chapter without over-powering people or under-powering them so I couldn't really have everyone fighting at the same time either so there were some lame and sudden moments in it.
At least I might focus on one area in next chapter, so I'll try to make the dialogues more believeable

 

[Ita Unmei]

Fallen off? pfft >> its to awsome!!! :3 cant wait for the next one!

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

As usual another great chapter! I loved the action as in my opinion, every good story should have that type of element ^.^ Those new Akatsuki members sure are powerful. Naruto has become very powerful being able to verse four opponents and still stands his ground. Well, it is to be expected as he is a Kage. NO SASUKE!!! T_T I cannot wait for his next appearance whenever that will be. It was written pretty well as I had not a problem reading through it Keep it up my friend, you’re doing awesome ;p (sorry for the late reply).​

 

[Waqas Naseem]

as always it was simply awesum )))

 

[Xentinel]

It's Brilliant!

You made it again, Michael So finally, the Akatsuki made an appearance at last! Nicely done mate. Your mine is so creative, you are just like Masashi's twin brother xd

 

[Yūsuke1]

hehehe i am speechless so i dun noe wut to say^^ , its been a long time since the laz one, nice chapter, hope to see the nxt chapter, especially the Sasuke Chronicles=)

 

[Kaziname]

Haha, yeah I thought I would have to cut the episode without making it bland, so it just came in to me that Naruto would say that

Pay also extra attention to this sentence as you somewhat criticised Naruto last chapterxd:

Spoiler

Naruto: *Thinking* He even knew how my Flying Thunder God works.. Something is way off. Luckily there is one thing about it that he doesn't know... But I won't do that unless I really need to!

I hope that it is major FTG. Like for example warping the moon into his enemies - just kidding. What will come out first? Chronicles or regular chapter? I vote for regular! Damn, I can't wait to see that thing about FTG...

 

[Michael92]

Fallen off? pfft >> its to awsome!!! :3 cant wait for the next one!

Okay, good to hear

As usual another great chapter! I loved the action as in my opinion, every good story should have that type of element ^.^ Those new Akatsuki members sure are powerful. Naruto has become very powerful being able to verse four opponents and still stands his ground. Well, it is to be expected as he is a Kage. NO SASUKE!!! T_T I cannot wait for his next appearance whenever that will be. It was written pretty well as I had not a problem reading through it Keep it up my friend, you’re doing awesome ;p (sorry for the late reply).​

Well there are different opinions out there about that
This insn't exactly the best chapter I've released as I don't find it as good as, for example, 6 or 3, but I've been brainstorming a lot on the next one, so I will put my all into it and try to make it the best one yet

Well stories without action isn't really written this way, now are they?

Well I must actually dissagree with that one (xd).
My reason for that is partly the same as Madara's. They will never reach the level of the former ones (like Itachi, Kisame and so forth) and the good guys are stronger too now than in the current manga, so some of them might seem kinda weak to me But there is one exeption and that is Akashi whom I got a lot planned for
So I'll try to make them true to their organisation in the next chapter by turning up the heat of the battle, as of now, Naruto have been able to fight them without much trouble

Yeah I guess that's one of the factor, but to be honest I'm kinda troubled with Naruto's character as he's in my opinion too strongxd I mean if I make him fight for real (like I intend to in the next chapter), h*ll will be lose

Sasuke eh? Yeah he haven't shown yet in the original series as something big will happend in chapter 3 of Sasuke chronicles which I at the moment can't talk about

Well I kinda find it hard to write the narrator lines some times as they often turn out bland or lame and kinda make the story parted up too much if you ask me.
So I will work harder with them in the next chapter as I already got a plan on checking up the god himself for inspiration and hints

Thanks, appriciate your support (And while we're at it, I can apologize for the long wall of textxd I just felt writing a lot to your reply).

as always it was simply awesum )))

Thanks mate

It's Brilliant!

You made it again, Michael So finally, the Akatsuki made an appearance at last! Nicely done mate. Your mine is so creative, you are just like Masashi's twin brother xd

Haha, thanks for still following friend
I can reveal that in the next chapter, something will happend in a blink of an eye
Oh! You spelled my name right too

hehehe i am speechless so i dun noe wut to say^^ , its been a long time since the laz one, nice chapter, hope to see the nxt chapter, especially the Sasuke Chronicles=)

Hehe, thanks Well as I said to somebody with name I don't remember (xd), Sasuke Chronicles is at hold for the moment as chapter 3 is the last chapter in it and I can't post it untill a certain story plot in the original series happends

I've already decided on the story of it, but I won't start making it before I get to the point when I can.
I think I need to get to chapter 10 or 11 first before I can move on with S Chronicles 3

I hope that it is major FTG. Like for example warping the moon into his enemies - just kidding. What will come out first? Chronicles or regular chapter? I vote for regular! Damn, I can't wait to see that thing about FTG...

