Aequitas Nara

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Name: Aequitas Nara
Nickname: Hammy
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Clan: Nara (when I reach 1000 posts)

Looks: Similar to that of Shikaku and Shikamaru Aequitas has long black hair and a bushy ponytail. He has a trademark coat that he wears almost all the time. As he is a Chuunin he wears a green flak vest as well. Most of the time you can see Aequitas with a cigarette but unlike Asuma he does generally throw his away when fighting.

Personality
He is a focused and determined ninja. He has an IQ close to that of Shikamaru and usually he is quite sarcastic at pointing out others mistakes. Unlike Shikamaru Aequitas is more determined to become a high ranking Ninja and to prove himself to the whole village. Apart from that Aequitas' personality is basically the same as the rest of the Nara Clan and he is very laid back and lazy. Aequitas is one of the most loyal friends you will ever meet and one of the most inspiring personalities; He will encourage any person he meets to try and be the best they can be. He seems to have a natural talent to bring out the true intellect and ability in anyone he meets, although he does usually do this by causing an argument or various debates and on some occasions even causing fights between Ninja or challenging others to fight. When it comes down to the nitty gritty stuff Aequitas handles it like he has a mind and wisdom beyond his years. He has no preservation on sacrificing himself for the sake of his beliefs which are - Never: abandon your friends, give up, betray the village your friends or yourself.


Village Info

Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Konohagakure


Rank & Abilities

Ninja Rank: S-Jounin
Specialty: Strategy
Elements: Fire & Windtraining required

Aequitas was never really an expert close quarter fighter as he mainly works from Mid-Long range he's not completely ignorrant of Taijutsu and does have some ability to at least defend himself against a capable Taijutsu fighter.




All Shadow jutsu to be learned after 1000 posts.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



(Kage Mane Shuriken) - Shadow Imitation Shuriken

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Traps the enemy buy throwing and hitting there shadow special blades infused with shadow chakra.

(Kage Kubi Shibari) - Shadow Neck Bind

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: Traps the enemy buy combining shadows and then strangles the enemy with a shadow hand.

(Kagegijin) - Shadow Impersonation

Rank:B
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Shadow forms to replicas of the user that pound the opponent and squeezes them to finish them off.



n/a


Aequitas like Shikamaru is an expert in strategy due to their high intelligence. Aequitas in terms of strategy is usually thinking 5 moves at least ahead of his opponent. Both an expert in Deception & Strategy with the Nara Clan KG means Aequitas is no pushover and not one to underestimate


Background Info

Part I

Invasion of Konoha Arc: His Mother died 3 and a half years ago during the Sand & Sound invasion, his Mother was killed by a Sand Ninja. From that day Aequitas has found it very difficult to be civil to any Sand Village Member the only 3 who he talks to or sympathizes with are Gaara,Temari and Kankuro as Aequitas is smart enough to see they were only involved due to peer pressure and fear. Gaara he doesnt understand but Naruto see's him as a loyal friend and a good person so Aequitas has no reason to doubt that. His Father has been looking after him since the Chuunin Exam and had to take on more missions to earn more money so he never really see's him and feels like he has lost both parents and this is why he loves his friends more than anything.
Search for Tsunade Arc: Aequitas during this time was grieving his Mother his father and him didnt do much during this time except a few missions and training.
Sasuke Retrieval Arc: Aequitas trained with Shikamaru a lot before he found out he became a Chuunin and until he left to retrieve Sasuke. It was during this training that Aequitas and Shikamaru learned Shadow Neck Bind. During the retrieval Aequitas like everyone else in the village was just waiting and anxious for the team to return.

Part II

Hidan & Kakuzu Arc: During this time Aequitas was still training with Shikamaru and Shikamaru and Aequitas learned various new jutsu during this training but after Asuma was killed the training stopped for a long time and so did playing Shogi & Go. Aequitas was always there for Shikamaru but he just needed time to grieve himself.

Mainly in Part II Aequitas was doing missions & training. The only thing worth mentioning was the Arc above.


