Liliana teaches me... :)

[Lili-Chwan]

Vaguely refers to pretty much any technique that uses chakra and allows the user to do something that they otherwise would be incapable of doing.
Unlike genjutsu, which makes the opponent see illusions, the effects of ninjutsu are quite real. Ninjutsu relies on chakra and, most of the time, hand seals (each hand seal showing a different animal in the chinese zodiac) to be effective. The hands are put in sequential positions that mold chakra in the necessary manner to perform a jutsu.
This is not always consistent, however, and some of the simpler jutsu seem to become second nature to experienced ninja, after which they can perform them at will. Additionally, some ninjutsu can be classified as an elemental jutsu, in those cases where a specific element (wind, water, fire, earth, lightning) is used.

Wrong task. Try to keep up.

I want you to make 3 Jutsu Combination using 3 of the E Rank jutsus listed on this thread. Make 2 different combinations.

 

[Akisha]

Ok.
I use:
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
* I thorw the exploing kunai near ur feet*
As the mist is spreading I creat 4 clones:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
( I use this so that u cant recognise the real one (me)

Then I throw 3 kunais at u.... and use:
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
*..to hide myself*

 

[pop123]

Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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AND I USE THIS I THORW KUNI AT THE DUMMY THEN I FOLLOW THAT UP WITH THIS Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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[Akisha]

*I create 4 clones*

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
*as they are coming at u I quicklt hide in the forest that surounds us and use:*
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
*as I know where u are I throw 3 shurikens at u*

*then I throw and explosing kunai near ur feet and use:*
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
* then I thorw another 4 shurikens at u*

 

[Akisha]

I'm ready

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Ok.
I use:
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
* I thorw the exploing kunai near ur feet*
As the mist is spreading I creat 4 clones:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
( I use this so that u cant recognise the real one (me)

Then I throw 3 kunais at u.... and use:
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
*..to hide myself*

Ok, you used the smoke bomb to prevent me from seeing you, the clone jutsju would be more usefull if you sent them to the mist, and have them scatter in different directions, so that I'm even more confused, since even if I do see a person, I can't tell if it's real or not.
Then you sent the kunais... ok. In this Rp, that move is more of a distraction (specially since you weren't explicit as to where you're aimming the kunnais), or a way to lead your opponent into a position or a place where you want it to be. So basically, you have 3 moves that serve to distract me.
Your final move is again, a way to distract me from yourself. There's no need to use 4 identical moves. You should have went for the kill, sent your clones from one side and attack from the other, etc etc. That move wasn't enough to kill anyone...

Anyways, let me see the 2nd Combo

 

[Akisha]

lol I send it to u already :X

 

[Akisha]

*I create 4 clones*

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
*as they are coming at u I quicklt hide in the forest that surounds us and use:*
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
*as I know where u are I throw 3 shurikens at u*

*then I throw and explosing kunai near ur feet and use:*
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
* then I thorw another 4 shurikens at u*

here xd

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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AND I USE THIS I THORW KUNI AT THE DUMMY THEN I FOLLOW THAT UP WITH THIS Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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Try to be as clean as you can be while describing your movements. Separate your jutsus from your descriptions, by giving a blank line in between, or by bolding either your description or your jutsus (like Power did).

Also I asked you to use 3 jutsus, and you used 2.

Anyways, you created a clone, but you gave him no task. Why didn't you describe his movements? You could have him run at your opponent (even if he isn't tangible, he can't be touched, he can still be seen. Meaning that if you throw a kunai behind him, your opponent will only see the kunai, and be able to counter it, after it passes through your clone). Normally, people already know that a clone isn't going to attack them by himself. You have to use the clones to hide your own attacks. When you sent the kunai, you didn't especify where you were aimming it, so I take it that you didn't want to kill your opponent. In that case, what was the point of your combo?
The last jutsu is just useless. Not only you failed to describe what you did with it, but you also failed to give it a purpose. This was a bad combo.

Let's see your second combo.

(If you have trouble understanding anything I say, please tell me)

*I create 4 clones*

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
*as they are coming at u I quicklt hide in the forest that surounds us and use:*
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
*as I know where u are I throw 3 shurikens at u*

*then I throw and explosing kunai near ur feet and use:*
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
* then I thorw another 4 shurikens at u*

Ok, you used the clones to distract me, so that you could hide your position. Ok. Then you used the shurikens as a distraction and the exploding kunai again as a distraction and a new row of shurikens as a distraction.

Btw, I think you're mistaking the exploding kunai. It's a kunnai that holds a smoke bomb, and when it explodes, an harmless explosion, it releases the mist. It isn't a kunai with an Exploding tag, which creates violent explosions.
Anyways, you made the same mistake. You haven't really attacked your opponent, you simply used distractions...

 

[pop123]

im back ready

 

[Akisha]

lol sensei. look at the description. It is said explosive kunai. That's why I come up with the explosive thing xd. Anyway can u start teaching me jutsus now

 

[Akisha]

besides as u are caught in the 5 senses disorder. I attack with the 4 kunais. (that's not a distraction. It is attack

 

[pop123]

Aye power came on now can we both train with her like choza during us i n fire

 

[Akisha]

I dont mind
but let's stop spamming and continue training

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Aye power came on now can we both train with her like choza during us i n fire

Pop, seriously. Read... this is what I said about the combo you posted:

Try to be as clean as you can be while describing your movements. Separate your jutsus from your descriptions, by giving a blank line in between, or by bolding either your description or your jutsus (like Power did).

Also I asked you to use 3 jutsus, and you used 2.

Anyways, you created a clone, but you gave him no task. Why didn't you describe his movements? You could have him run at your opponent (even if he isn't tangible, he can't be touched, he can still be seen. Meaning that if you throw a kunai behind him, your opponent will only see the kunai, and be able to counter it, after it passes through your clone). Normally, people already know that a clone isn't going to attack them by himself. You have to use the clones to hide your own attacks. When you sent the kunai, you didn't especify where you were aimming it, so I take it that you didn't want to kill your opponent. In that case, what was the point of your combo?
The last jutsu is just useless. Not only you failed to describe what you did with it, but you also failed to give it a purpose. This was a bad combo.

Let's see your second combo.

(If you have trouble understanding anything I say, please tell me)

Ok?

besides as u are caught in the 5 senses disorder. I attack with the 4 kunais. (that's not a distraction. It is attack

Getting ramdomly hit by 4 kunnais isn't going to kill anyone.

Anyways:

(Fukumi Hari) - Hidden Needles

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: The user is able to call forth needles into their mouth and then spit them at their opponent with great accuracy.

It is unkown how one's able to call forth needles, but the fact is that using this jutsu, you're able to make a needle appear in your mouth and then you can spit it out.

how can you make this technique more efficient?

 

[Akisha]

Well I can hide it within Hidden mist jutsu...and Perhaps I can use wind to make the needles go faster...

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Well I can hide it within Hidden mist jutsu...and Perhaps I can use wind to make the needles go faster...

Indeed. Also if you aim for soft tissues, like the eyes, the throat, nerves/veins, you'll increase it's effectiveness. Instead of simply saying: I shoot this to you.

 

[Akisha]

Got it. Next ?

 

[pop123]

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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i told my clones to attack the dummy with a kuni and i den i use this













(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns to blow u p the dummy

 

[Akisha]

what to do now sensei...?