Hehe, well I've decided that he will "reveal" the "last" secret about it in the next chap somehow, so hope you won't get dissapointed if it doesn't meet your expectationsxd

About Sasuke chronicles, check my post above to ShermanYondaime as I gave him (well everyone) a insight on when S chronicles 3 will be released, so check out that part

 

[Mist]

Hey Michael, can you give us any hint towards when the next chapter will be coming out?

 

[Michael92]

Hey Michael, can you give us any hint towards when the next chapter will be coming out?

Maybe today or tomorrow. That's the only exact thing I can say for now as I'm not sure

 

[Mist]

Today or tomorrow is the only exact thing I can say for now

Looking very much forward to it then

*starts spam refreshing*

hehe

 

[Keese777]

i loved it cant wait see wats gonna happen next

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Well there are different opinions out there about that
This insn't exactly the best chapter I've released as I don't find it as good as, for example, 6 or 3, but I've been brainstorming a lot on the next one, so I will put my all into it and try to make it the best one yet

Well stories without action isn't really written this way, now are they?

Well I must actually dissagree with that one (xd).
My reason for that is partly the same as Madara's. They will never reach the level of the former ones (like Itachi, Kisame and so forth) and the good guys are stronger too now than in the current manga, so some of them might seem kinda weak to me But there is one exeption and that is Akashi whom I got a lot planned for
So I'll try to make them true to their organisation in the next chapter by turning up the heat of the battle, as of now, Naruto have been able to fight them without much trouble

Yeah I guess that's one of the factor, but to be honest I'm kinda troubled with Naruto's character as he's in my opinion too strongxd I mean if I make him fight for real (like I intend to in the next chapter), h*ll will be lose

Sasuke eh? Yeah he haven't shown yet in the original series as something big will happend in chapter 3 of Sasuke chronicles which I at the moment can't talk about

Well I kinda find it hard to write the narrator lines some times as they often turn out bland or lame and kinda make the story parted up too much if you ask me.
So I will work harder with them in the next chapter as I already got a plan on checking up the god himself for inspiration and hints

Thanks, appriciate your support (And while we're at it, I can apologize for the long wall of textxd I just felt writing a lot to your reply).

Well, these most recent chapter are have been filled with much action so it does indeed continue to get better and better I cannot wait to see what you have in store for Akashi as I thought this character stood out from the others somewhat. I think you are doing a good job with how Naruto is dealing with the multiple opponents. I will be awaiting patiently for Sasuke’s return XD I think you are continuing to do a fine job with how you express all the character’s personas. Looking into Kishi’s work is never a bad idea for inspiration, etc. Your welcome and I do not mind as I too have posted walls of texts in fact I have been infamous for it lol​

 

[Michael92]

Looking very much forward to it then

*starts spam refreshing*

hehe

Well I've barly started on it, so I guess tomorrow after work will be a more realistic point of release.
But don't worry, I'll link you

i loved it cant wait see wats gonna happen next

Actually, me neitherxd Thanks for the support

Well, these most recent chapter are have been filled with much action so it does indeed continue to get better and better I cannot wait to see what you have in store for Akashi as I thought this character stood out from the others somewhat. I think you are doing a good job with how Naruto is dealing with the multiple opponents. I will be awaiting patiently for Sasuke’s return XD I think you are continuing to do a fine job with how you express all the character’s personas. Looking into Kishi’s work is never a bad idea for inspiration, etc. Your welcome and I do not mind as I too have posted walls of texts in fact I have been infamous for it lol​

Yeah, I can reveal that I got a lot in store for him as it was intended all along that he would stand out from the rest

Well, that has kinda been the hard thing. I couldn't overpower him and neither underpower him, so it has been a little ehm... pale if you ask me regarding the start of his fight. However I've come up with some plans to avoid that in the next chapter

Sasuke eh? Well, since you're appearently desperat to find out, I might as well tell you. Sasuke will make an appearence beside Sasuke Chronicles 3, but the only question is when and why

Hehe thanks Even if I kinda feel like I've lost it a little, I will do my best in the next one

Hehe, I seexd