Hobbies

He likes to play Shogi with Shikamaru he manages to beat Shikamaru sometimes but generally they tie or he loses.
He regularly when Kakashi has time challenges him to a 1 on 1 "Bell Test." Aequitas knows this is a teamwork test, he figured that out when his Sensei gave his team the test and Aequitas helped them pass it by simplying formatting a strategy to acquire the Bell using every team members abilities in unison and for the first time in Genin history Aequitas' team aquired 1 Bell out of 2, but he believes he can achieve this feat alone and that he can out smart Kakashi and thus improve his skills to this day he has not won but still attempts it when he can.


Theme Song and Background Music

Papa Roach - To Be Loved.​
Battles

Won: n/a
Lost:
n/a
 
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first, if you want to create a custom nara bio dont use shikaku's image. that includes his clothing as well. he has the trademark of the deer skin coat and the smoker.
second, you can't just say taht you are as intelligent as shikamaru, even less if you are still a chunnin.
third, you DON'T GET the shadow jutsus once you reach 1000 posts, you can make a nara bio once you make 1k posts so go get them first.after its approved you need to be taught in them.
forth, you are saying that you can finish the bell test against kakashi on your own, being a chunnin and have more abbility than him, i dont thing so.
fifth, in invasion of pein arc, you completely changed the way the story is, you cant just say you beated one of pein's paths..
and many more but lazy to read and to write.
 

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first, if you want to create a custom nara bio dont use shikaku's image. that includes his clothing as well. he has the trademark of the deer skin coat and the smoker.
second, you can't just say taht you are as intelligent as shikamaru, even less if you are still a chunnin.
third, you DON'T GET the shadow jutsus once you reach 1000 posts, you can make a nara bio once you make 1k posts so go get them first.after its approved you need to be taught in them.
forth, you are saying that you can finish the bell test against kakashi on your own, being a chunnin and have more abbility than him, i dont thing so.
fifth, in invasion of pein arc, you completely changed the way the story is, you cant just say you beated one of pein's paths..
and many more but lazy to read and to write.
I was going to sort the Bio once I get to 1000 posts I'm not really gonna use it until then.

And I cant use Shikaku's image but someone can use Gaara's for a profile that isnt Gaara of the Sand?

Also why cant I say my Bio is as intelligent as Shikamaru it was on the basis they were the same age etc etc Rank shouldnt come into it as Shikamaru was smarter than most Jounin when he was a Genin.

And I didnt say I finished the Bell test I said during training my 3 man team managed to retrieve 1 Bell. I have been attempting on numerous occasions to do it alone as a HOBBIE.

And I didnt change the story of the Pein arc completely I said Aequitas managed to defeat 1 path of Pein which would have been ressurected again anyway. And then I said Pein used Shinra Tensei and Aequitas died but obviously would have been resurrected.

About the shadow Jutsu fair enough I just put them there to remember I guessed I would probably need to train for basically everything anyway.
 

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well what he told you is absolutely correct since he is the nara clan leader..so that is why he is telling you this...i dont think it would be approved as you have written that you killed one of the paths changing the context of the manga,of which the mods dont approve also your bio is a custom you should not use a pic of shikaku as that would again be conflicting..since you are new that's why KYF told you to change..if you dont wanna change i dont think the mods will approve of this.
 

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well what he told you is absolutely correct since he is the nara clan leader..so that is why he is telling you this...i dont think it would be approved as you have written that you killed one of the paths changing the context of the manga,of which the mods dont approve also your bio is a custom you should not use a pic of shikaku as that would again be conflicting..since you are new that's why KYF told you to change..if you dont wanna change i dont think the mods will approve of this.
OK fair enough I will remove the images and also the Pein Arc History.

Sorry guys.

I dont think I should have to remove the intelligence factor or the Bell Test as the intelligence factor comes down to me really not the character and its just to add a bit more depth to my Bio. The Bell test is a Hobbie and I have never won against Kakashi.

Is that ok?
 
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